Hi guys Rithika here
Thanks for ur wonderful response in the previous epi. I’m back with the 15th episode. So do read and comment
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Sona is sleeping in a room on a bed. The sun rays falls on her disturbing her sleep she opens her eyes rubbing it with her tiny hands. She looks around finding herself in a unfamiliar room
Sona : (confused) What place is this??? How come I slept here?? Last night toh…
All her questions stopped at “last night” she reminisces last night incident, Dev’s slap and then some goon’s kidnapping her. Everything flashes on her mind While she gets angry reminiscing his slap..
Sona : He slapped me I hate him, I hate him, I just hate him. Stupid, idiot..I hate him
She shouts loudly in anger. On the other side Bhaiya ji , Birju and other goons hears her shout as they were seated out of that room and evilly smile thinking that she got scared
Bhaiya ji : Birju open the door
Birju nodes and opens the door. They enter the room and were shocked to see scenario, Sona was messing the room, throwing things here and there shouting loudly in anger
Sona : (shouts) He slapped me, I should’ve also slapped him…I hate him, I will not talk him. Let him, go anywhere this time I will not stop him. Stupid, fool, b*stard..
Bhaiya ji and Birju’s eyes widened in shock, Sona turned and got surprised seeing the.m Yet again she looks around reminding herself that she is in a unfamiliar room, she looks at them
Sona : Who r u all??? Where am I?
She asks with a confused look for which they all smirked evilly
Birju : U r kidnapped
Sona : What????? Kidnapped??? But y the hell I’m kidnapped huh!
Bhaiya ji : (smirks) Because of ur so called lover Dev Dixit
At this she again gets angry as he was naming Dev as her lover
Sona : Lover my foot!!! He isn’t my lover, I hate him
Birju :Haan, haan we know u hate him but he loves u and we kidnapped u because u r his weakness so..
Bhaiya ji : (interrupts) So tat we can kill that b*stard easily
“Kill him” this word made her shake. A fear was set in her heart as she got their trick. She very well knows Dev loves her, she was afraid that this love of him will give him trouble, she instantly looked at them in shock and questioned them with trembling voice
Sona:….w..h…a…t .. do ..u m..ean .. By …kill ..him ..and y …do u want …him t..o k..ill…hi..m
Bhaiya ji : Y do we want to kill him huh! Wait come here ..come
He holds her hand walks out of the room followed by goons. He takes her to the same room where a man covered with bandage was sleeping on a bed and all machines and equipments connected to him. Swara looked confusedly
Bhaiya ji : Look at him, he is my small brother see how he is suffering between life and death it is all because of that Dev only, I will not leave him, I will kill him
Sona was taken aback. She wasn’t ready to believe that Dev would harmed anyone to this extent, at least not intentionally he could do this. She was caring for him, the slap given by him and her shouting of hating him was no more in her memory. She was caring because it was all about his life, she was just standing in shock. A goon and old lady comes there, Bhaiya ji look at them
Goon : Bhaiya ji, wo we have to..
Bhaiya ji : (interrupts) I’m coming
He looks at Sona who was standing still in shock, and transfers his gaze on the old lady
Bhaiya ji : Ma I will be back, till then keep a eye on her (points Sona) and dare u go against me
Lady nodes in fear, Bhaiya ji and goons leaves from there, Lady looks at Sona and smiles sadly, she goes towards her and keeps hands on her shoulder
Lady : Beti..
At this Sona comes to sense and looks around not finding Bhaiya ji, as hundreds of questions were running in her mind and she wants answes to them, she looks at the lady
Sona : Where r they, those goons and all, Dev couldn’t harm anyone unintentionally, there is a reason behind all this, I know I want the answer, where r they
She shouts in anger yet worriedly, the lady interrupts
Lady : Ssh!! Come with me..
She holds her hand and takes her to the another room and closes the door while Sona looks confusedly
Sona :(confused) Y did u…
Lady :(interrupts) U want know the actual reason y they want to kill Dev na
Sona : Do u know?? Who r u?? And who is tat man who wants to kill Dev??? And the man on the bed, who is he???
The lady smiles sadly
Lady : I’m a bad mother who couldn’t able to give a good thoughts to my sons (she looks at confused Sona) yes they both r my sons, actually the man who wants to kill Dev is my elder son who wants to take revenge of his chote’s condition which is done by Dev (swara looks on shock) but what Sanskar had done is right, he deserves it, my younger son deserves it because he had done a crime
Sona : (confused) What crime??
Lady : Actually 4 months ago chote had been to U.S.A, he visited a pub..there he saw a girl and took her forcefully with him and raped the girl
Sona : What??? Raped ??
Lady : Hmm. My son raped her for almost 10-15 days, not showing any mercy on her, she became lifeless body, I saw her when I visited there to see my son and I was shocked by all this. I pleaded him to leave her but he became a beast, that devil.. he didn’t listen to me
She says this with guilt, whereas Sona was feeling disgusted and angry hearing this
Sona: Chi.. Till now I was feeling bad for his conditions but not now (she looks at the lady) then what happened to that girl and Dev, how is he connected in all this ??
Lady : Dev was a friend of tat girl, actually I saw Dev in a mall with a pic of that same girl. He was searching her so I thought to tell him and I did so …
FLASHBACK –
Dev : Where will I get him now auntie
His eyes were turned red due to anger
Lady : In the house
He left from there angrily
FLASHBACK ENDS
Lady : Dev found him in the house and beat him that let him now he is hung between life and death and he took the girl to the hospital who was already living like a dead body because my son, I’m ashamed of myself, ashamed of my parvarish
She gets teary eyes saying all this, whereas Sona’s eyes were filled with tears because it was all about a girl who suffered which other girls can easily understand
Sona : Who is she???
Lady : (looks at her) Her name is Rhea
“Kavitha” this name shocked her, a layer of guilt formed in her heart knowing that she doubted him, the words which she told him last night in front of Rhea was really bitter to a girl who had gone through all this being a girl she can understand it and now she knows y did he slapped her. Her anger on him was replaced with proudness and respect towards him, he is actually a gem..isn’t he? But there was something more she was feeling about him. Is it ‘LOVE’?? She blushed on her thoughts
DIXIT HOUSE
Dev and Ayan are having breakfast. There was a last roti, Sanskar takes the roti and keeps on his plate, Ayan looks at that grabs it in no moment. Sanskar looks on irritatingly
Dev : Y do u eat too much and trouble the washroom so much
Ayan : Huh!! Y do u love that devil Sona so much even though u r scared of devil to much. Hahaha I made it as a rhyme, I’m so talented na. It is nice na
Dev : It is like ur face
Ayan : Oh!! Jealous! Hahaha
Dev : U had enough roti’s, now have my kick also
Ayan : What u will kick me huh! Enough is enough. What am I looking to both of u
Dev : (confused) Both??
Ayan : U and that devil Sona. Am I ball that u both always kick me??
Dev : U urself agreed that
Ayan : Did I agree that
Elena comes there and gets angry to see Dev laughing when her friend is in a trouble. She goes towards him and Dev keeps quite looking at her
Elena : What is this bhai??? How can u..
Just then Dev’s Mobile rings
Dev : 1 min Ele
He lifts the call and Elena takes the mobile from his hand and keeps on speaker, he looks at her and sighs
Dev : Jello
OS : Dev Dixit
Voice comes which sounds anger. For which Dev smirks
Dev : Oh what happened Bhaiya ji??? U called me??
Bhaiya ji : Hey don’t u know tat we kidnapped ur love, Sona
Dev : Yes I know..
He say’s this calmly for which Elena looks on angrily
Bhaiya ji : Then what r u doing there aren’t u coming to save her???
Dev : Where is she?? I want to listen her (calmly)
Bhaiya ji : (smirks) If u want to listen her then u have to come here
Dev : Then I won’t believe u that u kidnapped her
Bhaiya ji : Ay she is in my house only, I kidnapped her if u want check her house u won’t find her there
Dev : Huh! If she is there, then make her speak I want to listen her voice or else I won’t believe u
Bhaiya ji : Arg!! Wait
Dev smiles while Elena and Ayan look on confusedly
On the other side
Bhaiya ji : Sona, Sona, Sona
Sona comes there and looks at them confusedly
Bhaiya ji : Speak to him
Saying this he keeps mobile on speaker
Dev : (smiles) Hi sweetu
Sona gets happy hearing his voice, she feels butterflies in her stomach. Dev thinks she angry and gets sad but doesn’t shows it
Dev : Shona r u angry jaan
(She was about say something but stops hearing this) If yes then be angry I don’t care waise bhi nice they kidnapped u
Bhaiya ji and Birju look on shock whereas Sona look on confusedly at 1st but later thinks something and smiles
Dev : Hey r u there, wild khargosh, honk I mean tell something
Sona : Even I don’t care okay and it’s nice only Bhaiya ji kidnapped me at least I will be free from ur irritating
Dev : (smiles) Oh nice!! Bhaiya ji please keep her with u only and don’t give her anything to eat she had enough of my brain
Sona: It’s u who always eat my brain not me
Dev : Not only brain I wish I could eat u fully
Sona : Arg!!!! Go to hell
She cuts the call and gives the mobile to Bhaiya ji who was looking shock she was about to go but stops looking at Birju. She stares him with doubt Birju see’s this
Bhaiya ji : Birju what is this, he isn’t caring about her u said Sona only is his weakness, he loves her and all then what is this!!
Birju : Bhaiya ji I’m sure he is acting making us fool because that day in bus when I just complimented her (points Sona) he beat me like a animal didn’t u see my condition
Bhaiya ji : Haan u r right
Swara reminisces the bus incident now she understand y that day Dev stopped the bus and pushed him outside the bus and made Elena and her leave from there. She feels so proud of him and feels his love which is only for her and blushes as her heart had given her the answer finally
Elena and Ayan were still looking at Dev in shock with widen eyes and he looks at them raising his eyebrows
Elena : How can u bhai, aren’t u worried about Sona
Ayan : Do u really love Sona??
Dev looks at him
Dev : Oh listen…hmm leave it u will never understand
He smiles and leaves from there
Ayan : Y is he so complicated ???
He scratches his head confusedly
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How’s it please give ur views
30 Comments
Rithu,, superbb…awesomeeee
Thanks Priyu
are you writing the same story for Swaragini too…
Coz many times you have written Swara and Sanskar instead of Dev & Sona…
Yes actually that’s by mistake as I was watching swaragini while writing?? so the mistake happened sorry for that
Hey hi….it’s really awsome
Thanks Harshita
Superb episode dear plz post the next episode soon.
Thanks princess
It’s awesome post next part soon
Thanks Preet
Fab episode..
Thanks Aaru
Wowwwwww?✔?
Thanks Akshita
Awsum part…..
Waitingggg for next part…..
Thanks Erina
Rj….!!!! It was awesome one yaar…. Amazing idea
Love,
❤❤❤
Thanks Maleeha
It was amazing RJ12. I liked ur idea but one thing I couldn’t swallow. I hope u don’t mind my words, in real life if one brother is a rapist and is beaten up for his deeds, the other bro kidnaps a girl and doesn’t even harmed her. Why????? dev is even not worried about sona after knowing what his brother did to the girl. Hope u don’t mind and I understand that its a fanfic but still. I really admire ur efforts for writing and every other writer here.
I know ur confusion, everyone has that doubt, to be honest the goon isn’t harming Sona because he wants to harm Dev and the goon does know that Sona is Dev’s weakness. And Dev isn’t worried as he’s planning something to save Sona. Hope u understood but if u didn’t u will come to know in the next epi
Hilarious! Haha! Loved It! Update Soon!
Thanka Tanvi
Thanka!? ?? Lol!
Awesome rithu?
Thanks Darshini
Wow! I’m lovin’ it! Post the next one soon!!!
Thanks Anshita
Hey AnShita! I Posted The 21st Episode Of My FF! Check It Out! 🙂
I loved it so much!!!!!
Post soon???
Thanks Niki