ISHKARA FF : WHEN PASSION MEETS COMPASSION ……PART 1 [By Renima]
Hello Ishqies…..Thanks a lot for the wonderful comments which u all give through the promos…Really ur support means a lot for me 2 post this one soon only……So guys….am bringing the first part of this 6th Fan fiction exclusively 4 ishkara…..Pls go through it and express ur views…….And guys….it’s actually a journey of arrogant omkara 2 regain his lost belief in life….So @ first u will see omkara as bit angry wala here also…But don’t worry…. I will certainly bring back our old omkara with a new personality……Well it will take time…..
Till then read this one and express ur views…….
Links 4 previous part……
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishkara-ff-passion-meets-compassion-promos-renima/
Scene- 1 @ Oberoi Mansion, Omkara’s Room…….
[Omkara is in dilemma……As the decision for tej 2 give divorce 4 jhanvi has really disturbed his mind…..He has lost all hopes towards life…..and he decides 2 remain as a stone hearted person by killing his own heart….as well as emotions only…..In extreme depression, omkara searches every where and finally find drugs……He takes the syringe and decides to inject the heavy dose of drugs on his body…….As soon as he could pass the syringe on his body……rudra rushes 2 the room and stops omkara by throwing syringe from him……In extreme anger, omkara slaps rudra…..Rudra gets shocked and becomes confused to see the flames of anger in his brother’s eyes…….Omkara was staring rudra with sharp eyes only}
Rudra : Om…..
{Without saying any word omkara turns back and takes another syringe……from the draw of table……This time rudra really feels tensed and he applies maximum strength to take out syringe from omkara and finally rudra manages to take it from omkara…….}
Omkara : Rudra…….I need it……just give it 2 me……
Rudra : Om…..why are u doing this ? I can’t give it u……
Omkara : Rudra……are u giving it or not ? Else….I will….
Rudra : Else….what……om? U will slap me ?? Won’t u ?? Then am ready to bear it…..Come on…..slap me…..{rudra places omkara’s hand on his cheek and starts beating himself with omkara’s hands} Slap me…..o…..
Omkara : Rudra!!!! {omkara takes his hands from rudra’s cheek} Don’t interfere in my life…..Stay away from me …..and allow me to spend some time alone…….
Rudra : Why…..om….why ??? {emotional] U know….am not feeling bad……for ur slap…..I really didn’t felt any pain….But now …u are not that om….which I know…..How can u say to stay away from ur life…om….am ur bhai……Why u did this to me….om?? {rudra places his hands on omkara’s chest and cries}
{Omkara just stares rudra’s eyes and gets emotional……Without uttering a word, he removes rudy’s hands and just moves near the door….Mean while shivaay enters there and stops him by holding his hands….They share an emotional eyelock……}
Shivaay : I know…..om…..whatever happened….u are……
Omkara : Just leave me alone….shivaay……
Shivaay : No….I can’t let u to suffer alone…….om…..u are my brother…….
Omkara : Pls…..shivaay….let me allow to spend some time alone…..It’s my life….And I can handle it…….{shivaay and omkara stare each other’s eyes……shivaay witnessed a flame of fire in omkara’s eyes which he never find before in his bhai…..He felt it as a command from om and without saying a single word…..shivaay leaves his hand from his hold and omkara moves ahead….}
Rudra : Shivaay bhaiya…….pls…..stop…om……pls…{rudra rushes 2 shivaay and hold his hands}
Shivaay : Om…..there is no dead line in between brothers…..Whenever u feel 2 share …u just……{omkara turns behind and shivkara share an emotional eyelock……But soon om left the room in rush}
Rudra : Bhaiya……{rudra starts crying literally……and hugs shivaay…..]
Shivaay : Rudra…..don’t worry…….everything will be alright……trust me…..
Rudra : I don’t think so bhaiya…..See….om has changed….[rudy releases himself from hug]and these drugs…..[he points out syringe , bottles and pills which were scattered @ the floor……]
Shivaay : That means….om….again……{shivaay and rudra stares each other’s eyes }
Scene 2 {@ Art Hub}
{A beautiful girl arrives art hub and stands near the entrance ……}
Security guard : Madam….pls…try 2 understand…..we can’t allow u to go inside…..
Girl : I have an appointment with omkara singh oberoi…..And pls try to understand…..its really very urgent for me 2 meet him…..
Security guard : If he was the old omkara sir…then certainly……u can meet him without any appointment…..And he will not say no to any one…..But now….he has changed…….He doesn’t allow any visitors here……
Girl : What u mean? ….I already fixed an appointment through and he asked me 2 come and meet him today itself…..And how can u say that he will not allow visitors…..
Security guard : Madam….pls….try 2 understand…..He will not allow any visitors ….right now…..Pls….U may leave now……
Girl : But….
{Mean while their conversation was interrupted as omkara arrives there and asks “What’s the prblm?”}
Security guard : Sir….this madam…..
Omkara : {waves his hand in a sign to stop and stares the girl….Both of them share an eyelock…..} Pls….come inside…….
{Omkara moves ahead and the girl follows him behind with a pretty smile……}
Scene shifts to gallery……
Girl : Ur paintings are really beautiful…….
Omkara : Thanks….these are nothing…..just some combination of colors….only…….And they doesn’t have any beauty @ all….
Girl : May be…..u will think these as mere colors….but I think these are ur inner feelings….I mean the shades of colors depicts ur presence of mind…..And when one art comes from heart….That will be really beautiful……
{Omkara is mesmerized with her words……The girl smiles and stares his eyes…..Both of them share an eyelock……’’Yeh dil sun raha hai tere dil ki zubaan’’ [khamoshi-film] plays}
Girl : {releasing herself from eyelock} Mm….Mr. Omkara Singh Oberoi……Am….Ishana…….
Omkara : {interrupts] Ishana!!! Oh!! So….it was u who asked me 2 arrive for the cultural meet ……Isn’t it ?
Ishana : Yes…..I really wish u should come and inaugurate this event,…..Its actually a dream project of my dance academy……
Omkara : I think….u have arrived in the wrong place……I really don’t have time for this…..
Ishana : Pls…..omkara……u see it’s a big event….And there will be certain artists who will expose their talent through this event and it’s a combination of various arts…like music, dance….
Omkara : {interrupts] Whetever…..it be….I will not come…….
Ishana : But why???
Omkara : I don’t think am not the right person….to inaugurate ur dream project…..Am burning myself in fire and my art has also started burning ……..It has lost its soul ….
Ishana : I don’t think so….In fact I really admire the way u makes paintings……I mean they will convey….a lot…..
Omkara : Pls…..U may leave now…..
Ishana : But…omkara…..
Omkara : Pls…..
Ishana : This is the card …..[she extends an invitation card …..2 him…omkara stares her in confusion] I mean….certainly u can find the date and venue of event….I hope u will…..
Omkara : Its over……{he throws the card and stares her in anger}
Ishana : I hope u will come…..Sorry for the trouble…..{ishana leaves the spot with wet eyes}
{Omkara stares her……and takes the card from floor and walks away}
PRECAP : LIFE ……IS THE VAST OCEAN…..U CAN’T SWIM WELL…..
So….guys…..what 2 say…..100000 times sorry for making short update….since am not getting much time guys……Well…here ishkara are different…..Hope u will accept the change……
12 Comments
Superb one loved the way Rudys care toward om and ishkaras conversation…
If possible post soon…
Thanks….and i have updated it….and it has been posted just now only……
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishkara-ff-passion-meets-compassion-part-2-renima/
It is really awesome dii …… I am eagerly waiting for the next update please post ASAP
Thanks nikki
Whatever you day in the precap are really true ..every time
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Thanks…next part….u will find swethlana…also….but don’t worry i will not make them unite…. u will see angry omie who will burst out on swethlana…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishkara-ff-passion-meets-compassion-part-2-renima/
Amazing update… loved it…
Thanks
nice update dear…..
loved rudy..
who is trying to handle om..
loved ishkara’s convo….
Thanks…and i have updated next two parts…..
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishkara-ff-passion-meets-compassion-part-2-renima/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ishkara-ff-passion-meets-compassion-part-3-renima/
pls go through them and tell ur views
Superb di…
But I am angry with u…..
U r now telling me when u have already posted three parts…..
Not fair….
I was busy with my tests that doesn’t mean that you will not tell me about ur new article…..
But still I loved this idea…..and look now just coz of u I am gonna to read all this in one day…….
And about my next part….
Then puvi di had uploaded that on my behalf…….
Coz it was not getting posted from my account……
See u di…
I’ll send the link to u….
Bye tc…
Ok…chatter box….it doesn’t matter @ all whether u read them in one day or in a glance…..just i want 2 know ur views only…..dear….and thanks 4 commenting……and pls send links as early as possible…..all the best 4 examz….bye……