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“The oceans seemed to be raised..!!
The waves are curving and ready to fall on lands..!!
The big storm has formed…!!
Why..??? why..?? why..???”
Ragini stands and reads the first page.
‘why Ragini..?’ Laksh asks innocently.
‘because, I started reading my poems..!!’ she says.
‘hahahahaha…’ Laksh laughs.
Ragini glares at him.
‘why are you laughing..??’ she asks.
Laksh: that was a nice joke.
Ragini: ahan, take this.
‘the sand is brown..
The sky is blue..
I ice is white..
Then water is..??’
Laksh: is..?
Ragini: is… water..!!!
Laksh: wowww….!!!!
Ragini: this one is awesome,
‘I have pet,
It ate a nut…
It is so fat…
The almond knot..!’
Laksh: what..?
Ragini: knot..! you know… knot…
Laksh: why almond..?
Ragini: bcz, I love almond.
Laksh: did your pet ate almond..?
Ragini: no.! my pet ate a nut and it’s a almond knot..!!
*guys, don’t try to figure this out…otherwise, you will waste time in scratching head*
Laksh: hehe, ok ok.. I understood.
Ragini: laksh, I will tell a ‘white poem’ now..
Laksh: white…
Ragini: poem..!
Here you go,
‘cow is white..
Cow milk is white..
Horse is white,
Horse teeth is white..
Moon is white,
Moon stone is white..
Tajmahal is white..
Tajmahal pic is white..”
Laksh: wow..! I didn’t know these many things are white in this world..!!
Ragini: next…
Laksh: Ragini, I understood you are a great poet. But, tell me why are you doing this to me..?
Ragini: moti… my pyari elephant doll.. has fallen in mud water because of you..!
Laksh makes his eyes big.
Ragini: cheetah… my bicycle has locked by my dadi because of you..!
Laksh shocks.
Ragini: princess… my bday dress was spoiled bcz of you…!!
Laksh: Ragini, if you are hating boys bcz I done all this, how much should I hate girls bcz a girl has killed kavya..!
Ragini shocks: a girl has killed kavya..? kavya is dead..?? who is kavya..?
Laksh: my first love…
Ragini looks on…
Tin..tin…tin…tin..tin//………@@@@@@@@@@@@@
Guys, now Laksh is taking us into his flash back… be ready and keep your heart brave..!!
“Kavya, is my first love. Her smiles are heaven. She does whatever I say. She wakes me early in morning. Give me books to read. She even helps mom in house hold works. She also sometimes does my homework..!!”
Ragini: homework..? are you in school then..?
Laksh: yes. I’m 14 years old then.
Ragini: hmm.. who is kavya..? don’t say she is your first love again..!
Laksh: kavya is a girl..!
Ragini beats her head.
Ragini: who’s girl..? I mean, is she is your neighbor..? who are her parents.
Laksh: she don’t have parents.
Ragini: is she orphan..?
Laksh: she can’t be orphan when I’m there for her.
Ragini controls her anger,
“ok, tell me clearly. What’s her age when your age was 14..?”
Laksh: two months 5 days.
Ragini: what..? is she is a new born kid..?
Laksh: no..! she is newly made Robo..!
Ragini shocks.
Laksh continues the story,
“Kavya is the robo gifted by my scientist vasikar uncle. He has chitti robo, he gave me kavya robo..”
*guys, keep remembering robo movie song in BG..*
“Kavya knows what I want. What I don’t want. Because of her I gained good marks in school”
Ragini: how..? did she give copies in exam..?
Laksh glares at her. she remains calm.
“Kavya became my best friend. She the one who gives me milk before going to bed. She makes me sleep singing a song till I sleep. I loved her. loved her so much.
One day I decided to propose her..!”
Ragini laughing.
Ragini: what can you do proposing a robot..?
Laksh: love is beyond human beings also..!!
Ragini turns her face aside, ‘Laksh seemed to be mad than me..!!’
“I took her out to the park to propose her..! she was scanning around with her computer eyes. What a virtual beautiful lady she is..! I was fascinated to see her metal lips and teeth. Her wires connected body. Her 1 terra byte memory..!!”
*Ragini is still beating her head*
“I sat beside her. she is telling,
‘laksh… laksh why did we come here..!’ (in robo voice)
Laksh: wow, kavya. What a beautiful voice.
Kavya: it’s not beautiful voice. It’s robot voice..!
Laksh smiles. He shows people around who are kissing.
Laksh: what are they doing kavya..?
Kavya: saliva exchange..! very unhealthy.
Laksh: they are kissing kavya..!
Kavya: oh, is this is called in human language.
Laksh cups Kavya face.
Laksh: kiss me too..
Kavya: ok..
(robots follow only instructions right..!!)
Kavya moves near Laksh and Laksh closes his eyes.
Then……
Then……..
A girl about 12 years hits a cork ball on robot.
That ball hits KAvya’s head and kavya flies from the seat.
All people open their mouths wideeeeeeeeeeee
‘Kavyaaaaaaaaaaa…!!’ shouts Laksh.
Kavya flies and falls in water pool. She dips in water and all the parts in her body spoils as she came contact with water.
Laksh looks angrily at the girl who threw that ball. She was running away, she was wearing a blue frock.
‘Kavya..’ Laksh comes near water. All the iron parts get rusted in her.
BG song plays…
‘chan se jo tute koi sapna…
Jag suna suna lage..
Jag suna suna lage….
Hai to yeh kyun hota hai…’
“I got angry on vasikar uncle, that he didn’t make kavya water proof. It took hard time to forget kavya… then…”
Laksh was telling Ragini was removing ropes of Laksh. She has tears in eyes.
Laksh: ragini, I never saw you crying.
Ragini: after listening to your failure story…
Laksh too kneel downs before Ragini.
‘It was past. But, after seeing you I forgot her completely. Loving a robo, doesn’t give emotions. Loving a girl like you, is fulfilling the heart..!’
Ragini looks on. Laksh cups her face.
Laksh: I love you Ragini…
(haaa, guys… Laksh has at last said I love you to Ragini. He didn’t say it till now in this ff)
Ragini: laksh, shall we do it..?
Laksh: what..?
Ragini: saliva exchange..
Laksh smiles.
*chote bachas… close your eyes now.*
Laksh places his hands around her waist. Ragini touches him totally with her body. She places her hands around his neck. Laksh moves his hand on her back on spine and brings his hand to her head. Ragini takes gulp in shy and her face is all red. Laksh pulls her closer covering the little distance between them.
Laksh: say it Ragini…
Ragini: what..?
Laksh: I love you laksh…
Ragini doesn’t say that but covers the minute gap between their lips. They joins their lips too tightly that air is also not passing between them. Both kiss each other passionately. Ragini pushes Laksh back slightly when she felt uneasy.
Laksh: say it Ragini.
Ragini blushes and runs out. She comes out of dark room panting.
*Ragini gets shocked to see Astra at the door*
Ragini: hey..! did you see what just happened..? how can you see that..! it’s bad..!
Astra: we expected a great punishment. But, why this happened..?
Ragini: I felt sad about flash back..
Astra: oh… it’s a funny flash back..!
Ragini: funny..??? do you know who is the girl in blue frock..???
Astra: don’t say, that’s you..!
Ragini: yes..!! that’s me..!!!
*Astra fainted*
67 Comments
awesome episode astruu di
oh my god laksh is just made for ragini he is more mad than ragu
kavya and laksh love story was too emotional see i am crying right now
raglak kiss was superb
yes dear… they are made 4 each other… hehe.. thank you dear…
oh no astra fainted (patting her cheeks) astra wake up astra please (sprinkled water on her eyes) but not opening ok then let me know when u opened ur eyes and ha after getting consciousness drink some juice so that u get some energy ok and then read my comment ok, so let me tell u about the episode 1 terra byte memory kavya is awesome laksh lost his first love oh poor lucky now what will happen when he gets to know that he lost his first love due to ragini u answer me after u wake ok bye bye and ha dont forget to drink juice
ya.. ya… i woke up dear… thank you… ya… with juice i also drank majjiga… coconut… and all… with ragu’s shock i have to take lots of treatmemts… hehe.. thank you dear…
Ha ha…i knew it was our Ragini who is in blue frock..
I am a gd girl I closed my eyes…i didn’t see anything laadoo…I swear…bt I read…hehe…
Someone plz hlp me…brng water..sprinkle on asthu’s face…hehehe…
Totally outstanding updte dear?
Lovd it …post soon ..take care dear ?
hehe.. u knew it..! u r clever yar… hey, don’t lie… u saw right..!!! hehe… thank you darshu…
Astra get up….. get up fast…. **sprinkling water**, are u ok now, do u need something??? chocolate or ice cream. i know you have fainted becoz of ragini but i am here with u always…. ok
ragini and laksh….. lakh and ragini ….. made for each other, both are incredibly insane ppl. she hated boys becoz laksh of laksh, and he loved his robo kavya? he was fascinated to see he metal lips????
kavya is absolutely right exchanging saliva is very unhealthy yaar.
i knew i so knew it….. it was only ragini, only ragini can do something like that….. she spoiled their moment and broke laksh’s heart. poor poor laksh. he lost his first love becoz of his current love cum wife.
i dont know about ragini’s pet but my pet i mean jazz do eat almonds and cashews.
awesome update…..
haa…haaa… where am i..??? ohhh… I’m in tu….!! thank you for waking me dear.. yaaa i need many tons of chocolates fast…!!! oh, u knew that’s ragu… u r clever just like me yar…
jazz likes almonds..!! hmmm even i like almonds..
Awesome dear…!!! Astra did u wakeup from the shock???? Hehe… Its really funny.. When laksh describe kavya.. That metal lips nd teeth..!!!?? I was continuously laughing sisy..I can’t control..!!!! At last laksh proposed ragz..!!! When laksh know about dis.. Wat he will do???? Waiting for next dear
haa mintu… just woke up with aksata’s and dharani’s sprinkling of water and darshu too… hehe… thank you so much dear…
Awesome and iam waiting what punishment will laksh will give to ragini after knowing she is the girl behind the death of his first love.
He dont think i hate or dont like ragini i love her a lot but she should get a small punishment know after what she have done to laksh in the punishment by showing that stupid adds repeatedly poor laksh.
But laksh should give small punishment to ragini
thank you a… ya surely i will make him give her punishment… but a sweet lovely one…
Omg dear be imagination super
Navvaleka potuna ???
Awesome part
haha… thank you dear…
wat do ragini made astra to faint omg myself am going to faint feeling dizzy..
hahaha.. yes yar. omg.. u r fainting too… take care…
Haha?????????I’ll die coz of laughing today?????????????????????this was out of the world imagination dijiye ????? I just can’t control my laugh ??
hahaha… thank you so much dear….
Hahaha .Astra you are just an amazing writer. Mibdblowing as usual
thank you so much gayu…
Awesome and mindblowing as usual. Loved kavlak story.
thank you priyA….
Hahahahajjahahahahahhaha…….. I guessed it…… Yipeeeeee……….
thank you…
Awwww so cute ragu bacha umahhhhh
thank you dear…
Haha Astra dii d epi was awesome couldnt stop myself frm laughing…… D poem was hillarious… I had a doubt dat d gal was ragu my doubt came out to be true….post soon di… …
By d way i am silent reader of all ffs n i have broke my silence n have started to comment Hehe… Loads of love n warm hug frm me
thank you so much soni dear…
sacchhi baat batau??? jab u said READ AT YOUR OWN RISK… maine padhna chhod dia…. yaar raaste me thi agar aage badhti woh v warning k baad toh pakka sab mujhe pagal samajhte… so band kar dia…
wowww???? really???
yaar aur kya tha iss almond n nut oops knot ka???
literally??? a robo??? aur sunlo sabb k ye janab hain toh kavya orphan nai ho sakti… beta laksh tu nai hota tab v wo anaath nai hoti…
hahaha laksh seems to be mad than me hahaha atleast accept kia is ladki ne k ye paagal hai…
hahaha virtual beautiful lady?? metal lips hahaha 1 terabyte memory hahahaha…. damnnn kya reaction tha ragz ka… mujhe pata tha k wo kavya ka murder karne wali 12 saal ki ladki ye madam hi thi…
yaar jaise ko taisa mila hai… aur clarifications toh inse better theives ka hota hai… at least reason valid toh hota hai…
maine ye story mummy ko sunaya n kaha v pakka k ye ladki ragz hai n jab ragz ne declare kia toh pata hai kya hua???
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thappad pade *pout*
mummy boli, tu toh paidaeshi pagal hai, kahaani v pagalon ki padhti hai jiske characters paaglon k 7 pushtoon k maharaaj hote hain… kabhi toh normal hojaa… *pout*
jab maine argue kia k mai pagal nai hu toh pata hai kya boli???
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koi v NORMAL insaan aise pagal characters ko assume nai kar sakta… tu toh puri khisak chuki ha so jyaada chappad chappad mat kar mujhe v paagal nai hona…
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yaar CLASSIC INSULT ho gaya yaar…
haha.. again a big comment.. hehe… thank you so much yar… hehe and that classical insult is common to me too hehe….
Unique Rag has strange husband………. Love to see….. What was Lalsh reaction after knowing about Ragini………. Dhamakaaaaaaaaa……… Aatishbajiyan?️?️?️?️?️?️?????????suno suno re suno suno
hahaha… let’s see…
Amazing ur imagination part for laksh lol? keep going yaar
thanks a lot dear….
Mindblowing..what to say yaar really I m laughing like mad…laksh and kavya omg…i knew it would be ragini
thank you saranya…
Interesting episode and Laksh’s Robert love story is amazing. Loved Raglak saliva exchange. Eagerly waiting for next episode
thank you ammu..
i love it
when laksh came to know about ragini
what ho do funny
thank you shab..
funny episode nice
thank you mk…
AWESOME
thank you..
When I.read the caption for this episode
It shocked me
I don’t like kavya in swaragini
After reading it….Thank God
It’s just a robo
I know that the girl will be ragini
Hahaha it’s soo funny
Why are always disturbing them ??????
haha… thank you abi…
amazing and wonder what lakshya’s reaction would be after he finds out about his kavya xx
thank you yar… hmmm, let’s see..
Awesome
thank you friend…
So…..cute…..awesome episodes. Aim giving my comment for every episode hear only dear…bcoz I read everything just now….u know I was so happy to see it update after a loonnnggggg…time..it’s like chala rojulu tarvatha Amma ni,daddy ni chusaka antha happy ga feel avuthano ala feel ayyanu….iam really excited to see n read ur updates….nuvvu kani boy ayinte propose chesesundedhani (don’t think badly good proposal le) tq u so ok much for ur updates plz…..konchem twaraga update cheyava update…eagerly waiting. And one more thing plz….don’t feel bad for my words…..excitement appukoleka anni express chesesanu. ….sry. ….Bye…..TAKE CARE DEAR…..misss. ..uuuu n ur updates till u post….
hai shona… first of all… thank u so much dear.. nv intha prema gaa comment cheste nen enduku bad ga feel avta chepu. naku nijanga chala happy ga undi nee comment chusi. very emotional dear. thank u so much… and ya update cheyadaniki try chesta.. kani inka 1 epi tho ee ff ipotuni raa…
Madhya madylo konni mistakes vunnayi ante comment fast ga pettesariki ala vachesindhi…..iam badhulo aim ani …so…on…..bye
What…….plz…….don’t stop ur ff……plz……dear….
i will try shona dear…
Astra Akka I think to comment after may only but you made me to comment now itself. What an episode Akka…. Fantastic chapter. Very very hilarious ???. In my life I didn’t read such a hilarious episode. Rofl ????….. I never heard anyone addressing liplock as saliva exchanging ???….. And that flash back ROBO 2…???……no words akka you are just impossible show some mercy on poor readers like me????…..my stomach is paining a lot ???…… Chance’a illa akka super ????
thank you so much sweety… hehe.. ya i will try to show mercy from next time.. hehe.
It is soooo funny.i enjoyed it alot
thanks a lot ammy…