Hi guys! Dekho kon aaya??? Haan tamanna hun! I know aap sab bohot khush ho! Hehe! Are ab yeh math kehna ki yeh tamanna kon hai! Mera popat ho jaayega! Haha accha sorry mazaak tha! Ab sacchi sacchi batau kis kisne mujhe miss kiya? (comments me bathana) par sacchi kahun tho I missed you all! I swear ek din bhi aisa nahi gaya jiss din maine aapko miss na kiya ho! Seriously I was missing TU so much including ur comments and my ff named ur wish my command! Exams the isliye tu visit nahi kar rahi thi kuch dino se isliye koi ff nahi padha!
Aap sab se request hai!
Agar kisine iss March month pe apna ff post kiya hai tho jab aap apna next epi post karenge.na tho plz iss month ka summary dedo! PLZ and agar koi new member iss month me join huwe hain tho apna intro batha dena!
Ok enough of my bak bak lets go to my come back os!
Ummm… Usse pehle SORRY! Aap further pado sorry ka reason bhi patha chal jaayega!(emotional hai warning)
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Disclaimer: This article is not meant to hurt anyone’s sentiment and if unknowingly I do so I sincerely apologize! This article is just for entertainment purpose! And if u have any
Lets begin with the smile! (U look cute ) *smile karane ka unnatural tarika! 😛 *
Love, pyaar, mohabbat, Ishq, sab ek hi lafz ke maane hain! Pyaar! Iss ko kaise samjhayen! Aaj tak koi correct defination nahi mila! Sab ke alag tarikien iss ko jathane ke! Kuch log care! Tho kuch gussa se! Kuch log kehthe hai pyaar khushi detha hai tho kuch dard! Kisike liye pyaar junoon tho kisike liye sacrifice! Kuch log saath rehthe hain tho kuch juda! Par isse pyaar me badlaw nahi aatha! Aesihi hai inn dono ki prem kahani! Khudse zyaada pyaar karthe the lekin! 🙁
Yeh baat hai kuch saalon pehle ki! Ek tha kunj! Jis ke liye pyaar sab kuch tha! Jiskeliye pyaar duniya tha! Magar!
Kunj is crying in front of a dead body. “Kyun kiya tumne aisa! Kyun chod ke chali gai tum mujhe iss duniya me akela! Kyun tumne ye kadam utaya! Aakhir aisi kya baath thi! Maya! I promise you ke jis ke wajah se tumne yeh kadam utaya uss ko mai zinda nahi chodunga! ” He said crying.
Kuch din beeth, mahine fir saal! uska rishta sirf andheron se tha! Gussa tha naak pe atka par kise patha tha iss ke peeche gham hai chupa! kya isse patha tha ki koi ise andheron se ujhaale me le jaane wala hai?
Kunj is scolding some workers! He is the young billionaire now! He used to cry every night!
Kunj was in his car! The driver suddenly stops the car! He notices someone! A girl(Twinkle) holding a kitten in the middle of the road! He looks surprised.
“Aapke aankhe hai ya button! Dikhtha nahi kya aapko! Iss bichare kitty ko kuch ho jaatha tho” Kunj was still in surprise! Driver was shocked that kunj didn’t say anything!
Two days later,
Interview was going on in kunj’s office and Twinkle was selected as kunj’s P.A. Sometimes kunj would get angry on her immaturity and sometimes felt her to be cute. She was bubbly.
It’s been 3 months since Twinkle started her job as kunj’s P.A. But the thing was that she had made kunj smile again. She had fallen for him unaware of his past.
“Kunj I love you” Twinkle gathered some courage and confessed her love for him. “Twinkle?” Kunj asks shocked. “Yes kunj! I love you, don’t know how it happened but it happened! Mera dil meri suntha nahi kunj! I’m so sorry! Mujhe patha hai tum mujhse pyaar nahi karthe but still!” She said having tears in her eyes.
“Shhh!! Twinkle! Meri baat sunn Twinkle, I m happy that u love me bcuz I love you too” kunj said winking. Twinkle was shocked and more than happy. She hugged him and he hugged her back. (I know simple proposal hai, ts hai isliye kaafi haina?)
9 months later.
Twinkle and kunj’s marriage is going on! They are taking 7 vows around the fire. Then kunj makes Twinkle wear mangalsutra and fills her hairline with sindoor. As soon as he does so, a tear escapes from her right eye.
(#psychology fact: the tears of happiness starts from right eye and tears of pain starts from left eye)
Twinkle is sitting on the bed with veil covering her face. Kunj comes to the room and smiles at her. He uncovers the veil and holds her hands. He says, “I know Twinkle you are not ready now for this. I would wait till you feel comfortable!”. Twinkle feels blessed to have him. She had tears in her eyes. Kunj asks “what happened Twinkle, did I say anything wrong?”. “Kunj, yeh khushi ke aansooh hai” twinkle smiles saying this.
“Mai tere aankhon me aansoon nahi dekh saktha chahe wo khushi ke ho ya gham ke!” Kunj said.
“Kunj patha hai, mai jab choti thi tab mere maa papa mujhe akela chor ke chale gai! Uske baad mai ek ngo me rahi! Wahan ek kamla maasi hi mujhe apne maa ki tarah pyaar kiya par wo bhi mujhe chod ke chali gai aur bachpan se mai pyaar ke liye tarasthi aain hun! Tum milgai kunj! Tum meri ab zindagi ho kunj! Kabhi math chodna mujhe! Mai nahi jee paungi tumhare bina! I trust you more than anything! Mujhe akela math chodna iss duniya jaise mera bha….” she finds him sleeping and smiles to herself. She had tears in her eyes.
“Kunj I love you”
Twinkle kisses him om his lips and sleeps cuddling in him.
3 months later!
It was a rainy night. Twinj were out. They.came running to a cottage. Both were wet. Twinkle was looking hot with her wet look. Kunj lost his senses and walked towards her. He pinned her to the wall and kissed her.
Both get intimate that night. (Sorry mai romance nahi likh paathi! Aur yeh tho os hai)
1 week later!
(PLZ PLUGIN IN ANY EMOTIONAL SONG FOR BETTER EFFECTS AND FEELINGS
~I would suggest #Kaun Tujhe OR #Hamdard)
Door bell rings! Twinkle opens the door. The postman gives her an envelope and asks her to sign. She takes the envelope and closes the door. She opens the envelope and a tear drops on her cheek.
#Next scene
Twinkle arrives at a cliff. She finds kunj standing showing his back towards her. She goes to kunj and back hugs him. “Kunj mujhe tumhe kuch kehna….” she starts but kunj jerks her and she falls on ground. Twinkle was in shock. She looks at him. Her eyes fills with Tear. “Kunj kya hua? Maine kuch kiya hai Kya? Kunj kuch bolo?” She looks at his eyes which were red and swollen, dried marks of tears were visible. She was shocked. She cups his face and again asks, “Kunj kuch tho bolo?”. Twinkle cries. He again jerks her. “Haha Twinkle tujhe kuch nahi patha? Ok wait let me tell you?” Kunj says. Twinkle eagerly waits for his reply.
“Tho sunn, Maya patha hai?” Kunj asks.
“Nahi” Twinkle replies blogged.
“Acha teek hai maan liya. Tera ek bhai tha, Rahul, ab yeh kon hai math puchna! ”
“Mera Bhai, lekin tumhe kaise patha chala?” Twinkle asks with tears.
“Tere bhai ne kaam hi aisa kiya hai! Jis ki saza ab tu bhukthe gi” By saying he takes out a gun and points it towards Twinkle.
“Kunj yeh kya kar rahe ho? Kunj use neeche rakho, tum mujhe explain karo?” Tears were continuously flowing through her eyes.
“Maya! Ko usne mujhse cheen liya! He killed her!”
“Kunj? Mera bhai aisa kabhi nahi karsaktha, lekin Maya hai kon aur tumhari kya lagthi hai?”
“Maya, mai usse pyaar kartha tha, abhi bhi kartha hun aur hamesha kartha rahunga!” Kunj says with tears.
Twinkle felt her world crashing down. The only person she loved like anything is saying that he loves some other. “Kunj I know u r lying, tum mazak kar rahe ho na I know! Tum mujhse pyaar karthe ho na! Kunj seriously bohot dard ho raha hai ab tho sachh kehdo!”
” it’s the truth Twinkle! Maine tumse kabhi pyaar kiya hi nahi! Yeh sab ek natak tha! Tere bhai se badla lene ka! It was all a plan! Tujhse milna, tujhe apna PA banana fir pyaar! Shaadi sab natak tha! Sab! ” says kunj with the gun still pointed towards twinkle.
Twinkle went numb. She didn’t know how to react. Her legs went weak. The person who is her world have betrayed her. The love she was thinking true, was all a lie. Her fairy tale turned into a nightmare, a worst nightmare. She have already suffered a lot, she was not able to take this. Tears were continuously flowing through her eyes.
Her chain of thoughts were broken by Kunj. He said, “I know Twinkle you are hurt and that’s what I wanted. I wanted you to suffer just like Maya did! Uski koi galthi nahi thi firbi,”. He broke down.
Twinkle couldn’t see him like that. Yes he betrayed her, how much ever he hated her but it was not possible for her to hate him bcuz she loved him truly and dearly.
“Kunj its okay! You kill me but plz math roh! Mai tumhe aise nahi dekh sakthi” she too broke down.
“Twinkle hum(he and maya) dono ek dusre se bohot pyaar karthe the! Mai uske liye jaan bhi deh saktha tha! Lekin tere bhai ne…. (he chocked) Tere bhai ne uska rape kardiya!” Kunj said. She was shocked. Everything was mixed up in her mind.
“Aur phir usne suicide kardia taake mai usse shaadi karke apni life kharab na karun. Par use kya patha tha ke mai uske bina jeeh nahi saktha. Maine suicide bhi karneki koshish bhi ki par mujhe bacha liya gaya tha! Phir doctor uncle ne mujhe ek jeene ki wajah di haan, Badlaa(revenge). Fir meri zindagi badla pe atki huwi thi. Mujhe maya ka suicide note mila jisme likha tha ki rohan ne Uska Rape kardia jis ki wajah se usne suicide karlia. Mai Rohan ko dund ne laga tho patha chala ki rohan ki tho car accident me moaut ho chuki hai. Tab mujhe tere baare me patha chala tho aaj mera badla pura hojayega!” Kunj says crying.
“Lekin Kunj yeh purah sachh nahi hai! Mai bathathi hun tumhe Kya huwa tha! Isme mere bhai ki galthi nahi thi! Maine unn ke dairy me padha tha par uss me maya ki naam ke jaga XXXX likha tha aur BF ki jagah BF. Mujhe ab samaj aagaya wo kaun thi aur uska BF kon tha!
Bhai Maya se pyaar karthe the par kabhi keh nahi paaye! Freshers party me bhai pass out(drunk) ho gaye aur jab subha uta tho wo ek room me maya ke saath the! Maya bhi drunk thi uss raat! Fir bhai ko khaber mili ki maya ne suicide karlia! Bhai depression me chale gaye aur unka accident hogaya aur maine unhe bhi kho diya” Twinkle break downs.
“Tum Rahul ke baare me mujhe bathaya kyun nahi?” Kunj asks.
“Mai hamare shaadi ke raat batha hi rahi thi par tum so gaye the” Twinkle replies sincerely.
“Haha aur tumhe kya lagtha hai mai tumhari yeh mann banai kahani ko maan jaaunga! Nahi Twinkle”
“Tumhe lagtha hai mai jhoot keh rahi hun? Sacch batau kunj tumne mujhse kabhi pyaar nahi kiya?” Twinkle was sobbing while telling this.
“Sacch Twinkle Maine tujhse kabhi pyaar nahi kiya balke sirf aur sirf nafrat kiya hai.” His heart was aching while saying this. Yes he had fallen for her but his revenge took over his love. That is why he was crying before she entered the scene. Remember swollen and red eyes with dried tears mark.
“Tho wo sab kya tha kunj! Bhul gaye uss beautiful raat ko, wo lamhon ko?”
“GALTHI! Galthi thi wo Twinkle meri. Patha nahi kaise maine apne aap ko tujhe sop diya, galthi jiske liye shayad mujhe Maya kabhi maaf naa karpaye” he says.
She looks at her stomach in pain.
“Tumne tho kehdia kunj ke galthi thi lekin meri saari zindagi thi kunj uss raat me! Saccha pyaar kiya tha! Sop diya tha kunj maine apne aapko tumhe! Kabhi nahi socha tha ke tum aisa karoge!” She cries while saying this.
She continues, “Maardo mujhe kunj! Mujhe nahi jeena! Mai yeh sadma nahi bardash kar sakthi! Maardo mujhe kunj maardo!” By saying this she pulls hand and keeps the gun on her stomach. “Shoot me kunj! Tumhara badla pura hojaye ga aur tumhe khush dekh mai khush hongi kunj, kyunki meri khushi tumhari khushi me hai Kunj.”
Both were fighting, Kunj was pulling the gun and Twinkle was keeping the gun on her stomach.
*BANG!!*
A gun shot is heard. All goes blank. Twinkle looks at kunj with pain and falls on his shoulder. Both falls on ground. Kunj hugs Twinkle. Thier position was like Kunj was sitting on the ground with twinkle half lying on the ground and half on him. Kunj was half hugging her. Kunj pats Twinkle’s cheek.
Twinkle cups kunjs left cheek with her left hand, her hands were shivering, and says, “Maine… socha tha… ki kunj… mai tumhe… aaj bohot… saari… Aah… khushi… dungi par…. mujhe nahi… patha tha… aisa kuch hoga… Kunj, meri pyaar ki… aur tumhare galthi ki… nishaani mere… kokh(womb) me… pal rahi thi….Yes kunj… I was pregnant,… mai maa…banne wali.. thi! Tumhe back… hug kar lar… yahi kehna chahthi thi… Par koi nai… I m still happy!… Mere marne se… tumhe issse do guna… zyaada khushi milegi!…Haina Kunj.. yes I know.. I m correct… haha… aah par kunj maine tumse… saccha pyaar… kiya tha aur hamesha… karthi rahungi…. Patha hai mujhe… tum Maya se… pyaar karthe ho…
aur mujhse nafrat.. par.. aah… Kunj I m leaving… you forever…. Remember that I… will always… love you… Kehthe haina ki… Marne wale… ki dua jaldi…qubool hothi… hai tho mai… Dua karungi… Aah… Ke tumhe hamesha… khush rakhe… Aur… Agar agla… Janam ho.. Tho tumhe… Maya hi mile… Aur… Aur… meri jaisi.. Badkismathi.. Kisiko na…de! Dekho bachpan me….papa mama.. Mujhe akela… chod ke… Chale gai.. Fir mera bhai bhi… Chala gaya aur jis se sab… Se zyaada… Pyaar kiya… Wo kisi aur se.. pyaar kartha… Hai.. Kunj… Don’t forget that… I will… Always… Love you… Don’t miss… Me..” Twinkle said with so much of difficult.
“Nahi karunga miss tujhe mai Twinkle” kunj says. Twinkle feels heartbroken. He continues,” kyunke!!” He takes the gun and fires on himself.
“KUNJJJ!!”
“Twinkle..I love you.. Twinkle tune hi… kaha na marne.. wale ki har dua qubool… hothi hai tho… meri yehh… dua hai ke.. agle har janam.. mai tere saath hi rahun!”
“Kunj I love you” Twinkle says with teary eyes.
“I love you too Twinkle” Kunj says with smile.
By saying this both close thier eyes.
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“Bohot hi emotional movie thi na Raj” says simran sobbing. “Awww mera baccha is crying, its okay baba… Accha batau Ice cream khani hai?” Asks Raj to love of his Life, Simran. “Butterscotch” says simran smiling like a small kid. “Okay tho chalo..” Raj takes Simran smiling.
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=THE END=
Ok so agar aap confuse hogaye tho yeh ek movie thi jo Raj aur Simran naam ke ek couple dekh rahe the.
Raj: Affa
Simran: Me (Tamanna) 😛
So how was it? My come back os! Sab ko yaad dila diyana ke mai kis kaam me maahir hun? Hehe! Okay so ab bye! Mai bathroom me hun! Hehe! Are ro rahin hun aur agar mama me dekhliya tho reason dena padega na haha! I know long tha os!
Cover pic credit: vaasu di,’aka sidmintwinj
Okay so comments me zaroor bolna ke kaisa tha mera comeback os and kis kisne mujhe miss kiya? And also tell your birthdays okay?
So bye!! Drop ur comments whether positive or negative!
With Love,
Yours Tamanna
53 Comments
It was very emotional os ?
Thank you so much sohi!
With love,
Urs Tamanna
Hey tamanna rula diya tune mujhe yrr mere pass words nai h explain krne ke liye main abhi ro rhi hun yr..itna acha koi kaise likh Sakta h yrrr..twinkle ke dialogues was so emotional…tune aise os likh ke mera mood change kr diya .mujhe senti kr diya tune…aur os likhte raiyo..aur han maine tujhe bht miss kiya yrr pata h maina yesterday tera ff ur wish my command padh rhi thi..hehe..anyways tu janti h main kon sa ff likh rhi hun?? “U r my wife nd life”..chal byeeeeee..luv u
Awww ?? my Adu(i know u won’t mind?) I love you so much yaar and I missed you too! Thank you so much yaar and pehle nahi pada ur wish my command? Waise thank you so much love you too
With love,
Urs Tamanna
Agar tu mujhe kuch bhi bulayegi toh main kabhi mind mat karungi..aur han main tera ff dobara padh rhi thi..hehehe..samajh aaya meri jaan
Amazing
Fantabulous
Loved it.
i m also fan of Twinj and Sidmin
waiting for next os work
Thank you so much yaar!??
With love,
Urs Tamanna?
khush..amdeed..dear
tooooooooo..emotio..os
Thank you so much!??
With love,
Urs Tamanna
Amazing emotional epi
thank you!
with love,
Tamanna
Oye hoyee raj and simran..:):):):):):)….
yrr tune to rula diya mujhe seriously….. I m crying….:,(:,(:,(:,(:,(:,(:,(:,(
Os was Superb…. Fabulous…. Fantastic….. Mind-blowing….. Spectacular…… :*:*:*:*:*:*
hey sana!
are you the same sana(sanu)! if u are I missed you so much! thank you for commenting! sorry to make you cry par mai apne aap ko control nahi kar pathi!
With love,
Urs Tamanna
Hey tammatar..
I really missed u soo much…
Teri gmail I’d bhi kho gayi mere se…
Plz mujhe dubata de na….
This os was really emotional.
I mean rula diya tune mujhe ??????
But seriously yaar…
I loved it so much….
Love u… ????????????????????
Hey pretty!
I love you so much! pehli baath I missed you too! nd abt my mail id:
[email protected]
Thank you so much for commenting and love you so much
With love,
Urs Tamanna
Welcome back Tamanna
It was emotional but good
post something soon
Loads of Love
hey simiyy!
in this period of time I missed your ffs so much! but thankfully completed it now!
thanks for commenting
with love,
Urs Tamanna
Wohhoo????????Maine miss kiya naa apkoo dii?? brilliantly writtennn ??????
Thanks yaar cp! par sachi yaar maine jab tu ko yaad kiya pehle tera naam yaad aya sachi! I really really missed you!
thank you so much for commenting and love you so much
with love,
urs Tamanna
Emotional ? ?????? twinj ? each dialogue was emotional keep covering twinj throw os and ff.
thank you so much yaar and yeah I have submitted a Twinj ff plz have it a read when it gets posted!
With love,
Urs Tamanna
Heyy tamanna…
Yaar rula diya tumne to….i mean really words r choked in my throat….but it was just awesome…i lovedd it..bas ab aur nai bol paungi or else muje rona aa jayega???????…..
Well i was a silent reader till now..but i guess ab se a regular commenter…
Will u b my friend????…
Love uh
hey!
awww fathima! thank you so much yaar and I will surely be ur friend! And I must say ur love story is too cute! I have read all the 10 parts in one go! u write so well! Okay so how is my jiju? and have u read any of my other writings?
with love,
Urs Tamanna
Heyy tamanna….thnx for being my freind yaar..nd m glad dat u read my story nd liked it too…and yess i was a regular silent reader of all ur writings…i have read ur ff.ur wish my command…than that fs..my villain….than ur os’s..those eyes..uff this crushh….nd many more i have read them all…
And ha ur jiju is good..
Love u..
Too much emotional os…
Really it was heart touching…
thank you so much anayaali for commenting!
With love,
Urs Tamanna
Tamanna yaar itne gayab hi ho gayivthi
I missed u
N tu na emotional ff aur os dene mai mahir hai aur nahi tho kitna emotional episode tha it was like I’m crying
Ab in dono Maine apni ff an accident i met my soulmate naam ke ss shuru ki timebmile tho pad Lena
Love u yaar
Keep smiling
awww ramya! yaar I had exams so I couldn’t visit tu! and haha mai bhi badi ajeeb hun school me tho sab hasa the rehthi hun aur yahan sab ko rulathe hehe! ok okay, u know I missed you too and I used to read ur ss but in this March month I didn’t read! so plz when u post next epi give me a summary ok?
with love,
Urs Tamanna
Surely tamanna
Just now posted MY ss
But in next post I’ll pakka give u summary
Haiii ur surprised was make me cry how simran… Ur Really very bad I hate u… Why u killed them… Ufff why I can’t control my tears… Ya I agree ur storyline was speechless… The way u wrote each and everything… Mainly last scene ya Allah… I can’t stop my tears…. Ur so cheat ur very bad…. Huhuuhuh…. Simran I don’t know how to appreciate to… What to say… Amazing, awesome, superb, nice, excellent, beautiful, wonderful, commentary, beloved words, outstanding, mind blowing, fantastic, spectacular, marvelous, fab…
Ya Allah really blessed u with such a amazing talent…. Stay happy always…. And simran and Raj walla… Thank you so much for that… It means a lot to…. U love you infinity simran… I really do…. When I saw my name I was blushing like a idiot… Ummmmhhhhh
Awww so sorry Raj! mera tumhe rulana surprise nahi tha! actual thing tha ke we met! (os me hi sahi) hehe! maaf kardo! u read it 3 times, this made me so happy even though I was not able to believe that! and thank you so much cutie pie! I love you so much!
with love,
urs and only urs Simran!
Nice but toooo much emotional u made me to cry really
thank you so much Nisha! I guess u are new here!
with love
Urs Tamanna
Hey tamanna..i am rochika..do u remember me? Do tell me and About this os, it was just MINDBLOWING..! U HAVE LEFT ME SPEECHLESS..! IT WAS JUST AWESOMEEEEE!??????? Yrr what a story u have written! Seriously it was AMAZING AND PAISA WASOOL OS! THIS OS IS THE BEST OUT OF ALL EMOTIONAL STORIES! LOVED IT TO THE CORE! You write sooo welll! U are like me only , i am also not good at describing intimate and romace scenes but it didn’t effected your os..it was amazing even without intimate scene. DO WRITE MORE AND I GIVE U 100000000000000000000000000000000/10 AND U CAN ADD MORE ZEROES TO IT IF U WANT????? …WAITING FOR MORE LIKE THIS .LOVE U!
awww rochi! (I know I can call u this! aur agar tu na kahegi bhi tho mai tujhe rochi hi bulavngi!)
I remember you! how can I forget you! you were the first commenter on my first ever article! u know I missed you so much!
and I love you so much yaar! u don’t know how happy you made me! the line you said: THIS OS IS THE BEST OUT OF ALL EMOTIONAL STORIES!
I love you, love you so much and itne zeroes kafhi hain!
haha sachi me I feel uncomfortable while writing those stuff! par I love to read it! haha guttermind I know! 😛
aur tu jaldi se register hoja phir we can chat in PM!
ok ok enough and thank you so much! love you
with love,
Urs Tamanna
Mindblowing os dear I loved it so much
thank you so much chubby!
with love,
urs Tamanna
Dekh main sirf or sirf tere liye Ai hun guest appearance dene tune sach main rulla diya yr but I loved it yr muaaahhhhh love u loads sorry for short cmnt
teri yeh guest appearance meri bohot badi baat hai kyunke tu itni important jo hai! sorry to make you cry and happy that u liked it! thanks for the comment!
with love,
urs Aishu!
Yipppieeee …. CELEBRATION TIME.., YAAAHOOOOOO ..
MERI JAAN MY SHONA IS BACK… YIPPIEE.., PATA HAI MAIN KITNA KHUSH HUN.., TU JANTI HOGI…. AUR HAAN SORRY FOR KATE COMMENT MAAF KER DY….
Tujhy na me ne bhttttt misss kiya bhttt ziyada…, itna k bata nhi sakti…… bht miss kiya tujhe… apni old conversation padh rahi thi…., ufff hamari baatein…. baar baar hunari old conversations padhy jaa rahi thi…. me ne itna miss kiya tujhe…. har waqt haqr second tu thi mere dil dimaag pe… meri jaan meri shona….. itna miss kiya tujhe…. ke mein describe nhi ker sakti….. or haan me ne insta pe ek post bhi thi jisme tujhe tag kiya tha “I miss you” ki or thanmy ko bhi…, .. me ne itna miss kiya tujhe… meri sis mujhy pagal bol rahi thi…. i told hwr so what.. she is my jaan i love her veryyy much…. ????❤??????????
Anyways coming to the os…. ???????????????????????? I M LIKE THIS.. NO WORDS… U MADE ME SPEECHLESS… YARRR TU TOH MUJHSE BHI ACHA LIKHTI HAI.. I M JEALOUS OF YOU.., HEHEHE JUST KIDDING… KYA LIKHA MATLAB… SPLENDID… IT WAS A BLISS TO READ…. THE BESTEST OS TILL DATE… I HAVE NEVER READ SUCH A BEAUTIFUL PIECE BEFORE… I WOULD GIVE U AN OSCAR AWARD FOR THIS OS…. Itna emotional ker diya matlab…. ?????? jaanti hun tu mahir hai emotional mein… just like me….. I just loved this story… itny times padhi me ne..
Tu jaanti nhi hai how much i loved this… or starting ki lines toh.. ????? ufffff mera dil jeet liya tu ne… ????
Ending was superb… twinj wer just goals… loved them…
Plsss write more for me plssss….
LOVE U TO THE POWER OF INFINITY…. TO THE SQUARE OF INFINITY TO THE CUBE OF INFINITY… I JUST LOVE U MORE THAN ANYTHING ND ANYONE IN THIS WORLD…. U R MY LIFE MY JAAN MY SHONA ??????❤?❤??❤?❤???????????????❤??????❤❤❤❤❤?????
awww maine bhi tujhe bohot bohot se bhi zyaada miss kiya par kambhakt yeh exams hum dono ki love story ka villain! chal chod uss exam ka naam leker mood kharab kyun karna! huh! thank you so much jaan,.mai cutie pie I m sorry for late reply firse wahi net ki problem! LOVE U TO THE POWER OF INFINITY…. TO THE SQUAREOF INFINITY TO THE CUBE OF INFINITY multiplied by infinity! hehe! I love you so much! tere jitna bada reply nahi de pai par mai words nahi laa pathi feelings ko describe karne but I tried my best!
love you
With love,
yours Shona
Literally yarr hamari love story ka villain.. ye exams….. hate them… chal koi nhi.. sorry na bola ker yarrr… kiti baar bolun…
Koi nhi tere chote reply se hi mere face pe bht badi smile aagayi hai…. ☺☺☺☺☺????
LOVE U MERI JAAAAN. MY SHONA,,
Hey Tamanna!
Finally u r back☺
YAAR missed u so much?
Mujhe pata hai mein teri FS pe bhi kabhi kabhi comment karti thi… kya karun yaar… yeh college n phir boards… Time milna bilkul impossible hai?
But really teri FS aur ff ki saari episodes parhti thi☺n those were my favourites ☺
Sorry abhi bhi meine late comment ki?kya karun Aaj almost week baad TU khola?ufff yeh Exams…
Ab tu jaldi se koi ff ya phir FS ke saath wapas aja… I missed ur writing yaar…
Loads of love dear☺☺keep smiling☺☺
Awww thank you so much Aamna! u made me really happy love you yaar!.its okay mujhe sirf comments se matlab hai! koi nai mere bhi exams ab end huwe hain! Aur mai aagai hun wapus ek FF ke saath! believe me naam hai time hai tho pad lena ! love you so much!
with love,
Urs Tamanna
Haye I missed you so much …..
I am sorry for the late comment … I had my exams … ahi read kar rahe hu sare missed ff’s and os’s
Loved it yaar the os was so emotional that clip part was amazing … I mean seriously … It was awesome .. I have no words …
Love you Keep writing 🙂
hey sidmin! also missed you yaar! its okay mujhe sirf comments se matlab hai! Thank you so much for commenting! love you too
with love,
Urs Tamanna
Achheee….se yaad aagya ki aap kiskaam mein mahir hain…..
Hey bhagwaan itna bhi koi rulata hai kya…..paglon ki tarah ro rhi hun mein or mein apne room mein chupke chupke kya karun…..
Itna emotional itna beautiful itna jyaa emotional ki bas puchoooo mat….rula rula kar behaal ho gyi hun mein…..
Loved it sooooo mch…..
It was jst soooo beautiful sooo senti….ki mere sentiments jaag uthe or mein ab bas ro rhi hun….. 🙁
Bt loved it….u write amazing…… 🙂
Love u soooo mch…. 🙂
I missed u alot….sch mein…. 🙂
baby thank you so much! maine abhi pada tera comment! and believe me! tune mera day bana diya seriously thank you so much!
With love,
Urs Tamanna
Tooooo emotional ??…. summary aglibaar dungi .. RAAJ nd SIMRAN?.. nw tym to sleeeep
thank you so much auzha! kya summary Auzha??
With love,
Urs Samra? 😛
awesome…emotional…no words to explain…such an amazing story…i cant even believe that you wrote this…i guess, by reading this comment you’ll feel very happy…aisha
Thank you so much sama! And yeah I felt really happy! I m grinning like idiot! ??anyways thanks for commenting!
With love,
Urs Aisha
more than u i m happy bcz,mmmm…i’ll tell u when i ll cm to ur home and one thing if this os would be adopted as a film, it will b a hit movie, i promise