Dream scenes of Kriyam
Actually this one not in ssel… they always shows us that sayyam is working on laptop , calls from clients, meeting at club..etc.. so this one is about his professional life..in my pov..don’t worry Krishna is also a part.. what if sayyam has to attend a party throwing by his client.. let’s say client name is Mr. Goenka.
Scene 1
Sayyam is on phone..
Sayyam : I am glad you like my proposal..and I’m looking forward..
Mr. Goenka : yeah..sure… actually we are throwing a party tonight..if u can join then we will discuss deal and make it final..
Sayyam : of course…
But then he heard a lady voice …
Lady : hello Mr. Sayyam.. I’m Mrs. Goenka.. I really wanna invite you to our party.. and I will be more glad if you come with your beautiful wife…OK..
Sayyam thinks what to say….how can I take Krishna…no no way…sayyam..just said no .. otherwise problem will get big..
Sayyam : sorry Mrs. Goenka..
Mrs. Goenka : (cuts him) no more excuses.. Mr sayyam..you will bring your wife.. that’s final… (cut the call).
Sayyam thinks what to do…?? Kahan fazz gaya mein.. Krishna se kaise poochun..? Just then Krishna entered into the room.. she looked at him and thinks..he seems to be tension..what happened to him..???
Both at a time..
Krishna : tum ..
Sayyam : tum..
Both paused and looked at each other…
Sayyam : tum bathao..
Krishna : nahi tum bathao..
Sayyam : bathao kya pooch rahi thi..?
Krishna : wo kuch nahi…tumhe dekhe kuch tension mein lag rahi thi isiliye… tum teek ho..??
Sayyam : (surprised.. how is she understands me without saying a word) wo kuch nahi.. I’m OK..
Krishna : OK..
She Turn around and started fold her clothes.. sayyam again lost in thoughts..kya karoo..this is a big opportunity…can’t let it go.. he again looked at Krishna.. wo mana kar diya tho… she is busy in folding.. sayyam think man…think… then something strike him…
Sayyam : Krishna tumhe aaj shaam ko koi plan hai..ya free ho..??
Krishna : (stopped her work..looked at him in surprise) kya huwa tumhe…tum teek tho hain na..?
Sayyam : I mean…if u want to go for an outing with me..then (looked at Krishna checking her expression)
Krishna jumps from sofa..and come towards him.. sayyam gulps..and move backward.. Krishna come near him and place her hand on sayyaam’s forehead..
Krishna : are you OK.. tabeer teek hai.. koi Bukhar tho nahi..??
Sayyam : (first shocked then in angry tone) Shut up..tum aa rahi hai ya nahi..?
Krishna : (smiles playfully) nahi…
Sayyam : what…the..( then changed his tone) please Krishna..
Krishna : saaf saaf bathao bath kya hai..??
Sayyam : wo actually.. my client Mr and Mrs. Goenka throwing a party and they insist that I will bring you to their party…(he said in one breath and looked at her)
Krishna : oh..toh yeh baat hai… pehle kyun nahi bathaya..aise ghuma phira ke bolna zaroori hai kya…??
Thinks… pehle baar mujhse kuch maang raha hai..kaise mana karoo…no no he will feel bad…par tumhe kya…?? Mujhe kyun faraq pad raha hai..
Sayyam : (breaks her thoughts) please come na..??
She couldn’t refuse him..and said OK..
Sayyam : OK be ready at 7 sharp..
Scene 2
Krishna got ready and waiting for sayyam.. she already took permission from elders.. she looks elegant in that pink party wear..and matching jewelries..simple yet beautiful…by nature.. Yuvani also helped her..
Sayyam is also looks handsome as always with black suit..with pink tie( I really dunno this combination but pink is my favorite color so..) sayyam came and looked at Krishna.. she turn towards him…he paused for a moment….then realize what is he doing…
Sayyam : chale…
Krishna nods..and bid bye to everyone.. Yuvani ,suhani everyone smiled happily..by looking at them..going out for the first time.. Kriyam sat inside the car and drove to the party place..
Precap : it’s party time.. Kriyam dance..lot more…
Actually it’s become lengthy..so I thought to cuts into two…I hope u guys don’t mine.. I will update asap.. please do comment and give me suggestions to make it good to best..
11 Comments
Gajaaaaab!!!
episode
eagrly wating 4 next…
plzplzplzplz….Please..
try to post soon..
take care…
Woow.. Nice.. Waiting for the next episode… Keep posting..
Nice dear
Waiting for next episode…
Its a beautiful description of the lovely kriyam. Nice story and really new and good concept.
Please write more fidato. Update soon if possible.
The dialogues and scene depictions were intensely realistic and superb.
Thank you kudrat, shaani,dwidha n shivani … I’m working on it…will update soon…
Awesome one..Unique idea..Part two soon plzz..
So good???
Amazing epi gal…keep writing..update ASAP …I loved the part when krishna asked him whether he had fever…
Awesome
Loved it……. Can’t wait.