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Part 53:
The next day everyone came back from work and headed straight to practice their dance routines. When they took a break Meghna went to check on the twins who were with Nirmala. Naina took snacks for everyone in the living area. Khyati received a phone call and went into the garden.
Khyati: Hi Rahul.
Rahul: Hi Khyati, how are you?
Khyati: I’m good, how are you and Mom and Dad.
Rahul: We’re all good.
Khyati: Did you call a specific reason or…
Rahu: Just to talk to you.
Khyati: I guess we can do that.
Karan and Naina went into the garden and saw Khyati sat down and laughing as she spoke on the phone.
Karan: Why are you so happy?
Naina elbowed Karan.
Karan: What was that for?
Khyati laughed: Okay, I’ll talk to you later. Bye.
Rahul: Bye.
Khyati put her phone down.
Khyati: What did you want Karan Bhai?
Karan: I didn’t want to be elbowed in the stomach but it’s what I got.
Naina: Because you asked a dumb question.
Karan: What?
Naina: Khyati was on the phone to Rahul so of course she’ll be having fun.
Khyati blushed.
Karan: Oh, just like we spoke all the time before our wedding.
Naina: Exactly.
Karan: I liked our chats back then, we’d talk about…
Khyati: I don’t need or want to know.
Karan laughed: Yeah you wouldn’t.
Khyati pursed her lips: I’ll get going then.
Khyati left laughing. Naina was confused the understood.
Naina: You!
She pinched Karans arm.
Karan: Whaaat!
Naina: You made her think we would talk about other things.
Karan: What other things?
Naina: You know! Eek things.
Karan laughed at his wife.
Karan: So innocent.
Naina: But we never did!
Karan: I know.
Naina: YOU!
Naina stormed off.
Karan was walking behind her.
Naina went into the living area and then headed up to her room in anger.
Meghna saw the anger and then saw Karan who was going to walk upstairs but decided to stay down. He took a seat next to Kunal.
Karan: Bhai; girls are so complicated!
He whispered to his brother.
Kunal smirked: For one thing they liked to be called women, not girls.
Karan: Exactly what I mean.
Kunal: Why, what happened?
Karan: I kind of got Naina upset.
Kunal: Why don’t you get my partner upset?
Karan.: I didn’t mean to.
Kunal: I’m sure you didn’t but you should make it up to her.
Karan: How?
Kunal: I can’t tell you everything, one thing I’ve learnt is that women like it when their husbands do things themselves without anyone’s help.
Karan: Thanks Bhai.
Kunal: Anytime.
Meghna heard the conversation and smiled her her husband and devar.
Meghna (mind): Bless these two boys!
Karan went to his room and saw Naina putting her clothes away and getting ready for bed. Karan hugged Naina from the back but Naina got our of his embrace.
Karan: Naina, I’m sorry.
Naina didn’t say anything instead she just got into bed and turned of her lamp.
Karan didn’t know what to do.
Karan (mind) :Tomorrow is another day.
Thursday morning Karan made breakfast in bed for Naina. He put the tray I front of her she looked at him and smiled then went back to a serious face.
Naina: Nice try.
Naina moved the tray and left to get ready for work.
Karan watched her and picked up a slice for toast and started eating it.
Karan: What do I do now?
He asked himself.
The whole day went by, Karan and Kunal walked in and saw their wives sat in the living room with their mother and the babies. Naina was recording the babies as they crawled and tried standing up and walking.
Kunal: Hey guys!
They all looked at the two men walking into the living area.
Maahir was standing with the help of Meghna and was trying to walk to his Dad.
Kunal crouched down and motioned Maahir to walk to him.
Kunal: Come to Baba Champ.
Meghna slowly let go of Maahir and he started walking for himself.
Meghna: Chiku, are you recording?
Nainna: Haan Di.
Nirmala: My grandson is walking!
Kunal: That’s right Champ, slowly.
Right at the end Maahir was a few inches away from Kunal and just sat down.
Everyone laughed.
Karan: He gave up!
Meghna: He’ll try again. Won’t he?
Karan looked at Meghna and knew what she was talking about.
Karan: He will.
It was late evening and the twins were sleeping, Kunal and Meghna left their room door open and went downstairs to practice their dances.
Meghna, Karan and Arjun were in the Garden while Kunal and Naina were in the living area
Kunal: Naina?
Naina: Haan Jeeju?
Kunal: Is everything okay between you and Karan?
Naina: Yeah, everything’s good.
Kunal: Naina, I’m your Jeeju and your friend, if you ever need to talk you can talk to me.
Naina smiled: Thanks Jeeju.
Kunal: You’re welcome.
A few seconds of silence went and Naina bursted out the problem.
Kunal laughed: Naina!
Naina: Jeeju!
Kunal: Karan has been trying to win you over, so why don’t you accept his apology?
Naina: I don’t know, I wwasn’t thinking.
Kunal: Can I give you some advice?
Naina: Of course.
Kunal: Next time he does something, to say sorry, maybe accept it because he’s a very lost boy and he hasn’t even taken advice from me because I told him to think for himself
Naina: Really?
Kunal nodded: Yeah, I thought he’d come back running but now you know he really is trying.
Naina hugged Kunal: Thank you Jeeju! For listening and giving me your advice.
Kunal: Anytime Naina.
Garden:
Karan: I don’t have any idea of how to win her over!
Arjun: Do something big!
Meghna: No!
Karan and Arjun looked at Meghna.
Meghna: You boys! I said I won’t give you any ideas and I’m not, I’m going to give you a hint.
Karan: Thank you!
Meghna: You both need to understand that yes girls like big gestures but they also like small ones. Naina would appreciate the smallest thing.
Arjun: So what should Karan Bhai do?
Karan: Yeah, what should poor, helpless Karan Bhai do!
Meghna laughed: Karan, you’ll know what to do and when to do it, there’s a time and place.
Arjun: So he’ll have to wait?
Meghna: Yes, patience is the answer.
Arjun: Are you sure Bhabi?
Meghna: I am, I truly am.
Karan: Okay Bhabi, I’ll wait.
Meghna: Good! Now come on we need to practice our group performance if we want to win tomorrow.
Arjun: Haan, Chalo!
It was Friday, everyone was home getting things ready for the engagement party which was happening at the Chauhan house.
Meghna and Naina were helping Nirmala with all the arrangements. The men were looking after the decorations.
It was evening time and everyone got ready.
Kunal&Meghnas outfit (left) Karan&Nainas outfit (right)
https://www.instagram.com/p/5g3qObTQ2-/
Meghna and Naina got Khyati ready and brought her down to everyone. Her brothers admired how beautiful she looked, Rahul was mesmerised by her beauty.
Rahul&Khyatis outfit:
https://www.instagram.com/p/BGIspdNTQ66/
(Minus the noise piece for Khyati)
Sorry for any mistakes!
IF YOU’VE READ THIS FAR PLEASE TELL ME YOUR FAVOURITE BOLLYWOOD MOVIE! I KNOW YOU ALL HAVE A TONNE AND SO DO I!! MY FAVOURITE I WOULDN’T REALLY KNOW BUT SOMETHING I COULD WATCH OVER AND OVER AGAIN WOULD BE HUM SATH SATH HAI! I LOVE KHABHI KHUSHI KHABHI GHAM, MUJSHE DOSTI KAROGE! THOSE 3 ARE MY TOO 3 BUT I LOVE LOADS MORE! THANK YOU FOR ALL THE LOVE GUYS!! SORRY FOR ANY MISTAKES! ??❤??❤??
32 Comments
poor karan… 🙂 and stubborn naina.
kunal is an expert in advancing…. Lucky meghana…
love it so much. plz upload soon i want to know how karan will apologies to naina.
recently i like sindhagi aaa I guess
I know you’ll enjoy it! Thank your for commenting! ❤?
loved your ff. how can you write so well???
Aaaw! Thank you so muuuuch! Seriously so sweet and I don’t know how to answer it! I love your FF as well! Waiting for your next part. ?❤
Really di u showed girls and boys habits that was cool..every chap of urz have something interesting that makes ur ff more loving… Coz u show fhe daily life..loved it..see i m a tvaholic love to watch all movies so fav mivie i cant say..cause i can fall ij love with every 2 movie………????
Love many movies just i love ur ff…but i really like cartoons movies such as toy story but u ask bollywopd its difficult to ans
Loved the part
Awesome outfits
Post zoon
Soo many mistakes while typing..oh god!!!
Thank you so much! So kind! Yeah I love loads of movies as well! I always make mistakes while typing! ? Can’t wait for you guys to read the next part! ❤?
Hey di I love it….. ? ? ? nd my favorite movie is 3 Idiots, Dangal, (all Aamir movies), Ek Villain nd Baaghi….. I m a big big fan of Aamir Khan (actually I had a huge crush on his acting skills nd on his perfection)
Thank you! So kind of you! Trust me I love Aamir Khan myself! Such an amazing actor! ? he’s just amazing! Thank you for answering my question and yep I’m sure everyone had a crush on him! ??❤
WHAAAAT? Itni jaldi katam ho gaya ? ? anyhow…
OMG this episode was so NaiRalicious. ??? Karan being naughty and nok jhok starts. UFF. NaiRan’s first “argument” after marriage MY GOD! We need to celebrate ??? Awww Karan is trying to win her over again ☺️? I am waiting for some good romantic moments ok? ???
Will be waiting for the next post! ?
Thank you and yaaay!! Let’s celebrate!! ?? it’ll definitely be romantic!! ❤? the post will be up a little late but I know you’ll love it! ❤?
Little late means ? ? Today ya some other day ?
I guess you are bringing something interesting for someone who is literally pagal for NaiRan, correct ? ?? I AM WAITING (thalapathy style)
It should be up same time this one was up, so it’s tomorrow for me! I receive your message (telepathy style) definitely Nairan things coming up! Need to make it extra awesome for my extra awesome audience! ?❤
It should be up same time this one was up, so it’s tomorrow for me! I receive your message (telepathy style) definitely Nairan things coming up! Need to make it extra awesome for my extra awesome audience! ?❤i
I have many fav movies but baaghi tops the list!!! UR FF WAS MIND BLOWING IF THE CREATOR SEES THIS HE/SHE MAY HIRE U AS THE WRITER!!!U R FANTASTIC….U WRITE UNIQUE STUFF WHICH R DIFFERENT FROM OTHERS WHICH ATTRACTS US…THX FOR NAIRAN SCENES HOPE TO SEE MORE OF THEM….
The creator of swabhimaan
Ooh i haven’t watched that film yet! Need to watch it soon! AND OMG YOU’RE SOOOOO LONDON! SERIOUSLY!! I’M BLUSHING READING IT! I wish they’d hire me! ? but yeah thank you so so so much! There will be more Nairan trust me! ?❤
Not London! I was meant to say LOVELY!!! ❤
Thx tamihna and keep writing
Superb. We all should ask advice to kunal i think so.
Thank you! And yessss Kunal is the man to go to! ? hope you enjoy the next part! ❤?
Aww! That was cute! Loved seeing Karan trying to convince Naina…lots of school work and so will not be able to comment regularly…truly sorry for that…but I am always going to be supporting your fan fiction so please cross 100 episodes…I have three favourite movies which I could watch over and over again…they are Ek Villain, Kal Ho Naa Ho and Chak De India. There used to be a time when I used to watch Ek Villain every single day. That is one movie I just loved…it always managed to bring me to tears…best of luck for your next epi di?☺️?
Aw! Thank you so much for your support! I know how school work is don’t worry! I will try my best to get past 100 updates! I know how it is to love a movie and watch it over and over! ? there are movies that need more credit!! Thank you once again! ❤?
ABHI TO START KIYA KHATAM BHI HOGAYA! BECHARA KARAN ! LOVELY CHAP !
AND MY FAV BOLLWOOD MOVIE.MUJHE TO SARI PASAND HAI.STUDENT OF THE YEAR,HUMTY SHARMA KI DULHANIYA,BADRINATH KI DULHANIYA,HOUSEFULL3,BAGHI,EK VILLAIN ETC.AUR BHI BOHAT HAI.
Aaw thank you! I see you’re an alia and varun fan! Love them too! I love so many movies myself!!! Hope you enjoy the next part! ?❤
ABHI TO START KIYA KHATAM BHI HOGAYA! BECHARA KARAN ! LOVELY CHAP !
NEXT TIME NAIRAN PE THORA JADA FOCUS KARNA !
AND MY FAV BOLLYWOOD MOVIE.MUJHE TO SARI PASAND HAI.STUDENT OF THE YEAR,HUMTY SHARMA KI DULHANIYA,BADRINATH KI DULHANIYA,HOUSEFULL3,BAGHI,EK VILLAIN ETC.AUR BHI BOHAT HAI.
TAMI,REALLY NICE EPISODE AND GOOD WRITTEN ALL THE BEST AND I HOPE I SOON READ UR 100TH AND THEN 200TH AND THEN ETC ETC ETC
Aaw! Thank you! You’re so kind! ❤?
Hi . I’m sorry for commenting late now coming to chapter it’s was really awesome I loved the chapter love the attitude of naina and karan trying hard to convence naina please post next chapter as soon as possible. Eager to read the next chapter and now coming to question which u asked my favourite movie is Mohabbatein and kuch kuch hota hai,
Thank you! So happy you’re enjoying it! I love those two movies! Omg! They made me cry because of how sad it is for Shah Rukh Khan, he loses Rani and then Ash! ? thank you for answering my question! ?❤
U r ammmaaaaazziiinngggg love u loads
u r really blessed
thalavar style la sollanum na Im waiting for the next epi??????????
Aaaw! You’re such a sweet person! Thank you so so much! ❤?