Precap: cool sanskar and scary swara… Sanskar’s try to make swara confident and self sufficient….
Laksh opens the door and shock to see gadodia family and sahil’s family along with sahil who is injured due to yesterday’s incident…
Parvati shouts: swaraaaa….
Laksh looks at her and then looks back finding a scared swara standing holding her book near her chest… Ragini and sanskar comes out… Sanskar’s eyes shift to swara who is looking at the door with so much fear… Ragini and sanskar don’t take so much time to understand that it’s their respective love’s family and a big storm will come now…
Sanskar (monolog) : no swara you can’t be weak… You can’t be…
Shekhar pushed laksh and all comes in…
Sahil looks at sanskar…
Sahil : look mom dad… He is that guy… For whom… Your daughter leave me and now she is enjoying revelry With this guy…
Sanskar’s blood boiled in anger… He was about to come Forward but Ragini stops holding his hand…
Dadima was about to step towards swara but laksh comes in between….
Laksh : don’t you dare mrs Parvati gadodia…
Parvati: laaaakssshhh… Hold on your tongue… And i don’t wanna talk with you… You are nothing to us…
Laksh : exactly… You all are nothing to me… Arey… People learn from their past experiences… But you all… U all killed my uttu and now… Now your lusty bad eyes fall on my doll… You all did same thing which you did with my uttu…
His eyes got teary thinking about his elder sis uttara who was just 2 years smaller then him… Died due to extreme torture getting from her in laws and her husband…
Shekhar : laksh… We know our daughter’s well-being… So just stop poking your nose…
Parvati holds swara’s elbow and pull her front : what i taught you han?? You forgot everything…
Swara cries in pain… Parvati holds her hair in fist : couldn’t you die before doing all this…
Swara cries… While Ragini and sanskar is so shocked that can react…
Laksh push dadi and hugs swara…. Shomi comes forward… Looks at her children with teary eyes and goes to swara…
Shomi : why you did this…
This time swara open her mouth from laksh’s protective embrace : he… He… Is… No… Ot… Not… Good… He… Ditched… Me… He…
Sahil : look… What she is saying…
Dadi : swara… You starts to open your mouth in front of your elders… Husbands never do bad things swara… And this type of small things shouldn’t be count ok… Now ask forgiveness from him and go back to him…
Sahil smirks… Swara cries…
Sanskar : excuse me ladies and gentlemen… Can you please tell me the time…
All looks at him… Sanskar comes forward…
Sanskar : what’s the time… Swara you say…
Swara looks at him…
Sanskar with a smile : say swara…
Swara : 11:00 am..
Sanskar : good… And date…
Swara : 12th August 2016
Sanskar : hmm… Tell this to your so called dadi and remind her it’s 21st century not 18th century… She should know that what ever her values are the most useless value…. And why the hell you are crying like this… Go and slap this man and tell him to get out…
He shouts at swara…
Swara jumps in fear in laksh’s embrace…
Sanskar : 1st of all thank us that what ever your beloved son or son in law did with swara, we didn’t put him behind bars… What you all think he left your daughter at station alone… Many things could happen with her.. And you all are covering his faults instead of beating this blo*dy moron… And the 2nd thing is swara and this blo*dy basturd are now divorced… So there is no chance to go back to him…
Dadi : it’s our family matters you shut your mouth…
Sanskar : i will not… And….
He stops looking at sahil who is seeing swara angrily yet lust fully…
Sanskar : i will take out your eyes mr sahil chopra if you look at her like that for 1sec…
Sahil shift his gaze to sanskar…
Sahil : i am seeing my wife… And i can…
Sanskar : she is not your wife…
Parbati : swaraaaa… Chal… Tell them what you taught… Come back to your husband… You will regret..
Sanskar looks at her : can’t you understand?? I am not talking in French right?? She gave divorce and she will not return…
Shekhar : you stop your mouth… Swara…
Sanskar looks at them then swara… He goes to her…
Sanskar : speak up swara… Atlst today… Or you will reg7for this whole life…
Swara looks at him then her family : i… I… Will… Nooo…. Not… Go…to him..
She says while sobbing…
Shekhar shouts: swaraaaa…
Dadi: rahne de Shekhar… They brainwashed her… So you all are saying she gave divorce right?? Toh now she will come to her father’s house… So come with us…
Laksh : no she will stay here… I am her brother… I have that right…
Shekhar : oh really?? But i am her father… And bhai se pahle pita ka haq h (father rites come before brother)
He smirks… Laksh looks helpless… He looks at Ragini who is now very much stressed and also teary eyes…
Sanskar looks at them… Then swara…
Sanskar : no… I can’t let her go… They will finish her… I can’t afford to loose her..
Parvati angrily drags swara: come with us…
Swara looks at sanlakrag with teary eyes… Sanskar looks at her going… Then runs to her and jerks Parvati’s hand…
Sanskar : she will not go…
Shekhar : and who are u to decide this…
Sanskar : her HUSBAND
All looks at him shocked… Swara snapped her head to him…
Sahil : what nonsense…
Sanskar : exactly… What the hell a nonsense creature like you is doing here??
Shekhar : leave her… Swara come..
But sanskar holds her wrist tightly…
Sanskar : you only say right bhai se pahle pita ka haq h.. Then i am saying pita se pahle pati ka haq hota h (husband’s rite come 1st than a father’s rites)
Parvati : i don’t believe you… Come swara…
Sanskar : don’t believe i will give proof… Sanskar drags swara in front house temple which is near drawing room only.. Sanskar fill her hairline with vermillion…
All lookd shocked even swara also… She steps back…
Laksh whisper : sanskaaaaarrrr….
Ragini also shocked…
Sanskar : now you believe?? Get lost… I don’t want your shadow also fall on her… So just leave…
All are shocked… Dadi : youuuuu….. We won’t accept this merriage… Never ever… Ever swara…
Sanskar : don’t take tension about swara… Take some tension about your ex-son in law… Cause i will not leave him easily…
Shekhar shouts : swaraaaaa… Come here…
Swara looks at him who was still standing there being shocked… Then slowly comes to them…
Shekhar : what you want your family or this guy… Come with us… Or you will loose us…
Swara looks at all many things revolves in her mind…
Fb…
A girl of 21 is lying on bed whose body is covered with red marks… A 11 years old hirl is staring him…
Uttara : doll… Take care… I hope you at least get a peaceful life… And i will be happy if you get…
Swara : di what happened to you…
Uttara : our family and they kill me… Don’t let them kill you…
Fb end…
She reminds last night talk of sanskar…
Sanskar : you are a big girl swara… Take decision from your heart… You can decide what is wrong and what is right…
Dadi : girl’s life is in her husband’s feet…
Sanskar : girls are not slave…
Swara comes in senses when she feels… Shomi is taking her… She looks back and sees sanskar is still standing there looking at her… Swara frees her hand and runs to sanskar… She stops in front of him and go behind him… Clutching his fore arm sleeves…
Dadi and Shekhar : swara…
Swara looks down still clutching his shirt…
Sanskar : you all got your answer please leave… Leave i said…
He shouts…
All goes from there… Sanskar close the door and rest his head there after closing it… Then looks back… Finds swara in laksh’s embrace crying.. Laksh is looking at him…
Ragini : what have you done sanskar….
Sanskar walks to couch and sits there… Closing his eyes and resting his head…
Then takes out his phone…
Sanskar : hallo hotel blue town… Please send 4 plate mix fried rice and 4 plate sahi paneer at our house in xyz colony… Thank you…
Laksh: sanskar will you please explain?
Sanskar : what’s there to explain jiju… And swara Please stop crying… Go fresh up… Lunch will come in 1hr…
Raglak look at each other…
Laksh : doll go… Fresh up…
He kissed her forehead and wipes her tears…
Sanskar : jiju… I am hungry can we eat 1st…
Laksh nodes…
4 are doing lunch… Swara is just playing woth food… And thinking something…
Sanskar while eating : baby doll… Finish your lunch… Stop playing with it…
Raglak sighs as they came to know sanskar is nlw calm…
Swara runs away from there…
Laksh gets sad…
Laksh : sanskar…
Sanskar : jiju… Frankly speaking i am in love with your sister… I can’t afford to loose her and i wanted to stop her anyhow… And you can’t stop her… So i did whatever came in my mind… I wanted to marry her after completing her b. Tech… And i thought by that time i will change her slowly…. But your family left me with no other option so… I promise you jiju… I will never heart her… She will be safe…. Trust me…
Laksh : i trust you sanskar but doll….
Sanskar : baby doll will be alright… You don’t take tension…
Ragini smiles whole heartedly : i will call ma papa ???
Sanskar : ok mrs chudhail… ??
Saying this he takes some food in one plate and goes to swara…
Sanskar enter her room and see her sitting on floor hugging her knees…
Sanskar : hey baby doll…
Swara looks up… Sanskar sees her teary puffy eyes and sighs… Swara sits straight in indian style… And looks down at her hand which is on her lap…
Sanskar : baby doll… You know i don’t know swimming… ???
Swara looks at him confuse… With teaty eyes…
Sanskar : Seriously i don’t know swimming… Cause…. (sanskar mix the rice and paneer and makes a morsel) chalo aaa… (sanskar forward the morsel near her mouth and swara like obedient child open her mouth… Sanskar put the morsel in her mouth.. While doing this) you are crying so muvh that flood will come and how i will survive…
Sanskar shivered a little when her lips touch his fingers due to putting the morsel in her mouth… He stares at her…
Swara : why you did this…
Sanskar (comes in sense… Makes another morsel) : han… Hmmm… Why i did this… Ummm you can’t understand it right now… Cz i can’t tell you now… Aaaa karo
He makes her eat again…
Sanskar : but all you should know that what ever i did (he takes the rice which was sticking with her lips)… I did for you…
Swara looks down… Silence for some time… After 4-5 morsel…
Swara who was scratching her one hand’s nail with another…: they will hate me to the core…. Ma… Papa… Dadi…
Her voice chocked…
Sanskar : trust me swara… After 4-5 years they will surely accept you…
Swara eats another morsel from his hands… Again silence…
Sanskar puts the last bite…, : hmm baby doll… If you wanted to feed you by me then you can say before only… I would be glad ?… And will be glad if i get this chance everyday ?
Sanskar stands up was about to go… But peck her cheeks and run from their… Swara feels her cheek heated… And is like ????
At night… Sanskar comes to swara’s room… And find her staring at sky… He lifts her making her gusp and walks towards his room… Swara gets scared… She flinched in his arms in fear…
Sanskar place her on bed and close the door… Then looks at her… Swara sees his eyes which is showing something different… She feels uncomfortable… She adjust her dupatta…
Sanskar comes closer : who i am to you… Baby doll (he cares her cheek)
A big lump of cry comes to her throat… She somehow gulp it…
Sanskar : speak up baby doll…
Swara (shaky voice) : my.. Hus… Band…
Sanskar : correct…
He hold the dupatta on her shoulder… And pulled it a little when swara clutch his hand…
Sanskar : what happened… He leans more to her…
Swara clutch the bedsheet by other hand looking down… And nodes in no… Then slowly remove her hand…
Sanskar’s jaw clicked… He remove it halfly… Then leans to her more…
Swara feels his hot breath near her lips… She scrunched her eyes tightly… Tears starts to flow….
Sanskar looks at her : open your eyes swara…
No response….
Sanskar : i said open your eyes… He asked in low dangerous voice…
Swara looks at him with fear…
Sanskar : now tell me what you want… What’s your soul is saying… What are yoi feeling.. Say swara…
Swara cries : please… Let…. Me… Go… I… Don’t… Want… This… All… Please…
She cries…
Sanskar smiles… And sits back while adjust her dupatta… Then sits in front of her in safe distance….
Sanskar : if you were not comfortable then why you didn’t push me and give me a tight slap… No no… Don’t slap me now (he holds his cheek) your delicate hands slap so hard…
Swara looks at him.. Sanskar smiles at her…
Sanskar : baby doll… If you are not comfortable with anyone’s touch then who ever it is… Your husband friend or any relatives or unknown people… You have rites to say no to your husband… And teach a good lesson to others… Swara It’s your rites… You are a girl… And girl’s are not slave for her husband… You shouldn’t do whatever your husband say.. You also say your willing… What you want… That’s also matters… Understand my baby doll (pinch her red nose)…
Swara adores him…
Sanskar : come… I will drop you to your room…
Swara nodes…
Sanskar and swara come to swara’s room…
Sanskar : good night baby doll…
Swara says nothing.
Sanskar : at least say good night ???
Swara smiles seeing his antics…
Sanskar smiles seeing her…
Swara looks down then slowly goes to him… Sanskar looks confused… Swara looks at him then slowly yet hesitantly up her hands to hug him… Then finally hugs him…
Swara : thank you… Sanskar ji…
She slowly says and sanskar kiss her head holding her back head… Swara departs and turns…
Sanskar goes backwards then runs to her and quickly pscks her cheek and run away… Swara smiles genuinely holding her cheek…
Next day…
Swaragini in kitchen… Laksh in dining reading news…
Suddenly sanskar came… Head phone on his both ear…
Sanskar shaking his head forward and backwards : Har shaam baby, tere hi naam baby
Aa tujhe pyaar karoon main,
Sar-e-aam baby
Hai intezam baby, kar ehtram baby
Iraade nek hain mere,
Na koi ganda kaam baby
Laksh look at him then roles his eyes…
Sanskar (still shaking his head) : hi jijs… Morning…
He enter in the kitchen… And takes a deep breath…
Sanskar : ummm gajar ka halwa ????… Hallo my girls…
He takes out the clatcher from Ragini’s head and mess her hair…
Ragini shouts : sanskaaaaarrrr ???. What you did?? ????
Swara was giving finishing touch to her halwa spreading kaju over it… She smiles looking at them…
Sanskar : good morning chudhail… ???
Swara takes the plate to dining…
Sanskar and ragini also comes while fighting…
Sanskar sees puri…
Sanskar : puri ???
He takes it in hand but it was hot… He plays catch qnd throw by it for few seconds then swara catch it place it on plate… Which sanskar shows his full teeth ????… Raglak shakes their head…
Sanskar : good morning baby doll… ??
As usual no reply …
Sanskar : dumb wife ???
Then near her ear he shouts: GOOD MORNING BABY DOLL…
Swara jumps from her place…
Laksh : sanskar… Are you planning to make my doll deaf… ???
Sanskar : no… I don’t want deaf wife… But i want a wife who at least wish me good morning ???
Sanskar looks at the news paper then snatch it from laksh… Starts to find some thing…
Laksh : not again sanskar… You will mess the paper… ????
He said irritatingly…
Sanskar : jijs chill i am searching the bollywood news papers… And don’t forget i am your damad (son in law)…
He says proudly…
Laksh : damad k bachche ruk ja…
Sanskar goes to swara and bent a little to rich near her tummy… Swara looks at him like ???
Sanskar : baby doll you are pregnant ???
Swara : ????
Laksh : hein??
Sanskar : you only say damad k bachche ????just like (goes tp ragini and bents) jiju k bachche…
Laksh throw a puri… Which sanskar catch and starts to eat : ummm…. Yaammmyyy… Thanks jiju ???
Sanskar finds the bollywood paper : arey wah… Woooowww…. Deepu… Omg… She is looking so hoooo…. He place the paper on table…
Sanskar looks at swara who is staring him stopping her works… She is holding a bowl of vegetables and a spoon to serve….
Sanskar : aaaaahhheeemmm… Baby doll It’s deepu… Dipika padugon… My fav actress… Is not she hoooo…. I mean beautiful…
Swara looks annoyingly at the picture… A girl is wearing a super cut gown… Front has deep cut rarely covering her front and the lowe part cut from her upper thighs showing full leg of her… She looks at sanskar with slight cute angry face… Then turns… Sanskar raise his eye brow then shrugged his shoulder…
Sanskar takes one bowl of gajar ka halwa and starts to eat…, : baby doll it’s yummy ???… Chalo You also eat… Or we will be late for college…
Swara nodes and sits beside him… Raglak smiles…
Suddenly swara caughs… Sanskar Immediately makes her drink water… And rubs her back… Swara mistakenly drop some food on her kurti… Which sanskar notice and torn the same paper of Deepika padhukon… And wipes it… Swara smiles a little…
Precap : last part…
Thank you who commented on previous chappy… Thank you for reading
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