Hi its moon here. I am new to telly pdates and swaragini was my favourite and I love to write stories on them. I love to make friends and I am new here, so will you all will be my friend. Its my first story so comment please
Past
A venue is shown for a part.press reporters are covering news for occasion and suddenly a car stopped and a handsome hunk came out of it.
Reporters: here comes the business tycoon who have achieved everything in such a young age but still is a mystery to us
Reporters: mr maheswari why you were hidden from business world and no one has ever seen you/
Without giving a damn to the question he went from there and went inside the party. Seeing him a man came and welcomed him
Man: welcome the youngest business tycone
Mr maheswari: thank you mr Mehta and the party arrangements are very well I must say ha(formal tone)
Mr Mehta: I’m glad you liked it enjoy the party
Mr maheswari:of course should we sign the deal
Mr Mehta: what so hurry, we can sign it later, you enjot the party
Mr maheswari: my work is my enjoyment, so should we proceed(forwarding hand)
A girl is shown who is talking to the photo of a boy due to which she is having tears
Girl;10yrs have passed where are you
present
Mr maheswari pov
Hi everyone you must ne wondering what is my name but you have to wait till then you give comments to author orr she will not tell you my story and who I am. My life taken a tragic turn. You have to wait for knowing ha. I was living happily but now..…
the whole story will be in my pov but now only i can give glimpse
Girl: who are you, I do not remember you?
Boy looked shocked
GUESS THE PAIR
45 Comments
Swasan pls
Hi moon I’m princess krisha we can be friends I think its raglak as they r my fav pair but only u know who r real pairs.post soon n may I know wat ur studying
Maybe laksh Ragini R sanskar Ragini nice intro keep going
Ragsan
suspence h….. not bad….. n the pair should be raglak….
ragsan plz
Wawww..!! Nice intro dear..!! Welcome to SR family..!! I would like to read if its SwaSan story.. !! Continue soon..!! Thnk u… 🙂
Ragsan is perfect for this ff as Sanky character suits for your fictional character
hope it’s swasan…
happy womem s day to all ff writer,silent writers and tellyby workers. Be proud to be women because we r unquie in god s creation.
Swasan pllsssss
Swasan plsssssssss
ragsan or raglak plzzzzzz
Fabulous plot
Plz raglak only
Ragsan
Interesting dr……….
I guess the pair is SWASAN plzzzzzzzzz
And wlcm to tu
Post next part soon
Swasan
Swasan or Swalak plzzzzz
Swasan please please please please.
ragsan or swasan……
Hey dear…. I’m mahima… Lets be friends!!!!
N pls make it ragsan… I’m their die hard fan pls!!!!!
All the best!!
Are they swasan?
plzzz make it raglak………
Awesome Intro….
I guess the pair is Ragsan,
But I loved Raglak alot….
So Plzzz Raglak…..
Of course,I will be your friend but I am not registered yet*pout face..About storyline, it’s interesting dear.. Plz continue.. Welcome to the TU as a writer??..
Take care
Keep smiling?
Hope its SwaSan I really like the prologue
Raglak pls
Raglak plz
Nice….plss pair should be raglak
Ragsan