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Chapter 66
Roke na ruke Naina……
A shining red Audi was waiting for Karthik to take him to Udaipur. Swayam was accompanying him as he had all the details of the work going on the land. Karthik was supposed to supervise the progress of the land and also solve the problem of the workers.
Swayam had suggested that they visit the few schools located over there so as to decide which faculty should they hire for their school. He had jostled down few of the schools and academies which provided the best of teachers in Udaipur.
The car started on its journey. It was almost a four hour journey. Soon the beautiful landscapes and mountains rendered Karthik awestruck and speechless. The journey was a splendid one but Karthik was in his own zone. His life could never be beautiful again without her.
They reached Udaipur and he could almost feel her presence in the air. Karthik had engrossed himself in the work at his father’s land. The school was shaping up pretty good and he was happy with the progress. This had almost become his passion after Naira left him. He had poured his heart out in this project.
After the site visit and the meet with the construction workers, Karthik and swayam went on their trip to different schools. He spent the next few hours selecting the faculty for his school. He found all the specialists in every subject. He wanted perfection.
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As Naira was working at her dance academy. She had a growing sense of uneasiness and restlessness. She hadn’t been able to keep any food down since this morning. She felt a strange chill go up her spine and cold sweat broke out on her forehead. Her hands shivered as she tried to tie her Ghungroos on her feet and she felt that a nerve in her brain was going to bust. She felt terrified and she had no idea why.
“What’s wrong with you ?!! You haven’t eaten anything since last night. Are you fine Naira ?!!” Her mumma asked worried to the core.
“Yup, I just don’t feel like eating anything.” Naira answered smiling fakely so as lessen her mumma’s worry and stress.
But she could feel that something was going to change. Today was going to be memorable day for her.
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“Sir, we are almost done. This is the last academy. She is one of the best dance teacher Udaipur has to offer. If we get her on board then our school would excel in the dance section.” Swayam informed Karthik, who was lost in some thought.
“Ohkay, I will try to convince her to join our faculty.” Karthik answered, paying little attention to the information provided.
His red Audi screeched to a halt, at the main entrance of the Dance academy. Karthik stepped out of it. He had convinced all the teachers that he had wanted to teach in his school. This was his last stop. He knew swayam had choosen only the best and thus he didn’t want to let go off anyone of them.
Karthik climbed up the stairs and opened the front door of the studio. It was almost 9 in the night and so he assumed that no class must be going on right now.
As he stepped inside the studio, Karthik felt a deep sense of craving within him to hold Naira in his arms. He had gotten used to such thoughts . She would dominate his thoughts many times in this one year that had passed. It was no use fighting this feeling as then it only got worse. But what he felt now was much stronger.
Suddenly a slow music started playing in the background. Karthik walked towards the direction from where the music was played. He found himself standing in front of the rehearsal hall. The hall was separated by a translucent glass which allowed only blurred images to be seen from outside.
“ Tu joo nazron ke samne, kaal hoga nahi,
Tujhko dekhe bin mei marna jauu kahi,
Tujhko bhul jau kaise,
Mane na manau kaise, Tu bata,
Roke na ruke naina,
Teri oor hai inhe toh rehna.”
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As the day had officially ended, Naira had played one of her favourite song and was dancing to its tune. She loved the song as it described her feelings and gave them complete justice through the melody. She had lately been fond of dancing to this song, whenever she used to miss Karthik beyond her control.
“Hatho ki lakire doo milti jaha hai,
Jisko pata hai bata dee jagah woh kaha hai,
Ishq mei jane kaisi yeh bebasii hai,
Dhadkano se milkar bhi, dil tanhaa hai,
Doorie mei mitau kaise,
Mane na manau kaise, Tu bata,
Roke na ruke naina,
Teri oor hai inhe toh rehna.”
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Karthik was lost in the song and the view of a girl dancing inside the rehearsal hall. He could only see her form through the partial visibility glass. But he observed that she was really good at the art.
His breathing got heavy and he felt restless. He removed his wallet from the back pocket of his pant and opened it. There was a small passport size photo of Naira in it. After she had left him, he had downloaded her Facebook profile picture and had it printed so that he could carry it everywhere.
He softly caressed the photo with his finger tips and then brought it upto his lips and gently kissed the photo. He took a minute to compose himself and then wiped the small tears that had formed at the corner of his eyes with his thumb. He took one last look at her photo and kept it back in his pocket.
He made his resolve and pushed open the door to get into the rehearsal hall, what he saw next shook him to the core……
Precap : And they meet again !!
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I hope that you all get this Chapter and there are no confussions. I wanted to show both Karthik and Naira’s side therefore there is a change in the POV and places at certain instances. Also there are lyrics of the song to add to their emotional state.
Many of you asked me that how could Karthik not find Naira in the one year that has passed. Well I have no explanation or logic for it. I just wanted to show the suffering of Karthik and that he deeply regrets what he has done so I kept them seperated for a year so that Karthik realises Naira’s value in his life.
Finally Kaira would be meeting after a year in the next Chapter. Confrontation coming up in the next Chapter. Stay tuned.
Ps : Many of you wanted me to show more of Kaira after their union and not end the FF when they get together. So would you all like it if I showed their marraige with proper rituals. Since they had a registered and forced marraige all the functions like haldi, mehendi, sangeet and the saat phera’s are remaining. So would you all like me to write that as well after Kaira millan.
Do comment. Keep smiling. Keep watching Yrkkh !!
38 Comments
It’s simply superb. Written beautifully as usual. Waiting for their reunion.
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Reunion coming up soon !!
Yes pls as we want it to be continued and a fantastic epi
Sure, I will write their marraige rituals before ending the FF.
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Awesome !!!
Loved it to the core!!!
And no logic needed vrushy as I believe love and pain cannot be experienced or expressed with logic!!!
Also very interesting ending of the chapter and a very interesting chapter!!/
Am eagerly waiting for the next!!!
PS:- would love to have a proper wedding for kaira to mark a perfect ending for this perfectly imperfect FF!!!
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Yup, will surely add their marraige rituals before ending the FF.
Amazing one
Can’t wait for next
Show complete marriage
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Will post next Chapter soon !!
Will surely show their marraige rituals.
Awesome Vrushy!! Waiting desperately for the next… Thanks for considering my request of not ending after reunion… Yes u came up with a nice idea would love to see them getting married properly and most importantly with full of love in their hearts… Please do add this track as I really wanted to see more of their moments post love confession
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Yup, will add their marraige track before ending the FF.
My fav song
Fantastic episode
Yaaa marriage would be best
Post next soon
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Will surely add their marraige rituals before ending the FF.
Will post next Chapter soon !!
amazing…….finally they meet again in next chapter……can’t wait for next…..
I would love it if u show Their marriage with proper ritual…..N thank u for not ending this ff soon
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Also will add their marraige track before ending the FF.
Just amazing it fantastic … I was just imaging it how will kaira reaction when they will see each other it was really awesome … Must the way u describe scenes are awesome….. The lyrics of song made the chapter more emotional so cute chapter the way kartik kiss naira photograph was so gud love it:):)
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wow vrushy..loved it!!! nd would definitely love to watch their re-marriage!!!! just go for it….
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Will surely add their marraige track before ending the FF !!
jinda rhne k lie tri kasam,ab ek mulaakatt jaruri hai sanam…
vrushy v enjoying ur ff wid deeply of my heart…
plz continue much more..love uuuuu
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Well chappy was awesome I juzt can’t stop me imagining tht what will come nxt after they meet….
And ya plz continue it with some sweet kaira moments with their marriage rituals…….
I would luv it…..
Please post the nxt one sooooonn……..
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Will surely include their marraige rituals before ending the FF.
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amazing………..
waiting for their marriage
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Marraige com
Yes….. would love their re-marrige….n if u would add my suggestion, which i gave u abt gayatri deoras entry could be also made during their wedding and u add jealousy track gayatri as i suggested in the chp 55 or 54 maybe… plz try n add it… i loce ur ff… keep posting….n also show some movements of kaira romance after kaira milan and before wedding…will love to see if u add my suggestion….keep writing…love ur all ff…post next asap
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Great vrushy thanks for considering yes pls add the wedding it will be great loved the chapter salute to your writing skill
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Aww.Actually i’m a silent reader.I’m giving comment only to your FF because I just love it.Plz don’t end.plz don’t.
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I am sorry but I would be ending itvas there’s not much left to show in the story !!
awesomee waiting for the next chapter amazing we want to see the complete marriage rituals waiting
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Loved it…. chap vs awesome……. liked it……. love to read your work…. rest up to u…..
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It was a awesome chapter…the pain was easily understood by ur writting…love it…the song is my favourite nowadays…and I would love if u write about the marriage rituals and all so pls continue…waiting for next chapter egarly
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Marraige track coming up.
Will post next Chapter soon !!!
I really got emotional after reading this! And your idea is so awesome it will be really nice to read about their remarriage.
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Will surely include marraige track before ending the FF !!