Hey..i’m prachi..its my first os.. I’m currently writing a swasan short story Dil Mil Gaye. Only the prologue is posted now. First part tomorrow.Here is the link:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/dil-mil-gaye-swasan-short-story-prologue/
Do share your views! Do tell how was the os, i wrote it in a hurry and its a short one! Do comment and follow me on wattpad also. My ID is @prachithaman
Introduction:-
Swara :- A bubbly girl..working as a fashion designer..
Sanskar:- A handsome, cool dude..swara’s best friend..
So lets start..!!
Swara and sanskar were best friends from childhood… they were neighbours and studied in the same school..They shared each and every thing..they were just inseparable..but today they both were crying..
Swara: Please sanskar don’t go
Sanskar: But swara i can’t do anything..plz stop crying..i can’t see you like this..dad has decided that we have to shift to USA.. i tried a lot to stop him but he is abundant..
Swara gave him a locket and told him to keep it with himself until they met again..
It was time for Sanskar to leave but swara didn’t come to bid him bye too..she had locked herself in her room..Sanskar left for USA with his family..
From the day Sanskar left, swara’s soul also left her..she was not the same bubbly swara who used to talk a lot was now a serious one..
Although swara never expressed but she loved sanskar to the core and she didn’t know that she will be able to see him again or not..
After 3 years
Swara who was all sad and pale these 3 years was now so happy that she couldn’t even express.
She was working as a fashion designer and now she had got an assignment which she has to complete in USA.
She was so happy with the thought that she would be able to see sanskar again..although they were in contact for the 1st year he had gone but after that there was no sign of him after that..
San Francisco, USA
Swara came out of the airport and inhaled the fresh air. She felt it so soothing.
Swara was in the taxi going to the hotel where she would be staying for the next 2 weeks. She had also hired a car that she could travel on her own..
Swara was driving the car when someone dashed her car from the right side..
Swara: (shocked) What the hell! Who is the idiot who doesn’t even know how to drive!
She came out of the car and was shocked to the core…she saw her life, her sanskar standing there facing his back towards her.She saw his face again in the window of hus car to confirm that she was not imagining him.
But a shock awaited her.. a girl came out from the car and hugged sanskar tightly..
Swara :(in mind) Has he moved on? And who is the girl who is sticking to him so much!
As she was fuming in anger and jealousy..she even didn’t realise that sanskar left from there without even asking a sorry and noticing her..
Swara: How rude! But i have to find the identity of this girl.
Swara hired a detective which told her the address of sanskar.
Next day she went there and rang the bell..a servant came and swara told him that she wants to meet sanskar..
While swara was waiting outside sanskar came and he was so shocked to see her there that he stood numb.
Swara: (holding him from the collar) What do you thing Mr. Maheshwari that you will not call me and you will be free? And who was the girl with you today ha? You know how much i missed you and here you have moved on..so bad sanskar you don’t even miss me!
By now she was all teary eyed and started beating him on the chest..sanskar held her hands and pulled her towards him!
Sanskar: You think i didn’t miss you? I missed you like hell swara! Day and night i was craving for you and the girl whom you saw today was my neighbour and i was just dropping her home! She is kind of friendly that’s why she hugged me..and what are you doing here?
Swara: I can’t come here!?
Sanskar: No its nothing like that but its kind of a surprise..
Swara: Actually I had some work here..and y did you stop calling me?
Sanskar: Actually i got too much busy in work and the circumstances were like that..my phn broke..and no back up..(interrupted)
Swara: Ok ok stop you excuses..
Sanskar: We were coming to India next week..
Swara: It means i wasted my time..huh
Sanskar : Yes madam and now for 1 week you are going to stay here and we all will go back india together..
Swara : Ok bcha..
Sanskar: Bcha? Seriously swara..
Swara: (Pulling his cheeks) Yes you are my sweet sa golu molu bcha ..haha..you are so cute sanskar!
Sanskar:( pulling her closer and in a husky voice) Swara m not cute ok..call me handsome,smart but not cute..
Swara was just lost in his eyes..
Sanskar shaked and then she came to senses..
After 1 week they came back to india..
Gadodia and maheshwari family both were so happy to meet each other again after 3 years!
They knew that swasan loved each other but were hesitating to express..!!
Swara was now planning to propose sanskar..she knew that he loved her and now she wanted to confess in a grand way!
Swasan were chatting with each other..
Swara : Sanskar come to the terrace now.
Sanskar : why?
Swara : If you wont come in the next five minutes, i will never talk to you!
Sanskar: Ok jhansi ki rani, m coming..
As sanskar reached there he saw nothing there and the whole area was covered with darkness..
Sanskar: Swara? Where are you swara?
Suddenly the lights were on and he was dumbstruck!
The whole terrace was decorated with red and white balloons and swara standing in the middle wearing a red gown and sanskar was just lost seeing her..!!
The whole terrace was shimmering with lights and there candles lighted on the corner. (Sorry i m not good in these decoration things..sorry)
Swara came forward and bended on her knees.
Swara : Sanskar you must be shocked seeing this but i want to tell you what you mean to me…you are my life sanskar! When you were not here, the days seemed to be years..you are my day and night sanskar! I don’t know you feel the same or not but my life is incomplete without you! I love you sanskar..!! I love you to the core and i cant live without you..!!
Sanskar was shocked listening her confession!
Sanskar : Get up swara..what was the need of doing all this?
Swara: but ..
Sanskar: shh now i will speak..you know Swara I missed you so much when you were not with me in USA.. the days were just not passing without you.. I was just waiting for the day when I woulb be able to see you again..i love u too swara and i cant live without u! You are my life and it is nothing without you..!!
Swara hugged him at once..
Swara : ( while hugging him) I will love u till eternity..
Sanskar đ hugging her back) me too..never leave me alone
Sanskar tightened the hug and they remained like that only..
Sanskar broke the hug and looked at her lips and swara noticed this..without wasting any time she captured his lips in hers and they kissed passionately..
They lived a happy life after that..
THE END
33 Comments
Waaaa Cute cute heavenly SwaSan n their infinite love makes them more beautiful.! loved it dear.! Their love is indeed infinite.!
Have you uploaded this on FB or IF also? coz i have read it somewhere n couldn’t stop myself from reading again.!
Thnk u. ;-*
Thank you so much for the appreciations..it means a lot? Ya actually it was posted in Fb..do read my new ss!! I never thought you would like it that much..!!?
Kaku can u plz tell me which is this scene on our cover pic,
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Hey Prachi! I saw your id on Wattpad also! Keep it up with the voting! I’ll be joining y’all again soon as Ish_Aar in the voting section! And yea, amazingly cute piece of work!
Thanks? Join soonâșBy the way, whom are you going to make win the fan fictions category..?? Hehe..a tough competition is going on there..!!
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