Guys!!This is lasya. I am new to ff and this is my first ff.
This is purely from my imagination and some incidents may match. All the characters are same as in serial. All charcters are of same age groups as in serial.
Hope u love it!!!
Dadi: I am fed up jhanvi. See he is so stubborn not even waking up. It’s high time arrangements are being done for pooja and see him,offo. One of my sons is stubborn and the
other is silent .pchh..
Jhanvi: Don’t worry maa,actually last night he was so late and ended up his day very tired.So that he is like this. Don’t worry we will be on time.
Pinky : Jethaniji, u are so late and we got ready.
Shakthi: maa ,pandit will be ariiving within 15 min .It would be better if we get ready by the time he arrives.
(Saying that all leaves and jhanvi and tej are left in room)
Jhanvi : Tej, I am done enough(In angry tone).
(YOUNGSTER’S ROOM)
(Om,Rudra are lying on bed in one room, Shivay,Prinku(Priyanka) are there in other room)
@SHIVAY’S ROOM
Just then Shivay woke up and saw his cute sister sleeeping with her head on his chest and her hand on his stomach. He tried to move her ,but in sleep she nodded in negative like
a small kid and hugged him tightly ,he reciprocated hug and smiled at her antics.
@OM’S ROOM
Both are sleeping peacefully just then a voice enters shouting Oh My Maataa!!!!! still sleeping wake up soon time is nearing for pooja (Yeah!! the voice is pinky’s)
Continuation tommorow.. Thank you guys
31 Comments
nice try
wil wait for d next
thank you Aashi
di
It is too short yaar… I could not get it enough for… but its OK… as you tried for the first time…
Are you the same Lasya who commented on my OS..??
Thank you di next I will try to be better. No, I am not the one who commented on your OS, but I like ur writings.
Nice one… Keep going.. Waiting for the next one..
Next time make it little longer…?
thank you. sure next will try to make it longer. Thank you di
Very nice start Lasya…. But its short one dear… Next time make it longer plz…
Super yaar, excited for the entry of anika, gouri, soumya, rancher?
* ranveer
thank you di.. next will try to make it good and longer
thank you di next one will be longer
thank you di next time sure it will be longer
thank you di. will make sure next will be larger
Nice one dear…Keep Rocking
thank you di
Nice
thank you di
Nycc
thank you di
Noooo!dont call me di..i’m only 14 years old..b
fine bhavana ??
Good one…
thank you dear
Nice……
thank you dear
Ya lasya
We truely loved it
U have a good writing skills dr
Keep it up
U wrote each nd every dialogue so beautiful that i m not able 2 believe this is ur 1st 1
But ya I must say this is too short
Post de next 1 soon
thank you di i updated my second epi plzz read it
Hmmmm I will go through it ……………
Good start…
thank you di read my 2nd one