Hey telly people…. Thank you all for your comments…. See many of you are disappointed with sanskar’s character I told you already he will be in grey shade….
Now I will stop my story for some days tell me if you want me to continue or leave the story as many are not happy… And I don’t want you all to feel bad after reading the story….
And this will be swasan story…. Raglak will play a good role in their love life only if there will be love.
Previous chapters :
Promo
Chapter 2
Chapter 1
Durga Prasad told that sanskar is getting married and called ragini
All look at him with shock including raglak and sanskar.
Papa what are you saying sanskar and ragini “he was cut by Durga prasad
Laksh keep quite for a while… ” said glaring at him
I have decided sanskar is going to marry the girl…Ragini beta please call shekhar ji and tell them we are coming
Ragini nodded and went from there
Bhaisa why you called shekhar ji and who is the girl? ” Ram Prasad asked in confusion and glaring at sanskar
Na jiji jee Mara choda na hai…bhaisa why are you supporting him? Just call the police and send this shameless person out of this house “sujata said crying and cursing her faith
Sujata what are you talking …. Keep quite… ” Annapurna tried to console her
In all the while sanskar was just standing quietly lowering his head
Uncleji wo papa said he is out… He will reach home by evening ” Ragini said
Durga Prasad nodded and ragini take leave from there
Sujata what is happened cannot be changed now we can just ask forgiveness from her and her family. So please “durga Prasad said
Who is the girl bhaisa ” sujata ask in guilt
Swara” Durga Prasad taking a deep breath
What ” All said in shock
Sujata rush to sanskar and slap again
Do you have a bit knowledge what have you done? She was your would be bhabi… And in our culture bhabhi is next to mother… Don’t you feel little shame before doing this sanskar? ” Sujata shout slapping him continuously
This time even Annapurna didnt stop her
I… I wish you would be really dead sanskar” Ram Prasad said in shame
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Ragini reached home and told sumi and parvati about Maheswari’s arrival
Both become tense after hearing the sudden arrival
Don’t know what happened? Ragini do you know what must be the reason? ” sumi asked In tension
Ragini just nodded in no and went from there.
Swara where are you? ” Ragini search for her as soon as she didn’t find her on bed
Swara are you in washroom? ” She asked after hearing shower sound
She just lay down on bed and all the thoughts were roaming around her mind and just lost in them.
Swara what are you doing inside so long? ” Ragini ask in tension after not getting any reply from swara for so long
Swara” she bang the door and it was slightly open
She went inside and saw swara under the shower lying with wet cloth
Swara” She shout
She off the shower and bring her back to room.
Swara you fine…. She have fever ” checking her forehead
Maa Dadi ma please come here ” Ragini shout
Ragini what happen why are you shouting? ” parvati come to her
Dadi ma swara is not opening her eyes?
( Dadi don’t like swara much but she don’t hate swara like the way she hate her in serial)
What…. Wait let me check? ” check her forehead
Dadi ma I am calling doctor she was under shower from last one hour ” saying this ragini such out to call doctor
Maa what happen? Ragini was saying something ” Sumi come running
Sarmistha swara is burning in fever….Go and bring cold water and a cloth ” Said parvati rubbing her hands
Sumi nodded and run out
Maa here take this ” sat beside swara and gave the bowl to parvati
Dadi place Cold cloth in her forehead while sumi rub her hands.
Doctor come and check her and told that it is because she was under shower for long and ask them to take care of her and went from there
Evening time
Maheswari’s were sitting in hall waiting for shekhar to come.
Ragini beta please go and check if Swara is fine or not? ” parvati asked her and she went.
Parvati ji all okay? Swara” Annapurna hesitate to ask
Yes Annapurna ji all OK…Its just a little fever.. She is resting ” Sumi said with a fake smile.
Ragini enter and saw swara sitting hugging her knees
Swara you are awake… How are you feeling now? ” ragini asked checking her forehead
You knew it right? ” Swara asked looking at her with red tearly eyes
No swara I just… ” she saw her face and eyes
You knew it… ” Swara push her away
How can you lie to me ragini … How can you? ” Swara shout holding her head
Swara ” Ragini call her knowing what she mean
Precape: don’t know
What you all want ?
I should continue it or leave?
Comment and say…. Honestly please
32 Comments
Woww i really like sujata, wat a woman she is. U shown her awsome
Nyc
Good..I was waiting this update.. N plz continue dear
Hi,please continue but be regular.
nice..i want to read the whole story..continue soon..dont leave it in d middle..
Nice …. Update soon
Oh no.. Don’t quit… Keep writing …
Good next part soon
I like it it’s awesom
Nice..yo r not encouraging any crime dear. I have faith that yo ll punish him enough for his sin though he already regretting for it.. So don’t stop to update… I hope I get read next chap very soon..
Awesome dear
Amazing
Pls continue ………….
Don’t leave the story in the mid
Its so gud n u r asking an idiotic ques. Of course u should continue it Dr. At least 4 u *sad pout ??
Oops…. Typo….. “At least 4 me”..
hey its goood continue….. but plz update sooon
Plz continue its nice story
please please don’t stop this ff continue please.
I like sanskar in grey character
Keep writing, make sanskar realize and supporting swara
Nice eagerly waiting for next update
Plzcontinue dear
Dont stop
He shouls be punishedWaiting to see our strong sherni
Good…. Waiting for next. Update soon..
continue dear be regular
plzzz do continue dear
nice
emotional update
is it a question to ask…hurry up and give next update…or u’ll be responsible for admitting my fingers in hospital….I’m chewing my fingers in curiosity…….
and…….dont leave it in middle…pls….
continue soon……
Superb.. Do continue
Nice..
Nyc
Bt i hate ragini dun want her to be positive