On our favourite bridge of SwaRagini…
They both are standing.
“Ragini, I love you truly. I can’t be far from you. accept me plz..”
Laksh says holding her soft hands.
But Ragini is looking at him expressionless. she is not smiling or crying.
Her eyes don’t have tears or courage.
But stubbornness.
“Ragini.. speak something..” Laksh raises his hand and touches her shoulder.
Now, Ragini closes her eyes. “Ragini..” Laksh jerks her gently again.
Now, Ragini opens her eyes which are red which may be symbolic to hurt, hatred or anything.
Laksh amazes.
Ragini places her hand on his chest and uses all her force and pushes Laksh.
“aaaa…Ragini..” shouts Laksh.
Laksh falls in river, Ragini turns back and start walking away.
Screen freezes on the expressionless Ragini’s face.
To be continued….
^Hi friends, This is just random idea i got. I will continue all my ffs after this month ending. Just i was excited to share this new part.^
suggest me any titles.
46 Comments
astraa di interesting prologue
waiting for the next part
thank you dear… i have send u an pm check it dear..
Nice
thanks dea…
Interesting
thanks aanchal..
Nice
thanks avika..
OMG it’s interesting start dear and Ragini push Laksh into river. Eagerly waiting for next episode
thanks a lot ammu…
The first line actually cracked me up.
‘On our favorite bridge of SwaRagini’ ?????
But I am now totally curious. Is it related to the serial? Or is it a new story altogether?
haha… thanks a lot bela… u wiill know in furthur parts..
AWESOME
thank you..
Superb dear friend
thank you dear
Ohhhhhhhh????
hahaha….thanks..
k sweetheart early waiting for epilogue of ready to breakup….
thanks dear… yup i will give surely..
I u don’t mind I have a name….. THE MYSTERIOUS LOVE……
Amazing sis…!!! Interesting plot..!!!
thanks a lot mintu dear..
Awesome dii
post nxt soon
And titles i am very bad in suggesting title!!
so i wont
sorry for that
thank you so much don ji.. haha, it’s ok yar..
you killed your favorite laksh????? while using my favourite ragini????? and our favorite raglak got separated????? becoz of you?????? how could you????? how dare you????? have you forgot that they are our raglak?????
ja kattiiiiii….. you made me cry….. i wont talk to you…. why??? astra why??? tell me this is just our nightmare nothing else. tell me fast…….
oh my drama queen.. cool down cool down… even i don’t know why ragu haspushed lucky.. hmm, i have to ask her… till then…
wait..
sabar ka phal meetha hota hei… hehe
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awesome astu dear…Our favourite swaragini bridge…that make me soo curious to read thz dear….it’s related to serial or not dear….waiting for ur updates….tkcr dear…
thank you dear… yes yar
. missing that brige a lot.. hehe, u will know in future dear, what is it about..
Awesome di I don’t know if it’s apt how about …I hate u because my heart loves u….
awww… thank you so much dear…
Haa what a story waiting for next part. when you will upload all your ff
thanks a lot.. i will update a bit late… sorry to keep wait…
Interesting keep going
thanks a lot dear
awesome
thank you dear
Astru are you finally fulfilling my wish?writing a raglak story from Ragini’s POV which is based on the main story?????
hhmmmm, you know. i just wrote my random idea. even i don’t know what to do next.. but, i will satisfy your wish dear..
Sry asthu for being late..omg Ragu pushed laksh…
Y dear bcz u r missing d bridge u can’t kill our lucky na…nt fair…i knw u can’t harm our raglak…so waiting for the next updte..hehe!!tc…
Haha, thank you darshu dear…
awesom
Thanks sherin..
Interesting
amazing and this is the first time that lakshya fell down the bridge xx
Interesting….