ISHKARA FF : You are the Light of my life [By Renima]
Hello ishqies……you might be thinking why am writing again as I said I have stopped writing fanfictions…..@ my last ff…..But kehkasha…. asked 2 write a humorous ff…..and I think…..I can’t do that…. I said every one….that….its hard for me to write another ff…as it comes from heart……Then the strange thing happened that so many silent readers messaged me through pm and asked me 2 write another ff only for ishkara…..But I said that am not able 2 write any more and another thing may be in between work I have to post and mostly you guys will be feel disappointing with my ff only…..Again a person asked me to write specially 4 ishkara as she is really connected with my ff…….but she loves 2 stay as a silent reader only…..And I felt her message…..{note: I can’t tell her name ,but her messages made me 2 change my decision and am naming her as sweety as her messages were so sweet 2 read….}as heart touching and while reading her message……
I felt am able 2 see her face……like a small kid….she was just…telling me again and again 2 write and write….only…..And….guys……for her am writing… ff….as well as I want to dedicate this one 2 kehkasha,kavya,samm, shanaya,shilpa and jaya who made a heart 2 heart connection with my previous ff….. And specially I want 2 dedicate this ff for priya, disha and mukta who are my sweet tri-sisters of ishqbaaz family and who remains always close 2 me ….. And I have chosen ishkara as the pair to express whatever I am feeling now……So guys……again am troubling you with an ff for ishkara…. And don’t know whether I will be able 2 present a gud ff… And sorry in advance….as I know this one will be boring only…. And sorry for my long boring loose talk also…….. but guys…please….express ur views through comments ….
Part 1
Scene- 1 { @ Flower shop}
{A beautiful girl of course….its our heroine only…..Ishana… enters to a flower shop and buys some flowers and smiles}
Raamu Chaacha{shop keeper} : Ishu beta……why you are still buying dahlia flowers only ?
Ishana : Chaacha……You know that I always buys dahlia …..and…..
Raamu chaacha{interrupts} : I know beta…….but…….these flowers……beta…..I can sense the feel of each and every flower……and trust me……these are able 2 show the care only……it doesn’t remains as the symbol of……
Ishana : {interrupts} You mean symbol of love…….Chaacha …..I love roses……[stares roses which has been placed @ left side] But……I don’t deserve it…..@ least for now…..I don’t deserve it…..{stares the flowers and smiles with wet eyes}
Raamu chaacha : But beta……How long you will do this ?
Ishana : I don’t know…..but am fortunate that….. am able to sit with him…..am able to touch him….am able to talk with him……you know…..chaacha…..am able to ……{emotional}….He has given me these much rights….and….am able to care him…… chaacha…….and…..he also cares me…..a lot……
Ramu chaacha : Beta…{he touches her hands}…..care him…..talk with him….walk with him……and ……tell him that……what you….feels……
Ishana : {interrupts} Chaacha…….please……now daffodils are with me……Am scared…….If I will lose these dahlia….then…….{she stares with wet eyes}……
Raamu chaacha : {unable to see her tears, he turns behind and says} Go and show your care……{ emotional}…..ishu beta…….
Ishana : {burst into tears} Bye…..chaacha……{she leaves}
Scene – 2 { @ Art hub}
{Omkara was in a dilemma……He just took the brush and tries to paint on canvas….But he was unable 2 involve himself in art….as whatever he witnessed today in oberoi mansion was creating frustration for him….He really wish to get rid of the frustration, still his mother’s tears were revolving his mind…..and he was unable 2 focus on anything…..Suddenly he felt that some body has touched his shoulder and he turned back and a pleasant smile came on his face as he saw the pretty dahlia flowers……Those dahlia which is something beyond of his vague mind but able to see his mind……He slowly touches the daffodils…..which were kept by Ishana…..in her hands……He stares daffodils and stares her eyes…….}
Ishana : Omkara……I brought it for you……
Omkara : How long you will bring this for me ??
Ishana : Omkara!!!
Omkara : Ishana…..I have a habit to stay as lonely and I request you….don’t show your care to me……please….don’t do this……
Ishana : But why…..omkara ??
Omkara : If you will always bring this flower…..I will believe that…..I will get these flowers whenever I need…….and I think I should not expect it……
Ishana : So…..omkara……you don’t trust me? Isn’t it ?
Omkara : Ishana !!!!! [shocked] I trust you more than myself……But your care……towards me…….its better we should have remain as two individuals…..only….two strangers…….but….we….{they share an eyelock]……..that day……when we…..met …….
Ishana : May be its destiny……..
Omkara : Ishana…..if its possible……then I really wish 2 change destiny……because …….. my life…..is like…….{unable 2 express what he feels and gets emotional}
Ishana : Omkara…….please….control yourself….{she places her hand on his forehead}just look @ me…..{He stares her eyes} tell me….what you feel now…….{emotional}
Omkara : Am able to see……pain……..only……{literally cries }
Ishana : Omkara……please……don’t cry……..omkara…….{she gets emotional and she places her hand on his cheeks}
Omkara : Ishana….{He stares her again and tears were continuously flowing from his eyes again and again…..}
Ishana : Please….omkara……don’t worry……..{she tries 2 place her another hand on his hand…..But before that omkara holded the hand and placed it on his face and burst into tears……Her palm was drenched with omkara’s tears which brought tears in her eyes also…}Omkara….please…..{before she could complete her words omkara hugged her tightly and Ishana felt shocked……She closed her eyes and the daffodils in her hands are fallen on floor as she placed her hands on his back…..}
PRECAP : FEEL IT……
25 Comments
Fab……superbbbb
Thanks
Wow….loved it…renima di lyk wat u eat i want to know…you write so gud man….even I want to write lyk u…
Thanks yashu…..don’t write like me…….if u want to write a gud ff…..then……i must say…..u should write like shivika22, luna, chatterbox and samm…..because they write better ff…than me….
thanks a lot for the compliment, but i really doubt that there’s any comparison. in fact you’re one of the few people who inspire me to write better. and i really think you don’t see yourself clearly. as for me, i could only dream of creating the perfect feel in my ff like you do! 🙂
yashu, i think you should write on your own but with inspiration like the other writers on this page, and i’m sure it will be the best too. 🙂
Amazing superb
Thanks dear
Pleasant surprise!! 🙂 …you are back! Omg! 🙂 . Ishkara back! Is this true? 🙁 sure… You will again go like last time. And…what did you said? Troubling! Us? (sorry for over reaction 😉 but it’s happening itself) . How could you say that! You have done mercy to us,favour to us. You said “i won’t come back with ffs” that was really heartbreaking! 🙁 . Becuz of work, tight schedule…you went…that’s why i never had courage… to request you …to return with ishkara ff. Thanks a lot! To that sweet girl who made you change your mind. Welcome back reni! 🙂 . Don’t know how to express these feelings…which bloomed after reading this epi. Chaacha and ishana’s convo, ishkara convo…touched the bottom of my heart. Really…painful . Waiting to know…what type of bond,what type of relationship they are sharing.
Jaya….sorry 4 breaking heart,,,,,,i don’t know what 2 say,…now……thanks,,,,,second part…..i wiill try 2 update it today
Hey dear…..
Actually I just out of words….. Mere sath ye hote rehte h… U see bad at expressing….
Bt Ur story has something very special n close to my heart… Well that is the flowers…… I just luv flowers…. I have never shared with anyone not even my mom… That flowers helped me to come out of depression…..
So, this story just got connected wid my heart……????
Thanks….actually my mood was bit fluctuating……and words were not coming…..in fact i was like cry baby only…..while i typed my f.f….and i love flowers….as gardening is my hobby
Hi5 dear… Even I luv gardening☺??
Yyyiiiiiipppppeeeee finally renima di is back……..di u didn’t let me wait…….not just me but others too……..omg……but yeah if ur SILENT READER IS READING THIS…….THEN THIS THANKS IS FOR U SWEETY……that’s what renima di has named u…….
Hey di I am glad that at least someone succeeded in changing ur decision…….i am soooo happy……
Anyways this was as always amazing……and I loved it……after all its written by you……and yeah I am just waiting for the next part……post whenever u r free….
Luv u di…..gn…..tc…
Thanks…chatter box……mujhe rula do gi kya…….love u…..
Look who’s back??? Renima darling!!!!!! I must say that your ff is not boring. It’s amazing and that’s how Ishkara story should have been told in the show. I also read some of your old ffs and it’s good that u don’t right funny FFs, because Ishkara story isn’t supposed to be humorous, It should be emotional and artsy and u do complete justice in doing that. Whatever u write, it reflects that it’s coming from your heart and that’s the best part. Just keep writing whenever u get time. As the new FL for Om is coming, I’ll really miss Ishkara and will have a hard time accepting Shrenu, I expect that u keep writing FFs on Ishkara, Though I hardly comment on other’s FF because I don’t get time and I take my own sweet time to read it.. U r a great writer and this is coming from the best critic as u say.
omg…….critic’s comment………its really gud……2 see ur comment…….i don’t know what 2 say now……u bear my ff……which means a lot….luna….really didn’t expected ur comment….but u surprised me…..thanks……
hey reni di your ff is above any wprds pleasd continue
Thanks sweetuishkara…..username is so sweet….
yayyy! you’re back! awesome update. i almost missed it, but thanks to my sharp eyes and sharp brain, i found it!! 😉 😀
just kidding! 🙂
thanks so much for getting back to writing, and this one was really good. waiting for the next.
🙂
Samm…….thanks yaar…..twilight jhatka…..ek dum jhatka laga….am impressed
I could feel that.
Glad u r back… Amazing episode.. Waiting for the next part…
I am so sorry for being late di. Actually I just saw this….
But i am double happy… Because YOU are back…yehhh!!!!!!!!!I missed you and your beautiful stories ao much. And now, you are backa again. The title is great and so is the story. Ishana and Om sharing a beautiful bond of trust, support and care. Ishu being there for Om without any expectation. Filling his lonely life with the fragrance and beauty through her care.????…that’s just the partner Om deserves…his soulmate…the one he needs.. it is amazing di. And of course it will get just better and better. Waiting fir the next and again tysm for coming back?
superb…
loved it..
Fabulous ff I was a silent reader of it ff…love it