Thank you for reading my ff and commenting on it. This meant a lot to me.. So here I go with my next one…As some readers found kriti’s part confusing I’ll just give a elaborate explanation and continue the episode.Hope Im not boring you… Those readers who are clear with my story can start from the second para(I’ve highlighted the letter “T”)..
Kriti is sanskaar’s family friend and sanskaar considers her like his very own sister..both of them are not interested in getting married to each other even though their parents have finalized their engagement date…. But unexpectedly swara-sanskaar got married … that brought their engagement to a halt.. and Sakshi met with an accident lost her child…she knew the face of that person bcoz of whom she lost her Child but she wasn’t aware of his identity… and that was when she saw the family photo of swara and identified the person was shekhar.. She wanted revenge shekhar …but a direct revenge would just hurt him…The loss of her child had hurt her and still the bruises of that loss had been rupturing her heart…She wanted him to experience the same pain she’s been to…So she decided to hurt swara that would nearly kill shekhar.. as a parent can never see his/her child in pain….
She( sakshi) wanted to first separate sanskaar from her as he had been around swara all the time saving her unknowingly from sakshi’s plans…That’s when she remembered Kriti …she thought she could use kriti as a tool to separate them as she believed kriti would be in pain as her engagement with sanskaar was called off..and if she kindles kriti a little and stirs her heart and mind then she(kriti) would definitely venge swara for snatching her sanskaar..sakshi was unaware of the fact that kriti, sanskaar were uninterested in this marriage. And when kriti was approached by sakshi for backstabbing swara..she was shell-shocked but realized that it was all good That sakshi approached her ..bcoz by taking sakshi’s side she can get to know her plans/moves and save swara accordingly..but swara doesn’t know that kriti is saving her..So that’s the reason why kriti took sakshi’s side…and Moreover nowadays sakshi is not the same old affectionate sister she used to be.. her attitude , character has changed a lot…That was the reason why kriti decided to team up with sakshi ..as at first kriti thought she could convince explaining that swara is innocent and it’s not acceptable to venge swara for her father’s act..But when sakshi shared her plans of revenging swara.. she felt that she was not the same , kind sakshi..she has changed a lot..her mind has been filled with venom…
“The episode starts with Sanskaar leaving to college in his car..He drives the car lost in thoughts…he rewinds swara’s behavior, the way she spoke.. Why she was acting weird???? He hears a knock….and gets to conscience….he looks right…someone knocking the glass …Its ankit!! Ankit signals him to park the car..Sanskaar nods and steers the car forth…sanskaar stands searching ankit…
Ankit knew sanskaar’s marriage with swara & all the problems going on in sanky’s life…BcoZ sanky can never disclose anything to ankit..
Ankit: Im here !!
Sanskaar: Hi !buddy!!( with a drop in his josh)
Ankit: hey sans..any problem ? why is their a drop in your tone…???
Sanskaar: uhh…Swa..
Ankit: Sanky!! did you hear that??? Come on!!
Sanskaar: But ankit..hear this na..
Ankit: Bud!! We’ll discuss for sure…but now its show time!!
Sanskaar: Show??
He grabs sanky’s hand and takes him to auditorium.. They hear the crowd screaming and cheering loudly …”come on swara!!swara!!swara!!!”
Sanskaar: bud!! Am I hearing right???
Ankit: yeah…its Ur…uhhh..i mean u heard right..
Ankit doesn’t know anything about sakshi’s change…but he knew swara is innocent and is ready to play cupid for their love..He wants to save sanskaar’s relation with swara..but he knows sanky very well…he wont change his decision that easily on any matter …And moreover sakshi, his sister who means everything to him has asked to end his relation with swara…sanskaar has never gone against his sister’s word.. her word meant the world to him….ankit too considers sakshi’s word the same way sanskaar takes…but …this time..this issue..he felt sakshi’s decision is ..somewhat …wrong…he felt conflicted with her decision… For the first time he felt sakshi’s decision a bit selfish.. and has decided to himself to change sanskaar’s decision .. and save his relation with swara..for ,ankit knew sanskaar still loves swara…and just a push from his side will change sanky’s decision..
Sanskaar: buddy !! come lets go..
Ankit: but buddy where???
Sanskaar: uhhh..classes..we’ll attend classes today..
Ankit: Bud are you in your senses??? INTERNA is nearing ..so no classes For 1 week…principal has allotted this bco he is keen that our college must win this time..
Sanskaar: uhhh..Then we’ll go to canteen..
Ankit: sanky…are you having any feelings for her…???
Sanskaar stares at him..
Ankit: I need ur reply..not any gestures…
Sanskaar : no…..no feelings..nothing..
Ankit: Then cool bud..lets just watch all the performances..nd I’ve booked tickets for afternoon show…u r coming na??
Sanskaar: of course.. why are you planning to go with any girlfriend??
Ankit: oh!!! Shut up man..Im not having time for these stuffs..
The lights go off..nd music plays on….there …a silhouette…its swara..she is wearing a skinny legging…she starts her moves..Sunsaathiya song plays…a boy in the crowd exclaims swara is too hot and is s*xy..Sanskaar hears it and gets angry..
Ankit: bud..Why you seem angry..
Sanskaar: uhmm..no Im not angry..( he stares at swara angrily)
Suddenly a boy appears From the corner of the stage and dances with her..
Sanskaar: what the…hell is she doing..dancing with a guy??
Ankit: It’s a romantic song and I love their pair..They look cute together..(he speaks as if he didn’t hear sanskaar speaking)Bud !! Did you say anything??
Sanskaar: no..but really you like their pair..??yuck …she’s not fit to be anyone’s pair..(he is fuming inside..)
Ankit: but I don’t think so..see the guys here…how they envy the guy dancing with her..
The guy holds swara’s hand For a move…as of now sanskaar was relieved of the fact she was dancing without physical touch…but seeing this …he gets furious …Suddenly a guy in the crowd shouts “I LOVE YOU swara”…Sanskaar leaves the auditorium in rage..and ankit runs behind him.
Ankit: areyy sanky!! Why Did you leave in midway of the performance??
Sanskaar: did you see her?? She is really….uhh(he shouts)
He hits his hand and breaks the rear mirror of a bike..
Ankit: nice…..(in a low tone)Sanky.. What is wrong in this.. its common they touch each other in dance…
Sanskaar: Its wrong…
Ankit:..And moreover why do you care for her..let her hug , dance or even..
Sanskaar: ohh..shut up she is my wife and I Cant let her do this..(his voice is really loud )
Ankit: Huhhh…Sanky you are loud.. good that no one is around here..And if you really have guts and find her deed wrong then go and ask your so called wife…and demand explanation..I find nothing wrong in this…If you are that much concerned with her physical touch with that guy then you go and dance with her…Just leave me alone…Im irritated…
He leaves smiling…Sanskaar is furious and is rewinding the incidents @ auditorium..He reaches home and breaks the vase, glass in his room..He locks his room and holds his head …as if his head is gonna blast..
Sanskaar: let her come today…I’ll show her who Iam…
Sanky has been waiting for swara the whole day ..the clock struck 7…
Sanskaar: Its 7.And where has she gone??? Why is she not here till now
He hears the bike sound..
Sanskaar: aa gayi meri pyaari pathni… Ab aayega asli maza..
He gets a call so he goes to the balcony as the signal was weak.
Swara: Sanskaar…here is your dinner..
Sanskaar: what do you think about yourself in your mind??
Swara: just get to the point..Im tired..nd hungry…
Sanskaar: itni attitude???
Swara: yeah what’s your problem with my attitude?
Sanskaar: What was that today that you were doing in college???
Swara: I did many things @ college which Do you mean??
Sanskaar: swara!!
Swara: awaaz neeche sanskaar..mein tumhari wife …maid nahi..samjha??
Sanskaar: meri patni??? But your actions don’t reflect it ..
Swara: Whats your problem?
Sanskaar: your disgusting act @ auditorium today..remember?
Swara: dance is an art ..whats so disgusting abt it?
Sanskaar: dancing with a guy so closely..U r such..
Swara: mind your words..Mr.sanskaar maheshwari…
Sanskaar: mrs.sanskaar maheshwari..dont you think what u did today was wrong??
Swara: No..
Sanskaar: And that skinny pant..u know how boys were commenting..
Swara: It’s natural guys are like that..and when you dance..u cant heed it..and that is what girls wear for dancing comfortably..I don’t care about others commenting..
Sanskaar: Don’t try justifying yourself ..
Swara: waise..bhi..Just remember Im your wife only @ MM mansion and not @ College..so you have no rights to question me about the things I do @ college…its my wish..I’ll Do whatever I wish..
She leaves…while he is dumbstruck ..
Precap: Sanskaar follows swara and sees her with a ……….
Hope you like this episode ..Please leave your valuable comments…How was it??
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magizchi..rufina..Its one of the surprising comment..I didnt expect you will comment…Will try to improve my storyline.thanks..!!
Oh thalaivar dialogue..why u didn’t expect me to comment?? I will comment on all of ur upcoming epis