Ansh: Nakul Mehta
Raghav: Mohit Sehgal
Ananya: Sanaya Irani
Sara: Disha Parmar
Swapnil: Ritwik Dhanjani
Pari: Tejaswi Prakash
Adarsh: Arjun Bijlani
Shekar: Kunal Jaisingh
Vikram: Faisal Khan
Kavya: Aditi Bhatia
Khushi: Roshni Walia
Hello everyone. You must be wondering who I’m? Ansh. You forgot me that’s not fair.
I was just kidding. I know you people love me and will never forget me hai na? Let me take you inside. You must be wondering why is MM decorated so much. It is because today your Ani matlab Ananya’s engagement. Come let’s go inside.
“Gosh Sanki this is just tuxedo can’t you fix that also” screamed Ragini. Sanskar kept his hands on her shoulders and said “Ohho Mrs. Maheshwari you never complain when you make ready your kids even if they are grown up like coconut trees” He stood pouting and Ragini pecked his lips. “That was for tempting me” said Ragini pulling his cheek when he stood shocked. “Mommy” screamed Ansh and both of them composed themselves. “Gosh today is your daughter’s engagement for god sake. At least close the door while romancing” said Ansh. “Again they started” said Pari entering. “What to do your poppy looks irresistibly handsome when he gets angry” said Ragini and bit her cheeks inside. “Mommy aap kabhi nahi sudhroge hai na” said Ananya entering. “Oye why all are behind my chotu ha” said Vikram entering. “See only my bhayyu is in my party” said Ragini hugging him. “He is your son mommy” said Pari hitting her head with her palm. “He is always my bhayyu and I’m always his chotu” said Ragini and kissed Vikram’s forehead and hugged him and all of them joined them and they had the family hug. “What about us?” said DP and Anu standing at the door. All of them ran to them and hugged encircling them.
“Maachi….” screeched Swapnil entering MM. “Arrey mera Swapu agaya” said Ragini and headed down. Sanskar DP and Anu followed her. “Aagya Maachi ka chamcha” said Pari twisting her lips. “Why do you fight with him always” said Ananya holding her waist. “Because he annoys me always” said she annoyed. “Again they fought?” asked Ansh. “Will they leave a chance?” asked Vikram. “Bacha party come down” said Sanskar from the hall. “Yes poppy” screamed all of them and ran down.
“Sheku” said Pari hugging Shekar. “She has problem only with me” said Swapnil looking at them. “You said something?” asked Pari glaring him. “Do I want to get admitted in mental hospital talking to you?” said Swapnil and Pari fumed glaring him. “Learn something from Sheku he is your younger brother only but not at all like you khadus” said Pari. “Pari” said Ragini glaring her. “You always tell me only to be quite” said Pari stamping her foot and headed to her room. “Pari” said Ansh and tried going behind her but Ragini stopped him.
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“Pari” said Adarsh sitting beside her. “Mumma loves swapnil more than me Adi. I just hate him” said Pari crying. “Swapu is very close to Maasi maa you know na. But she always fights for you. You cannot say whom you love more. Love doesn’t have grade to measure. You know na maasi maa loves everyone equal but Swapnil is like her first grandson” said Adarsh. “How?” asked Pari confused. “You know badi maa was like maasi maa’s kid. So her first kid Swapnil is like Maasi maa’s first grand kid. He always cheers maasi maa. Nobody can do that. That’s why she becomes so happy whenever he comes. And he stays in hostel and very rarely comes here.
So it looks like she loves him more but actually she loves everyone equally. Now come on cheer up. Today is such big day for you. Your dee’s engagement, come on cheer up” said Adarsh and Pari wiped her tears. “He is just like Kavya. The way he makes understand nobody can. Kash she would have been with us” said Ragini placing her head on Yohan’s shoulder. “We can’t fight the fate Ragu. She had only so much time on this earth. But you never let Adarsh miss his mom. I don’t know how to thank you” said Yohan. “You always forget friendship rule Yohan no thanks no sorry” said Ragini and forwarded her index finger small finger and thumb finger signing for a handshake and he complied and shook hand with her and smiled.
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“Kavi bacha” said Sanskar hugging Kavya. “Why are you late?” asked he. “Dadu and Dadi were fighting all the way as Dadu was driving hell slowly chote paapa” said Kavya pointing at Harish and Avantika. “Oye hello I was driving at the speed of 40 and that’s my best speed” said Harish and Avantika interrupted “Of course. Every snail says the same dialogue. Even a bicycle overtook your car Harish” said Avantika. “ Time please” said Sumi standing in between them and everyone burst out laughing. “Poppy” screeched Kavya as soon as she spotted Dayal. “Doll” said he and caressed her hair and kissed her forehead. “Poppy you know we are going for excursion from school this week that to Shimla” said Kavya. “How will your poppy live without you?” said he sad. “I will call you na poppy everyday” she said hugging him.
“Where is your mumma and Papa” asked he. “I don’t know I came with Dadu and Dadi” said Kavya. “Wo DN(Dayal Nanu) mumma and Papa went to receive Kishan Maamu and his family. They will reach soon” said Shekar. “How did you come then?” asked he. “Of course my super fast Swapnil bhai” said he and Swapnil glared him. “Swapu how many times should I tell you to drive carefully” said Ragini standing in front of him. “No maachi I was driving in speed limit only” said Swapnil. “Liar” screamed Pari. “Mumma you know he drives very rashly” said Pari and smirked looking at him. “Pari ki bachi ruk” screamed he chasing her.
“Ragini” said Sanskar holding her shoulders. “Nothing will happen. I will talk to him” said Sanskar and Ragini nodded her head smiling weakly.
“Ragu” said Mr and Mrs Somany entering MM. “Maa Papa” said she and hugged them. “NM(Nani maa) NP (Nanu papa) save me” said Pari hiding behind them. “Pari careful” said Ragini holding Mrs Somany when she stumbled due to Pari. “Maasi maa, Bade papa save me” said she and ran to Swara and Sahil who entered just then with Kishan, Anjali, Khushi their daughter and Sakshi. “Hold on Pari bacha” said Sahil holding Pari. “Swapnil what are you doing leave her” said Swara glaring him. “You always take her side mumma though she is wrong” said Swapnil complaining.
“Because she is cho chweet like your chote papa not karela like your maachi” said Swara and Ragini fumed. “Chipkali how dare you call my chotu as Karela” said Vikram standing in front of her. “Ohho Bandar. She is my sister first then your mom and chotu so keep quite” said Swara. “Chipkali” said Vikram running behind her. “Vikky bhai is small na then how can he call maa chipkali and Maachi as chotu. Whenever he is there mumma forgets that she is mother of three kids” said Kavya. “That’s because they believe your Vikky bhai is reincarnation of your Vikram maamu. And Vikky resembles upto an extent to your mamu” said Yohan holding Kavya’s shoulder. “Yohan mamu” screeched Kavya and hugged him.
“Kishan bhai” said Ragini hugging Kishan. “How are you Ragu?” asked he. “Fit and fine” said Ragini smiling widely. “BM(Bua Maa)” said Khushi pulling Ragini’s sari. “Ale my chutki” said Ragini hugged her and drooled happy. “Bhabhi” said she and hugged Anjali. “Hello Sakshi maa” said Ragini taking blessings from Sakshi and smiled caressing her cheek.
“Sansku” said Sara. “Sara baby” said Sanskar and hugged her. “Tarun what is this you are coming now” said Ragini. “Sorry ma’am” said Tarun nervous. Ragini burst out laughing. “Tarun bhai you are still scared of my Kaali maatha avtar ha?” asked Ragini. “Haa because he has become a prey for it maximum time” said Sanskar and all laughed and Ragini glared him. “And now you will become one” said Sara smirking and Sanskar gulped scared.
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“Riya” said Ragini hugging Riya. Riya smiled and hugged her back. “Ohho madam now only showing Samdhan attitude haa?” asked Ragini. “I’m more than happy that you accepted my son’s proposal for your daughter Ragu. Otherwise where are we and where are you?” she said folding her hands. “Riya stop it. I have told you many times not to speak like that. Ananya and Raghav love each other. Love is important than status or money. Have you forgotten I was in worst financial condition than you” said Ragini caressing her cheek. Ananya blushed when her eyes met with Raghav.
“If his dad was alive today he would have been so happy” said Riya caressing her son’s hair. “He is here na aunty. Here” said Pari pointing Riya’s heart with her index finger. Dayal neared Sanskar and said “She is just like you” Sanskar smiled through his tears.
“Ragu…. Shona….” called Saloni entering MM. Maasi screeched both of them and hugged Saloni. “So bad you are Saloni maasi. So late you are coming Katti” said both of them. “What to do celebrity hu na” said Saloni maasi and both of them burst out laughing and hugged her and she joined others.
Everyone clapped when Raghav and Ananya exchanged their rings.
“Tarun I want to ask you something” said Sanskar after all the guests left and whole family was sitting and chit chatting. “I want Sara’s hand for Ansh” said Sanskar and Tarun looked at him shocked. He turned to his wife and she looked at him shocked. “Sir what are you saying” he said shocked. “Sara baby you have any problem with this?” asked Sanskar and she nodded her head no lowering it. Ansh looked at them shocked. “Ansh bacha you are okay with this?” asked Ragini. “If you people are okay even I’m okay maa” said Ansh. “So After Ananya and Raghav’s marriage it will be Ansh and Sara’s marriage” said DP. “Sir” said Tarun folding his hands in front of Sanskar. “Arrey Tarun what are you doing. She is like Ananya to me. I always wished her to make my bahu” said Sanskar holding his hands. “But sir we don’t match your status” said Tarun. “But Sara matches our family” said he and hugged Tarun.
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“Sanki” said Ragini placing her head on Sanskar’s chest. “Hmmm Bandariya” said he caressing her hair. “Life has changed so much na. Time really heals everything. Only thing is we have to wait for it.” said she. “Hmmm” said Sanskar. “Sanki” said she and she heard him snoring. “You have grown old Mr. Sanskar Maheshwari” said Ragini and pecked his cheek and slept back on his chest.
“Love was really unexpected. I never knew I will fall in love with you. May be I needed peace for my mind by forgiving you. That’s what my bhayyu wished. And you taught me that. Thank you so much for being with me always” thought Ragini.
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A/N: Ha without my bakwas how can I end my story. Thank you so so so much for loving this story. And I hope you will love my new story also equally. I may end up with some same characters name. You have to bare me for that. I hope I don’t mix the same emotions there also.
58 Comments
Awesome
thank you so much Sindhu. Really glad you liked it
Happy ending keep going
Thank you so so much dear. Really glad you liked it
superb …….. but got a lil confused with the kids ….but its okay ,,, loved it
Sorry for the confusion dear
RagSan- Ansh, Ananya, Pari, Vikram
SwaraSahil- Swapnil, Shekar and Kavya
KavyaYohan- Adarsh
Sara is Tarun’s daughter and Raghav is Riya’s son. Khush is Kishan and Anjali’s daughter. Hope you are clear now
Suprnb
Thank you dear
Amazing nd ur new ragsan story betrayer is totally mind blaster i loved it i loved it i lovedddddddd it dear u r such an extra mind blowing writer dat i wanna read ur stories more n more nd always BTW m a silent reader bt i wait fr ur stories ‘kahte hai na dil tham ke’
Thank you so much Ruhi. And for betrayer also thanks a ton. And I’m blushing here reading your comment dil tham ke. ?????
Happiness overloaded…. Excellent work…. brilliant writing…. Loved it to d core…. u nailed it completely…. d way u expressed each n every feeling is outstanding…. gonna miss u alot…. n hope u will return wid something different concept
Tani sweet heart thank you so much. I have already started my new story dear.
Awesome. Will miss this ff
Thank you so much Jaan. I thought today also I will make you cry thank god I didn’t ????
not good plzzz try to give new soon so keep ur promise and comeback once again next part soon
Sorry for disappointing you dear. I hope you will like my new story. Thank you
Awesome awesome awesome and your betrayer ff is very interesting keep rocking
Thank you so much khushi. Thank you for the new ff also. ?????
Happy happy ending ? it was cuteness overloaded. But I missed kavya. How did she die? I felt so bad because her character is one of my fav. But it’s ok sisso. Life can’t be the same always. And the bachha party was just cool like me and jazzy partner ??? Loved it loved it loved it so much. Will miss this ff for sure. Love u so much sisso. ? thank u so much for giving this beautiful ff to us. I had a great time reading this.
I just kept it a suspense. You can think your own reasons. That was actually my point that you cannot expect life to be same always. I kept both of you in mind while writing about bacha party. Love you too deeshu. ????????? now don’t complain that I use emojis only for my visit ?????????
Nice
Thank you dear
Superb. Loved it.
Thank you Inu.
Just awesome
No words to describe
I’m feeling sad because this story ended.
It will be always remain in my heart….
Will miss this ff????
And I loved your new ff
Sorry chellame but it has to end na. And thank you for liking the new ff. I hope you will love it equally
Happy ending dr.. I luv this ff so much..
Thank you keerthu
I never ever commented on a ff, first time i am commenting here and coming to ur ff akka, it was it was mindblowing and extraordinary and am always become speechless and ended up being emotional now also, because i will miss guilt ff very much . ALL THE BEST and keep going i expect more from u on the other ff’s akka.
Bye and Take care akka
Makku. Thank you so so much for calling me Akka ?????
I hope I meet your expectations. Love you
And please post Casanova soon
Sorry da to make you wait. I will post it tomorrow and two chapters this week. Sorry to make you people wait
fantastic , I will miss this story a lot for sure. all are positive in this story and among those my ragz is rocks as always. and I love this a lot because he loves my and his ragz like anything. plssssss update betrayer as soon as possible because I have already started my curiosity over this story pls post it soon I can’t wait but eventhough iam enjoying this waiting by reading this again and again.
Hi Manya. Thank you so so much dear. I’m overwhelmed with your support and love. I’m really sorry to make you wait but you have to wait till Monday ???
Done read two times to understand exactly. It’s too good .I was addicted to this so much used to wait for it .if comes immediately tried to read it even when I am working in office which is too tough .I don’t have words to say the emotions u described are still there in my mind.
Sri. Thank you so so much. I’m sorry I made you so restless. No problem when you comment my story reached you that’s important for me. Thank you once again
Don’t think that I have read now .I almost ready around 10 30 but no time to comment so now once again read and commenting .
OK…I am breaking my silence…
U r amazing and ur stories are mind blowing… Love u sis sooooooo much…
Now the fact…I always wanted to comment…but I am a student, so I never open tu everyday.so whenever I open na.opei will be too late to comment to ur ff…but trust me sis…u r fabulous writer…
Imp….”plz give me an autograph… Confused right??? I will clear.. It is just that,I know u r going to be a famous writer in future (in fact u r a famous writer here)so plz remember I am first in the line…OK???
And thanks…still confused??? The cover pic which had ragsan pic was my edit..u can see my name joona there…I am so happy to see it in ur edit …r u in fb sis???I would love to be friend with u….
And once again…thank u for this wonderful ff…love u…plz reply back here or in personal chat…love u sis…love u so much❤❤❤❤?
Joona first thing thanks a ton for that edit. You know I fell for it at first sight. Though I have used so many edits I haven’t mentioned them in my story. Through your comment I want to thank all of them. I specifically reserved for the epilogue. And sorry dear I have deleted my ff account an year ago. You can reach me on hangouts at [email protected]. Love you. ??????????. And autograph really I feel do I deserve this much but still thank you so much. And about the comments I have always told that I love all my readers even if they are silent readers. So you read my story that gives me kind of happiness. Once again a big thank you to you and all the editor who are doing a wonderful job. Sometimes your edits attracts the readers to the story we should thank you for that. Lots and lots of love
Fabulous yaar…… Amazing u r such an awesome writer…The way u r expressing one’s emotions is outstanding…..This is one of my favourite ragsan ff yaar….I will miss this ff alot…Itha story la forgiveness pathi nallave purinjikita….Infact in some place I’m too like ragini….. Ennakum romba kovam varum antha time la enna pannuranu enake theriyathu…..Harsh ah thetiduva then I will regret for that….And after reading this ff Na kovam paduratha koraika try panna start pannita…tqsm for Changing me too…..Unga Betrayer ff kaga wait pannitu irukkura…..And plz don’t hurt Ragini too much yaar
I was waiting for your comment ????
And I’m glad my story brought such a change in you. When people say that I feel so proud and happy I can’t express. Story has just started dear I won’t disappoint you. Rumba rumba nandri.
U didn’t mix the character but there it need some time to understand everyone who r who’s baby.. I even didn’t missed single character from this ff to keep them for this prologue as always same happy happy smiley end..
sorry da last episode la comment panna mudiyala, kadhal azhagunu padichirken but guilt valli nu unara mudinjadhu ana sanki is diff from everyone.. na padicha ella kadhala vida indha kadhal rombo pudusa irunchu.. Ragini for girls the 1st hero dad next bro then later it come a guy but rag ku vikky was more than anything that’s the highlight of her character with lot of stubbornness.. swara she is so practical & normal girl.. ansh very sweet boy now seeing swanpil & pari I just imagined swara & vikky.. Anu I never speaked about her na as if u showed sanki pain means its equally same pain only she would be gone for it..1st she lost her 1st child , next dil,next husband idhula pacha kuzhanthaiya pathukuthu finally irkra 1 paiyanu ivalo kasta padratha pakkradha vida oru thai ku vera kasta vendala finally irkura oru paiyanoda varisuku kuda aasa pada mudiyadha yenna oru sabha life la… sumi swara va konjo naal neglect pannadha thavara she too equally practical.. Kavya amazing so different from everyone such a sweet doll equally dayal to not less than her…inga ellarume nallavanga but sabika patha jeevan gal… 50 episode la ni ezhudhunadhu 40 episode nee enna azhavachirka ur so bad in that.. 3 to 4 episode mattum tha sirika vachirka.. na unku personal msg panna nee pathiya illayanu theriyala… Nee kannada la kuda comment padikkanu nu aasa patha la but inga yarume kannadala comment pannala dnt worry…
Nan yesto ff odidindini marthidini but e guilt nan indha mariyaku agala Importantly ninu Nan mariyala.. Nan ondu ella ninge inmele yene few ff start madogindru 1st nin name mention madu.. coz os la odi mugisda melene idhu nindu antha gotha agothe suppose busy schedule li odakku agala adke adhu nin writting antha gothadre na odake agalila andru save madi free idaga odthini adke Nan matra ala thumba jana age madbodhu… nin igge barithane iro.
nee gurichi yentha chepina adi thakkuve yendukanthe nuvvu antha amazing..
lambe comment pucha na, he pad lo..
I think I asked from different languages I just tried it..
enku hindi avalo theriyadhu thapu irundha sorry… nee ivalo naal engalukkaga avalo ezhudirka so last na kuda unkagga ezhudanumla.. ana enna ezhdurudunu theriyala so only this word for u love u love u very much love you so so so muchhhhhhh…
en comment padika unku bore adikum but atleast padikalanalum lengthy comment pathu ni santhosho pathale enku podhum, innoru word ella padicha last la en comment nenachi nee naala sirika pora poru…
tata bye bye see u love u miss u Up to only 15 hrs coz neetha nalaiku mathyo Casanova update pannuvala.. ippo en favourite Casanova tha & from today betrayer kuda… na idhu varaikum rishtey padichadhu illada adhu illana adhu ippo rombo episode cross achi so ennala padika mudiyala adhukaga miss pannuvenu nenaikadha adha kuda na save panna poren en Google account la aprom yeppo na free aveno en life la appo padichirken may varsho kuda agala ana padikama irka mudiyuma unnoda writting ah..
again tata bye bye pakalam idhadhu en comment ku solra tata va nu… love da chello sweet heart take care bye…
am waiting for Casanova…
sorry indha word miss panniten starting le supera irkra ella ff end agudhuna feel pannuvango sad aguvango but mayb nan mattum eppoda mudiyum irudhen do u know un episode miss pannavu mudiyadhu padichi azhama irkavum mudiyama irunchi, so athan eppome nenaipen sikiram mudiyadhanu coz atleast end achi happy mudiyume nu oru aase tha.
podhula la en bhak bhak love u bye bye sisso…
First thing I want to tell you is sorry why because I understand Tamil very well but replying Konjam kashta. When I started reading I was all smiles because you spoke about each character so well. Specially you spoke about Anu OMG so well you understood her and all of them.
Next Kannada dalli odhok shuru madde. Maiyella jhum anthu. Nange asthu ishta Kannada Andre. Kannal neeru banthu. Thumba thumba dhanyawadagalu nan aase iderisiddikke. Nange en helbeku antha gothagta Illa ashtu khushi aagta idhe. I just love you for this sweet surprise. And Telugu I understood what you said but again Im not able to reply back and Hindi me jo bhi kaha teekh kaha. And at last love you so so so much yar. You spent so much time for me I’m like blank what to say you seriously. I made you cry for 40 episodes but today with your one comment you compensated all that. And yennalu Ungala Marika mudyile eppovum. And I will surely keep your point to mention my name with the title in mind. Rumba nandri Ningal Katina pasathak mariyadek eppovum naa grateful agirike sorry Adak Enna solrar Tamil la puriyadhu
And forgot to tell you sorry da. I forgot the Casanova update at home only. I will post it tomorrow and thursday
I thought tht ur tamilian that y i commented so long in tamil. But nin kannada adhu mangalorian antha gothadamele dnt worry inna nan elle comment kannadale irothe.. Am not so fluent in kannada but 80% manage madthini. Really navu yeste language kaltru nam matrubhasheli mathadodu r a mathana bere avaru mathadodana kelbekadre iro santhosha bere ellu barala alva.. Nanu bangalorian born up & everything is bangalore but native tamilnadu. Ninu last episode le ella language mathadi ande but nija nan kannada dalli comment madirthina antha idea illa but nin adrali particular kannadanu add madide so adke e TU li yaro kannada li comment madi nan nodila ninu kelidamela nan madide idre nin yege happy agthya helu nin goskarane nan isto long comment madida mele age nin isto ago language comment madidre alva ninge happy agodu..
Innamele nin ella ff go nan kannadale comment madodu. Full oda nan comment hesto bakwas age madidini alva. ok bye dear.. Nange kannadali muddu madake barala gothirodu helthini, Love u ammu,chinu putti
Rasha Thumba thumba Thumba thanks appi. Nija nan lifenal ankondirlilla nan Kannada comment nodtini antha seriously I’m so so so happy. And nan inmele nin comment ge wait madtini late adru parvagilla. Nin one word Kannada helidru bang saku. Nange Kannada Andre ashtu ishta. ???????
Aww and amazing finally one episode that didn’t make me senti…love all ur episodes and I want a new ff xx
Thank god I did not make you senti. I have already started dear. Betrayer. I hope you will like it. Thank you so much
Sally dear am really soo soo soo sorry for last update comment…i want to tell more things but I feel something different in my mind….so I didn’t tell anything about ur update…reason maybe Indha ff miss panaporatha irukalam or u told about forgiveness na….am also in ragini place that means am not angry often…rarely I got angry…if I got angry means forgiveness s impossible for me…whatever happens am not forgive easily and am not forget that incident…maybe thz s the reason for my different feeling….bcz u told about forgiveness am not that type na..so only my mood off….After reading that update i think about that myself…y I can’t forgive them…but i don’t get any answers…but i want to change the habit…changing our one habit s soo difficult na…but i try to change thz habit…it’s ur asru and ur crazy fan promise…i definitely change thz habit…i don’t know how much time it’s take…but surely i change myself….sry for my bhak bhak….
and coming to ur ff…omg what can I say yar? u r fantablous writer dear….no words to praise u…u made my baby doll died….ohh no my kavya doll died…feeling sad yar….In ur last update vikram cd…that cd only made me like thz…when ragini told about vikram…that she don’t know about his last wish…if she know about his one wish she fulfill that…she told thz…i thought how Sally s going to fulfil ragu wish…but u rock it….i don’t think about cd that also in kishan house….omg u r brilliant dear….vikram character s so so understanding character….i thought swapnil s little vikram…but u gave another little vikram…swapil and pari s Xerox copy of swara and vikram…ansh and ani so sweet children in childhood…thz both r the reason for our ragsan married….kavya s such a sweet doll…she give a explanation of every action na..is so cute.. now also am wonder how she confessed ragu in a simple unique way…and yohan he is the best friend for our ragu….dayal he fulfil his duty not only for his own daughter and also swarag….pari ma and papa…Both r consider ragu s her daughter and support her in every decision….anu she mother of everyone in thz ff…she s superbbb mom….dp come in 4 r 5 epic…but he do his father duty….
and sumi misunderstanding ki queen…after her misunderstanding clear she is so cute mom…and also helpless mom…that doctor anjali mom and sonali maasi both character r supper…In initial state of ragu sonali maasi only help her….
tarun what can I say about him…he is the only prey of our ragu and Sanky…poor soul…riya s sweet…
adarsh dialogue in thz epilogue superbbb dear…loved it….swara and sahil both r lovely couple…and sahil mom and dad are also supper…finally our our mandh budhi and bandariya…what can I say yar…Both r unique couple…Both r hate each other also they can’t see another one pain…how much separation, hater, pain, guilty then also they love each other in infinity…They both r different from others…and their love story also different….
ohh no i forget about shekher and kavya…u didn’t give much scenes for them but also I love them….kishan and anjali good couple….if I miss any character sry for that….i love all character in ur ff….bcz u give one character r connected to another one….i didn’t image u give riya son and tarun daughter in thz ff…u respect each and every relationship yar…
thz epilogue s fully overloaded of happiness joy and blessings….i loved loved loved it infinity….u r marvellous fabulous writer…masterpiece yar….love u lot Sally dear….waiting for ur betrayer ff…love u dear….A big teddy hug to u from ur crazy fan….shower of candies dairies to u….takecare my Sally dear….
Wow finally my chellame commented. I just loved your comment. Thank you for loving my characters so much. You defined everyone so well. And the decision you took to change yourself though it is trying only I’m happy I’m damn happy. Love you da chello (Prakash sir style la) ??????????
chooo chooo chooo sweet yaar this story is soooo special this is sooo close to my heart just like u r and will miss this story a lottt and bandariya too and saddu maheshwari fattu maheshwari heheheh all the cute fights between them
Saare naam yaar Hai Haa? Thank you so much jj. I’m so happy this story had such impact
Hey dear…actually for the first time am commenting here on ur ff…sorry for being late…and finally it’s an happy ending…
U rocked…
And one more thing U r a very good writer…
and u said na u have started another ff betrayed and am waiting for it…
In this ff u nailed it…i mean its full of emotions and I lovd it to the core…
But one thing enakkum Adi kadi kobam varum…sometimes extreme…i will burst it out at that time but after that I will feel for it…after reading ur ff I will to overcome it…
Thanks a tonne for the lovely ff and a big bone breaking hug from your crazy fan…love u a lot dear…take care da…
I’m so happy that this story has such effect on you. I’m really glad. Thank you so much dear.
really very sorry for being so late… I saved last episode Link to read it when ever I get time as soon as I read it I want to read even epilogue so not wasting time I started reading epilogue… so I dropped my feelings for last episode and epilogue over here hope you don’t mind…..
I being a emotional person always loved and adored your ff’s… I always said your ff’s touch my heart I will end up in tears may be Happy or sad…. last episode was so dam amazing every scene was so heart touching… vikram’s gift, ragini forgiving kissan and Sanskar were my most favourite…. you were right sometimes forgiveness gives us peace of mind… Sanskar sometimes acts as really dumb but his bandariya is their to always take care of that hahaha…. I always loved ragsan pair you made me to connect to them…. I am short of words to express what I am feeling….
epilogue is like cherry on the cake… bonding of ragsan with every kid is just too adorable…. I was shocked to know kavya was no more but happy their is little kavya to fill her place in their lifes…vikram was just amazing even I was hoping vikram to reborn as ragu or swara kid after reading this I was on cloud 9… it’s such a amazing feeling when your wish comes true…. swapnil and pari nok jhok superb…. everything of this epilogue feels like a perfect ending…
finally I would say you are such a wonderful writer and all your ff’s are on my favorite list…. I can’t pick one among them but this is really very special will miss it for sure… I was really bad at some times I can’t express what I am feeling and due to lack of time I would just say a word superb or awesome but believe me every chappy has something which is beyond amazing… words are not enough to describe it… love you so much for giving such a wonderful story with a very good msg ????
First thing no need of sorry and all I do understand. And the next thing OMG you really spent so much time for me I’m thankful for that. And I’m speechless now. And I always appreciate your each comment though it is small or late you never miss my ff in busy schedule also. More than praising I really appreciate people if it touches your heart. Whatever you have commented is precious to me and it will remain precious all my life. Love you dear
OMG i am already missing ur ff..i have no words to express how beaitiful ur ff was..its my all time favourite story.i hope TeVar comes in a new show as a couple.Thank u soo much for writing such a heavenly ff.lots of love
Awww that’s really so sweet of you yaar. Thank you so so so so much dear