Hey guys.. I tried my best to upload the next part soon, and I hope I want very late.. Very sorry couldn’t upload earlier coz I’m sick..
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As the devils were busy with their work of killing an innocent soul of all this they dint notice the presence of a person behind the tree recording everything coz of the only reason that the person had arrived late and couldn’t help the girl safeguard her dignity.
Time passed and as soon as the beasts left the person went running to the girl and covering her with the possible clothes made arrangements to take her to the hospital.. They weren’t late to the hospital yet the victim couldn’t survive the pain and was no more.. Of all this she made the person who was the witness of the ugly event to promise that she will help justice win.. Keeping up the promise made she immediately called the police and finally with shivering hands dialed a number which used to be the first in the favorites list and in the most frequently called list as well
Unable to find his love , Sanskar was in complete pain and the negative thoughts eating him from within for trying to punish his love for mistake she never did was troubling him more . Seeing his phone ringing, he answered the call without noticing the caller ID and on hearing the voice of the person in the other end, he asked a simple question where are you and cut the call..
Reaching the hospital, Sanskar was shocked to see his dear wife sitting idle in the chair wearing clothes completely bloodstained and of all with completely pained and teary eyes. Following him entered the police and seeing them along with Sanskar, Swara finally opened her mouth and told them the complete events she had seen along with the accurate location and also showed the video.. On being questioned about who the girl was Swara informed them that the girl had told that she was an orphan..
Completing the last rites of the young girl Swara and Sanskar set out to MM and all this while both of them hadn’t had a single word of conversation except for the narration I’m the hospital… Reaching home, Sanskar was completely astonished on learning the fact that everyone had to gone to bed except for uttara who was waiting for her bhabhi.. This was when Swara winced a lil in pain, catching the attraction of the brother and sister duo who noticed that Swara had hurt her arms and hands completely and blood was still dripping..
Seeing this Sanskar felt hurt and dragged Swara to the room while uttara went to bring dinner for both of them. Bandaging the wounds carefully so that his love doesn’t feel pain and blowing air continuously so that she doesn’t feel the burning sensation, Sanskar moved to fresh up after Swara was done, while uttara bought food for her dearest bhabhi and fed her the food along with scolding her for her carelessness and moving out just like that with teary eyes , seeing which Swara apologised and by then sanskar who was done with his work asked uttara to go bed and offered to feed Swara..
Sanskar kept staring into swara’s eyes and felt his own eyes turn teary, yet hiding his tears he fed his dear wife. After dinner Swara unable to bare sanskar’s penetrating eyes got up to move to the guest room when she felt a tug on her arm and saw her husband standing there with pleading expressions asking her to stay here for tonight.. Still in pain and unable to accept the fact that her Sanskar was finally talking to her, Swara nodded a no and moved to guest room and Sanskar who went following her saw her take her pila nd then lay on the bed blankly and in a few minutes close her eyes and sleep more or less unwillingly.
The night wasnt a peaceful one like before as Sanskar set out in thinking on how to make Swara to speak like before and also pour her pain so that she could live independently of the pills like before..
Thinking of all this Sanskar dozed off in the couch and got disturbed by the sun’s rays in the morning which were penetrating through the window..
After a few hours
All the Maheshwaris were enjoying their breakfast pampering Ragini except for uttara and Sanskar who were worried about Swara seeing her absence.. Completing their breakfast hurriedly they moved to the guest room followed by the other family members who felt something wrong and fishy.. Seeing this Ragini got a lil irritated and so moved to her room leaving the rest of the members to take care of Swara.. Sanskar seeing his wife still sleeping tried waking her up and being unsuccessful immediately rang the doctor asking her to come to MM..
Doctor came in a short notice and seeing her expressions while checking Swara all of their stomachs made a churn of the thought what might have happened to their dear dil whom they considered and called a daughter as well. The doctors expressions could be easily read and everyone could easily say that she was tensed.. Moving out of the room she came to the family members and told them that Swara was completely stressed and also the pills she was consuming being of very high dose were showing their side effects including more sleep than usual was one , informing that she had injected Swara and that she might get conscious only by afternoon to left to her clinic. Seeing their bubblly and caring daughter laying in the bed in complete pain and weakness they had tears in theirs eyes. Recalling their moments with Swara they moved to their rooms and to their works under the compulsion of Sanskar and uttara..
As stated by the doctor Swara gained conscious and after helping her to the washroom so that she could freshen up Sanskar moved to inform the other family members while uttara when to plate lunch for her.
Hours passed by with Swara finishing her lunch and involving herself in thoughts, as a matter of fact the old Swara who used to always stay with others who was once scared of loneliness was now sitting all alone in the couch of the guestroom wandering in her world of thoughts. On the other side, Sanskar was lost in thoughts trying to figure out a way to bring his Swara back into his room, life and the same world or rather out of her imaginary world alongside helping her overcome her addiction by sharing her pain..
Sanskar knew what he had to do but how should he do it was what he was trying to figure out while the other family members were enjoying their tea and uttara was also thinking how to help her bhabhi brush of her pain and move on in life.
What are uttara and Sanskar going to do?
Will they be successful??
Let’s wait and watch.
Guys, u may feel the rape incident to be completely unnecessary but it was just to show that India is termed to be a country unsafe for women..
In India, 90 women are raped on an average everyday that is one women undergoes the pain every 20 minutes.. Of all the incidents occurring only 1℅ of the incidents are reported of which 25℅ of the guilty are not convicted..
After knowing these facts, I felt, I need to share them with everyone around that’s the reason I included the rape sequence..
Guys, now I feel I’m lacking ideas so if any of you wanna see some particular scene or have any suggestions please drop them in the comment box and the next episode will be dedicated to all those whose suggestions I have used.
Hope, u like the episode.. Please do comment and continue supporting me.
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56 Comments
Awesome
Thanks..
Awesome update
Thank you..
to overcome addition of pills .its my pov sanskar should take swara to some other place so that she will be overcome her pain. sanskar has to be with swara no matter what will be the outcome.and should take proper care of her so that she will come out of her loneliness,.
coming to ragini she need to have miscarriage but the blame should not come on swara.i knw im sounding weild or umay be thinking im cursing ragini but im my opinion swara suffer more thus I want her to be happy that set.
I also want swasan to leave mm and leave separately and happily. with their kids.
Thank you dear. Will try and implement your suggestion..
Well I loved it and thanks for posting soon episode was just awesom and superbbbbbb post next soon and make that Rabi u suffer
Thank you dear. Will try to post asap. Also use your suggestion..
Truth be told this Maheshwaris should rotten in guilt….. How much I wish to kill this ragini’s baby and moreover I want swasanutt to go far away from this bl**dy f**king people…..
Thanks for the suggestion, will try and add to my story..
Akshara sis u rocked the epi…..and thanks for responding to my suggestion ☺
And I totally agree with u what u said in last paragraph.
Thank you sissy..
superb,please continue and somebody have to punish that family for always being selfish
Thanks dear.. Thanks for the suggestion..
Nyc. I loved it. Update soon nxt part
Thanks. Will try to post asap..
I wont suggest anything abt ragini, jst seperate swasan n uttara from the rest of the family plz plz
Thanks for the idea..
for your last paragraph, really i fell sorry..
i wish someday it wil change, no more afraid to speak, no more afraid to do justice.
and outstanding episode…
Thank you dear.. And yes u r right..
Awesome….?
Thanks. 🙂
Amazing!!
SwaSan should go far from this bl***y family for some days and Sanskar should help Swara overcome the pain by continuously talking 2 her & make her comfortable with him again as she used to be!
Thank you.. will try and add your suggestion..
Awesome….
Thanks..
Awesome dear… u r truly right.. . And abt suggestions u r doing a good job Akshara… but still I would like to share a few of my requests …. try to show a regretting sanskar more, and u may show uttara and sanskar annoyed with maheshwari family… and last but not the least give a little more time to seats to except everything back.. in short I’ll b waiting for little emotional stuffs
Thanks dear.. I will try my best to bring in emotional stuff. Thanks for the suggestion..
awesome loved it update next part soon
Thanks dear.. will try my best to post asap..
Nice and about ur last paragraph its true it will change and separate swasan uttara from them
Thank you.. Will try and implement your suggestion..
Wow loved it
Thank you..
Amazing episode ?
Thank you…
Wow awesome chapie….
Sanskar and uttara should raise their voice against their family to know the importance of swara… How much she has done for family but stil she has never complained… Make swasan and uttara mmoving out of mm and shifiting ti new place and family should suffer bearing their loss and cant find them .. In mean while sanskar can tske help from counselling centre to regain her bck from depression… Now sans and uttara are they only hope to bring bck swara
.. May b moving to hillstation msy find peace…
Coming to mm ppl they shud repent losing three gem of life and repent life long…
Ragini shit i hate her….plz dnt add muscariage alone bcz its biggest pain for womens u cn somethr thing like raglak separation but not with girl thing.. I hope u understand…
Coming to rape – ur correct i feel sad while thinking about it… Only males should think evry1 @as their sis mom..
Gvt shud give them unbearble punidhments rather giving them sentence to jail. I hate that judgement in nirbhaya”s case… If it wud have been gulf countries the punidhment would made indian mens too never imafe a girl like dat not even in dream…
Post nxt part soon..
Thanks a lot dear… Never expected such a huge comment. Thanks for your brilliant suggestions , I shall try and implement them in my story. Will try to post the next episode asap.
hi akashra love the episode I loved it in my opinion sanskar should make realize swara that she not alone and give her full support and love so that she can come out from her truma and please show some emotional moment of swasan please please post next part soon
Thanks dear.. Will try and use your ideas in the story as well. Will try and post asap.
Nyc
Thanks.
Just awesome dear
Thank you..
Amazing part Akshra… Those mm people dont deserve Swara. So let Swasan and Uttara left that house and live separately… And that Ragini, no words to say except selfish!!
Thanks dear will try and use your suggestion.
I agree with u all those people who play with women’s should be punished… n I wish that day comes soon…
coming to episode…. it was very nice…. n to overcome addiction…. sanskar should really take her away… away from all those people…just they both…. n then try to win her heart again…. he should also feel her pain which he gave her… n I think that this is the best way….
Thanks dear. Will try and use your suggestion .. Thanks for the idea.
Awesome..plz don’t unite them with their so called selfish family
Thank you.. Thanks for the suggestion as well
Superrrr.. Loved it…Swasan moments are awsm…Keep it up dear..Waiting for nxt…Your last note is correct.. Not only in India,Balki puri world mein girls rape ki victim hote hain… And their pain is undesirable… Sorry for the late comment..
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Thanks a lot dear.. Take care and keep smiling. 🙂
Thanks a lot dear.. Take care and keep smiling. 🙂 Thanks for supporting me..
Thanks a lot dear.. True, their pain is unbearable as well.. U too Take care.. cheers.
this part of the story was to awsum but feeling bad for swara…make swasan unite…and try to post fast…
Thanks dear. Will try and post by tonight. 🙂