Thanks for your response, slowly you all wil get the answer of every questions. Kindly wait???
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With passing days swasan becoming more close to each other. While kabir started to like piya whereas Piya always used to try telling truth but always used to back out thinking his rejection. Whereas Aniket suspicious activities increased which creates doubt in swasan mind. They thought to ask more about him to piya.
One fine day,
Kabir is sleeping, but his sleep disturbed by a phone call.. He saw the caller name and become shocked and quickly pick the call..
On call????
Kabir : hello piya, any work in morning you call me
Piya: yaa, I want to tell you something
Kabir : yeah, tell me
Piya : no on phone, can we meet each other then I tell you
Kabir: okay, in green world park at 6pm
Piya : okay
Same day, 6 pm, green world park
In park children were playing games, some ladies are talking …. In the centre of park, kaiya is sitting on bench..
Kabir: so piya, tell me what you want …
Piya(hestistant): vo… vo…
kabir (interpret); what vo vo, say na clearly.
Piya (close her eyes): I want to tell you but suddenly her phone ring ,she pick phone without listening caller she said “I m busy right now, after sometime you can call me, and she cut call.”
Kabir looked toward her and ask her to continue.
Piya (close eyes for 1 sec): I want tell you, after marriage I want continue my job..
Kabir: I don’t have any problem if you continue ur job or not but you can even tell me on phone about this..
Piya: vo I want to tell you other things also….
Kabir: okay, but first eat something then tell me because I am very hungry…
Piya nodded in yes, then both left for some restaurant..
Other side,
Swara is tensely walking here and there.
Swara(herself): sir, vo I want to leave for 15 days.. No no Swara if you told sir like this then surely he didn’t grant you.. think better something better umm..
She continues talking herself and two pair of eyes continuing seeing her…
Person: swara, whom you are talking because I can’t see anyone and don’t tell me you are talking with ghost.. omg I knew it something is weird but you can talk ghost I didn’t knew.
He act to run from there.
Swara throw pillow on him and says “here I am tensed and you started making fun of me , she again throw another pillow”
He catch it and went near her.
Person: arre what are you doing?? (Swara sit on bed), acha tell me your problem I will try to solve it (Swara rise her elbow and see him) Arre why you seeing me like I am alien..
Swara: you solve my problem but how..
Person: because I am great sanskar Maheswari who can do anything (in funny tone)
Swara: acha, then plz solve my problem Mr. Great
Sanskar: first tell me??
Swara: vo I want leave from my office but already this month I took many leaves..
Sanskar: and why you want leave??
Swara: for bhai marriage, I want everything is perfect and this should be for memorable for bhai
Sanskar: okay, let me think …
Both started thinking, after 15 min
Sanskar Shouted idea.. Swara “tell me fast”
Sanskar: go and tell truth why you want leave…
Swara(throw pillow): if this is easy then why I think another way..
Sanskar making funny faces and say “if you don’t like my plan then you can tell me simply, what’s need to throw pillow”
Swara : vo na Mr great SM I love to throw pillows on you
Sanskar: ohh is it?
Swara :yeah, now don’t waste my time let me think.
He nodded in yes and muttered “ stupid girl but still I love her”.
She sees towards him and ask did you said something.
Sanskar : did you heard something?
She nodded in no.
Sanskar :then I not said anything, let’s continue our work.
Both sat on bed and started thinking..
After sometimes,
Sanskar shouted idea, She sees towards him.
Sanskar : no , this is not good idea.
Swara : Arre, first tell me your idea
Sanskar :are you sure ? I mean if you’ll not like it then you’ll not again throw pillow na me na it hurt lot
He said dramatically placing his hand near heart, she dangerously sees him.
Sanskar ; huhh, telling.
Swara : better
Sanskar :I thought, you should invite your boss for lunch and tell him reason here only. This way he will not able to deny. If he’ll deny na then me and kabir can broke his legs but what if he’ll come to with giant bodyguards then.
He started to imagine himself like bodyguards are beating him.
He about to shout but before it something happened which make him more shocked. His mouth left open and become freeze at his own place.
She was tightly hugging him.
Swara : you’re really superb , I love you.
She was still saying many things but his world was freeze at three words “ I love you lot thanks for giving idea.”
He about to warp arm and about to confess his feelings but she broke hug and started to look down.
She slowly muttered “ sorry ,I didn’t mean that I just said in flow.”
It hurt him but he compose himself and looked at her.
Sanskar : it’s okay, leave about it you call your boss and invite him here.
Swara :okay, and thanks sanskar.
Sanskar :Thanks for what?
Swara : for your great idea.
Sanskar ;no need to say thanks.
Kaiya side,
Both are sitting in car, kabir drive car and both are silent, piya not understand how she will tell him about her feeling, kabir break silence and say “piya we reached your House”
Piya(came in sense): ohh haa, thanks for dropping me..
Kabir: okay and started car..
Piya: kabir, came inside house
Kabir: no, another day I will came, I have some imp work, hope you understand
Piya: (fake smile) okay but another day you will sure came..
Kabir nodded in yes, and left , piya also left for her room
After sometimes, Piya room
She is lying on bed, thinking about kabir, holding teddy bear..
Piya started dancing with teddy, and thinking teddy as a kabir and say “you know kabir, when I saw you first time in my college, I started loving you and when your sis came here for our marriage I was on cloud 9”
she kiss teddy, and fall asleep smilingly.
Kabir house
Sanbir sitting on sofa and discussing some office work, and suddenly Swara came and hug kabir.. Both sanbir shocked because in night she rarely come there..
Kabir: shona, what happened and this time you came , if something important work then you should call me I could come..
Swara break hug and say “bhai sir is ready for lunch, he is coming tomorrow”
Kabir (confused): sir but why?
Sanskar understand and say her “congratulation , then what you prepare tomorrow in lunch”
Swara slapping lightly her head and say “I didn’t think about this”
Kabir: first tell me why your boss will came in lunch
Swasan tell him everything..
Kabir: okay but you have to invite your boss have here.
Swara: no bhai, boss is came my house, why you take tension I’ll manage na.
Kabir: because of me you take leaving then you have to take him here only. Now no arguments.
Swara: sanskar you make him understand bhai na ….
sanskar interrupt….
Sanskar: some wise man said don’t interrupted between two people.
Kabir giggle while she angrily stump his feet.
Kabir: Don’t give dammn to this idiot but you have to come here only now no more discussion. Me going to sleep, you also go and take rest.
Swara: bad people
She left from there, both also left for their respective room.
Sanskar’s room
He was about to change into night suit, suddenly he remembered about swara hugging him and saying I love you.
He smiled little and take his mobile and started to see her pics. That he had taken on kabir birthday.
Sanskar: when I able to confess and will you accept it or not?
Imagining of denial only run shiver down his spine, his eyes become teary. He teary eyes sees her pics and says.
“ pls I don’t wanna loose you. If you’ll deny I don’t even imagine what I’ll do then”
He slept in same position with tears marks on face and holding mobile in hand.
Next day,
Swara is very tensed and moving here and there, kabir see this and say “swara why you taking tension, everything is prefect”
Swara(tensed): boss will like this na
Sanskar was seeing everything from his room.
Sanskar ( to himself) : looking like he is coming to see her for marriage. Uff this girl.
Kabir: haa shona
Suddenly Swara phone, she see caller name and became more tensed.. Kabir notice it..
Kabir: shona, what happened, pick up the call…
Kabir went from there as he also get call.
Swara pick call and run towards door And open it..
Sanskar: ( to himself) really only for lunch na, beta you should also ready or else your boss will fire you.
Swara: sorry sir, hello(tensed)
Boss: ( in stern voice) hello
Swara welcome him and offered some snacks, tea, she see her boss with tensed face..
Sanbir both come there, first they see towards swara and ask everything okay na.
She nodded in yes, both moved and stood before her boss who is looking at mobile. He slowly lift head and both become shocked and sees towards each other whereas her boss smirk and forward his hand.
Both were not in condition of reacting anything, they just looking straight at him. Swara seeing them, she went near them and shake them. Seeing her they unwillingly shake hand.
Swara: sir, they are most important person in my life. He is my Bhai ( pointed towards kabir) and he is sanskar my best friend.
He nodded in yes and take sip.
Boss: pls sit
Both angrily sees him, sanskar about to hold his punch him but kabir held his hand and signal towards swara. He closed his fist and went from there.
Swara confusingly sees him going,she ask what happened him, he signal nothing just little work he’ll comeback. She nodded okay and sit there.
In between kabir and her boss seeing each other. Both are challenging each other through eyes.
Boss: well must say your sister is too innocent unlike both of you.
Swara confusingly sees towards him.
Boss: I mean Mr sanskar and Mr kabir look little experienced and she is still learning things as much I know her. But must say she is quick learner.
Kabir remember something as close his eyes.
Sanskar came their and says.
Sanskar: well I agree with you.
He sat beside kabir..
Swara: sanskar you know him.
Sanskar: very much..
Before he could complete, her boss move from there as he got call.
Boss: yes Aniket speak
Scene end at smirking face of swara’s boss face and angry face of sanbir.
To be continued…
Today also no precap, you all think why sanbir become shocked and what is connection between them her boss and Aniket.
Next part depends upon my mood and your cmnts too…..
Any suggestions for Piya and Aniket role, who will look good.
25 Comments
Awesome
ooooooooooo newwww twistttsssss wahhhhh.. awesomeee anniii posttt little soon :D….my bfss are waiting 🙂 😉
Yipeee I got to know who is her boss ?
And for piya role asha negi is best according to me
Super duper part anni???????
Post nxt soon ???
Nyc
Nice
Anni its amazing…. Loved it…. I think the one who offered/rejected job for sanakar in the starting is swara’s boss…. And for aniket and piya role well it can be arjit and mrinal….
Awsm.. Update soon next part
i dunno anniyaaa.. really i dunno why sanbir Shocked!!!!
huh! this Sanskar, only Swara’s 3 magical words made him shivering already…
if only he knows my 3 magical words, he surely will fainting.. muahahhaha
Awsm!!! Amazing!!!
Swara boss is who offered job and sanskar rejeced…
Sukurti (pyar ki ye ek kahani) its perfect role for piya I thinks so, and param (gulal) for ankiet rolee
Update soon diii…
Nice..tc..
Awsm …
Nice….
Next part update soon
Amazing
Nice I think the boss will be who offers job to sanskar starting update soon
Nice Dr… Can u plzz give me link of all parts, actually first time I read ….
Nice…
Awsm…
Awesome…
Awesome dear
awesome
Awesome anniya…. Continue soon
Amazing Anni…..!!!…I just Loved it……..!!!!!Nxt one soon…….!!!
Awesome..update next part soon.
Awesone ?? post nxt part soon..
Loved it