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Tere Sang Yaara…With you, O beloved Part6(Alternative ending)
This ending is for Saras Maya fans.
I dedicate this to Kavita who suggested SarYa as the jodi name for Saras Maya.All were calling Saras Maya as SaMaya.I thought this is how people call Samay Maya too ,so Saras Maya needed a new jodi name.Surprisingly Kavita called them SarYa.Thankyou very much Kavita.Dedicated to shailusri1983 too as she gave Saras Maya another Jodi name-SaYa.
Thanks to Sydell 4 the banner
Arjun wanted to say no.But suddenly he remembered his promise to Saanjh.
His heart pained.
He thought:Once I broke my promise to Maya and broke her heart.Now if I break my promise to Dusky too …no I can’t repeat my mistake.
Arjun:Yes I need divorce.
Maya was shocked.
She said:Yes..I too need divorce.
Arjun felt sad.
Maya walked out.She saw Vandana and Ayaan being very sad.
Maya gave them a pale smile.
Maya said in her mind:It’s not late at all.There is more time left.
Maya walked off.
After 2 weeks…
Arjun-Saanjh and Saras Maya stood on the wedding mandap in different places.
Arjun was haunted by Maya.
Suddenly Arjun got up from the mandap.
Saanjh:What happened duffer?
Arj:Dusky…I think I am making a big mistake by marrying you ignoring Maya.
Saanjh was shattered.
Arj:You know me very well.I am your best friend.I still can’t forget Maya.So if I marry you I will be cheating you more.Right?
Saanjh felt pain.
Prem slapped him:How dare you hurt my daughter again?Is my daughter a toy for you to play with.
Vandana and Ayaan were weeping.
Arj:I deserve all slaps.But…
Prem slapped him again.Suddenly Saanjh pulled Arjun from Prem.
Saanjh:No papa.Leave Arjun.Duffer is right.He can’t forget Maya.Then how can he marry me?It was my mistake to come between Arjun and Maya even after knowing their love.I should have understood that Arjun can’t easily remove Maya from his heart even if he fights with her.
Saanjh looked at Arjun:Duffer…you are really a duffer to not understand that you can never stop loving Maya.So go to him.
Arj:But now Maya must be ready to marry Saras.
Saanjh:Stop the wedding.I am sure that Maya can also love only you.
Arjun rushed to Saras Maya’s wedding mandap.
He roared:Mayaaa
Maya and Saras looked at Arjun.
Maya was surprised.
Arj:I have come back to you Maya…only for you.
Maya:But don’t you think that you are too late?
Arjun knelt down before Maya crying:I am sorry Maya.I hurt you a lot without understanding your value.Please forgive me.Please give me one more chance.I promise that I will shower so much of love on you that our life will be a heaven like before.
Maya smiled:I forgive you Arjun.
Arjun became very happy.
Saras tried to move away.Suddenly Maya held his hand.Saras was stunned.
M:Saras..you stay here.Never leave my hand.
tere sang yaara
khushrang bahara
Saras and Arjun were confused.
Maya:On our wedding how can you leave me and go Saras?
Saras looked at her in disbelief.
tu raat deewani
main zard sitaara
Maya:Marry me and make me mine Saras.So that I can say proudly that I have the best person as my husband.
Saras was stunned.
O karam khudaya hai
tujhe mujhse milaya hai
tujhpe marke hi to
mujhe jeena aaya hai
Arjun was shocked.
Saras could’nt believe it.
Saras:Maya…but…this marriage…
Maya:You thought this wedding was planned only to make Arjun realize my importance in his life?You thought Arjun came back..so your role is over.Right?No…your role in my life will get over only when I die.Because you are my soul mate who will be with me till my end.
Saras became emotional and surprised.
O tere sang yaara…
khushrang bahara
tu raat deewani
main zard sitaara
Maya looked at Arjun who was shocked.
Arj:Maya…you said you forgave me.
Maya:Yes I forgave you.But I can’t forget everything.I wanted you to understand that your life is incomplete without me and I am successful in that.If I accept you again you will again forget me and my importance in your life.So you should lose me forever.When you lose your hope to get me back you will be restless through out your life…suffering from the pain of losing me.Every moment you will be haunted y my memories.That’s what I want Arjun.
Maya smirked.
Arjun was shattered.
Arj:I deserve it for ditching you mercilessly.I will willing to take this punishment of yours Maya.
Maya smirked.
Maya looked at Saras.He looked upset.
Maya:Don’t think that I am marrying you only to give pain to Arjun.I always took your help to accomplish my mission of punishing Arjun for what he did to me.But in the mean time I learnt one thing.I realized that there is no use of snatching love.Waiting for true love is the best thing.And I saw who my true love is.My true love is you Saras who loved me unconditionally to go to any extent to make me happy.Yes Saras.. while trying to accomplish my goal with your help I realized that I have fallen in love with you Saras.You are an Angel who entered my life to teach me what true love is.I love you Saras.
O tere sang yaara
khushrang bahara
main tera ho jaaun
jo tu karde ishara
Saras smiled tearfully:I love you too Maya.
kaheen kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main
teri khushboo se Takraaun main
They shared a sweet romantic eye lock.
har raat jo aata hai mujhe
wo khwaab tu…
Maya:Will you marry me Saras?
tera mera milna dastoor hai
tere hone se mujhme noor hai
Saras held her hand smiling.
Saras:If i marry someone but will be only you Maya.
Maya smiled happily.
main hoon soona sa ek aasmaan
mehtaab tu…
Saras led her to the mandap.Saras Maya exchanged garlands.
Arjun left not being able to bear the sight of Maya marrying someone else.Saras Maya looked at Arjun going out in pain.
Saras:Maya..Arjun…
Maya:Let him go Saras.It’s our day.
Saras gave a pale smile.
Saras Maya did saath phere.
Maya took the nuptial chain:Saras…make me yours with this nuptial chain.
Saras took it and looked at her happily.
He tied it around her neck.
Maya showed him vermillion:Fill my forehead with vermillion with your finger Saras.
Happily Saras took a pinch of vermillion
and put it on the parting of her hair.
O tere sang yaara
khushrang bahara
tu raat deewani
main zard sitaara(Rustom)
Jhanvi smiled emotionally.
She thought:Thank God for finally giving my Maya happiness and pure love.
The End
4 Comments
It is awesome I love Maya and saras
Thanks a lot
i liked this ending a lot too . actually this ending was too good , so arjun left his marriage and came to maya , but maya is not ready to accept him , felt sad for arjun . finally maya found her true love and married saras . sad that arjun is heart broken , but he should have told his love for maya much before . i loved both the endings , u wrote both the endings in a perfect way . my fav character was saanjh and saras because saanjh always understood arjun very well and saras always understood maya very well and loved her a lot . my fav scene was when maya told Saras..you stay here.Never leave my hand , i always wanted maya to understand saras’s love for her and finally she showed her love for saras in this scene . do write more ffs on beyhadh
Thanks a lot.I have written stories like Mohabbatein n Ye jawani hai diwani including Arjun Maya.