What happens when one drunken ni8 Swara looses herself and her virginity to a complete stranger.. and later finding out that he is non other than her supposed to be STEP BROTHER SAnskar Maheshwari… what happens between the two trying to accept their new relations along with their s*xual tension..
Is it only lust OR love?
And even if it is LoVE ❤️ what will happen?
How would they try to even the odds between them?
Will they be together or will destiny separate them??
Sorry guys I know am very late..
I had a fracture n then my exams but now I am free n continuing all my pending works together.. I have scheduled by updates
Monday- HIS MISTRESS
Tuesday- Ek Tarfa Pyaar
Wednesday- His Hot Wife
Thursday- IVANOV TWINS ( my sister has agreeed to update on this day)
Frinday- He Is My StEP Brother…
while for philanderer I am most probably discontinuing it due to some issues…
Would lyk to know your views on this story and whether I should start it or not bcoz this is a kind of exploting relations.. Depending on your response I would decide whether to write it or not so plzz share your views….
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Happy to see u back
Waiting for his mistress
Yaar I was waiting for you for so long so nice to see you. yup i am loving it so so much do continue
After a long time
Concept is nyc dear
The hell?!?!!? Sorry but I cannot accept this concept, that too about swasan.. never ever, nuh uh *shakes head vigorously*!!!
I don’t now what to say about this concept well if u want to write on this concept then make them cousins or different parents childrens and there parents merry
step bro sis are of different parents na. if they have one parent common then they are half sis or bro and that would be incest. I hope they are not related here anyway other than that their parents are getting married.
There parents are different.. I would never make them first siblings..
Sorry but this concept points finger on the pure relationship of brother and sister…. Even if they are step……. A brother protects his sister’s dignity…… Not destroy it…..
It looks really interesting…. Plz continue…
Awesome start….
Waiting for ur other ffs
the concept is ok bt be careful with ur storyline.
yahan galat smjhte time nhi lgta
You said correct she should be careful about her story bcz it’s on our heavenly SwaSan rit? We won’t tolerate any kind of disrespect towards them.*hug. i support you.
“Yaha galat samajhte time nehi lagta”. Yups here people have knowledge n they can recognize what is wrong & Rit instantly.! So if something is wrong they don’t take much time to rise their voice against that PARTICULAR wrong thing.
That y m proud of those people..!!
You are also na Xyz? I know you are..!!
Sry i interrupted you but couldn’t stop myself from conveying my sentiments..!! 😀
update soon
PllZzz… I don’t support this concept.. There is a pure relationship in brother n sister.. Plz dont destroy it.. I request you…
Poota, nice to see you after a long time.!
ok,lemme come to your ff now,
1.FF name -SwaSan,He is my step brother(The name itself giving me a WRONG VIVE, I can’t accept the tittle acc to your story line. Sry for that), Actually i never Want anyone to point out at our SwaSan.But through this tittle, hmm what to say.? hope you understand,.
2.I don’t want to say much as u have used SUPPOSED to be siblings. It means nothing is fixed.it’s just a prologue, soo m waiting for your next part.
3.They have different parents.that’s a plus point,,, Everything is okk EXCEPT the tittle. I know it’s upto you whatever u want to keep it. but it’s not at all acceptable for me.
SwaSan are purely heavenly. Me or any SwaSan fans won’t tolerate any kind of insensitive step towards them,
BCZ THEY ARE OUR SWASAN. as a SwaSan fan u must know that,,Hope u got my point,
Okk m stopping myself here..waiting for next part.Continue soon! Thnk u. !! ;-*
Superb waiting but brother I can’t accept it
Hey Dear…
I really Don’t Wanna hurt You…But the Title Gosh it hurts me a lot. .Look Dear , we all know you are an Excellent writer no one is pointing on your Talent.. but we are just a little disappointed especially me as you Use the Title “Step Brother” and took it To Lust or Love (no that of sibling)..Dear when we refer Some one as Siblings …i.e BROTHER AND SISTER.. we can’t join them in any other relation that could Insult or Degrade the Pure Bond of a Brother and sister Be them Step or Anything else…Here You mentions that a Brother I am not taking the word Step..A brother took the Virginity of his Sister..That’s sound something Uneven. .Sorry dear I myself can’t accept it..I don’t know about others…I know it’s Your Will you write anything but I thought it my duty to alarm you…
I am saying this Bcz you use SwaSan for this Role.. If you would have taken Any other couple I would have said the same…
I hope I ddint hurt you…
Sorry Again..
N thank you for your other Master pieces on SwaSan..
Nice
I know guyzz it’s quite exploiting but as I have mentioned he is supposed to be her step brother not sure ?.. n secondly they have separate parents
I totally understand… Plus it’s nothing as scandalous as people r making it sound…lol as you pointed out he is just supposed step brother so it’s not incest besides they didn’t know each other either as per the promo so it’s not that they r breaking some pure relationship or anything.
I think you should go for it if u think you can pull it off.
The one who wants to read will read else they can avoid to….
All the best. 🙂
Hey dear… sounds different …
Is this adapted from Clifton chronicles by Jeffrey Archer….
Harry and Emma story…
Jst a guess… continue soon
It’s long time yaar……
Waiting for HM ……plzzz change the plot…make SwaSan other relationship…..
Sorry to say but I don’t think the concept is going to work. It’s just horrible. It’s seems like putting barrier between brother and sister relationships. I rhink the title of your story could change but it’s all Upto you because it’s your story and your writing so you decide. I just gave my opinion that’s all . You are great writer I must say.
hi poota!
first of all the title is a little awkard, i would say!
then coming to the story line, brother, sister, lovers!!!!??? don’t you think this is kinda not insulting a bro-sis relation????
i know nothing about your story, i am just telling this by reading the title and the intro you have given! i may be wrong and sorry if i am!!
even you are a swasan fan!! so, i trust you, but be careful…because this is a very sensitive story!!
all the best for your story and one more thing!!
i will be very very happy if you prove me wrong!!
Poota dear… 😀 :D, you know what once i know this title..
the first thing snapped in mind was… INCEST omg!!!
sometime title is very meaningful for story….
i wish you can change the title as no matter what the story, it’s kinda insulted the relationship of sibling.
but the concept is nice one, that our Swasan didn’t know that they both united as sibling by their parent marriage, maybe they never met each other as their parent marriage when they adult already.
and about the s*x case, well maybe it can be a lesson that alcohol is the MOST STUPID thing in this world which can lead us to the worst thing..
I feel awkward about this title dear. Sorry to hurt you dear, bt i told you only what i felt.
But poota, dear plz update your other stories. I’m eagerly waiting for them.
Is it based on the story c
“never kiss a stranger”?
Dun knw wat to say aftr reading d title…
Lets c how wil u pull dis off..
Will w8 for 1-2 chppied dan dcde whetr to read it or not
Eww..sorry after reading.. my expression is that..seriously how can we spoil a pure relation of bro-sis..so sorry if i hurt u..but it hurted me