Hi Guys. Shakaib Here. What’s up. Here I come with an OS on Saathiya’s current track.Hope you all will like this “boring story”. So let’s get started.
Meera dances with man madly and gets cosy….Ricky drags Sita and rap her…Gopi accusing Villains…. Everything is changed!!
SOMETIME BEFORE….
@Village
Bhavani is shown coming. A girl is shown in Villager dress. Bhavani comes here. She hugs the girl.
Girl: Maayi, you came from other Village. you know, how much I was missing you these days.
Bhavani in her mind: Gaura said right, this Meera nick name, Thiki Mirchi, is foolish, or emotional fool.
The Girl’s face is shown and she is none other than Meera.
Meera: This Sarpanchi Warpanchi can’t be handle by me. you handle this sarpanchi.
Bhavani puts her hand on meera’s cheeks.
Bhavani: Oh, Okay, I’ll handle this fact. BTW.. how your nights are going on?
Meera: Superb, If I would be in Modi Mansion or Suryavanshi Mansion, They would have kill me. I’m so lucky to get a mother like you who loves me a lot.
Bhavani in her mind: I love you so much that I can even kill you!
Meera: You said anything? Btw…I’ll spend a night with another hot man today. he is very famous in Rajkot. Her wife has leave him because he is fond of other women.
Bhavani: Spend your night. Okay, I handle other matters.
Meera: Okay?
Bhavani leaves. Bhavani comes to a room. She calls someone.
Bhavani: Hello Gaura! Bhavani here! I today your Target “M” has completed. Meera has turned into a spoil brat.
@Suryavanshi Mansion
Gaura: Great Job! Today, You’ve to send your man to capture their pictures and make sure that This news Must get publish in tomorrow’s newspaper.
@Village
Bhavani: Arey What you say Gaura Behn, our mission is same, you want MODIS destruction as I want. They considered Sita as their daughter na, Now let them repent of their folly, When eclipse come, It leaves some effects also(cuts call).
@Outside of Bhavani’s room
Meera is shown. Meera is shocked. She smirks.
Meera in her mind: Old woman has get wings, I’ll cut her wings. Tomorrow, there will be a blast. Everything will be changed.
@Club
Meera comes in Heroine dress. She drinks liquor. She continuously orders Liquor. She loses her control over herself. Some men pull her to dance floor. A man enters in club wearing Green T-Shirt and Black pants with moustache. Meera is shown in dress of Laila Song.
Song plays….
Laila main Laila, aisi hoon Laila
Har koi chaahe mujhse milna akela
Laila main Laila, aisi hoon Laila
Har koi chaahe mujhse milna akela
Jisko bhi dekhun duniya bhula doon
Majnu banaa doon, aisi main Laila
Ho.. ye kaise hain lamhein
Jo itne haseen hain
Meri aankhen mujhse
Yeh kya keh rahi hain
Meera drags that man who has wore Green Color T-Shirt and black pants.
Tum aa gaye ho (aa ha!)
Yakeen kaise aaye (aa ha!)
Meera touches him.
Ye dil keh raha hai (aa ha!)
Tumhe chhu ke dekhun
Laila main Laila, aisi hoon Laila
Har koi chaahe mujhse milna akela
Laila o Laila Laila
Aisi tu Laila
Har koi chaahe tujhse milna akela
Man touches Meera’s sensual parts.
O Laila, aa ha…
Laila Laila..
Hey…
Mohabbat ka dasta tumhe naag hai kya
Tumhare bhi dil mein lagi aag hai kya
Mere liye kya (Laila!)
Tadapte ho tum bhi (Laila!)
Both kisses on each other faces madly.
Main betaab jaise (Laila!)
Tumhare liye hu
Laila main Laila, aisi hoon Laila
Har koi chaahe mujhse milna akela
Man also takes liquor.
Laila o Laila Laila
Aisi tu Laila
Har koi chaahe tujhse milna akela
Laila o Laila Laila
Aisi tu Laila
Har koi chaahe tujhse milna akela
Man and Meera comes to a room.
Give me give me love n give me more
Thoda sa mujhse love le bhi aao
My lover gave you dounce and I feelin’ low
Again and again and again
Meera drags him toward herself.
What’s danger, what danger, what danger
Take me down, down, down
What danger, what danger, what danger
Take me down, down, down
Take me down, down, down
Take me down, down, down
She pushes him on bed.
Aaj dikhade mujhe love karke
Oh baby baahon mein bharke
Oh jo bhi sohca sapnon mein
Woh aaj dikhade mujhe sab karke
Aaj dikhade mujhe love karke
Oh baby baahon mein bharke
Oh jo bhi sohca sapnon mein
Woh aaj dikhade mujhe sab karke
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera
Tu hi meri raaton ka nasha
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera
Soya huaa jisam jagaa
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera
Tu hi meri raaton ka nasha
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera
Soya huaa jisam jagaa
She removes his Shirt. His Biceps and Chest are shown.
That reason that I can not love no other
Tera pyaar
This life I’m gonna live it longer
Tera pyaar
I made a spell girl, I’m down under
Tera pyaar
I keep coming for more n more n more
That reason that I can not love no other
Tera pyaar
This life I’m gonna live it longer
Tera pyaar
I made a spell girl, I’m down under
Tera pyaar
I keep coming for more n more n more
Kaali raaton mein
Crazy aankhon ne chuaa
Kuch mujhko kuch meri saanson ko huaa
Kaali raaton mein
Crazy aankhon ne chuaa
Kuch tezz asar lazy saanson ko huaa
Tu ishq mera, tu ishq mera
Tu hi meri raaton ka nasha
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera
Soya huaa jism jagaa
Tu ishq mera, tu ishq mera
Tu hi meri raaton ka nasha
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera
Soya huaa jism jagaa
Meera starts kissing his chest. Man lays over Meera. Meera pulls him in blanket.
Sardi mein garmi hai
Poori besharmi hai
Jaanam jaayaz jo
Humne woh
Ghalati ki hai
Sardi mein garmi hai
Poori besharmi hai
Jaanam jaayaz jo
Humne woh
Ghalati ki hai
Please dikhade tu gazab karke
Labon ke paas lab karke
Socha hai jo bhi sapno mein
Woh aaj dikhade mujhe sab karke
They gets cosy.
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera
Tuhi meri raaton ka nasha
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera
Soya hua jisam jaga
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera
Tuhi meri raaton ka nasha
Tu isaq mera, tu isaq mera
Soya hua jisam jaga
Tu hi meri raaton ka nasha
Soya huaa jisam jagaa..
@Modi Mansion
Gopi is shown in Mandir. She prays to Kanha ji that Hey Kanha Ji, what’s all this happening? My one sibling has gone against her family. My other sibling isn’t ready to accept me as his mother. Please show me some way.
MEERA IS SHOWN WITH MAN.
Sita is shown going to Ricky’s room. Ricky is shown taking wine and smoking cigars. He shouts I’ll not leave you Gopi Modi. Sita comes to him and says I want to talk with you. Ricky says Get lost! Sita shouts I said na I want to talk with you. Ricky stands and lost his control. Sita fears. She try to run but Ricky drag her to bed. Sita’s voice gets close due to too much fear. Ricky takes a blanket and rapes Sita.
Dita Tata Tune plays…
MANDIR DIYA STARTS GETTING BLOW OFF.
Gopi gets worried. She try to save Diya from blowing off but in vain. Diya gets blow off. Gopi gets shock.
Next Morning….
Gopi and Modi family are in hall. Gopi says Maaji, Have you seen Sita? I haven’t seen her today else she wake early from all of us.
Kokila: Yeah Gopi Vahu, I was also thinking this. you go and check in her room. Gopi nods and leaves.
@Ricky’s room
Sita wakes up after been unconscious. She cries. Ricky wakes up. Gopi passes by his room and gets shock hearing cries from Ricky’s room. She runs there. She opens door and is shocked to see Ricky half nude in blanket and Sita been covered with blanket.
DITA TATA TUNE PLAYS…..
Gopi shouts Ricky and cries sitting on floor.
@Club
Media and Press are shown. One of Reporter says Modi family’s daughter has been caught in spending a night with a man. How much this news is true, let’s see by going inside.
@Suryavanshi Mansion
Vidya watches news and get shock. Shravan comes and says Vidya ji, What the hell is it, My friend inform me about Meera ji. Gaura comes and says Vidya Dikra. what’s happening? I can’t understand. Let’s go Modi Bhavan. Vidya thinks it means baaji has done all this. She stares at gaura. Gaura smirks and says let’s go. Vidya refuses to go. Shravan resists, Vidya agrees.
@Modi Mansion
All come to Ricky’s room hearing shout. Jaggi asks what happened…he sees ricita and gets shock. Everyone there get shock. Bhavani kicks MM door.
@Club
Reporter says Who has spend night with Modis’ daughter, let see. he opens door. Meera is shown covered with blanket. Her clothes are shown on sofa.
Reporter says What you can see currently, MODIS’ daughter have been caught red handed. Camera focuses on man. Man comes out of Blanket and says Meera, who has come. His pants and shirt are also shown on sofa. man is shown half nude. And the man’s face is finally shown and He is…..(Yeah you guess right)….Dharam.
Reporter get shock. Dharam gets enraged and comes out of blanket. Reporter turns back. Meera says Dharam ji, get inside the blanket. Funny tune plays in BG. Dharma gets back in blanket. He says Have you a little shame, can’t you give husband and wife privacy. Reporter says Sorry, if possible, then forgive us. Dharam says Give that video to us. Reporter says sorry sir, it has been telecasted on TV. Media & Press leaves. Meera says “Loooooool!”
@Modi Mansion
Bhavani shouts Hey Gopi, come down. Savita Behn come at MM. She calls out Kokila Behn. Family members come downstairs including Ricky and Sita. Savita’s Behn Bahus come. Bahus say He is very hot. Savita Behn says have you not watched TV…Arey your SIL has get popular… He is very hot.
Kokila turns on TV. Modi family got shock seeing Dharam been nude video on TV. Gopi gets shock. Dheera come. SF COMES NEXT. Vidya hugs Meera calling out Meera di. Meera also loves her.
BG(Bhavani-Gaura) get shock. Dharam says wah Baa, you showed your right place, I thought you’ve changed but no. I doubted on that day when chanda fall from stairs but it proved when you and Bhavani join hands. That day when Kokila Masi ji come taking Meera, Meera indicate me to pretend. So, as per plan we done our job. Now, its your turn. Ricky says Oh Gosh, This Family will never end their boring dramas. Lool.
Meera Slaps Bhavani continuously and accuse her for everything. Sita stops her and says Enough Meera di, How dare you to touch my Maayi? She is my mother, she grow me up. Do not you dare to raise finger on her. Bhavani gets shock. She apologizes to everyone. Now, its Gaura turn. Gopi slaps her and says this one for destroying my family, She slaps her again and says this one for trying to give Vidya child to Naiya. She slaps her again and says this one for Killing Durga ji. She slaps her again and says This one for killing chanda. she slaps her and says this one for trying to kill urvashi masi. She slaps her again and says this one for killing my ahem ji. she slaps her again and says This one for Kidnapping Maaji. Gopi slaps Gaura hard this time. Blast happen.
Dita Tata tune plays….
Gaura falls on floor. Modi Bhavan shakes. Gaura lost her senses. Gopi looks at Ramakanth this time and shouts Ricky. she come to him. She slaps him hard. Ricky looks at her angrily. Gopi pulls her hairs and shouts Lower your eyes when I talk to you. you understand…you better understand! Meera screams My Dialogue….
Gopi says This one for playing with respect of woman. She slaps him hard. Ricky lifts in air and falls near kitchen. All get shock. Gaura wakes up and Shouts Gopi. Gaura comes to Gopi. Gopi catch fatty Gaura with legs and revolves her in a circle. She leaves Gaura. Gaura hit with pillar. Pillar cracks.
Gopi come to Ricky and make him stand through his hairs. She shouts This one for playing with Humans lives. Your smoking doesn’t effect not only you but also us. This one for causing pollution in our environment. She slap him hard. He lifts in air and fall in Sita’s feet. Sita cries. Ricky cries and begs for Forgiveness to sita. Gopi comes to Ricky again. She move her hand to Ricky but Sita hold it and nods no. Gopi cries and hugs Sita. Both cries. All have teary eyes. Gaura who was seeing all this, also falls in Gopi’s feet as well as others for forgiveness. All forgive her. Urvashi comes running downstairs and hugs Jaggi.
20 years later….
2037….
Ricita(RICky-sITA) has get married and have two kids as well. Dheera kids has grown up as well. All are alive as well(Most shocking twist ever..loool).
The End.
42 Comments
Hey Shakaib mera little brother.Fantastic and hilarious OS?????.I love it.I like Dheera part so much.
Thanks a lot Rise di. Glad that you liked dheera. Its my first attempt to write an OS on dheera. BTW..do you get angry on Meera before it reveals to you that The man is Dharam????
*Rose di.
Hey Shakaib no I don’t get angry .But I am shocked to read Meera’s dailogues with Bavva.But I have some doubt that is lie. And when you describe that T shirt man and you wrote he had moustache I confirmed that man is none other than Dharam only.But I really enjoyed suspense to create revealing of Dharam. All the best for your future FFs.
Thanks a lot Rose di. Actually, I was to write beard instead of Moustache. Unknowingly, I was feeling sleepy, I write Moustache. Otherwise, it was my full fledged plan to write beard.
Hilariousssssssssssss?????????????????????????????????….Ricky n Gaura scene was Super funny…Gaura fell on floor n MM shaked…loool???…Ricky lifts on air n falls on kitchen….Kokila should give her dialogue that time…Hey Krishna Bhagwan???????????…SUPER FUNNY OS…Dheera scene was S*xyyy….Btw i am very happy that this OS is too funny…as the title is kal ho naa ho i thought it will be the sad story but??…Gopi is a superwoman lol…Pillar broke bcoz of gaura!!…If the makers of real sns show this on tv…I am sure the trp will be at top….Brillianttttt ???????….Dear…????….All the scenes were weird n thrilling n funny too…??…I thought i am watching any cartoon movie…Ricky raped sita but atlast they got married having two children…No one died also after 20 years epilogue leap??
Thanksaa lot Raina di????????. Very glad that you all people like it. My pleasure that you think it should be no. 1 if its telecasted on TV. Thank you once again??????
Fantastic ….. Good job … No word for ur telent…. U r unique writter plz give such good story to makers to that we can see this on tv …also give some brain to them … So they can think like u
Thanks a lot kan???? rashmi mam will not like that someone. Else interrupt in her story. So! Let it be like it’s going on????
Fantastic….. I have no word for ur brillent telent…… U r a unique writer… Plz give some sense and story to story writer of sns to that we can watch this on screen ….
Thanks a lot kan????
Oh My Goodness! What a rocking shocking OS. LOVED IT. On the show, Meera will remain negative but here you done awesome, I’ve no words to explain my feelings. It was shocking to see Meera in that side and unexpectedly, the man was Dharam. Oh my god! 2037..?? On the show, whenever they show leap, the year is same. Hats off to you for writing such a awesome OS. Might, Emoji express my feelings,
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Thanks a lot Tia.
nice title.This bhavani is so cheap to encourage Meera 4 prostitution.But our Meera is clever.Dance song was perfect.Dheera moments were hot.Gaura bhavani tried to trap meera but they themselves got trapped revealing him to be Dharam.rly enjoyed that scene.Sita is so nice to stand 4 Bhavani.so bhavani realized her mistake n apologized.i liked it.loved gopi turning violent with Gaura n Ricky.Meera’s reaction on gopi using her dialogue was funny.Gaura n Ricky too apologizing was nice.loved d twist that dheera were actually 2gether n meera’s behaviour was their plan.wish it was there on sns too.Happy to see Ricky sita r married n have kids too.i’m happy that all r still alive.
but i didnt like ricky raping sita.being a woman i find it unbearable n painful.Rapist like Ricky doesnt deserve pardon.But still happy that Ricky Sita got married as i started liking this pair after they showed ricita scenes 2 days back.hats off 2 u bcz u r the 1st writer to write on ricita.expecting full fledged ricita ffs.
I was rly missing ur ffs.so getting this OS made me very happy as i luv dheera n ricita.
Sibling means brother or sister.please note it.
Thanks a lot jasmine di.????oh yeah..actually I don’t want to write sibling.. I write it in hurry.. That’s why. Even, I’ve forget sibling’s meaning. ??when I submit it, I review it later, I submit it today at 3:00 a.m. I felt too sleepy..that’s why didn’t nitice??will not repeat this mistake again. Even, I love ricita. I also find Ricky raping Sita an when I realize it, story was completed. Else, I would have change the track. ??
Best OS shakaib ? Gopi slapping gaura was superb
Thanks a lot Sid bhai??
How I tell you? What? Of course about it, I’ve no words to express my feelings. I’ve to admit SNS ffs has a lot thrill, romance, Fun, etc. If it should’ve telecasted on TV, it should be no. 1 and have beat naagin by gaining 5/5. Ekta must have feel jealous that Her Naagin 2 fail to be in no. 1 list and Rashmi has won over her. Songs was so s*xy. I was wondering who the man. I was looking for many actors which can unit this role but when man’s. Secret reveal. It was Dharam. Superb. Meera and Dharam s*x. Huh huh! Mansi show this before in her ff. Actually, I’m silent reader of ffs, specially Sns ffs. But this one is so hilarious that I can not stop myself from commenting. Wonder how Gopi has revolve Gaur a. And one more thing why You didn’t add this dialogue of Gaura when she was moving in circle,”Maa sub da ka bhalla kare, par shurwat mara thi kare”? 2037? Overall, it was thrilling, a bit weirdand s*xy OS.
Thanks sia??
Love it a lot.
Thanks Shewtlana Singh Oberoi????
Richita was cute
Thanks Rani????
Hi Shakaib. You’ve make me helpless in choosing the words to express my feelings. If possible, then try to accept my this Comment;
Was wondering who the girl in starting but when bhavani come and their hug represent that it was meera n she was. Thiki Mrichi, Bhavani has become Gaura. Their acting is superb on the show. but sad thing about sns is that they drag a twist for too much months and with that also same villain. BG canvo was horrible and when Bhavani say Spoilt brt, I was scared a lot. and my doubt turn into TRST when Meera enter in club and she drinks continuously. it was so tough for me to believe. She dancing on Laila song. Superb. Loved it. Seriously, On SNS We’ve no such scenes. Only, Once Vidya Sharavn consummation scene and once Meera dancing on DIL muft ka. Also no scene. When man entered first, I thought he can’t be Dharam as he is always in moonch in real because of word moustache. Tu isaq Mera and Dheera s*xing on that song was superb. s*xy scene superb. Only. Sita show such consummation scene in naagin of leads. But superb. I think Gopi should have say Kid instead of sibling, sibling means bro or sissy. Okay, agree you must be in hurry. Mistakes are done by humans. Its okay. is it like that? Gopi become violent to improve Ricky. it was seeming to be cartoon when R and G Lift in air. Gopi saying meera’s dialogue and Meera reacting. Awesome+Funny. Sita taking Bhavani side was shocking but happy that she changed. Do Gaura and Ricky didn’t get any injury when they fall so much times and Gaura was hit by pillar? I’m in love with Dheera and Ricky Sita. I’m fond of your, Riana and Mansi ffs. They have all love, thrill, etc. Thank you for giving a jodi name to Ricky and Sita as Ricita. I think On show, When Gopi will share her idea of marriage they will drag it for at least month to 2 months. You didn’t show GoGi. Missed Kokila dias a lot.and the most hot scene was when Dharam come out of blanket without clothes. Much shamelessness. Haha. love it a lot. Like Ricky apologizing Sita and Gaura also apologize. Nice. Ricky deserve punishment For harassing a woman. Sita shouting on him. Cool. It reminded me of Gopi turning from Poor to Strong person. Wish you had shown A little long scene after leap. I liked Ricky and Gaura lifing in air a lot. It was most funny. It looked more cartion. it happens in cartoons. mostly. Liked dheera plan to expose Gaura and bhavani. overall, it was Most Superb.
Thanks a lot for this super detail comment?? riya!!
I’m so happy guys, you liked my first dheera and Ricita OS so much. Thank you guys for so much love. Will try to write ff on them in future.
I’m so happy guys, you liked my first dheera and Ricita OS so much. Thank you guys for so much love. Will try to write ff on them in future.love you guys???????
Superb dear. Loved Ricita a lot.
Thanks Shanila.
Loved it dear. Specially, Gopi as violent made me laugh. It’s called power of woman or simply superwoman. Thanks for such a lovely OS.
Thanks Geeta.
First of all sorry Shakaib for commenting late…..Congrats for starting a dheera+Ricita OS….I hope u make a fulfled FF on RiciTa….RiciTa what a name???…..I loved dheera part a lotttt?????….Soo happy to know it was a plan n BhavRi got trapped in that?….Laila song???dheera spent night together??????????????…….It was funny when dharam came out of blanket n funny BG played…..I dint liked Ricky raping sita n sita forgave him soo easily I mean he should get a severed punishment??…..Loved Bhavani understanding her mistakes when sita stopped Meera from hurting her mother?…..It was really hillarious to read about gopi slapping ??gaura for her crimes n MM shakes…..Gopi revolving gaura in air???by her legs….gopi slapping Ricky n he flew in air near kitchen??? n gopi holding Ricky by his hair n threw him again in air on sita’s feet??….Meera saying it’s my dialogue???…..Gaura too fell on everyone’s feet n apologises….Wish in real sns too it happens…..Wishing this is shown in sns too….It will go up in trp charts leaving behind nagin 2……I was imagining everything u wrote in this OS ???????….20 yrs later….
RiciTa got married n have 2 kids too….Dheera kids too grown up n they all are alive too??……Don’t say it’s boring…..It’s the most happening OS ??????
Thanks a lot. mansi di ????Its okay…you commented on same day when it published. Glad that you all liked it so much. ????
Ur welcome?☺
Thanks a lot??
Love it so much??? it was so funny
Thanks a lot isaaq di.
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superb… loved Dheera part and Gopi punishing Ricky and Gaura…
Thanks a lot faby????
Most entertaining update! Gopi as superwoman???Mrs.Rashmi sharma pls take a look at this and put it as atleast someone’s dream sequence as one or two special episodes or as a mega episode in ur boring,dragging serial…what i loved the most is dharam-meera’s scene with the press reporter??? sorry for the very late comment…
Thanks a lot nandhini di.????Its okay. All are busy in their lives and sometimes free in their lives. My pleasure that you commented. Time isn’t important. I write the whole OS imagining that I’m watching it on TV and then writing it on my system to update the episode. Even I want that Rashmi mam take a look on this os and she can create a Spinoff with a mega episode. And give 2-3 promos for this episode. Even, those people will watch it who haven’t see Saathiya ever.