PART 4
Hello everyone… I don’t know if anyone missed me but I missed u all. I was a little busy and could not get time to write.
So seeing the response for the previous parts I feel that I am atleast performing better than what Congress did in UP … ( Ny Congressian out here ?? It’s just for fun to dil pe mat lena).
Another thing, I feel that IshJoy became more popular than Devakshi & many of you would want to see them often but the story isn’t about them. Writing too much about them will not be good for my nanhi si jaan because too much of Ishwari can harm your digestion & give u constipated looks like hers. Still seeing the APAR SAFLTA OF ISHU & HER BIJU they will keep on poping in between. Hope you will like the story further & continue loving it & keep commenting
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It was midnight & Sona had gone to the kitchen to drink water when she noticed that the light of Asha’s room was still on.
Sona : Maa .. You’re still up?
Asha : Sona .. aao na .. I’m just filling up some forms there are some vacancies of a teacher’s job out I’m filling them. You’ve finished your studies?
Sona: You’re interview today didn’t work out ?
Asha: No… but you don’t worry. I’ll get a job somewhere
Sona: Why don’t you continue writing that book. You’ll get famous and that is your passion why don’t you follow it?
Asha: Beggars can’t be choosers. Your Masi & Mesho have done a lot for us. Had it not been for them do you think we would be out of that hell? Sona .. I agreed to take help from them because I had no other way to get us out of that house. When your father was alive things were different but now we may be living in a good house, you are going to the best school of Delhi but I have not earned it … Sona…. Sona are you listening?
Sona was lost in her thoughts. Her face turned pale. She was trying to fight tears that were coming in her eyes while her mind was running scenes from her past.
FLASHBACK
Asha: Sona … stay her … I’ll just come back…
Sona was hiding under a table from where she could hear violent noises. Smashing of chairs, people shouting. For once, she felt that she heard Asha cry in pain but she was told not to stir and she lay there hiding. For how long she didn’t knew. In all the voices she could here she only understood one thing & that was Asha saying “Why are you doing this? If you can’t spare me spare my Sona atleast.. for God’s sake … She is your own blood.”
The next thing that Sona remembers is a loud scream … She heard Asha shout.
Sona remembered the moisture in her eyes then & she could still feel that same moisture coming back in her eyes.
Asha sensed what Sona was going through & she shook her to bring her back to the present
Asha: Sona … Sona I’m sorry baccha … I didn’t want to disturb you. Sona please snap out of it….
Sona: It’s ok maa … I’m very brave … I can fight
Asha: You don’t have to I won’t let you face it again. Accha now wipe your tears….. Coffee ?
Asha & Sona are next seen in the kitchen where Asha is making coffee and Sona is sitting on the slab
Asha: Here take your coffee
Sona drank her cold coffee but the cream of the coffee was a naughty mood & it made a moustache on her face. Asha laughed heartily at the site and seeing Asha laugh Sona’s fears vanished. I had read somewhere that first love is true because you love your mom since the time you saw her. Sona & Asha completely proved it. Asha is not just Sona’s mom but a friend, confidant. Sona & Asha’s world start & end at each other.
Asha: So how’s school ?
Sona: White
Asha : & the bus?
Sona: Yellow & there is a dirty fellow in it too
Asha: Teachers?
Sona: Fab
Asha: Made new friends?
Sona felt like telling Asha that no talked to her except Jatin and those two girls in the bus but decided against it.
Sona: There is no one of my standard
Asha: Why do you take so much time in making friends Sona. If no one speaks to you speak to them you take the initiative
Sona: How do you know?
Asha: I am your mom … I’ve kept u inside me for 9 months
Sona: Correction 7.5 months & don’t start with those cliché dialogues again
Asha: Mai cliché ho gyi ( I am cliché for you now)
Sona: Na na you are the youngest elderly person I know..
& saying so Sona ran towards her room. Asha chased her but Sona closed the door.
Sona( from the other side) : I love you Asha
Asha : Love you too meri amma.. Now continue with your studies.
Sona turned to her father’s portrait “Dekha Papa, Your Sona will never let your Asha cry.”
Sona took out her Maths book from her bag,picked her phone and inserted her ear phones. She switched on the radio
91.1: Dukhi man mere…. Sun mera kehna .. (Boring)
92.7: Shola jo bharke dil mera dhadke
Dard jawani ka sataye badh badh ke
93.5
Sona immediately recognized the tune & let the music do the magic
Pal do pal ki kyu hai zindagi
Iss pyaar ko hai
Sadia kaafi nahi
To khuda se maang lu
Mohlat fir ek nayi
Rehna hai bas yaha
Ab door tumse jana nahi
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Sona’s POV- God knows if I will ever get my humdard
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Thanks for reading
Next few episodes will purely be Devakshi based so stay tune
& don’t forget to comment
25 Comments
Awesome plzz post some devakshi scenes
You’ll see Devakshi bonding in the next episodes
So stay tuned
Thnks
wow asha is cool here too
it is fab and mass ever and that bus is yellow and there is a dirty fellow
that is dev ohh sry Mr.KKS right???
it is really nice
and to mention i really missed u and ur ff dear….
and don’t make me to long for the next
post soon asap
loads of love…
They took a lot of time to post the next part
Yeah !!She was talking about Mr KKS ….
????
Thanks for missing me
I’ve submitted the next part
Now it’ll get posted when TU decides
ohh i am waiting dear…
how much time will it take i was often checking for the next part…
ohh why did they make this much late??
Haan Sahi kaha Ishwari banate liye bahut haanikarak hai???
And this was so cute??
Post soon
Love?
But ishwari bahut ziddi hai 3-4 episode me wapas aa jayegi
Thanks
Keep on reading
Nice post soon waiting for next part this one was bit short
Thanks
Next one is long
awesome. post soon and a long one…
Thanks Ritika
Where were u ?
Kafi time se aayi nahi TU pe
Next one is long
Awsome post soon dear and ya I really missed ur ff
Thanks
I’ve submitted it
Let’s see when TU posts it
Asha is very sportiv every where i like her alot..nice episode plz post next soon
Thanks
Asha is awesome
I love her character
Just a mirror image of my mom
Awesomeee dr..post nxt epi asap
Thanks Priya!!
Next one is on its way
Ekdam mst…Hai Asha..My Fav..she’s so…Coooool..??
Chahe koi bhi gandi situation ho but she never grumbles…I luv that kinda person..u no wat…jb mai ise pdti hoon i feel like its sona in Asha’s place & Soha in Sona’s…like ki KRPKAB ke future episodes hain….Vo line mst tha”Yellow with a dirty fellow”
But i cudn’t understand why sona said the ‘School is white’ can u explain…?
And sahi me Ishwari had se zyada sehat ke liye achhi ni…”Mate swhat ke loue tu to HANIKARAK hai…” ??
Otherwise CONSTIPATED face go jayega????…….??
Anyways nyc episode….liked it?
Post next soon…
School is white because its walls are painted white from outside … I mentioned that in the first episode
Asha in Sona’s place & Sona in Soha’s place
hmmmm
Quite probable
Thanks & continue reading
*Sehat ke liye..not swhat ke loue..
Sorry for the wwaayyyyyyyy late comment…
It was awesome…such heavenly bonding between asha maa and sona….i guess every mother-daughter duo share the same bond…(though ishwari dixit in KRPKAB is an exception?)
You wrote it nicely….
Will wait for ishjoy meeting again….???
Thanks
Ishwari doesn’t qualify to be called a mother even
So let her be
The only good thing she is doing is poping in my mind with ideas of the next IshJoy sequence