Hello guys!!!! This is mira with an os for kriyyam!! I really hope you all will enjoy it!!!! It’s called “main tumhe hamesha pyaar karonga”
Scene starts saiyyam is seen sleeping in his bedroom. His messy hair is blowing due to wind making his face seem cuter. Krishna comes rushing into the room with a plate full of colors. She sees saiyyam still sleeping and says hmm so abhi tak soraha hai (he is still sleeping)
Krishna thinks of something naughty and goes to saiyyam and faces him. She smiles seeing his cute way of sleeping and think oh bhagwan ji saiyyam kitna cute lag raha hai ( oh god ji saiyyam is looking so cute)
She bends down on her knees and goes closer to his ears and whispers “saiyyam” he makes a cute baby face and says hmm. Krishna pouts that he didn’t open his eyes. She slowly touches his face startling him and he wakes up. He opens his big brown eyes wide and says tum!? What the hell krishna? What was that for? Why are you touching my face!? Krishna giggles and says to wake you up.
He says krishna never do that again! She smiles and nods obediently. Saiyyam then lowers his tone and says “waise tum itni subah subah mujhe kyun jagane aayi?” (By the way why did you come here so early morning to wake me up?)
She looks at him naughtily and slowly brings up the Holi colors plate and says for this. He looks slowly at the direction she’s pointing to but then opens his eyes wider and jumps off the bed. He says shockingly and funnily “k..k..krishna tu…tum…he…tumhe pata hai na ki mu..mujh…mujhe colors nahi pasand” (Krishna you know na that I don’t like colors)
She laughs and says sorry saiyyam par aaj main tumhe colors laga ke hi rahogi. (Sorry saiyyam but today I will for sure put colors on you) he sarcastically laughs and says “hehe theek hai main bhi dekhta hoon ki tum colors kaise laga thi ho mujhe pe” (laughs and says fine even I’ll see how you put colors on me)
He runs into the bathroom and says challenge begins. Krishna thinks I’ll for sure put colors on you saiyyam. She walks out while saiyyam inside thinks what do I do now? He gets scared and funny music plays. After sometime saiyyam comes out and walks into the wall where suhani and krishna are seen putting flowers all around the house.
Suhani leaves towards the kitchen to get something while krishna noticed suhani missing and thinks I’ll just finish that side for her. She looks around and grabs a stool to stand on. She doesn’t realize that one of the stool leg is loose and can break anytime. She stands on it and the stool starts to wobble. She puts the flowers on and is holding the flower basket in one hand and putting it on with another. Saiyyam sees her stool wobbling and thinks what to do? He looks around and sees no one.
He looks back at krishna and her stool starts wobbling more. Her foot slips and the stool leg breaks. She screams ahh but Saiyyam rushes to her and before she hits the ground saiyyam catches her in his arms. The flower basket in krishna’s hand falls up and all the flowers fall on them. The song dil me chuppa lunga plays in BG
Tere saamne aa jaane se…yeh dil mera dhadka hai…yeh galti nahi hai teri…kasur nazar ka hai…jis baat ka tujhko darr hai…woh karke dikha dunga…aise na mujhe tum dekho…seene se laga lunga…tumko main chura lunga tumse…dil mein chuppa lunga…
They break their eye lock and saiyyam lovingly puts krishna down on the floor. She laughs and says saiyyam why are you looking at me like this? He looks at her and says krishna you are so stupid! Did you not see the stool wobbling?? What if you fell? She laughs and says but I didn’t. I know you will always be there to save me. Saiyyam is shocked hearing her. He thinks no krishna I can never give you the love every girl dreams of. Krishna thinks I love you saiyyam but I won’t say until you confess first because I know that deep down you care for me and you love me but I don’t know why you are scared to say. Saiyyam thinks I’m scared krishna because I don’t want to lose you and I fear if you will leave me. She smiles and leaves from there.
After sometime suhani comes in the hall and sees saiyyam. She says beta come here please. Saiyyam nods and goes to suhani while krishna hides behind the pillar hearing the mom-son talking. Suhani says beta I have to go to the market to get some colors so can you please watch the decorations until I return? Saiyyam is about to say yes but stops thinking about all the happenings outside and thinks if I let mom go alone then maybe those cheap guys who trap girls and give them bhaang food to make them lose sense and take advantage of them will do something to mom. Saiyyam says maa uh you don’t worry I’ll go get it. Suhani says are you sure? He says yes ma. Krishna thinks I’ll go with saiyyam. She says saiyyam can I come too? He immediately says no coldly which hurts krishna but then saiyyam says I mean you stay and care for mom. I’ll be back. He leaves thinking krishna and suhani are home safe.
Saiyyam leaves in his car and reaches the market. He sees a rickshaw following him for quite sometime and thinks who is that person? He speeds and reaches the market. After sometime the rickshaw also halts and a girl gets down. She’s revealed to be krishna. She is laughing and says saiyyam I won’t ever leave you alone and I followed you to help you. She pays auto driver and follows saiyyam. He feels someone is following him and turns to see but no one is there. Krishna is seen hiding behind a tree. He starts walking again and sees krishna through the mirror. He stops and quickly turns. Krishna’s eyes pop open and saiyyam angrily but worriedly rushes to her. He says krishna! I said don’t come then why did you come? She cutely pouts and says because I want to help. Saiyyam can’t help but be attracted to her cuteness. He says fine. But stay close to me. She nods happily. She holds saiyyam’s hand and he sees that and inside feels so happy.
He looks around and sees many cheap guys staring. He looks disgusted and walks faster. Krishna drops her earring on the floor and lets go of saiyyam’s hand. Saiyyam is ahead of krishna while she’s behind. The crowd gets more. Saiyyam realizes his hand feels light. He looks and doesn’t see her hand. He stops and worriedly says krishna? Where did she go? On the other side krishna is looking for her earring but can’t find it. Suddenly an hand touches her shoulder and she thinks it’s saiyyam. Without looking she says saiyyam it’s good you came. Can you please help me find my earring? I can’t find it. The man says of course baby doll I’ll help you. Krishna realizes the voice is of someone else and gets scared. She slowly looks up and sees three man surrounding her.
She gets up scared and says who are you people? The man 1 says arrey baby doll come na I’ll help you. The other man says yes pretty lady we’ll help you. She says saiyyam! Saiyyam please come and help me!! The man 3 shuts her mouth and they three pick her up and take her to a deserted place. On the other side saiyyam gets so worried. He shouts krishna! Krishna! He runs the way krishna was left and looks around but sees no one. Suddenly he sees something shiny and looks down. He is shocked.
Krishna is taken by the three people and the man 1 holds her against the tree. She screams and cries please leave me. The man 2 takes her hands and ties it behind the tree. The man 3 comes closer and touches her waist. She shouts please leave me. Saiyyam finds the earring on the ground and thinks this is krishna’s. He thinks where is she. Suddenly he sees her bangles broken on the floor. His eyes turn red in rage. He follows the broken bangle pieces. Other side the man 1 comes and touches her face and says wah baby doll your face is so soft. The man 3 comes and rips her shoulder piece slightly and touches her there. She shouts please leave me. She screams saiyyam!! He hears her voice and thinks it means I’m close. He runs and what he sees gets him so mad. His hands turn into fists and he runs to the mans. He pushes all of them and beats them. He shouts how dare you! How dare you touch MY KRISHNA!!!? SHE IS ONLY MINE!!! They all run away. Saiyyam sees krishna in the worse condition. Her shoulder piece ripped. A part of her waist piece ripped. His anger is no where near calming down. His eyes are teary seeing his krishna in that condition. He runs and unties her. Krishna is silent. She is saying nothing. He hugs her and says krishna please forgive me. I should’ve hold on to you tighter. Krishna I’m so sorry. He realizes krishna is saying nothing. He is stunned and breaks the hug. He sees she is scared and traumatized by all that happened. He touches her face to make her look at him but as soon as he touches her krishna recalls the man touching her cheek and gets away scared. She says leave me. Saiyyam please save me saiyyam. Saiyyam is shocked seeing krishna in this condition. She puts her face in her knees and cries. Saiyyam rushes to her and holds her shoulder and says krishna I am saiyyam. Look. She slowly looks up and sees saiyyam is actually there. She hugs him tight and says saiyyam. He cries and is hurt seeing krishna. He hugs her back tighter and says krishna don’t worry I am here. He picks her up in bridal style and takes her home.
They get home and all are shocked seeing krishna’s clothes ripped and saiyyam’s hand bleeding. Suhani rushes to them and says saiyyam what happened?? Why is Krishna like this and why are you hurt? He narrates all to suhani and krishna buries her face in his chest crying. Suhani hugs yuvraaj and saiyyam says mom me and krishna won’t be part of Holi. I want to be with her. Suhani says of course beta you go with krishna and take care of her. Saiyyam says mom can you all leave the house for a few hours so I can handle krishna. Suhani and yuvraaj say of course we’ll go out where everyone is playing Holi. Saiyyam thanks them and carries krishna to their room.
He puts krishna down and gently strokes her face. Krishna looks at him with teary eyes and says saiyyam. He says shhh krishna not another word. I am really sorry krishna. All this is because of me. He cries and remembers the morning events and recalls how happy krishna was. She was laughing and all bubbly but now she’s the silent and depressed krishna. Krishna is very scared. She gets up and suddenly hugs saiyyam tight encircling her arms around his neck. He holds her from her waist and pulls her closer. Their bodies are touching. Krishna cries and says saiyyam if you weren’t there then I don’t know what would have happened? He says no krishna I am always there with you. I will never leave you krishna. She hugs him burying her face in his neck. Suddenly she recalls the man touching her and immediately breaks apart from saiyyam standing up. She cries and says no saiyyam what happened today has left a spot on my body. Those mans touched me in places you won’t even imagine.
Saiyyam is so hurt hearing her. She says those man ruined my respect that no guy will look at me with those same respect a man has for a girl. She looks around desperately and finds a knife. She says I am nothing but a characterless girl now and is about to cut her wrist when saiyyam comes and stops her right away. He says krishna! What are you thinking? And how can you decide to give up your life. She says then what else do I do saiyyam? No one will love me. No one will look at me as a ordinary girl. She says no one will like me. He pulls her closer and Saiyyam shouts I will! I will always love you krishna!! I have always loved you!!! Main tumhe hamesha pyaar karoonga. He goes near her and says I love you krishna. He kisses her face all over making her believe that he is always with her. Her tears flow down continuously and saiyyam stops her tears with his lips. He kisses one eye and then the other. He kisses her forehead and then her nose. He kisses her cheek then other cheek. He looks at her asking for permission and she closes her eyes giving him permission. He slowly moves near her lips and kisses her lips. She reciprocates and encircles his neck with her arms. Saiyyam breaks the kiss and holds her face and says I am always with you krishna.
I love you! Krishna is happy hearing him and she also says saiyyam I love you too! She kisses his lips and they continue. Krishna breaks away and says saiyyam make me all yours. He kisses her cheek and picks her up bridal style. He moves near the bed and places her down. He gets on her and kisses her lips. He moves down and removes the dupatta from her neck and kisses her neck. She holds saiyyam tighter. The plate of Holi colors is paced next to the bed on the table and saiyyam reaches for the colors and says krishna happy Holi. He applies the colors on her cheeks and she smiles. She says now my turn. He stops her hands and puts them against the bed and tells her let me apply the color on myself. Krishna pouts and says saiyyam a wife is supposed to apply color to her husband. He says so? When did I say I’m putting colors on my cheek. I said I’ll apply it myself not that I’m doing it. She looks confused and says what do you mean? He says I’ll show you. He moves his face near her cheek and rubs his cheek with hers and does the same with the other cheek.
She smiles and then she turns him and kisses his neck removing his shirt. He is now shirtless. He turns her where krishna is under him and krishna hugs saiyyam. He moves his hand behind her and opens her dori. He removes her clothes and kisses her shoulders. She turns over and he kisses her back moving his hands on her waist. He goes to her side and kisses her waist. She enjoys his touch. She turns over and saiyyam buries his face in her neck and she covers them with a blanket and their intimate moment continues. After sometimes saiyyam is seen sleeping with krishna’s face on his chest and he is holding her from the back. Both are very close and krishna kisses saiyyam’s cheeks and says I love you in his ears and falls back on his chest and both are in deep sleep.
Screen freezes on kriyyam becoming one and their confession.
So guys tell me your thoughts on the os? Thank you so much guys and I hope you remember me from my other stories I’ve written on kriyyam!!!??
26 Comments
Woow… Superb yaar. I loved it… Y don’t u start writing a ff… It’s really toooo good yaar.. U r an amazing writer..keep writing.. ???
Thanks!!
It’s hid but I think u have copied some scenes from other ff which was posted in India forums because that was posted many days before and this one is same lyk that only with little differences
Yeah, I think so too…the plot is the same….
Sorry guys but I have written this episode about a month ago but I posted it today. I haven’t copied anyone’s plot. Sorry if that hurt you di:)
I wrote this about a month ago.
nice one…did you write any ff? if yes ..which one… I don’t remember..do tell and keep writing ??
Yeah I wrote mohabbat ki dastan and true love on kriyyam but they were ss and ts
Nice i agree with shaani
Thanks
Superb!!!! yaar I loved it… mira plz keep writing such cute & romantic OS,ffs…happy holi…
Thanks di!!
I read a similar OS on India forums too..Jst dat d end was different..Anyways it was nice..
Thanks and no di I have written this episode an month ago. I am just posting it.
Awesome os dear ?????
Thanks!!
Hey this was a really really sweet ff but im so sorey to bring this up but it was really really really really similar to my one shot. Like some parts were almost even identical, is there a reason for this? Not trying to point any fingers or anything, just genuinely confused.
Thanks but I’m sorry to say I don’t read kriyyam fan fictions anymore. So I have no idea why our ideas are so similar. Coming to writing this part. I wrote this about a month ago but wanted to post it near Holi time. I got my ideas from different tv serials so I have no idea why we have similar stories because I stopped reading kriyyam fan fictions around February. I write fan fictions but don’t read them. Sorry to have the same idea as you but I honestly don’t know which story or stories you have written.
Okay, thats fine. Im really sorry if I’ve offened you, that was never what i meant to do. I was geniunely so confused how our ideas could be so alike. If you look under my posts segment of my profile on tu and read the one shot mein tumhe pyaar karoonga, chaiye kuch bhi ho (see even the titles are so similar! ?) you will see what i mean. In mine also krishna admires Sayyam sleeping and then proceeds to wake him up to apply colour,Suhani says the the same line to sayyam and he stops her too. Sayyam also tells krishna coldly to stay back. In mine also krishna follows him to the market and he spots her when turning around twice and then yells at her but then softens when she says i just wanted to help. In mine also he says to keep close and she holds his hand and then he hurries past when he sees men around. She is also taken away by a man. And a lot for following that is also insanely similar. But im sorry for even hinting that i think you could do such a thing, the similarities were just so strong. But i perfectly understand it could be just a crazy coincidence, sorry. If you could, please check my story out and get back to me. Sorry for what if you were hurt by what i first said, it just felt a little bad when i first read it. Anyway, it must be all down to the saying… ‘great minds think alike.’ I guess ?
Mira yew always makes me sooooo happy?epic story?
Thanks so much!!
Wow nice
Thanks!!
This is ff seems alike one ff on India forum but I like yours better ❤️❤️
Thank you so much!! This really means a lot!!
Superb