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Episode No: 170
Episode Date: 28th October 2016
Scene 1: Malhotra Residence
The episode begins with Shravan, Suman and Ramnath speaking to Ramnath’s client.
Sumo: It was great speaking to you. I should leave now and not interfere in your important talks.
Suman leaves,
Ramnath: Just give me a minute.
Ramnath comes to Suman.
Ramnath: Are you angry with me?
Suman stays silent.
Ramnath: You should be.
Sumo: Uncle, I am not angry with you. I am just upset.
Ramnath: How to explain to you beta? If you were in my place, then maybe you would have understood.
Sumo: Look Uncle, I have no right to interfere between you and your son. But whatever I said yesterday was as the daughter-in-law of this house.
Ramnath: I know what I did years back was wrong. I…I just can’t muster courage to tell Shravan the truth, even if I try.
Suman encourages Ramnath.
Sumo: Uncle, take your time. I totally understand the situation. Don’t worry. I won’t tell Shravan anything as I want you to tell him that.
Ramnath: Thank you beta. Thank you so much for understanding.
Ramnath blesses Suman.
Ramnath: May God bless you and give all the happiness. Wish you a prosperous Diwali.
Suman smile.
Ramnath: God didn’t give me a daughter, but I am very lucky he blessed me you as my daughter in the form of my daughter-in-law. From now on you are my daughter.
Sumo: Uncle. Thank you so much you considered me like your daughter.
Ramnath: No. Not Uncle, call me Dad from now on. I know I can’t take the place of your parents, but you are no less then my daughter.
Sumo: Okay Dad. I am happy that you said such a big thing. It means a lot.
Ramnath smile.
Just then the entire Tiwari family comes,
Sumo: Nanu!
Suman comes to them and takes Nanu’s blessing.
Nanu: How are you beta?
Sumo: I am fine.
Ramnath: Tiwari ji, you came at the right time. We were waiting for you.
Shravan comes there and takes the blessing of Nanu.
Shravan: Happy Diwali, Nanaji!
Nanu: Happy Diwali, Shravan!
Daboo: Happy Diwali, Shravan Jiju!
Shravan: Happy Diwali, Daboo.
Shravan wishes the entire Tiwari family.
Mamiji: Suman beta, where is Preeti?
Preeti comes, and hugs her mom.
Preeti: Mummy!
Sumo: Come with me. Everyone there is some food.
Suman brings everyone for having food.
Kamini and Vandy are walking, Mamiji sees them.
Mamiji: Namaste, Kamini Ji Happy Diwali.
Kamini smiles and comes to them.
Kamini: Happy Diwali!
Mamiji: Happy Diwali, Vandana beta.
Vandy: Aunty, Vandy not Vandana. And Happy Diwali!
Lalaji and Pushkar also come there.
Lalaji: Happy Diwali, Sameer Ji.
Mamaji: Happy Diwali, Lalaji.
Lalaji: Now in this Diwali we got such good news. That we are going to become grand-dad.
Mamaji smiles. Preeti and Pushkar blushes.
Mausaji: Suman beta, is the Puja over?
Sumo: We are going to start the Puja very soon. How can we not start without you?
Mausaji: Thank god, we are not late.
Suman smiles.
Later,
Everyone does Puja for Diwali. Mausaji leads the Puja.
While praying,
Suman looks at Shravan.
Sumo: (In her mind) May my Shravan get all the happiness which is possible when everything between him and his mom gets fine.
Shravan: (in his mind) Please keep my family happy and away from troubles. And make my Sumo get all she wants.
After the puja,
Daboo talks to Suman.
Daboo: Suman didi, now that the Puja is over, let’s go outside and play with crackers.
Sumo: But Daboo,
Daboo holds Suman’s hand and takes her with him.
Scene 2: Outside Malhotra Residence
Here Suman, Daboo with some kids are playing with crackers.
They lit the crackers and enjoy it. Suman helps the kids light up the sparklers/PhoolJhadi. She passes each kid one and she smiles. The kids enjoy them, and Vandy is taking a selfie with a sparkler in her hand.
Shravan is playing with Pushkar, Varun and some guys too. Suman sees this and smiles. She goes there.
Varun: Today, we will light a rocket.
Shravan: Rocket!
Shravan looks surprised.
Pushkar: What Bhaia, even now you are scared with rocket!
Shravan: No, no I am just saying. It’s not good.
Sumo: Let it be Pushkar, he is a coward!
Shravan: I am not scared of anything.
Sumo: Really?
Shravan: Fine, we will light the rocket then, okay Pushkar and Varun.
Pushkar: Are you sure Bhaia?
Shravan: Wait.
Shravan comes.
Shravan: I will light the rocket. Till then inform others especially the kids so that they stay away from it, it’s unsafe.
Pushkar does so, and Shravan and Varun prepare to light up the rocket.
Pushkar: Kids, stay a bit far a rocket is going to be lit.
Daboo: Hey everyone,listen! My Jiju is lighting a rocket.
The kids get excited and they run to Shravan and Varun to see.
Shravan along with Varun lights up the rocket, Suman smiles seeing this and she gets into a flashback.
Flashback,
Scene 3: Tiwari Killa
It’s Diwali time. Teenager Suman and Teenager Shravan are celebrating Diwali together. Shravan comes to Suman’s house with his dad.
Tiwari: Areh, Ramnath finally you came! Happy Diwali.
Ramnath: Happy Diwali, Tiwari Ji.
Shravan smile.
Shravan: Happy Diwali, Nanaji.
Nanu: Happy Diwali, Shravan beta.
Nanu sits with Ramnath and Shravan and they talk with each other.
Suman comes and greets Ramnath.
Sumo: Happy Diwali, Ramnath Uncle.
Ramnath: Happy Diwali, beta.
Nanu: Suman, Shravan was waiting for you.
Shravan smiles as he sees Suman. Suman holds Shravan’s hand.
Sumo: Let’s go Shravan.
Shravan: Where?
Sumo: To play with crackers outside and what else?
Shravan gets afraid.
Shravan: Crackers? But
Ramnath: Yes, yes Shravan go outside with Suman and play.
Suman takes Shravan with her. Shravan unwillingly agrees and they both go outside.
Scene 4: Outside Tiwari Killa
Suman and Shravan come outside. Shravan is afraid. And just then he covers his ear with his hand and panics as he finds cracker lighting.
Shravan: Sumo! Save me!
Sumo: You are such a coward! It’s just cracker idiot!
Shravan: No, no Sumo I can’t take it. I am going back.
Shravan is about to go back inside, Suman holds his hand and doesn’t let himgo.
Sumo: You are such a coward! Keep Quiet and stay here.
Shravan: But Sumo, I am getting scared. I can’t take it.
Some kids come and play crackers in front of him. He gets so scared that he starts crying. Suman understands that he got scared and she gets worried.
Sumo: Shravan, see don’t cry. Okay, okay fine we are going back.
Suman holds Shravan’s hand to bring him back and consoles him by patting his back. Suman finds others enjoying and she feels bad as she isn’t able to play with it, and she looks at them longing to play with crackers, and she gets sad. Shravan realises this and he feels bad.
Shravan: No, no Sumo, it’s fine. We will stay here. You can play with crackers, we will go back later.
Sumo: But you are so scared of crackers, are you sure Shravan?
Shravan: I am sure. I will just see you from the distant. That’s fine with me.
Sumo: Won’t you feel bored?
Shravan: But I will be more bored if I go back.
Sumo: Okay fine. Thank you so much.
Suman gets really happy and runs and plays with others. Shravan smiles and enjoys seeing Suman enjoying. Suman smiles whenever she looks at Shravan, and Shravan assures he is fine here.
Later,
Suman lights a sparkler and she brings it to Shravan. Shravan gets shocked.
Sumo: What is this, Sumo?
Sumo: This is just a sparkler.
Suman makes him hold the sparkler.
Shravan: No, no my hand will burn.
Sumo: Buddhu, nothing will happen to you. I am here.
Suman makes Shravan hold the sparkler forcefully.
Sumo: See, nothing happened.
Shravan: But the fire spark is coming near.
Sumo: Shh! Just turn this.
Suman holds Shravan’s hand and makes him move it round. Shravan smiles and he enjoys it and looks at Suman. The sparkler finishes.
Sumo: See nothing happened.
Shravan: Yes.
Sumo: Okay, we played a lot. Now let’s go.
They go back home together.
Scene 5: Outside Malhotra Residence
Suman gets out of the flashback and smiles.
Suman smiles looking at the rocket flying on the sky that Shravan lit.
Sumo: (in her mind) Shravan, the boy who used to scared with just the noise of the crackers, is now not at all scared to even lit a rocket and successfully make it work. Really time changes a person over time.
Everyone enjoys the view of the rocket. Vandy takes picture of it, and the kids including Daboo claps and cheers as they see the rocket on the sky.
Shravan: See Pushkar, you were calling me coward and now?
Pushkar: Wow Bhaia, I must admit you are indeed very brave now.
Shravan smile.
Shravan looks at Suman and he smiles. He decides to talk to her.
Suman is smiling as she is thining, but she doesn’t realise that her saree pallu fall on the firecrackers which are still lit and due to this her saree pallu catches fire. This catches Shravan’s eyes and he is shocked to see her saree catching fire.
Shravan: Sumo!
Suman listens and she looks behind and she is shocked as she realises her saree caught fire. Suman starts panicking.
Shravan runs to save Suman.
Shravan realises it turns out to be his imagination, and he sees that Suman’s saree pallu is near the fire crackers.
He runs and he holds Suman’s hand and brings her aside. Suman is surprised as she gets out of her thinking.
Shravan: Are you mad!
Sumo: Why what happened?
Shravan: Did you realise, that there were still some firecrackers lighting and your saree pallu was almost falling on that and it would have caught fire.
Suman gets shocked as she realises what Shravan said could have been true. She quickly adjusts her saree pallu.
Shravan: Good I came on time. If not I wondered what would have happened? That’s why. This is the reason why I used to be scared about all crackers.
Music plays. And Suman looks at Shravan, seeing his concern for her.
Shravan realises what he said.
Shravan: Anyways, now enough of playing with crackers. I think we all should go in now.
Shravan goes to tell everyone. Suman looks on.
Sumo: (in her mind) No matter how much you have changed Shravan, but your concern and care was, is and will always be there.
After the Diwali party,
Scene 6: Malhotra Residence
Everyone is at home as the party over.
Kamini: Today the party was so tiring.
Lalaji: Kamini, how can you be tired? Suman beta did all the work and you got tired?
Kamini: So you are trying to say I didn’t do any work? Interacting with the guests, looking at the preparations these are not work? Kuch Bhi Ae Vi.
Lalaji: I was just praising Suman beta and nothing else. See even now she is doing all the after party work. She is so hard-working!
Just then Ramnath comes,
Ramnath: You are right Lala. Suman really worked hard a lot.
Kamini stands up.
Kamini: Ramnath Bhaisaab, you?
Kamini: Yes, I was saying Suman is very hard-working.
Ramnath: All these days I was so worried what will happen to this household, but Suman proved me wrong.
Kamini: (in her mind) From when did Suman became Ramnath Bhaisaab’s favourite?
Ramnath: Since Shravan and Suman are here now I don’t need to worry anymore.
Kamini: (in her mind) What’s happening? I thought Suman will distance this father-son duo but the opposite is happening.
Just then Pushkar and Preeti come. Preeti gestures Pushkar to talk to Ramnath.
Pushkar: Sir, I wanted to ask you something.
Ramnath: What is it?
Pushkar: Since, Shravan and Suman recently got married, I and Preeti have decided, why not we send them on a honeymoon?
Ramnath gets happy.
Ramnath: That’s actually a very good idea. What’s the need of asking?
Pushkar: No, no I thought to ask you once.
Ramnath: Pushkar, Preeti book tickets for Shravan-Suman’s honeymoon this weekend.
Kamini: (in her mind) Now they will go on honeymoon also.
Kamini thinks of something and she gets happy.
Kamini: (in her mind) No, no that’s actually a very good idea. Like this I will get more time to change the situation while Shravan-Suman are away. Wow for the first time, my Pushkar puttar did the right thing.
Kamini smile.
Kamini: Yes, we should send them on honeymoon, Bhaisaab.
Just then Shravan and Suman comes there,
Shravan: Whose honeymoon?
Pushkar: Bhaia, yours and Sumo’s honeymoon and who else?
Suman and Shravan looks at each other surprised. The episode ends.
Precap: Shravan and Suman try to persuade Ramnath so that they don’t go for honeymoon. And Ramnath declares that Shravan and Suman will go on honeymoon and that’s finalised. Shravan and Suman looks at each other shocked.
Hey all, thank you so much supporting my ff throughout and I love the fact, you all are enjoying my ff a lot. And I have a very very good news to share and that is finally that I got a job and I will be starting job from Monday. And as for my ff, as I said earlier on I write some of the episodes earlier now, and I will continue writing in weekends and my leave days and of course whenever I am free. This ff have become my habit now. Thank u so much everyone ?. And no worries, I will still as per normal Monday-Friday. And if I made any mistakes in my ff, so sorry for that and you can always feel free to point that out. Thank you so much for those who pointed it out ?. And yeah there have been some readers who are requesting me to include certain track in my ff, well I would love to tell that I would include those tracks too but I may take time, maybe after 2-3 weeks episode since I write the episodes in advance so far I wrote 4-5 episodes in advance ?. But you all will get the track the ones those requested in my ff too so no worries but may take some time ?. So sorry for that ?. And as for the honeymoon track, will talk more about it in the promo that I will post this Sunday. Thank you so much once again for supporting and encouraging me ?. Love u all ??? For those who were asking for treat, the promo is the treat ???
18 Comments
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Loved it very much..u r sooo good writer..
Keep writing..
Yaa i will wait for promo?????
Love u
Post soon
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Hey Pri thanks for commenting happy u liked it ? And thanks for the wishes ? Thank so much for encouraging ???me that’s really very very sweet ???
Love u too ??? will post the promo tomorrow ? And hope u enjoyed ur day at school today ?
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Hey ishu thanks for commenting happy u liked it ? Areh koyi Baath nahi hain i understand u r busy oh Toh tume chocolate chaye yeh Raha chocolate ???Loh ab mauj me Khau love u too ??? will post the promo tomorrow ? Abhi Ke liye chocolate Khau
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Meher.
Hey meher thanks for commenting happy u liked it ? Yes there is an honeymoon track upcoming for Shraman ? And well u comment yeh hi kaafi hain ??? Thank u so much for encouraging me ? Love u too ???
Damn amazing !!!
Superb !!
Ramu sudhar gaya lagta he !!!
Honeymoon !!! Exited about it !!
Congo for ur JOB. Promo se nhi chalega…treat to dena hi parega !!
Love ya
Hey Diya thanks for commenting happy u liked it ? Yes right ramu kaka sudar gaya ? And yes a very interesting honeymoon track is upcoming which hopefully u all will like it ? And treat YEH Loh tumhara liye bhi chocolates ?????? beas Ke Saath share karna math bhulna ? love u too ???
Hey fatarajo..
Sorry for a bit late comment..
I was giving my board exam!?
Anyway..
The episode was so packed with emotions and memories..
Loved it..
Love you loads..
Huh.. I will have to wait till Monday!
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Take care..
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Hey WS thanks for commenting happy u liked it ? And Areh na na its fine and yeah wish u all the best for ur upcoming exams ur Mujhe Pata hain tumne paper phar Diya hoga ??? and happy u liked the epi umm… no not Monday, tomorrow i will upload but not episode a promo and for episode yes must wait for Monday ? Love u ???
Memories ♥
I seriously loved it.. hopefully Ramnath achha hoyega. I want him to do something! And specially, the precap ♡♥
HoneyMoonn..♥ and congo for the job..! Parttyy chahiye! Love you loads!
And its not a late comment. I commented twice, but TU never postdd! Anyways love ya and congratulations once again!
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Hey nishita thanks for commenting happy u liked the epi ? Ya Ramnath will turn positive ? And happy u liked the precap and yeah u can know more when i upload the promo soon ? Haha yeh Loh party ??? oh Ho it’s totally fine tumhara galti nahi hain ? Love u too ??? thanks for the wishes ???
Loved it to the core of the heart.
After all expert is involved in this holy work:):):) to entertaining us.
Pls never end this ff , if u end na then i don’t know about others but i will surely die….u have to write infinite u have to make your ff like YRKKH which is mine favourite….u also write 2300+ episodes…..hahaahah…kuch jyada hi ho gaya….
Love u dear
Hey fenil thanks for commenting happy u liked the epi a lot ??? Areh main aur expert ??? areh itna taarif maath karo ? And well for now i will say when i feel i have to end this ff i will end it for now I don’t feel like ending it so enjoy the episodes for now ??? and Areh aise maath kaho this ff have to end one day na ? But there is still time for that for now enjoy ?????2300 episodes by then i will get graduated ???? and maybe married ?????? itna nahi Ho payega yes its possible to write 2300 episode unless each episode consists of one sentence ?
Love u too ???
hahahah…one line in each episode very funny…are aap par dadi ban jaye toh bhi kya aap likhte raho hum padhte rahenge….