Hi. Thanks to all those who comented on intro. Here is the prologue
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A garden is shown. It is so beautiful that it seems a dreamland with its decorations. A girl in white gown is shown. Everyone in the party is shown gifting her. Her friend comes there with a gift
Frnd: Happy birthday sharon.
Sharon:Thanks Tina. How am i looking?
Tina: Very ugli. Just kidding. U r looking beautiful as usual.
Sharon:(giving a friendly punch) you will never change.
Tina:(smiling)Thank God you came to know. The idea of organising party in college’s garden is superb. Who gave you this idea
Sharon: My neighbour and this college’s sports captain Swayam.
Tina:my guess was half correct. I knew you cannot think of theese ideas but did not expected Swayam’s name.
Both are talking when Tina notices a bouquet of rosses. A note was written :on it
To An Angel On Her Birthday
Tina:who gave those.
Sharon: swayam. Nics choice na.
Tina :yes.
Suddenly other people came to party. Sharon excuses herself to greet them.
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A very soothing and pleasant music is being played. A boy comes to Sharon.
Boy : may i get an opportunity to dance with angel of day.
Sharon: you wish fulfilled Charlie.
Both start dancing. Others also join them.
At a corner a boy is sitting. He is wearing white shirt, black pants and blazer.
Boy:(in mind)Today is a special day for her. It is a special day for me also. She was sad when party could not be organised in her home due to construction. My idea brought a smile on her face. I am getting jealous seeing her dancing with Charlie.
He gets up and goes towards the dance floor.Charlie swirls Sharon. She is about to fall but lands in the boy’s arms.
Boy:will u dance with me?
Sharon:was waiting for this question since the party started.you are late Swayam. But still the answer is yes. I will dance with you
Swaron start dancing. Soon everyone except them stop and stand still to praise the dance. The pair arelost in their own world, unaware of surroundings.
The sound of claping gains swayam’s attention. He comes to reality. He never danced with her.it was a dream. He had not stirred at all. Charlie was dancing with her all the time. She had not even noticed him.
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A room is shown. A man of 35 is lying on bed injured. A lady is shown nursing his wounds.
Man: ouch it hurts ragini.
Ragini: I told you lakshya. This bullet’s is very deep. But you had to become brave by not getting it taken out.
Lakshya: i had to be brave ragini. I am head of our troop. How will i encourage others to risk their lives if I myself do not risk it?
Ragini:you might not be the head but i am the troop’s nurse. My suggestions are not like others. I know u wanna protect your country’s citizens and tjis is good. But don’t act foolishly just to be brave. I am a nurse in Military (putting focus on the phrase), so i know which bullet can be ignored which can not be.
Lakshya : if lecture is done then pls take the bullet out.
Ragini:as you wish.
She nurses the wound
Ragini: now rest for some hours. It will heal in that time.
She starts to move but he holds her hand. She looks back.
Lakshya: thanks.
He hugs her.
Lakshya:dont worry this war will not continue for long.
Ragini:I know
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Precap : a leap. Swaron and raglak in cottages.
Thanks for coments on intro.
Note : This is not wholly my creation. It is an adaptation on one of my favourite novels. So the story may seem smillar to some of you. I have made some changes.
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Thanks for ur coments. Will try to post soon.
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