Everything happens for a reason!!!
Hi guys in summary and character sketch I received vey less comments and im jus planning to stop writing this stupid story and kindly ignore typo erros and gramatical too……
Author’s note:
As I mentioned in the character sketch Anika is elder to ranveer and gauri and ranveer elder to gauri but a small correction ie, ranveer is twin brother of gauri and he is few mins elder to her…..
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Only the sound of laughter and pulling legs of each other filled around the dining room….All were happily talking to one another either about business or the young ones of their house……….. Suddenly the phone sound of Shivay disturbed everyone and more than that his reaction caught everyone’s attention……. After talking he went out as fast as he can leaving everyone confused but soon resumed with their chit chat ………
Within mins he was in front of Oberoi Mansion……
Shivay pov..
What if I go inside now???? Yeah I know sterday I came but none knew about it and today everyone are present in there and how can I face them as am in reason for every mishap…….But i have to go inside now when it comes to my family I shd be strong enough……Composed himself and went inside the mansion……
Inside pinky’s room he was shouting at the nurse who is attending his mom…
Shivay: how dare you to tell me that u doesn’t know how it had happened????? Are you out of ur mind??? She is missing god damnit and you are telling me u doesn’t know????? You know what YOU ARE FIRED!!!!!
This shade of Shivay shook the nurse and with tears she tried to explain him hard but he gave no ears…
Soon Tej also came there after knowing that pinky all of a sudden vanished and saw Shivay standing already and scolding innocent nurse………
Tej: Shivay she is not at fault jus let her go and we will search pinky…waise haste makes waste beta.
Shivay jus calmed down after listening to his words went outside the mansion and shouted at top of his voice KHANNA!!!!! as always he was in front of him composing himself from the shock of seeing his boss after three longgggg years…..
Shivay: I don’t know what u will do but I need all the cctv’s checked nd must been known where mom has gone and how( in a stern and ordering voice) as soon as he said Khanna gave an assuring nod and moved from there……
Tej: Shivay I think you shd leave now coz everyone ll be back within mins so…… And by the way when are u guys planning to come here?????
Shivay: woh actually bade pappa am sorry but am not sure whether we ll be coming back….. As far as I know I myself is enough to clear the misunderstanding between all so it’s better other’s remain hidden coz I don’t anyone to.build false hopes…..
Tej (shocked and in anger) : what are you talking??? Are u in ur senses???? Have you gone mad????? U r bringing them back here coz all are a family man so u shd brng thm back that’s final and u r doing it!!!!!
Shivay: bade pappa pl try to understand and yeah let me go in search of mom…. Saying so he left as fast as he can I order to avoid further argument……
After one hour all the members returned(dadi, Jhanvi,prinkus,om,Rudy,chulbul) to OM and were shocked to see the scene in front of them…….
Mummiji…………….(its pinky and she came out of trauma along with her was shakthi too came back from rehab)
Dadi: is this is a dream???? Pinky beta u r standing in front of me and u r fine…….(hugged pinky with happiness)
Soon after dadi all the other family members hugged her and expressed their happiness and how much they missed her in these three years……
Pinky: mummiji my hera beta is back and he spoke to me sterday and told he is fine and jus left us with his helplessness…..
All were shocked to listen to what pinky said and asked her is she in her senses????
Pinky: am telling truth why don’t u all trust me… he came spoke with me , touched me and hugged me and called me MAA……………..
As soon as she said so rudy called khanna to get the cctv footage to check and soon they checked and got to knw tat their brother, son, grandson came back to his house to meet his mother and not them…..
At the same time at an unknown place a guy is talking over the phone he was looking perfect for any girl to fall for him…..
Guy( over the phone) : I don’t know what u ppl will do just cancel all the deals we are holding with oberois… do u get that…..if they call for an reason jus tell them that MOHIT SINGH SHEKAR doesn’t like to give explanations…….and that’s final…(shouting so he threw his phone in anger jus like shivay)…
Mohit pov:
I’m not gonna leave you oberois this is just starting and before u guys try to resolve this you will just get something bigger than this… and am pretty sure about ur destruction both financially and emotionally…….
That’s all for today guys…. Actually not getting any comments made me feel bad about my writing I know am bad at writing but to be frank and honest am good at imagining but when it comes to writing am bad and all the words get stuck somewhere and things become and my ff becomes worse….
As I said am near here and was a silent reader for few months and jus wanted to try writing but all in vain… no friends, no readers, no comments….
Last post I jus received oly few very few comments which made me feel very bad but as I started writing with the next part thought of giving it again so lets see for this part..
And am really serious guys im gonna stop if I don’t get ur encouragement and I think none consider me as ur friends am sorry if am wrong but I mean it and feel so……
Untill then take care and bye….
44 Comments
Nice
Thank you dr…
Don’t feel bad . I am a silent reader too and I don’t like commenting but when anyone says that they feel upset that we don’t comment I just write something
STAY POSITIVE. BE HAPPY AND CONTINUE WITH YOUR FF
Yup am positive dr but actually I was bit moody in some other thought an all together ate my mind that’s y I wrote like that and finally I made u to comment I guess…. Anyways thanks a lot dr for ur comment and yeah he energetic wrds….. Thank you dr…
Nice epi
Thank you dr….. Do tell me if any changes or negative comments also dear…
Nyc
Thanks dr
Di plz don’t stop this ff. I’m a silent reader but today u forced me to comment,i like your story very much. Plz for readers like me continue.and I promise u from now on i will comment on your every single work plz for me continue plz…..
Ha ha finally I guess I made u break ur silence and yeah am happy to hear that sure ll not stop coz I wasn’t in such a good mood all sorts of thoughts are my mind so that’s the reason I’ve wrote or mentioned something like that….. Happy to d core u liked my story dr thank you so much…..
tooo nice dear……acche acche ff mein aise chote batein hoti..rehti hein arthi………..
Thank you dr……
Hey. Nice chapter….read the character sketches just now…..actually as there are so many characters so I got confused as to who is who. But I guess one the story proceeds, I’ll be fine with that.
PS- I have posted my first one shot ever. Plz see that if u have time…
I know it was big and allignment too was not proper was in a hurry that’s y and sure ll continue dr.nd sure ll read ur os dr..
Pls do continue…it’s amazing
Sure ll continue……Thank you dr
Hey dear. Why you upset.. You are doing well… Update is awesome and interesting… Waiting for the next update..
Was upset nt coz of ff but so many things made me upset so all together came out in my writing that’s y dr…..Ll update soon…
Very nice
Thank you dr
Archi dear don’t feel bad we are always their. Even iam an silent reader I try to write comments in resent time. I’m like your story. I read all parts of your ff all are amazing. I like you named Robia baby is shivika for remembering shivay and anika as they unite them. I request you dear please don’t stop this story in early .Its was an awesome story. I’m from Kerala. can you become my friend?
I’m waiting for your next episode. update soon.
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*arthi dear
Ofcourse am ur frnd ahsana and thank you that u liked my ff and for breaking ur silence and yup am frm Coimbatore,TN…. And sure ll be ur frnd and v r frnds….. For further personal info msg me dr….
Hey! Why are u upset…it is such a nice ff…and u should continue plz
Was upset due to many reasons but sure ll continue and pl do gv ur comments….
Arthi how can u say like this? Naan indha ffoda 1st partla irundu comment pandren theriyuma? Ur ff is different from others! I thought u accept me as ur friend….but no. Sari paravaa illa. Aanaa ippo nee enna unnoda frienda accept pandriyaa? Unnoda ffa stop panaadha. Enaku indha ff romba pudikum!
Am really happy that someone frm my state talking with me in Tamil am really happy that u r reading it frm beginning and ofcourse na unnoda frnd dhan dr msg me ll talk a lot…. Basically na romba vai adipane so do bare with me….
Hey! dont feel bad…u r an amazing writer nd I really like ur ff…
Like nita said, there were a lot of characters nd even I got confused…
Well, eagerly waiting for the nxt…hope you’ll update soon..
Confusion regarding characters ll.be cleared once further parts come and sure ll write and thank you for liking my ff…And liking my writing thank you
don’t fellsad plz though I m a silent reader I don’t comment I was truly waiting for the chapter I jus loved the plot
and plzz a heartily request to you plzzz don’t stop writting
Finally u broke ur silence and happy that u commented and sure ll post the next part soon….
Arthi plr don’t stop it dear…….. 2day epi was Superbbb!!!!!! waiting 4 nxt……
Thank you dr soon ll.update …
Good one
Thank you….
Love d the post totally amazing update soon but whenever it suits you
Sure ll.update soon dr…
Superrrr
Thank you dr
Awesome epi waiting 4 next
Thank you dr… Ll sure post soon
Arthi if you stop this then what will I do now. Please don’t stop it dear. I really like you ff. I’m sorry for not commenting on previous part but I was stuck in something really imp. Soo plz excuse me. Hope u vl post soon
Am so happy u liked my ff and am very happy……..And really do u like my ff..?????Ll post soon dr…
Nyc part