The Survivors (raglak and swaron) intro

Hi. This is my first ff. Hope you all will like it.

Characters

Swayam:a teen of 16 years. Sports captain of his college. Role played by shantanu maheshwari.

Sharon: a teen of 16 years. A good athlete and dancer. Role played by vrushika mehta.

Lakshya : a soldiers by profession.Calm and logical. Has vast knowledge about weapons. Role played by namish tanega.
Ragini : a military nurse by profession. Logical and responsible. Has vast knowledge about medicinal plants.

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Thearatical trailer

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Swaron dance. Sond playing in background.
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Fire aroundLakshya and swayam. They are shouting names of ragini and sharon.
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Ragini is lying lifeless in Lakshya’s arms. He is crying seeing her.
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Swaron hug is shown.
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Sharon points gun towards swayam. Sound of gunshot is heard.
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Swayam in sharon’s arms
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Ragini nursing Lakshya’s wounds.
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Sharon hugs swayam whoose hands are covered in blood.
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People accusing lakshya and swayam of bringing bad luck resulting in death.
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Ragini instructing everyone to avoid touching each other.
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Darts raining on people from bergs.
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Lakshya is shown flying bergs
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So this is the intro of main characters and a trailer. Please coment and give your views.