Hi everyone.Thank u again for your supports.Iam overwhelmed by your comments and I had to say it became an inspiration to write the last part.So without wasting time here is the second and last shot.This shot is very long so I hope u wont get bored
Krishna:Good morning maa
Suhani:Good moning Krishna.Krishna I just came here to inform u that today there will be a puja in our house.So You get ready faster because you and saiyam are going to conduct this puja because it is for both of you only.
Krishna:but why maa?? I dnt think it will be nice because yuvaan and Baby also here right.(Guys in my shot Baby is good n yuvaan and baby are good and loving couple.)
Suhani:I know but they are settled in their life I want you both to be happy also that’s why so don’t argue and go amd arrange for puja.Ok my sweet baby.Saiyam you also help Krishna because there’s a lot of work to do.We all are going out to my mother’s house only Yuvaani will be here but dnt worry we will come before 5pm n puja will start only at 7pm.
Saying this Suhani left the place.Krishna turned back when Saiyam wanted to get out of the room.They both hit each other and there was a eyelock moments.Both of them looked like they were earning for each other’s love.Suddenly Yuvaani’s voice made them come out from their world.
Yuvaani:Guys get ready faster,We got a lot work to do!!
Kriyam:Ok yuvaani(both of them say together)They felt awkward and Saiyam left from that scene.
Soon both of them were in puja room to get ready the flower decorations.Krishna was hanging some flowers and saiyam was holding the ladder for her.Suddenly Yuvaani called him up to carry a table for the puja.Saiyam went to help Yuvaani.When he went Krishna was trying to hang the folwer but it didn’t reach so she was standing on her toe and lose her balance.In a nick of time Saiyam rushed to the scene and saved her from getting any fracture.Krishna just hugged Saiyam tightly not letting him to move.Yuvaani saw that and left them alone and went out to the garden.Kriyam was in that for a couple of minutes and break out realising the posture.Krishna thanked saiyam and saiyam gave out a smile.Soon the trio managed to finish the arrangement and the family also came at the right time.
Kriyam’s bedroom:
Krishna was trying to tie her sari but she could not do it.Saiyam saw it and came near her.
Saiyam:What Krishna can’t you tie this sari also by your own.Do I have to tie for you everytime.
Krishna:Why not you are my husband right there is no problem with that!!!(she blurted out)She realised what she said and mentally slapped her.Saiyam was overwhelmed by her words.
Saiyam:Ok I will tie for you but this will the last time,Understand???
Krishna:Yes captain!!!!(in mischevious tone)
Saiyam smiled at her behaviour and began to tie the sari for her.Everytime when saiyam’s hand touch Krishna, both of them felt a current pass through and obviously Krishna was enjoying it.Soon both of them get ready for puja and attended the puja.Suhani was happy to see both of them walking together.The puja started and went well.After the puja finish Saiyam went to garden to attend the call.The priest told the birlas to fill up their respective wife’s maang with sindoor.So Krishna also went to search for saiyam.The other family members went outside to fly the chinese lantern as always Suhani and Yuvraaj will do.
Krishna found Saiyam in the garden and when towards him.
Krishna:Saiyam! Saiyam!(Saiyam turned and saw Krishna coming.He disconnect the call)Saiyam The priest asked the husband to fill up wife’s maang so will you do it??
Saiyam:What is this Krishna?You know we are doing this for the sake of my mom.This relationship is just a mistake made by me and ended up ruining your life.(The next second Saiyam was slapped hard by Krishna)
Krishna:What did u say??? Am I a mistake in your life?? I don’t matter to u at all am I right??(tears stared to flow out from her eyes.she was crying hard)Why this always happen to me when I love someone they either left me or does not reciprocate it??Why can’t u just understand Saiyam?? I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!! I…… LOVE……… YOU…… but I don’t think you don’t love me.I thought after our morning kiss u will confess to me but u didn’t instead you gave me this gift.I was having high hopes for our relationship even thought about our kids but you are still stucking in the first level.You had broke my heart Saiyamm!!!!(Saying this Krishna ran to their room)
Saiyam was still in shock hearing those words from Krishna.After a couple of minutes he regain from the shock and started running to their room.When he went to their room,the room was in total mess the sari which saiyam tied to Krishna was on the floor.Krishna was sitting on the corner of the holding her head.Krishna saw him shouted at him but Saiyam went near her and started to kiss her.At first Krishna was shocked but soon she also joined him.After some minute they break from the kiss.
Saiyam: I love you Krishna!! I love u!!! It is just I did not have the courage to tell u but now I had too my sweet wife..When you ran way from me at first I was in shock but later fear started to engulf me.I don’t want to lose you.Anyway you are looking so hot my Darling…………..
Krishna was blushing hard.She extended her hand holding the sindoor box telling him to fill her maang.Saiyam filled her maang and hugged her tightly.Saiyam carried her to their bed.Saiyam looked at her as he was seeking for her permission.Krishna blushed hard and hide her face with her hands.Saiyam understood it and switched of the lights.They get intimate.
They lived happily ever after………..
That’s all from me thank u for reading!!
26 Comments
Cool one .. love it…
thank u
Great story. Fantabulous ending to an immensely romaticised story. Its too good to be described through words. Its just a lovely fantastic story which is a treat to readers.
Please continue to write fidato. You will make an excellent writer.
God bless and love you loads.
Will wait for more such stories from you. Please think about writing more such stories.
Anyways this was superb. Looking forward to hearing from you or rather waiting for a further example of your innate writing skills.
I am really sorry nainika. My first comment got all messed up. I meant nainika up there.
Immensely guilty.
Please dont take it to heart dear.
Continue writing and stay happy and healthy always.
God bless.
It’s ok thank u for your appreciation!!
Nice one …. Please come up a new story…
Thank u…I will try
beautiful end and awesome shot
hope to see you again very soon with new one
Thank u
I just loved it Nainika. Plz come up with a new ff….
Thank u….I will try to come up wit new story
Nice… Superb episode… U can come up with another story…. Hope to see u again with such story….
Thank u for your support!!!
Superb story..U’re a great writer.. Lovely
Loved it
hope to see u again
Thank u Fenil
Thank u so much Aarti
Really nice….want more writings from u…u r really awesome….
Thank u..I will try to write again
So goooddd?
Thank u ❤
Cool episode.
Thank u Asia❤❤
Loved it!! Plz try to write ff…keep writing 🙂
Thank u..I will try to write again..❤❤