Hey guys, I am back with shot 4……
But this time while writing this I am very very upset literally guys only 8 comments not fair…
Tell me if u don’t like it, are u guys finding it boring…I won’t continue soon.
And thank you so much those who comment and specially adeeba di luv u so much and #Cp thank you
You two are the reason of smile which is on my face ryt now…luv u guys…
Ittefaq se hum mile,
Ittefaq se aap hume pasand aaye,
Ittefaq se hum dost bane,
Humari dosti ab ittefaq nahi,
Zindagi ki khoobsurat hakikat hai.
These lines are really true..u know on 11 march 2016 I found this website and such a new lovely frnds…..
Guys do u remember my 1st piece of writing…that time I am not a registered member so m providing u all a link..
link for pre shots….
Shot 1
Shot 2
Shot 3
here we begins with shot 4…….
At night
Twinkle pov
Oh ghosh! What is this tw. Why aren’t u sleeping. What the hell is this ye kunj sir bhoot ki tarah mere piche pade hai kya..yaar sone bhi nhi de rhe aankhen band karu toh unka chehra saamne aarha hai … aaaaaaaaaaaaaah tw urgh calm down… u will get sleep ha u will definitely get sleep u shoul listen some soothing song..ya u r ryt of c u are always twinki..lets play a song…
She takes out her phone and play the song mile ho tum of neha kakkar…
Listening this she slept
On the other side at kunj’s house
Kunj’s pov
Oh ghosh! What feeling is this? Why am getting attracted towards her..
O she is so beautiful. Damn her simplicity… yaar she is dman cute, innocent and what not……….. and what not it means I am in love with her….oh my god love at first sight..
Ye I am in love with her…
Next day morning…
Tw dressed herself up in white shirt tucked in black jeans and wore a beautiful double heart pendant and went to her college… there are so many test today in college..
College…
Tw is walking in corridor wearing her headphone listening music and moving her finger and head on the rhythm of the song.. from other side our dashing, hot and handsome hero saw his lady love and murmurs she is full jhalli… today she is having so many tests and see her she is like least bothered. Huh? Kuch nhi ho sakta..
1st physics class..TEST..
Test goes smoothly..
2nd microbiology..test
Our Pr. Kunj Sarna came. He was at his best looks today with the white shirt coupled with light blue denims. Twinkle was sitting in the class and is now praying that test should be easy. Seeing her, our professor chuckled. Kunj came near to her seat, whisper don’t disturb god and placed a question paper and a answer sheet on her table and moved ahead. She thought how did he came to know that she prayed to her babaji. She kept all the thoughts aside and started reading the question paper and she was so happy that she knew all the answers from question number 1 to question number 10.
She started writing her paper and completed it in half n hour. She stood up from her seat and kept the answer sheet on kunj’s desk and left the classroom…
After 15 minutes… kunj collects everyone paper and left to his cabin…
First he find twinkle’s paper and checked it and got impressed as she pass the test with good marks…
Afternoon….
Tw is in her hostel and getting ready for her classes
Its 3:45 p.m.
She tried to start her scooty then she remembered that petrol is finished..so she has to go by walk only…
She reached late and murmurs aaj toh gyi tu tw he will gonna scold and will give a lecture to be on time pr tw isme teri kya galti teri scooty ka petrol khatam hua usme tune thodi na kuch kia hai kunj will not say anything aur waise bhi he is toh my friend nah hah he will not scold me..
And our kunj was was seeing her from his balcony as he was waiting for her only.
Then she rang the bell. A servant came and open the door and said kunj baba ne aapko seedha unke room mein jaane k liye kaha hai..
T= thank you uncle and thinks lagta hai aaj iska mood thik nahi hai so twinkle aaj koi gadbad nhi karni got it..
Twinkle went to his room and knock the door
K= ya come in
T= thank you
K= btw why r u late? He asked in a stern voice trying to suppress his laugh
T= voh kunj meri scooty ka petrol khatam ho gya so mujhe by walk hi aana pada aur isi wajah se main late ho gyi isme meri koi bhi galti nhi hai…sorry I wont repeat this mistake again pucca promise…(tw speaks all this non-stop)
K= u should be sorry and ha call me sir teaching time no fun got it..
T= hmm (in mind hey bhagwan kal toh bada hi sweet bn rha tha jaise honey ho aur ab dekho is khadoos ko pura ka pura karva karela(bitter gourd) huh.. sadu kahin ka sadu sarna…)she was lost in her own world so she didn’t listen what kunj has said.
So kunj shakes her by her shoulder…
T= aaaaah earthquake bachao mujhe….
K= o nautanki ki dukan shut up yahan koi earthquake nhi hai aur ye to kahaan khoyi hui hain panda nhi hai.
T= first of all mr. kunj sir I am not nautanki ki dukan I have my own name u can call me twinkle or miss okay..
K= achha leave it according to me we r here to study microbiology as u have competition next month.
T= hmm
Like this kunj taught her and now its time to departure…
T= thank you and bbye
K= come I will drop u to ur home
T= nhi sir I will manage myself u don’t need to take tension..
K= no its okay aur haan call me kunj…
Twinkle gets boggled…
K= leave it come
T= okay
They sat in kunj’s car and twinkle tells him the address of her hostel referring as her home…
They reached twinkles hostel
K= so u live here in hostel
T= nhi its just nothing u can leave now bbye
K= arrey aise koi apne friend ko treat karta hai kya pehli baar mai tumhe chodne aaya hoon aur andar nhi bulaogi..
T= nhi nhi come….
Kunj and twinkle went to twinkle’s room..
In room…..
K= nyc room
T= thank you
K= achha tell me na why do u stay in hostel I mean kal tak toh tum taneja mansion mein rehti thi..tw tells him all about yesterday’s incident.
Kunj felt bad for her and got silent..tw thought to cheer up his mood so she asked
T= kunj vaise tum kabhi kehta ho ki call me sir kabhi call me by my name what is this?
K= voh during studies call me sir..because m damn serious about studies aur vaise call me kunj..
T=okay
Like this 1 month passed and twinkle won the competition and she also started to love kunj and kunj fall In love more n more with twinkle..
One day kunj call tw to an isolated place and confess his love and she also accept his proposal later they share passionate liplock..
After few days kunj told this about their relationship to his mom and she happily accepted her and later they got married.
On their wedding night..
Kunj and twinkle slept cuddling each other in eo’s embrace..
Precap: twinj romance ….n romance….
A/N: guys please do comment and adeeba di I hope it is quite long…
Jab se aapko jana hai,
Jab se aap sa dost paya hai,
Har dua me aap ka naam aaya hai,
Dil karata hai punchu us rab se ke,
Kya itna pyara dost sirf mere liye banaya hai?
Luv u guys…
Bbye
Take care
Keep smiling
With loads of love
Ariya
49 Comments
Heyy sweetheart…
It was soo lovely..i really liked it..
Nd plzz dear dont b sad coz of less comments abhi sab ki exams hai na soo..after exams all will surely comment q ki itni beautiful writer ki writings pe koi kaise comment nahi kar sakta…nd look meri chemistry ki board ki exam hai nd me comment kar rahi…just for u…soo dnt feel bad….okay…
Love u dear nd keep smiling….❤❤❤❤
thankyou so much fatima di
and all the very very best for ur board exams…
luv u too
Hey ariya….
Hw r u…
Dont get dissapointed due to low comments …. Ok
Ur shyaris took my heart ❤ yaar…
The epi was just awesome yaar ????…. Just loved it…..from the core of my heart ❤ to the moon …..
I enjoyed it very much……
Love u… ??????
Byeee..
Take care….
Nd again dont get dissapointed with low comments.. Ok
Keep smiling…. ☺☺☺☺☺
Urs….
Presha di!
thankyou so much fatima di
and all the very very best for ur board exams…
luv u too..
ur younger sis…
ariya..<3
Hey I m presha nd thank u for wishing for my exams….
Hugs and love to you ????? AMAZING and a bit Fast episode??but I luved itt……And yaa comments are less cuz many readers have Boards and boards are just??…….Please do not end itt?…..And I am excited for next partt ???
Post next soon ??
Hugs and love to you ????? AMAZING and a bit Fast episode??but I luved itt……And yaa comments are less cuz many readers have Boards and boards are just??…….Please do not end itt?…..And I am excited for next partt ???
Post next soon ??
hugs and love to u too…. tq so much….
all the very best for ur exams…
i have to end it as it is 5 shots but dont worry there is a surprise for u all waiting in shot 5
Boards nahi hai mere but agle Saal honge?
It was so cute you just nailed it….
thankyou anshika..<3
Hey Ariya (Mahek)
Sorry for not commenting on the previous shot
I really enjoyed this part
Please show the Taneja being rude to Twinkle and Kunj protecting her if possible
Post soon
Don’t be disappointed ?
Loads of love
hello simiyy di thanku soooo much and ur wish granted…
with loads of love
ariya<3
Aww shayaris were soo sweet yaar
Loved it
Hey don’t be sad Coz of less comments
Episode was funny yet amazing
Liked twinj scenes
Do continue
awww thanku so much sohi
i know shayaris are sweet as u all are so sweet so it had to be nah..
bbye
Fantastic episode ariya
thankyou sushmitha
Hey Dear!
.
Shayri’s were so lovely n sweet❤❤
Episode was Funny??
Loved Twinj bond☺☺
Episode was lovely??
Loved it dear❤❤
Don’t be upset dear cause of short comment’s ☺☺Now a days everyone is having Exams na so they aren’t able to comment☺☺
Post next one soon dear ??
Loads of love ??
Keep Smiling ☺☺
hi aamna di…
tq tq tq soooooooooooooooo much
luv u too
ariya
Haye meri janemaan tune toh mera mood mast kr diya…yrrr itna amazing episode seriously aur han tu na mujhe thank you mat bola kar…samjhi..aur han yeh Jo next episode nai vo Jo..romance..haye..tu toh janti h na Teri di romance ki deewani h…toh thoda mast wala romance dikhana..aur ek baar yeh episode fantastic fabulous tha aur long bhi…
Post soon..
Luv u meri janemaan…
Byee..
hayeeeeeee meri di i was waiting 4 u only…
ab tq toh main bol nhi sakti toh fir ye shayari aapke liye…
Behan ka pyar kisi dua se kam nahi hota..
Wo chahe door bhi ho to gham nahi hota..
Aksar riste dooryon se pheeke par jate he..
Par ‘behan behan’ ka pyar
kabhi kam nahi hota..
Aye rab meri duaun me asar itna rahe…
Meri behan ka daaman hamesha khushiyou se bhara rahe..
love u so much….
bye..
Your amazing writer and don’t get disappointed by less comment and common people if your a silent reader then it time to break your silent as ariya is brilliant writer and give her all the good comment to encourage her. Excited for upcoming episode Hope you’re not ending this so soon
awwww so sweet
thanku sooooooooooooooo much sidmin23
luv u <3
Ariya
Ur going superb fast
But it’s awesome amazing lovely Lovely
Love u keep smiling
hello ramya
i know i am going super fast like bullet train hehehehe
but thanku so much
luv u too…..
?hey I m. A. Regular. Reader. But. I m commenting. For the. First time
it was. Amazing ???fabulous.?? Fantastic ??
??By the. Way good. News!!??
Tashan e ishq is gng. To start. On zee anmol from 20 march ?
Episode was awesome dear
Liked twinj scenes
Hehe kunj confused twinkle like hell
thanku so much AKA
hey harshita thanku so much..
btw i also heard this news but its timing..urghh my parents wont allow me to see it again but i am also full on drama queen… i will definitely watch it at any cost..
bbye
Fantastic episode
thanku aafi
Amazing episode
Happy for twinj
thanku tushi
Episode was amazing dear
But it was lil fast
Do you
thanku SAF
i know it is not lil but super fast
bbye
Fabulous episode
Liked twinj scenes
thanku AF
Loved it awesome the episode was so sweet …nautanki and Saddu both are cute …. Love you and post soon ❤❤❤❤❤
thanku soooo much mili di
luv u too and next will be on monday
Hey janeemaan…. Ariya darling…
U naied it jaannn…. Twinj scenes were mindblowing just loved them…
Don’t be sad coz of less comments aj kal Sab ki yehi shikayat hai.. bht less comments aarahy hain SB par… U asked that you r not liking it.. I m the loving it….. Ab jaldi next post ker do wait nhi hota…
Love you darling ??????
thankyou soooooooooo much purvi jaan…
but u have to wait till monday for next…sorry…
luv u loads…..
it was really good do not stop and please don’t rush up with the story
thanku so much padu okay i will try my best not to rush up with the story…;p
lovly..cute..epi
post..next..soon
thankyou maha
Awesome amazing fabulous
thanku soooooooo much purnima di….
Hiii….ariyaa… 🙂
Loved it alot….too cute adorable beautiful jst amazing marvellous speechless…..n itna fast frwrd mein ohhh god well sch mein maza aagya n plsss post soon….lods of love… 🙂
Lagta hai bhot saara romance milne wala hai hehe 1 week hone wala hai…..hehe bt srsly too vry cute episode ….. 🙂
hello baby di…
tq soooooo much
i will post it today