Hi guys….sorry for being late i actually had exams and it just got over today…so I hope you all like this story…I got very few comments last time but it’s fine I won’t stop uploading…and ya I am really sorry to all swasan fans there will be not lovestory here…I am really sorry…I wanted to include swasan also in this…but it will be basically on raglak…. Swara is doing a role of police officer but in the movie the police officer is a man…and then there is a priest role…I hope you can guess it..please no rotten eggs I am obstraining from meat…throw rotten tomatoes I have no problem…
AND I PROMISE ALL SWASAN FANS THAT I WILL SUERLY GIVE A ROMANTIC SWASAN TS..AND THIS TIME NO BETRAYAL ALSO AND I WON’T MAKE UMA CRY THIS TIME…
so please bare this story with me…read only if you want to cause I am warning I can’t make a police officer and priest fall in love..and I don’t have any other important character for sanky so should I just change him and make it Someone else….please say i won’t add him in this episode please give suggestion for some other character if you don’t
The story starts with…
Ragini and Laksh comes to Kerala….they enter a house..it looked pretty old…he had his job transfer here..
Raglak settled down there…laksh goes out to buy things..
Ragini walks around the house…it was very old fashioned..ragini thought to change the entire interiors…she is an interior designer..soon she settles in her room.. laksh comes back and calls ragini a lot of times but she dosemt answer..laksh goes to the room and finds her listning to music…. as soon as he comes she removed the ear phone and goes to him…
Ragini-laksh don’t you think this is a bit too old fashioned
Laksh-yes so…
Ragini-I wanna change the interiors and make it beautiful…I wanna keep many ancient items..you know i right I have a craze in them..
Laksh-haan baba. .I know..for now leave all this… everything is new here don’t you think we should do something old which we used to do..
Ragini innocently-what..
Laksh-will show you now..
They laugh and soon they connsumate..
Next day…
Laksh was called to office
He was sitting in a conference hall..
A guy was giving him presentation…
Guy-we are handling the entire Waste project ogmf Kerala..no one has ever dared to take thisjob as this job lies the saftey of entire India..
The waste which we taking care contain the deadly mix of human waste and nuclear waste and toxic waste… if you know the combination of these waste is enough to kill the entire India.
.soon the screen changes..
They are walking in a big industrial area..
There were many people fighting sitting outside the industry..
(Guys in Kerala people are so stupid that when we try to change something into good..they think we are spoiling their place and then soon they start doing fights against those people )
Guy-they are still fighting against us and they are starving there..they don’t understand we are helping them..
Laksh laughs..
Guy takes him to a big office kind off place..
There are many locks..
Guy-inside this room contains the access to all the properties of the waste… only one person has the access tp this…the first lock is a pin lock…
Laksh is seen pressing the pinnumber.
Guy-next one is a thumb recognition.
Laksh is seen puting his thumb in the machine..
Guy-next one is the face recognition
Laksh is seen standing in front of the machine..
Gupy- next one is voice recognition…
Laksh-Mr laksh Maheshwari..
The door opens..
Guy-now is the ID card scanner…
Lakdh puts his Id card…
They go inside..
Guy-in shot the safety of the entire India lies in your hand Mr.laksh maheshwari..
Laksh smiles…
They go back..
Laksh on his way back here a phone from a father…
Laksh-yes father…
Father-how is the house laksh is it ok..you don’t know how much I asked thi we people to give the house..
Laksh- I know father. Ragini is All set to change the entire setting off the house…she has aldready went to the antique collectio store to buy stuff…I just hope she dosemt change the house to a antique store…
Both laughs..
The screen shifts..
Ragini is seen walking around the antique store… she looks arounfmd for a lot of things..
Guys this is the same place where the murder took place….
The owner shows all the antique collection…
She rejects all…atlast he shows her the box..
She gets a lot attracted to it… she says to pack it to him..
{Guys another thing I don’t understand Is how does a person correctly go and choose the box witch I haunted…I felt to laugh during this scene in the movie}
Ragin bought the box home and kept it in her dressing table…she goes to take a bath and comes back..
she then looks at this box…she keeps on looking at it…slowly she open some of its lock..
She soon hears some sound I the room but ignored it…she slowly opens all the lock and opens the box…
PATTAKKA..
nothing happened guys chill…
She looks at it and finds many small boxes in it… she found a perfume in one box…she smelled it…in another box she found a cloth which contained some hair..she touched it..
She then saw..that there was a small mirror there..it seemed like a small door..she opned it…and found a doll with a lot of needles..she removed one and looked at it lovingly…
{{{{{Like why}}}}}
She then saw a small home which was closed with a covering…she slowly went towards it and opened it…. some light comes from there..it goes straight into her head…
She feels pain and cried…slowly her face changes into evil and her eyeballs are not seen..
She smiles wickedly. …
Precap-hmmm according to your response and please tell should I add swasan or not..
Guys I can’t show partiality between swasan and raglak..my last ts was on Swasan so this will be on raglak….my next one will be pakka on swasan…and i will complete my previous one also… if you don’t want sanskaar I am not bringing Swara also… cause the police character is a man in the movie please give you response..what do you want..
19 Comments
Awesome
Swasan I want swasan
I will add swasan but am you see sanky as a priest
Really awesome
Nice
Dear pls dnt make fun on d behavior of Kerala people… Everyone hv derown way 2 react…so…plss…I’m a keralite nd I felt it bad…so plsss….
Even i am a keralite…I i know people well…why would I make fun of something that’s mine…I don’t have to make fun if Kerala I was just pointing out the people’s behaviour there…you could cab said that if I was not a keralite…thanks for reading..
Gud yaa always in movies ppl choose exactly the house or anything that is haunted I also used to laugh in those scenes
awesome and interesting, update soon
Interesting
It’s awesome dear…Ezra is one of my favourite movie and I’m very happy dat u made a story of raglak from Ezra…love u dear…please post the next part soon???
awesome episode
loved it
Hi…. as your title, swasan-raglak, maybe you can bring swasan also, but it’s up to you to manage.. will surely waiting your ff on swasan..huh! but fast 😀
by the way, all the best for exam…..paper test waiting….
Amazing update
awesome dear…
Interesting episode
Awesome
What?? Yeh ff raglak pe hain????? Oh noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.!!!!!I can’t tolerate them??…. Tumne pehle kyu nehi bataiye ??…You again made me cry???…NOT FAIR.. MUMMYYY???…I HATE YOU*RUBBING MY NOSE…
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. But I can’t stop to read your story,it’s so good… Okkiiiiiiiii*taking a deep breath… I will read it bcz it’s a good story and you wrote it…SO FOR YOU I WILL READ IT*POUT FACE…..Keep going.. Waiting for nxt..
Take care
Keep smiling?
Thanks a lot Uma. …your reading this for me..but you know i love swasan and raglak equally..I can’t show partiality between them for any reason…I am sorry..if you don’t like it don’t read its ohk. .I know you are a swasan fan?