Guys, check out the teaser I gave already…
This is my land… part 1
A boy is planting a small plant in the mud with his small palms. Then he waters that plant.
“My dear plant, I will save you always till you grow up. When you grow up, you can save us..!!”
He says to plant in cute little smile.
Then a another boy comes with a plough,
“Lucky, why did you plant this here? I will remove it..!!”
“Why sanky..??”
“I have to set up my mini experiment area here..!! Move..!!”
Says Sanky and tries to remove plant with plough.
“No bhai..!!” Says Lucky and pushes him. Sanky falls down.
Sanky removes dirt on his shirt and then both fights.
“How dare you to push me..??”
“How dare you to remove my plant..!!”
Both keeps fighting.
“Laksh..!! Sanskar…!!” Shouts Dp.
They both stands and clean dirt on their shirts.
“What’s going on..??” Dp questions seriously.
Laksh:: papa, bhai is removing the plant..!!
Sanskar:: papa, I took permission first from mom that here i will set up my experimental place.
Ap just comes. Then Dp goes near plant.
Sanlak looks on…
Dp draws a round around that plant.
Dp: sanskar, you shouldn’t enter beyond this circle. And laksh, your plant grows within this circle in few years.
Both nods their heads.
Ap:: so, both give shack hands now.
Little sanky and lucky looks at each other. They go away without giving hand shakes.
Ap Dp looks on..
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In other town, a small girl gets off from a car and she runs into green fields.
She raises her hands and inhales the fresh air deeply…
“I love you nature…!!!” She shouts.
“Ragu beta.. come let’s go..!!” Shouts shekar from car. Baby Ragini runs back to the car laughing.
She keeps looking at the green fields in smile..
“Maa, papa.. I will marry a boy who own these all fields..!!” She says childishly.
Shekar and shomi laughs.
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In a big mansion,
“Sir, if we dig all these lands, we can construct a huge factory here. And, the outlet water will be mixed in river beside.” A man says.
A middle aged man, “let’s start the work soon. Sahil beta, you will be the M.D of this factor after some years..!!”
A small boy who is sitting in a grand chair smirks.
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Then a digging vehicle arrives at the green fields… that vehicle raises it’s trunk to remove all fields.
The screen freezes at the green lands…….
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Hey there guys,
You all said… sanky would be nature lover and lucky is techno lover..!! But no…
In any case opposite attracts …. but only in the case of nature…. only nature lovers love nature lovers…
So…. now feedback time..!
43 Comments
Interesting
thank you
Awesome astra di
Loved the first part
Baby ragu was so cute
Waitinf for the next episode
And pls post samragini , storm of love soon
thank you dear…
Nice
thank you…
Wow dii it is really , only I read the teaser , story is really different and amazing
Today * only I read it
thank you dear.. i will try..
Dii please update your ff my married life , I’m eagerly w8ing for the next part
i will try 2 update dear..
Superb sis..interesting plot..!!!! Waiting for ur ready to breakup story.. Plss post it soon..!!!
thank you dear
very good
thank you
Nice I think first ever u give the triangle love story ? keep going
thank you dear.. haha.. yes…
Nice
thank you
awesome one dear
thank you dear
aswme dear plz continue i love nature 2 jst lik raglak loves nature…
thank you yar… i will try…
suprb
thank you
Nice keep going ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
thank you anu
Superb dear. Lovely concept. You never fail to impress us.My little raglak rocks. Waiting for the next part
haha.. thank you gayu…
awesome astu dear…..idea bank Whr u got thz type of ideas….loved it alot….Ohhh my cute baby ragu….love u dear…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…
thank you dear…
Superb
thank you
Interesting episode dear and loved it. Eagerly waiting for next episode
thank you ammu..
Astuuuu again u ???????????????????????????????… I can’t believe…. Now half tu is urs… Masha Allah… How ur doing this any tips for this poor writer… When I finished reading this ff I just rushed to see who is the write… I was surprised to see u there… Madam is bzy in writing new ff.. What about my ff… Do to asap OK… Keep rocking like this…. I don’t have words to appreciate u…. Keep writing… Ur a great writer…
Lots of love
Affa
hahah..thanks a lot dear.. hehe.. i have update it.. do check it…
does that mean, all will fight for one beautiful land and that fight will be interesting and worth watching, after all the winner will get ragini also (wink).
awesome update.
yes…!! u r right..!! it’s gonna be love war for land….
amazinggg
thank you
Awesome dear
fab and sorry for late comment xx