Hey Guys I am Ishita back. Few days ago I did a blunder. And everyone scolded me. So I gave a punishment to myself. So I AM SORRY. Please forgive me and If i do this mistake again then also forgive me.
This os is dedicated to –
ARU DII
SHRINJU
NANDU DII
ISHANVI
ADI
MAANU
Hani
ISHIKA
SO lets start—
“Sona…..Sona” called a tired voice from one corner. Swara was not able to hear it as there was some celebration going in house.
“Sona….cut the cake now” said a cheerful voice. “Ok sanky” replied swara.
She came near the cake. “Sona wish something” said sanky. “Ok” replied swara.
“What was the wish?”
“umm.. you know it?”saying this swara gets a bit emotional but composes herself.
“Sona…..Sona” again that tired voice called when she blew the candles. This time she was able to hear it .
She was shocked hearing it. She looked towards Sanky in astonishment. She searches the whole room and at a corner finds a man. She gazes him in astonishment.
“sona I completed my promise…see I am back on your birthday” saying this he faints.
Swara runs to him and calls out sanky.
“Sanky….Sanky he came back..he fulfilled his promise…sanky he came back”
She cried and was happy. Sanky took him up and made him sleep on bed and called doctor.
“Doctor what happened to him?? Why he fainted??” asked sanky while swara was weeping and caressing his face.
“See he is tired….not only physically but emotionally too….try to make him happy…he will be fine soon” Replied the doctor
“thank you doctor” said sanky
“Mr. Sanskaar Come out I have to speak something to you”
Sanky and Doctor go out of room.
“Yes doctor what you wanted to say??” asked sanky
“He bare a lot where he was?? What happened to him??”
“doctor he is a RAW agent and returned home after 6 months.I am only one who know this. Swara thinks he is a soldier. Swara is his friend . Please doctor don’t tell this to anybody. He was called one day for a week but after that he did not return. We also cannot do anything as it would be dangerous. He returned today”- replied Sanky in a sad voice
“Try to give him as much happiness as you can” asked the doctor
The doctor went and he remembers the things happened 6 month ago.
6 MONTHS AGO
Swara was feeling uncomfortable. Suddenly phone rang. Swara took the call.
“Its your call” said swara to the same man sitting on the chair.
He takes the call and discusses something. After the call ended he said “sona I need to go for a week it an emergency”
“What!! But you came 2 days ago please don’t go” requested swara
“No I need to go” saying this he went in his room and packed his bags. He took a file and kept in his suitcase. He wore his uniform and called sanky.
“Hey sanky I need to talk to you come to that place now its imp”
“what happened all of a sudden??” asked sanky
“You just come” saying this he hanged the call.
He came down and there swara was waiting for him. Swara gave him his medals and asked him to wear it once.
She also gave him his name plate. “Laksh Maheshwari” she said in a loud voice and tried to show him that she was proud on him
“Sona I will fully try to come This is Laksh maheshwari’s Promise.
She moved her delicate fingers across his medals clad chest as she bade him goodbye.
Unsure if he would see her again, he planted a kiss on her forehead and turned abruptly towards the door.
He went to meet sanky from there. Sanky was already standing there.
“Sanky” called Laksh
“Lucky don’t tell me that you are going on another mission” in a angered tone
“Sanky I am……I am going on a mission and this time I am not sure if I would return or not so (he takes out a file and hands it to Sanky) this file has one imp letter and pages. If I didn’t come back after 2 weeks hand it over to swara and ask her to read it”
“What is it?” asked sanky.
“ The biggest truth of sona’s life and some advice” replied Lucky.
Lucky proceeds but Sanky holded him and hugged him tightly.
“would wait for you” said sanky
“Dont” replied Lucky
AFTER 2 WEEKS—
Sanky comes home with the file that Lucky gave him. As he did not return he went to gave it to Swara.
But as soon as he entered the house he saw swara Lying on floor. She was fainted.
He kept the file and ran towards swara. He patted her cheeks and tried to wake up. He lifted her and took to her room and made her lie on the bed. He called doctor.
Doctor asked him to take her care she fainted because of stress she cried so much.
Sanky caressed her face and as soon as she got up she got up he took her care made her drink soup. After all this he asked her why she cried.
She started weeping. “Lucky didn’t come Lucky didn’t come” and started crying miserably.
Sanky consoled her.
He took care of her like this only. She got attracted towards sanky. But she did not forget Lucky. She used to cry whole night and sanky used to scold him every morning for crying.
One night swara was thinking about Sanky instead of Lucky.
“Do I love Sanky??” asked swara to herself instead
“YES!!!” said her inner voice.
She was very much delighted.
Next Morning Sanky came and Swara hugged him and thanked him.
“thanks Sanky for taking care of mine”
“No need of it sona” replied sanky.
Same night swara confessed her Love and Sanskaar too admitted that He was in love with her.
After two days was her birthday. She was missing Lucky badly but some how she managed to smile.
HER BIRTHDAY i.e. PRESENT TIME
She was sitting in the room beside Lucky and caressing his face.
Sanky remembered that he forgot to give her the file. He went to find the file and found it. He came to her and gave her file and asked to read it.
“Read this file swara”
“Keep it here I will read it after some time” replied swara
Sanky was not able to say a word further and kept the file there. He went out of the room to another room.
“why am I doing so?? Why am I not happy?? Am I jealous of Lucky?? Am I insecure ??” asked sanky to himself.
Suddenly Swara called him and told that Lucky got up. He brushed the thoughts and went to meet Lucky.
In the room
Lucky copped swara’s face.
“Sona how are you You know how much I missed you??”
“I also missed you”—Replied swara
“Sanky” saying this lucky tried to get up but felt pain. Sanky went to him and hugged him. He got tears in his eyes.
“Wait I will bring something for you to eat”-said swara and went from room
Only Lucky and Sanky were in the room.
“you gave that file to her??” asked Lucky
“Yes but she didn’t read it yet” replied sanky
“Ok I will tell the truth to her after some time” said Lucky
Swara came with soup and asked Lucky to drink it.
He drank and said “lets go outside” said lucky
“I am a bit busy” said sanky
“I will come” said swara and sanky was a bit shocked
Sanky coughed and went from the room to drink water.
“Sona go and see him” said Lucky
“Okay” said Swara
She followed him to kitchen.
“I am sorry”- said swara
“Why”- asked sanky
“I cant give him more pain I cant do it I am soory” replied swara
“Do you mean??”
“Yes” –swara said
Sanky went from the house. Swara came to Lucky and they both went out.
Swara was not happy but she pretended to be happy.
Night
She remembered about the file and opened it. She found letter and read it.
She was shocked and happy both at same time. She went straight to sleep,excited for tomorrow.
Next day, she woke up, gave breakfast to Lucky and told him everything and directly to Sanky’s office.
@ Sanky’s office
IN his cabin
“Sanky…Sanky” called swara.
“What happened Swara? Any problem?” asked sanky.
Swara was shocked to hear swara instead of Sona.
“What did you say?”
“I asked that if there is any problem swara”
“No..no problem Sanskaar” said and went crying from his cabin.
She came home and went to her room and cried miserably.
After some time there was a knock at door.
“Sona..Sona…come out..someone came to meet you”
“Coming Lucky”
She went out and saw a girl standing.
“Who are you” asked Swara
“Sona..she is ragini….ragini…our sanky’s sis..remember?”
She remembers sanky saying about her sister.
“But she”
“she did not she is also a RAW agent” replied Lucky
After sometime—
They 3 were talking and gossiping. Swara decides to go to his office again.
“I will go and call sanky” said swara
“call him naa” asked Lucky
“No he often keeps his phone on silent” replied swara
“Ok come back soon” said Lucky
She goes to his cabin again.
“Sanskaar..I just came here to give you this..read this letter”
“keep it I will read when I feel Like reading it” said sanky
She kept it and went teary eyes.
She came home and directly went to her room and cried.
Here sanky read the letter-
Hey Sona I know you must be thinking where I am and crying a lot. OK so wipe your tears first…..done?……….Good………..So I want to tell you really Imp thing about you…..a seceret that I hid from you….and that is……I am your brother…..Yes the brother you thought was dead…I was taken by the govt….after our parents death….For these years…I was taking care of you secretly……And yes I am not a Soldier……..I am RAW agent so……….so it can be possible that I may not return……..so I wrote this letter……and yes a small advice….never leave Sanky…I trust him…He will look after you…never leave him…I hope you understand what I said??
Your Brother
Lucky..
Reading letter Sanky was shocked. He directly went to house.
There lucky and ragini were talking.
“Sanky hii how are you?” asked lucky
“Fine” replied sanky
Ragini got up and hugged sanky.
“Excuse me?” said sanky
“Sanky she is Ragini…your sister”
“she died”
“Nope she was also a RAW angent I met her during my mission”
Sanky saw her and hugged immediately.
Suddenly he remembered about swara.
He went to swara’s room and opened the door
“Swara..I mean Sona..Sona”
“what happened Sanskaar” Asked swara in angered tone
“NO its Sanky for u” replied sanky
“hmmm..”
“I am SORRY”
“hmm…”
“say something naa”
“Hmmm…”
“SORRY na yrr please”
“OK”
“ok you will not listen to me na..I have brought something for you “
“Hmm…”
He takes out a ring
“Will you marry me??”
Swara was overjoyed
“YESSSSSS!!!!!!!!” she said and hugged sanky
“So lets go down” said sanky
“Yes lets go” replied swara
While climbing down from stairs They see RagLak hugging.
“Another story is going to be started” said sanky.
Swara kisses him on his cheek and sanky gets happy.
The end
SPECIAL THANKS TO: Saru dii, who helped me with the ending
How was it?
I am sorry if you didn’t like it and if you thought it was bakvas
Byee
81 Comments
Ishu I was angry …but I didnt expect you will surprise us wit a os!!! it was sooperb!!!!love u ishu dr…
Dii.. Why were u angry??
And what happened??
Ishu said she will leave tu.. So I was angry.. But actually I can’t b angry and all.. ?
kasu nai thaiyu shani rakh hu badu kau tane
Hahahaha..?? dii.. She said she will leave tu and you believed her!!
Dont you know she is addicted to us
Saru tu to mari vaat na maanis hu seriously activity area chod vaani hati huh
Taari aatli himmat thai gai ke tu mane chhodi ne jati rahe..
Hu tane maari nakhish..
Thank you sooooooooooo much dii
Abhi punishment hai puri karni padagi
Aur ye maine khud ko di hai
Thank you soooo much
nice
Thank you soooooooo much
Took good am I first to comment ???
Awwww I was. Not first btw romantic baccha it was good
Thank you sooooooooooo much
P.S.- mai romantic baccha nai hu
Nope koi nai better luck next time
Nyc
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Awesome
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It’s awesome Di..
Thank you sooooooooooo much dear
Amazing.. Loved it.. Keep writing like this dear..
Take care
Keep smiling?
Thank youuuuuuu so much dear….
Ishuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Arey pagli maaf kar diya hai sabne tujhe..
But ye one shot?????
Haye!! Hani khush hui?
Bohot sahi jaanemann?
Aise hi likhti reh??
Thank yousooooooooooo much hani
Haa ha pata hai par kya karu punishment to puri karni padti hai naa
Agar hani khus nai hoti to vo hanikarak ban jaati mere sehat ke liye ????
Thank you sooooooooo much
Ahem ahem
?
Hanikarak for sehat??
Very very bad.
Punishment poori ho gayi now be happy?
And iss thanku ke liye main tujhe maaf nahi karungi?
00ps ye vala nai Vo shrinjal ki happy bday vala vo vala ????
Awsm os ??
Thank you soooooooo much dear
Good one?
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Nice☺
Thank you soooooooooo much dear
ishita! i love it! it was awesome! come bck with another os soon!
Thank you soooooo much dear would come back with another os after exams i.e. 8 april as they are 10th board exams
ur welcome! but board exam of 10th?? i guess boards will start from this year na for 10th? do uh mean home board exam? waise all the best for exam!
last year when i was in 10th our teachers also fooled us saying that uh have to give board exam! but that was not board our teacher only made the question paper!
Yess I am in 10th but board exams for 10th are since ages I am in CBSE so it must be something like that. We have to go to another school and then give exam. Its board exam.
Leave it
Again thank you for your wishes
Love you!!
i know wh is board exam! dear! i m also in CBSE board! but i just share my expeience with uh!
anyways do best in ur exam!
I am so sorry I didnt meant I am a bit nervous that why I am sorry dii I am sorry Please forgive me sorry!!
are its okkk! i m not angry! why r uh nervous?
Over excitement!!!!!!!!! I keep laughing due to it and also nervousness!!!! And also keep speaking things that i shouldnt and i dont even realize it
uh r crazy god!! exam k liye exicited! waise i can understand kyu ki mein bhi asi hu! tension,nervousness nd excitement trio at one time! haha
Mai saach me hu pagal sab loga aisa hi bolte hai phale pagal aur fir exam time pe scholar dumag kharab kr dete hai ?????
nice..
Thank you soooooooo much
Ishu dii.. Is that Maanu me??
Sorry I didnt read it till now.. I will surely comment after reading it..
Huh!! Stupid me!!
I shouldnt have wasted time writing that above comment??
This os is damn amazing..
I juz loved it..
Btw how your exams going??
Ohho!! So you were thinking to leave us!!?
Tari atli himmat thai gai ke tu mane chhodine javani hati!!
Jaa havve hun tari jode vaat nai karvani..
Nai karvani..
Nai aj karvani..
Katti..?
Thank yos soooooooooooooooooooooo much dearr
My exams they are not going ??????
!st paper was hindi on 10th and now second is of science on 22nd ????
Naiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Arre sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
AA thaiyu atla maate j to hu aa os lakyo
Sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
bt hu su karu yrr hu bau sad hati yrr
Av naa karis yrrr pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Pleaseeeeeeeee avu naa karis I am sorry please
AAvu naa kari yrrr hu gandi thai jais please I AM SORRY!!!!!!!!!! yrr evu naa karis
Umm…. Nope its Myna………you are Manu
Heheheehehe ?????? good job
Its okay..
Pan toye hu tamari jode vaat nai karvani.. -_-
Ishu awesome one yaar..good sorry gift to them..keep writing n keep smiling???
Thank you soooooooo much dear
P.S.- for you shivika os is on the way
U say to all Na no thanks between frnds..today u yourself broke..I think I am not your frnd issliye mujse thank u bolrahi hu..I am totally angry on u????
Arre par yaha to bolna hi padta hai naa phir?? nai tu hi bata kyu bolu nai bata kya bolu yaha to kuch bhi ho bolna padta hai naa. aur kya bol sakti hu mai tuje?? nai tu hi bat
Here we all have to say thanks???? what to say if not thanks??? nai you only say what to say???from where here friends talk came huh??
Yeah u r bit right but once I went through this situation without knowing I said thanks to her n I got a lot..so thought to say it to u n make u like me..sorry I wrote it..ha when I wrote that comment I did not think for a second..but now thinking what to comment for 5 minutes…but u r correct..ishu I will say one thing seriously I don’t know what to reply..but pls forgive yaar..sorry..I wrote in some mood..maaf kartho
Now why are you saying sorry!!!!!!!! Its ok i m not at all angry on you………..i also know this……….I am not accepting this sorry
Love you
Take care
Byee??????
wow dear…done more magic……☺
fabulous…fantastic….☺☺☺
btw i didnt remember that i helped you….
it was all ur idea dear…..
keep writing☺
keep smiling 🙂
take care…☺
love you loads….☺
Thank you sooooooooooooo Much saru diii
bas bas meri itni bhi tareef mat karo
Ab mai itni bhi kuch khas nahi
Kya dii app bhi
I thought that my idea was crap
You told it was good that why I wrote it
Thank you sooooooooo much dii
Love you
Take care byee
Wow loved it
Thank you sooooooo much dear
loved it.. do good… great work ..
i mean too good…
Hehe that fine no need to worry
It must be auto correct ????
not worrying dear.. but sometimes the reader feels strange.. just to bring u to comfort level.. stay blessed dear
I dont feel strange as I know what does that Auto correct does I feel like who made it I should kill him/her….
Hehe let it be i think you know what i meant
ofcourse i understand… ??
Thank you soooooooo much dearrrrr
It’s amazing OS…waiting for KaiRa OS my expectations r big now
Thank you soooooooooooo much……..you will get it tomorrow…ohh I hope you like my os and i write up to your expectations
It’s awesome..loved it..
Thank you soooooo much
M happy that you liked it
Love you
It was very sweet ?
Take care dear ??
Thank you soooooooooo much dear
take care love you ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??
Awesome Ishi !! Loved it.!! For the first time i have read your work..! It’s superb dear..!!,Do continue with new stories..!!, i would love to read them.!! Thnk u.. ;-*
Thank you soooooooooooooo much dii
But I first want a promise that you wont forget me PROMISE???
Thank you soo much
happy that you liked it
Love you
Take care
Byee?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??
Agar tujhse naraz hone par os milega tu jaa main naraz hoon(just kidding)
Waah emotional os!!!!!!!!
Bahut acha hai
Take care
Thank youuuuuuuu so much
Nai abhi directly exam ke baad milna ho to milegaa
abhi time nai hai samji
Thank you soooooooooo much
Love youu
Take care
Byee?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ???? ?? ?? ?? ?? ?? ??
Mere paas bhi time nahi hai padhne ka
Examsssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!
All the best
Same tooooooooooooo you dearrr
All the best
Give your best !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!