All the four girls were drunk and now the question was that how this all happened but if they would have wait for searching the reason then it was possible that something else drama would have took place so finding betterment in leaving the place Abhi held Naira and Pragya Kaustuki and Bulbul there Ranvi handled Sakshi and moved towards their car and while driving Abhi being melodramatic father said
Abhi in fake crying tone: what day has come my daughter is drunk and I have to control it I have already said Basudha that keep them far from Verma’s son but you never heard and see my simple girls are now God save or please call me up
Ranvi: Oh Jeeja go wherever you want to go later but first leave us home and then go wherever you want whether to god or go and live on Himalayas I don’t have any problem (OH jeeja bhai baad ma chala jaiye upar pehle humne ghar chhor de pehr tu chahey bhagwan ke jaa chahey Himalaya par bas manney problem ko na)
Abhi being irked and looking towards Ranvi without paying attention on driving: yeah why would you have problem you are….
Pragya cutting in mid: Mehta Sahab if my car got hit anywhere as per your record then I swear I will make you sleep in balcony(Mehta Sahab agar meri gadi is baar thuki na maa kasam aap ko balcony me sulaungi mai)
Naira in drunk state: Hold him tightly and beat him badly (Dharo saley ko Maro saley ko)
Abhi: everyone is just blaming me and my sister she is also blabbering against me only in the state of intoxication whose sister do like this
Ranvi in sarcastic tone: your sister is doing so
Sakshi in sleepy tone: The whole world have pride on themselves but my husband is an insult on himself (Saari duniya ko khud pe ghamand hai haye re mera husband jhand hai)
Ranvi: What the hell is this!! The wives of whole world don’t get tired praising their husband but this one my mother searched for me in the state of intoxication also she is insulting me (sari duniya ki biwiyan tareef karti hai apne husband ki ye meri maa ne ek dhoondhi hai jo behoshi me bhi meri fazihat hi udwati hai)
Abhi: yeah now say that my sister and all I will say how your wife is!!
Pragya being irked: Oh you both will you shut up already am feeling uneasy because of these stinking smell.
Abhi: then who asked you to sit along with them I was having better option to come from any public transport but you never heard me
Pragya: yeah of course and then I would have met with dead body of the car
Abhi: like seriously Basudha!!!! Dead body of the car
They were arguing when suddenly Bulbul spoke in the state of unconsciousness
Bulbul: Randeep that idiot is jerk and now Purab will get the washer-man’s treatment (Randeep sala ullu da patha Purab ne milega dhobi ka phatka)
Abhi: yeah!! Why not…. Listen her now she was less to say just tell me who was that idiot who mixed something in their drinks I swear I will….
Ranvi: what will you do? Will you beat him!!!
Abhi: No I will leave him with these four ladies and lock them all in one room
Pragya: Mehta Sahab….
She was saying but stopped when Kaustuki blurted out something
Kaustuki: Star of Haryana and my favorite is Randeep Hudda, and my father is an old man (Haryana ka star aur mhara favorite Randeep Hudda hai aur mera baap Buddha hai)
Abhi who was driving car applied power break in shock and turned back towards Pragya
Abhi: only this was left to hear, old man seriously!! Oh god(yahi din baki bacha tha Buddha arey re re re kya din aa gaye)
Pragya and Ranvi were dumb struck controlling their laughter on Abhi’s expression they kept finger on their lips and he was continuously blabbering then when it became unbearable Pragya said
Pragya: you want to hear something else like that or want to move
Abhi: now what else is left to listen
Ganga who was silent till now said in boring sarcastic tone
Ganga: why are you driving Papa just get out and then kick each of them so hard that they will reach home flying high
Abhi: whoa you was left now you also start
Ganga: We are your lover from eras whether you agree or not(Arey hum to tere aashiq hai sadiyon purane bapu chahey tu maney chahey na maney)
Abhi: Basudha ask her to stay quiet my mood is getting tempered
Ranvi being sarcastic: are you a heater? That your mood is getting tempered (mood hai ya heater jo temperature badh raha hai)
Abhi taking a deep sigh: shut up
Ganga in a fun mood: We are here to convince you Bapu whether you agree or not (Hum to chaley aaye bapu tujhko manane chahey tu maney chahey na maney)
Ranvi and Pragya were giggling a lot looking Abhi’s expression
After sometime all of them reached home and with much difficulty the three of them took four of them to their respective rooms Pragya informed Bulbul’s parents that she is staying at their place tonight.
Abhi came in the room where she was talking on the phone to someone and looking at his face she said
Pragya: Oh ho till how much time you will show your sadness over a matter sir
Abhi: nothing I was just thinking that who did that I don’t think so it was a mistake because if it was then why the hell every drink got in hands of member of our family only
Pragya smilingly: I know it was from the intension of humiliating Kaustuki and it was done by Randeep only
Abhi: I knew it, that idiot
Pragya: chill Kaustuki will handle it on her own tomorrow as he will come here for sure
Abhi: but what so special tomorrow
Pragya: this question doesn’t suits you
Abhi: I know its Kaustuki’s birthday but why you said so
She was looking at him with widening her eyes and a mischievous smile
Abhi: Okay so it means there is a party tomorrow night
Pragya: an aan surprise party
Abhi: so we have to hide all that Happy birthday and gifts and all right!!
Pragya: No we won’t hide anything because surprise is in the party no the party
Abhi: what do you mean?
Pragya narrated the whole which was muted and then Abhi said “Whoa great Mrs. Mehta this time I think silly is back in mode”
She giggled and screen freeze on them and screen shifts towards Ranvi who was struggling with her wife sorry, sorry not wife but drunk wife she was again and again blabbering something which was against Ranvi and he was all the time controlling himself looking at her state but his patience broke all the limits when she said “husband of all the world is handsome but mine is idiot(Sari duniya ka husband handsome hai par mera wala baudam hai)” this was unbearable for him so he just lifted her in his arms and went in the bathroom there the bath tub was filled with water and he just dropped her in that water and some of her intoxication got over she shouted “who is that idiot who is that creep today he will dead by my hands for sure who is that idiot today I will kill him Jai Mahishmati(Kaun hai kis nikamme ki maut aayi hai kaun sala marne tapak pada yaha aaj marega pakka Jai Mahishmati)
Ranvi : Oh grandmother of Bahubali Raaj mata Shivgami Devi I did that cant you see me or else I shall do something else to remove your intoxication (Oh Bahubali ki Dadi Raaj mata Shivgami devi tumhare is nikamme husband ne kiya ye mai dikhai nahi de raha kya ya abhi aur utarun nasha)
Sakshi: Ranvi why the hell you did this
Ranvi: you are calling me useless nonsense and all from past 4 hours may I know, what is the problem?
Sakshi: when I did that!!! Don’t you feel shame while telling a lie
Ranvi patted his head in disbelief as she never remind anything now so he just took a deep sigh and for the revenge seek he turned to shower on in high speed on her head and she was giving expression same as “What the hell”
Next day
Abhi and all were busy in Kaustuki’s birthday celebration accept Pragya as she said she is going to distribute invitations. Screen shifts towards her she was in the car and stopped in front of a bungalow it was not any other place but the “Mehta’s residence” she took a deep sigh and went in the maid welcomed her and asked her to sit then called Kabir and Divya but before they could meet her someone else met her and it was none other than Dadi she yelled “Why are you here? Didn’t you got relaxed breaking our home that now you are here again!” Pragya went ahead and touched her feet being her value and responsibility but Dadi replied “Don’t show off now everything is just happening only because of you” meanwhile Kabir came down
Kabir: Oh ho Ma now on whom you are yelling now anyone else is left who can leave this home!!
Divya: Kabir control she is your mother
Then their eyes fell on Pragya who was stood there in a saree which was in cream color with golden border and hairs were lose cum braided half and she was looking same as she was entered there after marriage but this time something was different that time there were so many emotions and pain on her face but today she was there with an emotionless face it was looking as if every emotion of her is died now Divya rushed towards her she took blessings from her
Divya: Pragya… come beta sit after all finally you are here (being in joy) Abhi didn’t came with you (asked excitedly)
Pragya: he didn’t came with me and am not here to sit or break anyone else’s family I am here just to invite you for my daughter’s 19th birthday which was to be celebrated in 18 but unfortunately they forgot it with whom I left her on believe that they will take care of her.
Dadi: you are taunting us!!! On what basis and why would we celebrate her birthday she is not a….
Pragya shown hand to her and Dadi was shockingly stopped then she replied
Pragya: before blaming her just think of yourself you are also a woman you don’t have any right to bad mouth about the girls
Kabir: Maa please enough of this because of your this behavior all the kids are restricting to come back what do you want? That we should die without anyone near us
Divya cupped Pragya’s face: at least stay here for sometime , not for your mother in law but for you ma you can right!!
Pragya joining her hands: My ma didn’t stopped me from going so she also went somewhere with my emotions now kindly don’t let them awake I was here to invite you as you are her grandparents she will feel good if you will attend it Namastey
She moved towards the door and Divya was stood with teary eyes as this time her sweet innocent girl was not there who came to her but in her face she was someone who was now stone hearted she was looking and Pragya when reached to Door she was shocked it was Abhi there and Kabir Divya also came following them
Kabir: Abhi please come in for sometime
Abhi with a mild tone: I came here to pick her up Baba and I will surely come back but when my parents will learn that they have only right to take decisions regarding their kid’s life and Basudha did you asked me before coming here? (she was silent) no right!! Just came here to insult yourself, well lets go there is much work to do
He left the place with her and all the environment became silent again and while driving towards home Pragya didn’t said anything because she knew it that if he didn’t said anything now then they will never realize that every time they did a mistake and with that silence both reached home…
It was the time of evening when Abhi was wandering here and there with uneasy face Pragya nodded her head in disbelief and then without giving it damn she continued her work and here Ranvi said
Ranvi: I know very well you want to escape from every work that’s why you are saying so
Abhi: I am not making any excuse I am damn sure he is going to come
He was saying and at that time itself doorbell rang and someone entered with a bang saying “Swagat nahi karoge humara (won’t you welcome me?)” and Abhi patting his head said “I said he will come and see he is there (maine kaha tha ye aayega lo aa gaya)” Basudha in joy went to welcome that person and Kaustuki who was in her room jumping in excitement went towards the door screaming “Chhote Nanu you are back” screen shifted towards door and the face was zoomed it was none other than Yash. And Shreya, Abhigya Prateek along with Prabhas Vibha and Subuhi and her husband Subhash were also there Basudha hugged Abhigya and said
Basudha: I didn’t thought that you will be here so soon
Abhigya: arey why won’t we after all it is our grand daughter’s birthday
Basudha giggled and happiness spread away in the Villa then gaze of Yash fell on Abhi who was stood back and when he looked at him he gave a forced smile and Yash said
Yash: arey!! You are still alive? I thought you ticket to hell would have been finalized till now (arey tu zinda hai mujhe to laga ab tak nikal liya hoga)
Abhi glared at him and Abhigya taking his side said
Abhigya: shut up Yash don’t bully my darling son-in-law
Abhi: Thank god darling you save me otherwise some people just have intension here to kill me
All laughed and screen freezed on them
It was the time of night Party was almost started Kaustuki was with Bulbul who was teaching her something Ganga was busy with Rohan and Naira was stood at side looking at guests just to ignore the contact with Kabir and Divya as she was angry with them and there Abhi was stood in full suit boot it was a long time that he was dressed properly like that after his job was left and then there came Basudha wearing a red suit with golden borders wearing loose dupatta over it and hair style was simple half braided from bottom and loose from top and with slight curls and her specs Abhi was admiring her she was also dressed like that after a long time he was remembering the day when they were just married and her hands were all the times filled with bangles but then she stopped wearing so much of them as he restricted but from that day she wore them today and he was just wishing that if everyone goes from there he will surely hold that hand which was looking beautiful after a long time just because it was making remember their old days but his thoughts were interrupted by someone it was none other than Yash along with Kabir, Prateek and Subhash including Ranvi
Yash teasing him: he can’t be our son-in-law
Prateek: I know it already
Kabir: I doubt on him to be my son too
Ranvi: Nalayak hai (useless)
Prabhas: he can’t be from our family
Abhi being irked: excuse me!!! May I know what all of you are blabbering and Baba you have doubt on your son!!
Kabir: of course I have doubt
Abhi rolling off his eyes: and may I know why?
Yash: because you know only to keep calm your wife and we all know how to irritate them to the core
Abhi: its not necessary
Prabhas: it is necessary
Abhi: why is it so
Prateek: because it has great fun to convince them later
Ranvi: mine case I alter mine always irritates me so am leaving
Prabhas: shut up idiot you have make me feel so low that you can’t even irritate your wife
Yash: You spoiled the name of great Abhishek Prem Mehra who was expert in irritating his wife
Prabhas patting his head: she was your mother
Yash: Oh yeah sorry mummy
Prateek: so you are not worth of calling us in-laws
Abhi: if it the matter then let me tell you I can do it
Yash: OH please we know you can’t
Abhi smirked: you forgot about yours time!!!
Yash: it was me but this time it is she
Abhi: just wait and watch
Prateek: yeah, yeah we are looking ahead for it
Subhash: prove us you are best and worth of calling yourself as our in-law
Pragya was looking for the other arrangements when Abhi sung:
Laal chhadi maidaan khadi, (the red wand that stands its ground)
kyaa khub ladi, kyaa khub ladi (The fight it put up)
Ham dil se gae, ham jaan se gae (I lost my heart, I lost my life)
Bas aankh mili aur baat badhi (My eyes met hers and our story started)
She turned and her cheeks were turned into red she felt a bit embarrassed and went to other side here he continued following her and all other member hooted on him he continued……
Abhi:
Laal chhadi maidaan khadi, (the red wand that stands its ground)
kyaa khub ladi, kyaa khub ladi (The fight it put up)
Ham dil se gae, ham jaan se gae (I lost my heart, I lost my life)
Bas aankh mili aur baat badhi (My eyes met hers and our story started)
Laal chhadi maidaan khadi (the red wand that stands its ground)
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She turned to him and glared at him gesturing him to stop but he didn’t and she went to hide behind Abhigya she was getting irked by this song as she had worn the red suit and he was again and again calling her red wand
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Abhi playing hide n seek with her as she was hide behind Abhigya sung:
Vo tikhe tikhe do nainaa, (Those piercing eyes)
us shok se aankh milaanaa thaa (I had to look into)
Deni thi qayaamat ko daavat, (a calamity I had to invite)
ek aafat se takaraanaa thaa (catastrophe itself I have to clash with)
Vo tikhe tikhe do nainaa, (Those piercing eyes)
us shok se aankh milaanaa thaa (I had to look into)
Deni thi qayaamat ko daavat, (a calamity I had to invite)
ek aafat se takaraanaa thaa (catastrophe itself I have to clash with)
Mat puchho ham par kyaa guzari (do not even ask what I have been through)
Bijali si giri aur dil pe padi (lightning struck my heart)
Ham dil se gae, ham jaan se gae (I lost my heart, I lost my life)
Bas aankh mili aur baat badhi (My eyes met hers and our story started)
Laal chhadi maidaan khadi (the red wand that stands its ground)
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Pragya stamping her foot on floor left from there Kaustuki and Bulbul were giggling at her face and Ganga was dancing stood at her place itself enjoying the song then Pragya was talking to some ladies
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Abhi sung hearing her voice:
Ham ko bhi naa jaane kyaa sujhi (what did it occur to me)
Jaa pahuche usaki toli me (walk into her menacing company)
Har baat me usaki thaa vo asar Jo nahi baduk ki goli me (her talks were far more lethal, than the bullets)
Ham ko bhi naa jaane kyaa sujhi (what did it occur to me)
Jaa pahuche usaki toli me (walk into her menacing company)
Har baat me usaki thaa vo asar Jo nahi baduk ki goli me (her talks were far more lethal, than the bullets)
Ab kyaa kije, ab kyaa hogaa (what to do and what will happen now)
Har ek ghadi mushkil ki ghadi (every moment I spent is a difficult moment)
Ham dil se gae, ham jaan se gae (I lost my heart, I lost my life)
Bas aankh mili aur baat badhi (My eyes met hers and our story started)
Laal chhadi maidaan khadi (the red wand that stands its ground)
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Pragya held his hand and dragged him to the corner asking him to stop all this but he naughtily replied so she thought something and locked him the room but this time Abhi was Abhi he came out of window and on this act of her he sung
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Abhi irritating her more sung:
Tan tanakar zaalim ne apanaa, (every arrow of her)
har tir nishaane par maaraa (found its mark)
Hai shukr ki ab tak zidaa hun (thanks a million…. Oh lord)
Mai dil kaa ghaayal bechaaraa (I am wounded at heart but still alive)
Tan tanakar zaalim ne apanaa, (every arrow of her)
har tir nishaane par maaraa (found its mark)
Hai shukr ki ab tak zidaa hun (thanks a million…. Oh lord)
Mai dil kaa ghaayal bechaaraa (I am wounded at heart but still alive)
Use dekhake laal dupatte me (she carries a dupatta so red)
Maine naam diyaa hai laal chhadi (I called her name as red wand)
Ham dil se gae, ham jaan se gae (I lost my heart, I lost my life)
Bas aankh mili aur baat badhi (My eyes met hers and our story started)
Laal chhadi maidaan khadi (the red wand that stands its ground)
to be continued….
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One more to go so kindly silent reader get up and comment at least now dear ones please
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I’m sad its one more to go….going to miss reading ur ff?
Brilliant! Totally in love with the whole story. Waiting for the next. But sadly I am gonna miss this Beautiful Story Sis!
Wow super to the core ?
????????????????? amazing as usual??????????????????enjoyed it a lot????????? shakshi saying bad about ranvi??????????? sari duniya ko khud par ghamand hai haye re mery husband jand hai????????????? kaustu???????????????? mera baap budha hai???????? naira???????? abhi’s expressions???????
And finally all family members are together now?????
As usual yash trolling abhi????? and abhigya taking his side???
Abhi irritating basu and that song?????????
Awesome seriously awesome it was
Loved it to the core❤️❤️❤️❤️
AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! LOVED IT TO THE CORE????????????????????????????????????????????????????❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Ohh no oly one more left so sad but i jst love it waiting to see the ending loe u didi u seriously gve such an awesome journey which taught us many things tq fr tat love u loads muuaahh??????
Bhen Humor ko galat ladki mili h, yeh hansana nhi hansa hansa kr maarna jaanti h ????????????????????????????????????? Imagine kr meri halat when yash said: Abhi tak zinda h , mujhe laga nikal liya hoga ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Kya mast dialouge baazi thy, from kastu to Saakshi, abhi k expressions ???????????????? and laal chadi ????????????????????????????????? I am dead with this much humor, truly awesome ??????????? Truly! I am dead , superb seriously ????? Saakshi chaa gayi ?????????????????? Ranvi’s expressions, and gangu ????????????? This time I loved the Bold Basu, who just invited Kabir and Divya. Mein toh kehti hun Budhiya ko udaa de ???????? Nikammi, khair Naira ????????? Serioisly everything at its place was perfect, and seriously the flow of humor was constant that again got me in tears ????????????? Seriously! Hahahhahahahahhahahahahhahq ??????? Bhen m gayi. Hatss off again. 1 more to go, na jaa ne kaise ikhtitam ho rha h lekin jaisa ho rha h mujhe maar k dum lega ????? itna kon hansata h bhai ???????? Hatss off.
superbbb dii it was out of the world.. the surprise party is superb.. wonder what moree is left for me… eagerly waiting…. and i guessed the uneasiness as yash coz he can only do that to our abhi and i was right.. awww perfect sasuma and damad.. love thema lot.. abhi teasing pragya wooohhh looks like someone is following their grandpas steps but no one can beat abhi the rockstar..love him totally a superb episode waiting for the last and final perfect one love u dii take care/./
lovely
Fantastic… Awesome… So much of fun, my guess was right Its Yash… When he asked still u r alive? I couldn’t control my laugh, but I’m gonna miss ur SOF thank u so much for this… Waiting for the surprise…
Haye!! Kya likha hai tu?? Mast tha! This is going to end what’s next???
no words… juz superb…the first half was so funny…esp sakshi taunting ranvi!!! that was hilarious…and abhi as usual rocked…
the scene in kabir’s house was just apt… they deserve it…
and then the party…revival of fun it was! the sangwang fam and yash, shreya and everyone came back…juz loved it and waiting for the fun in way!!
i think u hv perfectly planned a joyous end…
waiting for that di…
love u loads????