Swaragini was a show that started off as my favourite but then it turned into something so bad that it lost the crux of the story. It was supposed to show the beautiful bond of two step sisters who brought their parents together, it was supposed to show their life story, their love and how they “together” face the hardships. But first they turned Ragini into a psycho who’s obsessive one sided love for Laksh messed up so much, then they turned Swara into a perfect good woman and Ragini into perfect evil woman and them standing against each other. I do not want to offend SwaSan fans but it is true that SwaSan got a perfect story from them, from start till the end but Raglak never got that.
Not only that, I was also disappointed that my favourites SwaLak and RagSan didn’t turn out to be the final couples. SwaLak were perfect for each other, Ragini wasn’t supposed to come between them and RagSan…they had such a wonderful start but that revenge game destroyed it all.
That’s why I am starting this FF. It’s gonna be a lot similar like the show but it will exactly what I wanted it to be. I really hope that the following prologue will gather good feedback that will encourage me to continue this story.
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Prologue
A 10 year old Swara sighed as she looked at her Dida fighting with their neighbour and as usual it was baseless, meaningless and only two words stand out “Bangalan” and “Marwaran”. She thought about her teacher who taught her that one shouldn’t judge the other on the basis of caste, religion and gender, weren’t the elders taught the same thing? Swara’s gaze fell over her sweet and shy classmate and neighbour Ragini, it was her Dadi with whom her Dida was fighting.
Ragini, even though a year younger than her was extremely intelligent that’s why they both were in same class. Swara waved towards her and Ragini responded back with a sweet yet hesitant smile. They never talked too much because the only time they are together is the school time, once back home their grandmothers forbade them to talk with each other.
Swara wrote something on a paper and passed that to Ragini without getting noticed. Ragini giggled as she read that note, “Help me with Maths!” It wasn’t a request. Ragini shook her head and gave Swara her maths notebook and again nobody noticed because they all were keenly watching the old grandmothers fight.
Swara gave Ragini a flying kiss and ran inside her home so that she could finish her homework fast. Ragini smiled at her retreating figure, even though they only got less time to interact but there was this deep connection that tied them both together. Believe it or not, Swara was Ragini’s best friend. And no matter what will happen they will be together like this forever.
33 Comments
Awesome?
It was very cutee ??
But are you making it swalak and ragsan
Am sorry but I love swasan and raglak.
Waiting for next . Take care??
U know what? U made my day happy with this ff. I need to say thank u because u have started my favorite serial. And about this prologue, it was so beautiful and cute. But only one request I want the pairs to be Raglak and Swasan. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. Stay healthy and be happy
intersting
awesome, update soon
Interesting dude…plz keep pairs as ur wish ,.love u loads
Superb… Plz continue…❤❤❤
I love RagSan & RagLak both.So looking forward to this ff 🙂
And yeah whatever u said is absolutely correct
excited i m there to support u to core and me to da same feeling. Dont feel bad for using da it can be used between two girls too
Waiting for nxt updates
awesome prologue dear….loved it alot….eagerly waiting for ur update…tkcr dear…
I am waiting I support your views it is damn true that we never got Ragini as much as she deserves.. Please post siin
Ragsan or raglak anything I am die hard Ragini fan
nyc….seems intrsting…..bt m diehard raglak fan….plz make it raglak…n plz do jstice with with raglak n ragu…actually m vry disappointd with serial’s original plot….raglak k sath kafi partiality ki gai h…so plz its a request make it raglak plz….waiting fr ur next update…again its awessome start…..
awesome swarag bond was really nice
but i am really sorry if i offend you but i really love raglak and swasan and i can never imagine ragsan or swalak
pls do make it a raglak and swasan ff
waiting for the next episode
Nice intro keep going
Yupsss dear,i doo agree .. RagLak get never importance the way they deserved..!!! As u talking bout Swaragini n their injustice towards RagLak… soooo
Now m desperately waiting how u going to give a nice n beautiful plot to RagLak..!!!
Do justice with the REAL couple RagLak….!! Continue soon..!! Thnk u.. ;-*
Same pinch. I also want it to be swalak and ragsan.
Yaa i also felt like this thanks for ragsan swalak dont change d pairs please keep it as ragsan please
Nicee plz make ragsan as pair.?????
plz im a die hrd fan of raglak so mak it raglak plz plz plz plz dear…
Awesome. Waiting for next part
We missed to see ragsan as couple on screen..plz make it as ragsan..im die hard fan of ragsan
A really amazing prologue !! No matter which couple you choose .. the story is going to be amazing !! Waiting for your next update !! Take care ! Keep smiling.!
Lots of love.❤
I agree with you completely! And I really like this idea of yours of re-writing Swaragini, thanks a lot for that.
I loved the prologue, it was cute and sweet. Nice.
Though I love SwaLak and RagSan like you but i would say that keep the pairs as you want.
Though I’m not a SR fan, I too agree with you about swaragini…..the prologue is sweet and cute…so the pairs are swalak and ragsan???? if possible make it swasan and raglak……
amazingggg yaar i would just love to read it and i m okk with both pairs loved ur story
i would like to read if it is swasan and raglak…
Whoever the pairs no problem. But u r going to give importance to ragini which she deserves, that’s all needed
Amazing and I agree with u,,glad that Ragsan will come true xx