Hello peeps…??? Hope you all remember me and my crazy OS if yes then good news is on the way and if no then to don’t worry here I am with yet another crazy OS of mine…☺☺☺ So enjoy it…?????
Shivay have announced Anika as his wife in front of media and everything is settled between them and everyone are happy with this…
Next day Morning
Shivay is getting ready for office while Anka is sitting on bed and both are stealing glances of each other from mirror but whenever their eye catch each other they’ll look at somewhere and this game continue
Pucha jo mere dil se
Tu itna khush kyu hai
Kisi ne awaaz di hai
Kuch ajab mehsoos yoon hai
Kya hai rabb ka tu wo ishaara
Jiske liye main kar raha thi wait…
But soon Shivay decide to talk her directly but seems like she come to know his intention and she run outside holding her breath and she is turning and looking back to make sure Shivay is not following her and in this she missed to notice OmRu who are looking at her weird behavior and soon they thought something is fishy so they went to Shivay who is smiling alone looking at his self in mirror and soon they ask him reason for both of their weird behavior and Shivay ignored their question and depart for office but somewhere his heart want to talk to Anika and soon he come to conclusion and he dialled Anika’s number and on very first ring she answered his call bringing smile on his face and happy Shivay speak
Shivay: Anika, I want to take you out on dinner today so be ready. I’ll come home and pick up you around 8 ok… (By now his heart started beating on fast pace…) (And he is Stone Singh Oberoi so you can’t expect him to ask for date in romantic way so adjust with it as of now…??????)
Anika: Okay Billuji…☺☺☺
And he disconnected call listening her yes and he call Mishra and give him orders and he change his way and he get busy in preparation of his first ever outing with his legally wedded wife and he is checking his watch to keep track of time as he don’t wan to be late… (Okay Stone Singh Oberoi don’t know that it call date not outing…???) On other side Anika too is confused about what to wear and she too is looking at watch as she want to get ready before time…
Tik-tik si karti hai ghadiyan
Hai dhadkano ki race
Saanson ki hai bechaini
Sirf dikhta uska face
Almost around 6:45 Shivay completed all his preparation with help OmRu and same time faking anger on them whenever they are teasing him and other side Anika ask for Prinku’s help in finalizing her costume and finally she decide to go with saree and she get ready with help of Prinku.
And now she is waiting for Shivay’s arrival controlling her heartbeats and on the other side Shivay is smilingly started driving back to home and he take out his phone to check out on Anika but seems like luck is not in his favor as his phone is switched off due to dead battery and he keep it on dashboard and stared driving in speed and on other side Anika too tried his number but is not connecting and here Shivay get stuck in traffic and it takes almost 45-50 minutes of him and Anika is having second thoughts by now and she is muttering “Baghad billa must be in meeting and I don’t think he’ll come.”
Wo aayega mujhe kehta
Ab tak aaya hi nahi
Wo kehta saath nibhayega
Par aaye to sahi
Wo aayega kab aayega
Kyu ho raha hai late
And other side Shivay who knows Anika’s impatient level cursing traffic and muttering rather to say praying that hope she don’t get second thought about his plan and wait
Pal pal mann yeh hairaan
Pal pal intezaar
Shurun hone se pehle kahi
Kho na jaaye pyaar
Mann mera darr rahan hai
Dhak dhak sa kar rahan hai
Mudd ke wo chali jayegi ya karegi wait…
And as soon as he enter in Oberoi mansion he saw her standing in balcony of their room (In my OS there is balcony in their room) ahnd soon he park his car and rush to his room and he asked for her forgiveness for being late and he soon change and get ready and both are looking perfect and made for each other.
And soon they come out and after reaching in parking lot Shivay open door of car for her like a perfect gentleman and then he take charge of chauffeur seat but soon his perfect eye notice that his wife haven’t fasten seat belt so he went close to her leaning over her increasing her as well as his own heartbeat and he stop himself and his face is close to hers and their lips are almost near to each other and he look into her eyes and he take out seat belt by his hand and fasten it to her but all this while both are lost in each other’s eyes but tucking voice of seat belt bring them back to reality and he started driving to their destination and they choose to steal glances of each other in comfortable silent.
And almost after one hour of drive Shivay stop car near a farm house and he enter inside and and park car in parking area and he rush to Anika’s side and open car door and he offer his hand and keeping her hand she step outside and surprising her sweetly he scoop her in his arms and started walking in side and they are lost in each other’s eyes and as soon as Shivay’s leg hit stairs and this break their eye lock and Shivay lil stumble and Anika close her eyes out of fear and but Shivay handle situation well and he kept her down and speak
Shivay: Anika are you alright???
Anika: Yeah Shivay I am fine …
And Shivay hold her hand and they started walking and soon Shivay bring her to poolside which is decorated with fairy lights and whole surface is carpeted with rose petals and they walk over it and he bring her to table and pull chair for her and she take seat and pushing it slightly towards chair he come to his chair and he started serving her and to Anika’s surprise all her favorite dishes are there and a smile crept on her lips and soon same reflect on Shivay’s lips and they started having their dinner in comfortable silence…
Soon Anika broke silence and she speak
Anika: Shivay I want to say something to you..
Shivay: I am listening Anika… (God please someone tell him that they are not on business meeting they are there for date…???????? SSO ka kuch nai ho sakta…???)
Anika: Shivay you know everyone have someone special in his/her life whom they give so much important even more then them oven self and they dream of spending their life’s each moment whether its happy sad or anything with them and Shivay in my life (she hold his hand) you are that person…
Shivay: Owww really???
Anika: (Coming to zansi ki rani awatar) Are you doubting me??? (She take water glass in her hand to drink so she can calm down herself)
Seeing glass in her hand Shivay get scared but Anika assure him and they completed their dinner and Shivay serve her, her favorite Gajar ka halwa and he feed her with own hand and Anika is enjoying it…
Seems like nature too wants to make this date perfect and it started raining and Shivay kept bowl on table and holding her hand he started walking inside but Anika free her hand from his hand and started enjoying rain and Shivay is lost in her and he started walking towards her like he is under some spell…
And after reaching to her he kept his hand on her waist and he hold her one hand with another and pull her towards him and she kept her hand on her neck and both started moving on silent music and Shivay bring her more close to him leaving no space between them and he is about to capture her lips with him and sensing his actions she close her eyes but he sneeze on last second and he back out from kissing her.
And soon they rush inside and they change them selves from drenched clothes and by now Shivay’s sneezing also under control and Anika started drying his hair with towel…
But Shivay stopped her and turning to her side he hold her hand and speak
Shivay: Anika, I want to say something to you…
Anika: I am listening Billuji…(Girls never forget your behavior and dialogue….???)
Though Shivay felt pain listening her dry response (She must have feel SSO…???) but ignoring that he speak
Shivay: Anika you know, you are precious to me, you are the one who can explain me things, your presence absence affects me so much, what do you think about me matters me a lot and I can’t ever imagine my self without you and you are the one who make me meet my sweet romantic side…
But cutting him in between Anika speak
Anika: Honn (making perfect ‘O’ shape with her lips) romantic and you???
Shivay: I’ll take care that you should believe this but as of now let me complete, Anika I want to live my whole life with you, wan to grow old with you so will you always be by my side??? (And he took out ring from side table’s drawer)
By now Anika is melted like ice cream and happy tears started rolling from her eyes and her tongue tied with her Billuji’s confession cum proposal so she just nod her head in affirmative and Shivay slip ring on her ring finger and coming close to her he lean over her he speak
Shivay: So Mrs. Anika Shivay Singh Oberoi time to realise you how romantic your husband is…
And he capture her lips with full delicacy and both started kissing each other like there is no tomorrow and finally when they are at sort of breath they broke kiss and soon Shivay started kissing her over her neck near her earlobe and she moan his name and soon they ditched their clothes and become skin to each other and they completed each other in every mean…
Okay done… So completed with my another crazy one shot hope you all will enjoy it… So your time starts hit star type your review…☺☺☺
And silent reader I know you people read it so if you enjoy it then acknowledge my work by hitting star or leaving comment…
In short plz do leave your feedback…☺☺☺☺????
84 Comments
Awesome…superb….fabulous… Just loved it chocopie…..
Thanks dear… 🙂
Lovely os pri….!
Thanks… 🙂
Awsome. Pls continue. I read almost all ff. But i do only a few feed backs. It doesnt mean that some r bad. It depends on my free times and lazyness.
Thanks for comment… 🙂 And this is one shot story so it ends here… 🙂
Totally blah! and not to forget faltu/butler English.. You were in a hurry to wind up and move to next fan fiction or what??!
Miss or Mr. I don’t now who you are first I chose to ignore your words but then I think it’ll be better if I’ll clarify somethings I not here to entertain people like you I am here too entertain my readers who appreciate my work and If you don’t find it good then why you chose to read it and even you take out time to comment on it so I think you find it worthy enough so you spend your time and last thing if you can’t appreciate and acknowledge any one’s work then don’t try to demotivate them (And this apply for all authors not only me…) And if you’ve so much good knowledge of good concept, plot and English then you should utilize your time in writing something in stead of demotivating others… Hope this is sufficient for you…
Only when I read I can figure out whether you worth reading or not! Obviously your are not! So I’ll spare the horror and read a better fan fiction which won’t kill the English I have left in me.
And yeah keep your mind open to all kinds of criticism. World is not a sugar coated pill always. Only with negative criticism you can grow and learn. So instead of getting offended focus on improving your flaws.
Y r u all the tym bashing on writers abt English u already tried to hurt one of my frnd n this is second tym……. Yaar chill….. Is this any spoken English skill app hai Kya? ……….u watch out ur English n don’t try to demotivate Evey story u read…… If u can’t… Better u quit from this page…..
Nandupie thanks a lot for your support… Lobe you yaar…??????
My English is watched and pretty tight. You don’t worry about that. Only in English skill apps you have to have good English huh? Any language should be perfectly used in any situation. So stop defending your vernacular language friends and give them real advice!
hey u!! i have doubt on ur understanding skills…
bcoz an empty vessels makes most noise….English is language not knowledge….
and yeah here we write fictions not give English lecture…if u didn’t have good words then keep ur mouth shut!!!!… the way she express characters feelings,her imaginations skills does matters…not language…
first check out ur knowledge then figure out our language
sorry if my words hurt u but u deserve this
Hey Anah thanks for taking stand for me it really means a lot to me…??? love you Anah…???
Regarding empty vessels and noise- blah blah..One proverb and you think you have conquered the language! Expression of character, feelings etc is best conveyed through language when there is no other medium like audio/video. So if that isn’t done right then how exactly do you convey the thoughts & imagination.
Don’t get so insecure. My knowledge is pretty fine and certainly doesn’t need a certificate from you. Regarding keeping mouth shut.. Grow up! One should learn to take in any kind of criticism. Only good words cannot be a feedback or opinion or a review. Real world criticism is a mixed bag. So learn to deal with it. And, you certainly are not sorry, so don’t even attempt it pretentiously!
Neither of us are insecure or none if us are lose in thought that we’ve conquered language… And conveying of thought and imagination well you should read all other readers feedback so you’ll come to know how best it convoyed and if it not conveyed to you then that is your problem so deal with it. And I always welcome negative comment but that should be related to my story or shot no like knowledge of English so grow up and stop showing off your knowledge of English everywhere…
?? that was dope! I absolutely loved your review and really think you should comment more often. Grammer_Nazi is absolutely right Ms.Pri! “The world is not a sugar coated pill always” ??? Hats off to an exceptional person. ??
Sorry i meant to say *extraordinarily amazing* person Grammer_Nazi. Learn to accept both sweet lies and harsh truths Pri!!
I think supporting your own self when no one is taking stand for your criticism is……. (Fill the blank by your own as you know that too very well)… And I seriously not interested in having review aka comment aka feedback from your so called * EXTRAORDINARY AMAZING PERSON*
see who is back….
i warned u last time still u came again…
last time u did it with lalitha & now with pri….
i don’t know know how to tell u….
but if u r so much concerned about fluent English….
then kind request…
plzzzzzz don’t read FF’s…
go to book shop and buy a good book…
i can suggest u many….
but plzzzzz don’t ever come up again in comment section……
bcoz as i said earlier my patience level is too good but if i loosed my temper then it’ll be worst….
and most importantly u r hurting my friends…. so there is no chance that I’ll spare u next time….
and yes plzzzzz don’t tell me about criticism…. i know about it….
i would have respected ur criticism…
but what to do… i always find ur comments in criticism never ever i saw ur comment in appreciation in any ff…
so basically i got one thing… that u don’t like to praise but to point out mistakes….
go get a life dear..
instead of searching others mistake do something which will improve ur thinking…..
and about pri’s works… she don’t need ur certificate for her work… here are many peoples who genuinely wait for her ff’s & os… so she is writing for them not for u…
so u better shut ur mouth….
and yes i forgot to tell…
kindly ignore yaar if any grammar mistake is here…
i was thinking to search one English teacher to check my comment for grammar mistake…
but at 1 O’ clk i couldn’t go out and do it…
so manage with it…
or u will have problem with my comment’s grammar also…
Hey Mrunal thanks fir your support it means alot to me… Love you yaar…?????
Ooooo! I got scared with your warnings! maybe i should hide.. 😛
With a gazillion appreciative reviews, a couple of critical reviews shouldn’t hurt. But then again this applies to people who think straight, not the juvenile kinds!
If you don’t find it worth reading then why are you spending your time in visiting it commenting here it clearly saw that either you find it worthy to spend your time and knowledge of English or you are just a lil attention seeker b*t*h who is everywhere showing off her English knowledge… And one can’t learn only from negative criticism positive appreciation is also required for motivation but you’ll not understand that as your mind is not working in that way… And I’ve better idea of what world I’d then you so don’t give me knowledge if that too… Keep it with you may be someday it’ll be helpful to you…
And Nandupie neither defending our English nor me but if you’ve lil bit of brain then keep it in mind it call supporting friend and taking stand for them… And don’t worry about advice she is giving to me because they are far better then your stupid criticism…
U r so funny Yaar miss. Grammar. Nazi. ?????? and abt giving advice…. Trust me…. We both r great criticizers of each other work…… We point out each point of our works so that we can improve our work. But whom am I telling……. Forget it. And reading b****. How do u felt? Does it hurts?? Well then it’s same feeling u r giving by saying her work as blah. U should have used some generous words instead all the trash to give her advice. What’s the use. …..u have lost all ur senses…… If still there then take our advice…… It’s for ur better……. ????
Awesome
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Hi everyone…I’m reading ishqbaaz fan fiction on TU since November… nd I just love all the ffs of urs…they r just awesome.. it sometime change my bad mood to happy…i was a silent reader till now..but as I know comments are the appreciation for u all..so I decided to comment…I just love all the OS,TS and stories here…just keep going all the briallant writers here…all the very best…
Thanks for comment dear and appreciation is needed the most and thanks for luck … 🙂
Awesome…
Loved it…
Thanks… 🙂
Superbbbbbbb. . I just loved it . Muaahhhh. ..
Thanks dear…☺☺☺
Awesome
Thanks…☺☺
It is awesome dear… Your caption on shivaay expression is so good….
Thanks dear…☺☺☺
Sweet n romantic os. Beautiful chocs???
Thanks Nandupie…????
Hey chocopie leave that grammar guy. Loved this awesome date. Oh? Romantic and you??? That was funny. Totally I enjoyed it
Thanks swtypie…☺☺☺ And yeah I’ll leave him on side…
Super amazing. Beyond words. Keep writing. We all love u n don’t get demotivated by sm people. U r brilliant di n always will be. Waiting 4 ur nxt post..☺☺
Thanks for comment, compliment and love dear…☺☺??
hii pri meri jaan 😉
amazing os…..
loved it !!!!!!
beautifully written……
post more os lyk dis ……..
Thanks for comment Pooja dear… ???☺
Lovely
Thanks…☺☺
Awesome
Thanks…☺
awesome yaar especially I like anika’s I am listening Billuji superb?
Billiji need to test his own bitter medicine and yeah thanks for commenting and reading…☺☺☺
Amazing…..totally outstanding…..fully love drenched……..loved it
Awww thank you..??☺☺
I like it so much
Wonderful piece of writing ?
Btw I am Mirra
Would like to be friends with you ??♥♥
Hey hi Meera I am Priyanka and thanks for comment dear and I am just a PM away and we are frnds..☺☺☺
Just amazing…. Hope you’ll continue to write more.. Really appreciate your creativity…
Owww thanks dear for your appreciation…☺☺☺
chocs….it was out standing…
sweet romance haan!!!….
totally blockbuster date….
keep rocking …..
Thanks Anah… ☺☺☺??
Awesome
Thanks..☺☺
Loved it…keep writing… ?
Thanks…☺☺☺
Amazing!?. Waiting for more such OS and ff of yours. Keep writing dear ? ?
Thanks Sofiya..☺☺☺
Beautiful os
Thanks…☺☺
hey..priya… its such a wonderful os and yes i have been reading all ur fanfics and os but haven’t commented any……so sorry for that and coming to this one its simply superb…keep writing and god bless….
Thanks for reading all my works and commenting… ☺☺☺
Awesome….loved it to the core…
Thanks Bhavna… ☺☺
Loved it like always Di.
Thanks Shrutika… ☺☺☺
loved it dear….
don’t pay any heed to that idiot grammar nazi..
u r fabulous…
i enjoy ur every work…
and this was another fantastic update…
Thanks for commenting and taking stand for me Mrunal… ☺☺☺☺ And for enjoying my work too… ☺☺☺ And for compliment too..☺☺☺
Hey no need to thanks yaar…
It’s my duty to take a stand for my friend or that idiot will keep commenting his/her nonsense…
And will hurt my friends..
Which i can’t tolerate at any cost…