Hey guys…Its Riana…I am today i am back with my Second Os…Based on the film Sanam re…Which i never saw..lol…but i have bit idea!!…Though its based on the movie…But definitely its not fully copied…Its a bit modified…Share ur comments below??
AHEM- MOHAMMAD NAZIM
GOPI- GIAA MANEK
ANITA- ANITA HASSANANDANI
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PLOT-KASHMIR, INDIA
A couple is shown in a hospital…
The woman came for her delivery with her husband….
A baby cries…
Nurse: Congrats…A baby girl…
The lady kisses her n dies unfortunately…
The man cries on his wife’s death!!…
On the other hand…
A couple meets with an accident…
The lady was pregnant..
She in emergency condition gives birth to a baby boy…
The couple dies due to accident!!…
And the baby boy’s grandfather carries him n cries…
The baby boy is named as Ahem n The Baby girl as Gopi…
They stays near each others house…
They were probably neighbours..
4 YEARS LATER…(KID LEVEL)..
Its Gopi n Ahem’s pre school time…
Both plays with each other n spends time….
Both were cute kids…
Ahem’s grandfather started to loving gopi as her granddaughter!!…
Whenever Gopi cries…
Ahem gives him a piece of chocolate n she stops…
Gopi brings Flowers for Ahem n they makes small bird houses…
Time passes…
8 YEARS LATER…(TEENAGE LEVEL)…
Ahem n Gopi became best friends n started to love each other!!…
Suddenly…Gopi’s father dies due to Major heart attack!!…
Ahem’s grandfather promises Gopi’s fatger that he will take care of Gopi!!…
Gopi cries on his father’s death!!…
Ahem consoles her…
Both of them had a kiss…(For the first time)…
Ahem’s grandfather decides that he will sent Ahem too Mumbai n Gopi will stay with him…
Ahem cries that he wont go…
But his grandfather convinces him…
Gopi: You have to go Ahem…
Ahem: But Gopi…i will never leave you…
They both promises that they will never leave each other!!…
But After sometime…
Ahem decides to leave as he wants become a succesful businesd man…
Gopi: I will be waiting for you…till you come back!!…
Ahem: Hmm…
Ahem goes to kiss Gopi but Gopi stops him…
Gopi: This one i will take when you will come back as a successful man…
Ahem nods yes n they both gets emotional…
Ahem leaves with his Uncle…
Gopi waits for him…
She sits near the ladakh lake n looks at the sun…
Thinking about Ahem…
Gopi in her mind: I will be waiting for you Ahem…
She closes her eyes…
15 YEARS LATER… (ADULT LEVEL)…
PLOT: MUMBAI
A large building is shown…
Ahem wakes Shirtless…
He is now of 27 years old…
A Hot n Handsome man…
He goes for shower n then does breakfast!!…
He leaves in his car…(It looks like he forgot his past)…
Ahem meets a girl who is shown in White dress…
He kisses that girl…
Ahem: Hello baby…
The lady turns n its Anita…
Anita smiles…
Ahem: Baby…
Anita: My gift…where’s it??…
Ahem: Oops i forgot…
Anita: What??…
Ahem: Sorry…
He gifts her platinum necklace!!…
They starts dancing…
SONG:
Hua hai aaj pehli baar
Jo aise muskuraya hoon
Tumhe dekha toh jaana ye
Ke kyun duniya mein aaya hoon (x2)
Ye jaan lekar ke jaa meri
Tumhe jeene main aaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon
Zameen se aasmaan tak hum
Dhoondh aaye jahaan saara
Banaa paaya nahi ab tak
Khuda tumse koi pyaara (x2)
Baaton mein teri hain badmashiyan
Sab bewajah ki hain taarifiyaan
Main likh doon aasmaan par ye
Ke padh lega jahaan saara
Huaa na hoga ab koi
Yahan hum do sa dobara
Main duniya bhar ki taarifein
Tere sajde mein laaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon
(Rab se laaya hoon.. Rab se laaya hoon..)
Tu hai jo rubaru mere
Bada mehfooz rehta hoon
Tere milne ka shukrana
Khuda se roz karta hoon (x2)
Humko pata hai yeh nadaniyaan hain
Aawara dil ki hai aawariyan
Yeh dil pagal bana baitha
Isey ab tu hi samjha de
Dikhe tujhme meri duniya
Meri duniya tu banja re
Hoon khushkismat jo kismat se
Tumhe aise main paaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon
Ahem n Anita were close to each other…
He was in love with Anita…
When he suddenly gets a call from Kashmir…
Ahem: Hello…Uncle what happened??…
He gets shocked!!…
He gets to know that his grandfather is not well…
He meets Anita…
Anita: You should definitely go!!…
Ahem leaves to see grandfather!!…
PLOT: KASHMIR
Ahem comes to his home…
People r shown gathered!!…
He: Dadaji…
People mourns…
He gets shocked seeing his Grandfather dead!!!…
His Grandfather was carrying a Letter where it was written something!!…
After cremation of this Grandfather he reads the letter…
Grandfather in letter: Ahem beta…i am weak my son may when you will come you will not see me…But son you didnt remember your promise that you will come back to Gopi…She waited years for you but you didnt came…you was so mixed in metropolitan life…that you ignored Gopi…
Ahem recalls Gopi’s face n recalls everything!!…
Letter: Gopi…she left me…years ago…she made every possibilities to make me cured but who will cure herself!!…I always wanted you n Gopi to lead a prosperous life!!…You ever loved dadaji…then after my death…go n apologise to Gopi for your mistake!!…No need to marry her as i know that you move on…but atleast meet her once…Your Lovely Grandfather…
Ahem cries reading the letter!!…
He without wasting a minute…
Goes to Gopi’s house…
Ahem: Gopi stays here…
He asks a lady…
Lady: No…she left kashmir…n handed over this house to us…
Ahem leaves sadly hearing everything!!…
Suddenly Gopi is shown in a school playing with some students…
Ahem crosses the school n looks the kids playing…
Gopi: Woohooo…
She enjoys n have fun with kids…
Ahem looks at Gopi screaming…
He goes inside the school n comes to her…
Gopi looks at him!!…
Ahem: Gopi…
Gopi: Yes..
Ahem: Gopi…i am your Ahem!!…
They had an eyelock!!…
Gopi: Sorry but i dont know you…(She actually ignores him)…
She leaves…
Ahem: Gopi wait!!…
Gopi: Dont disturb me…i will call people…
Ahem: Gopi…i know you r angry…pls be calm…
Gopi: Calm…what calm!!…
Ahem: I…
Gopi: Ahem…yes i know you…you was that man naa who left that girl name Gopi!!…
Ahem: Whaatt??…But you r Gopi…
Gopi: I know i am gopi…But not that one whom u’re finding!!…
Ahem: Gopi…
Gopi: Listen Ahem…your Gopi has died waiting for you…i was too present in her cremation!!…
Ahem screams: Nooooo….you r wrong!!…
Gopi: What the hell…i said naa i am not Gopi!!…
Ahem touch Gopi’s feet…
Gopi gets shy…
Gopi: What r u doing…leave me!!…
Ahem screams: I need you Gopi…i am sorry…
Gopi gets angry n slaps him…
Ahem: Gopi…
Gopi shouts: Now u r apologising…what do u think that i am a doll…Ahem i waited 15 years for you…but you…
Ahem cries!!…
Gopi: Why did you??…
She hugs him intensely…
AFTERSOMETIME
Ahem tells her that Anita is her Boss…
As he need an important contract…
He is pretending to be in love with her…
Gopi: But you’re doing wrong!!…
Ahem: I know…but…
Gopi: Okay relax now!!…
Ahem: Gopi…i need you…i want to release your stress…
Gopi in her mind: Ahem i was waiting for so many years for this day!!…
Days passes n they gets close…
NIGHT
SONG:
O ho…
Bheegi bheegi sadkon pe main
Tera intezaar karun
Dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko
Tere hi naam karun
Khudko main yoon kho doon
Ke phir na kabhi paaun
Haule haule zindagi ko
Ab tere hawaale karun
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
O ho…
Tere kareeb jo hone laga hoon
To toote saare bharam re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
O ho…
Ahem n Gopi drinks liquor…
They looks at moon…
Sitting near the lake..
Ahem gets Romantic to Gopi…
He removes her Clothes n kisses her…
Baadalon ki tarah hi toh
Tune mujhpe saaya kiya hai
Baarishon ki tarah hi toh
Tune khushiyon se bhigaya hai
Aandhiyon ki tarah hi toh
Tune hosh ko udaaya hai
Mera muqaddar sanwara hai yoon
Naya savera jo laaya hai tu
Tere sang hi bitaane hain mujhko
Mere saare janam re
Gopi takes a blanket n wores it…
Ahem stands up…
And removes his Shirt…
He goes the blanket n kisses Gopi…
They gets intimate…
Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re (karam re..)
Tera mujhpe karam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re (sanam re..)
Tu mera sanam hua re
O ho…
Mere sanam re mera hua re
Tera karam re mujhpe hua ye (x2)
Alone in the night near the frozen lake…
The moon was shining in the sparkling sky…
They does Se*ual acts…
There shadow is shown in intimacy…
2 WEEKS LATER
Gohem was shown boating in a lake…
Anita is shown in her car…
She comes to visit kashmir…
Anita looks at Gohem in a boat together n gets heartbroken!!…
Anita calls Ahem n meets him…
Ahem: Anita…i am sorry but i dont love you…i made a mistake by leaving Gopi!!…
Anita gets tearry eyed…
Anita: I understood on that day…when u suddenly said i cant be intimate with you…didnt said about Gopi…
Ahem: Umm…Anita…
Anita: Gopi is a good girl…she will keep you happy!!…
She cries n leaves in her car heartbroken!!…
After that day…Anita never returns back to Ahem making him freed…
Gohem gets married!!…
But After a year of there marriage!!…
Gopi gets a heart attack!!…
Ahem takes her to hospital where doctor says him that Gopi has a rare heat disease!!…
Ahem gets shocked…
Doc: She needs a Heart transplant!!…
Ahem: I will give my heart to Gopi!!…
Doc gives him a bond to sign…
Ahem signs the bond…
He n Gopi had an Operation…
After Operation…
Gopi wakes up with Ahem’s heart!!…
She gets shattered hearing that Ahem died by transplanting his heart to herself n taking her disease heart…
Gopi cries!!…
Anita gets to know about Ahem’s Death…
She too gets emotional n looks from Window…
Gopi walks in roads of Kashmir…
Recalling Ahem…
She looks at sky n cries silently…
Gopi sings:
O…
Kuch pal to thehar jaao na
Ya phir laut ke aao na
Yoon kehte nahi alvida
Mud jaao idhar aao na
Tumhe dhoondein meri aankhen
Tumhe khoje meri baahein
Tum bin jiya jaaye kaise
Kaise jiya jaaye tum bin (x2)
Kitne the waade kiye
Ik pal mein tod diye
Jhootha nahi tu mujhko pata hai
Bas thoda rootha sa hai
Tu roothe main manaau
Par tum bin kahan jaaun
Tum bin jiya jaaye kaise
Kaise jiya jaaye tum bin (x2)
Ye aasmaan aur zameen
Bin tere kuch bhi nahi
Saanson se mohlat
Zara maang lena
Yoon uthke jaate nahi
Ya phir tu mujhe le chal
Sang apne jidhar tu chala
Tum bin jiya jaaye kaise
Kaise jiya jaaye tum bin (x2)
Gopi is shown walking on roads emotionally…
Wind blows…
Suddenly snow fall starts…
Heavy snow fall starts n Gopi gets freezed in Snow storm…
She too loses her life!!…
Her body gets covered in the snow!!..
But Gohem’s soul meets each other in heaven…
THE END
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SO GUYS…THIS WAS MY BORING OS…LOL??…..PLS READ N COMMENTS…THANKUU???
14 Comments
Wow…Raina di superb OS….lool.. Have you not watched Sanam re..even I’ve not watched it. ???? Story moved too fast..,First labor drama and accident..all that…an suddenly leap?? Ahema and Gopi been kid scene doing home decorations… And impressing each other??? and coming to teenager…. Love ahem,s promise to Gopi of coming back….don’t feel bad… But kiss in just age if 12… Is it not a little weird? BTW…it was also romantic??…loved Gohem and Anita been adult part lot??? Hats off you to represent Anita in +be role??she suits both roles. Positive+negative.??gohem cosy moments were hot. Love them.????????????????and at the last you do most valuable thing and that’s it..love is no showed physically…its relation of two souls..in which lovers understand each other….love each other. Its tough to define love… Love is a special feeling. ?????loved it alot ????????????❤❤❤????????
Lol Shakaib…Ahem kissed on gopi’s cheeks not lips??…Thnx a lot dear???
Oh then its okay if he kiss on her cheeks. BTW..I’ve also not watched KAL HO NA HO!
Lol
first if all I got excited knowing that its inspired by Sanam re.2nd i’m became so happy that Gopi is Gia here.I really miss GiNa n I was wishing to read GiNa ffs.Recently Kavita fulfilled my wish by writing Ishq with Gia as Gopi.After it got over i was sad that now no more GiNa ffs.but u surprised me with this.Can u tell me how u chose Gia as Gopi in this OS?
Gohem childhood scenes were cute.Anita as Ahem’s boss/gf was surprising.Ahem reading his late grand father’s letter n feeling guilty abt not keeping his promise to gopi was touchy.Ahem meeting gopi again n apologizing was a nice scene.shocking that 4 his benefit he was using Anita.But glad that Anita understood gohem luv n left them in peace.Gohem romance was beautiful.glad that gohem got married.sad that gopi has heart disease.Ahem is so loving that he sacrificed his heart to cure her.very sad.In coldness gopi dying n her body covered in snow n gohem uniting in heaven was touchy.all the song sequences were nice.it was such a beautiful os.i have no words.but i wish it was a SS.bcz os gets over very fast.please write such lovely OS 4 GiNa again.if possible plz write on raIna too
Even I haven’t seen Sanam Re…..Wow Riana amazing os I must say????? u showed a beautiful meaning of true love kudos to u??…Gia as gopi in this OS I was missing her a lot……U should write a fulfled FF or SS on GiNa…..From birth u showed their journey….True love never dies…Soo sweet of ahem he gave his heart to Gopi this only a true lover can do…The song was amazing???gopi too died by due to coldness in show??….
agree.raina should write a full fledged ss or ff on Gina.really missing Gina though once in a while we get Gina offscreen pics
??
On 27th mar…My board exams will be finished…After that i will be free for a long time…That time i will definitely write an SS on Gina…But for that you have it Jas…Thanx a lot?
Thankyou so much.I am over excited now.
can’t wait for Gina ss. is it any movie based ff? because I loved your movie based ffs like ishq wala and sanam re. because you made them more romantic. ..though the essence is there you didn’t copy the movies.
you didn’t reply how you decided to keep gia as gopi in sanam re though in all other ffs devoleena is gopi. waiting for your reply
I haven’t seen sanam re but Gohem story based on sanam re was so beautiful!
Thankuu
Lovely story of two souls together from birth to death and beyond death.???
Thankuu???