Hiiiii everyone…Sarika and Radha here…..We are here with OS of Shivika….Hope all like it….. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 :)..and share your views as comments…
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LETS START….
In a room, a girl is throwing whatever she gets in her hand… The room is fully messed up. The glass pieces are scattered all over the floor…blood is flowing from her leg due to stamping in glass pieces. Tears are continuously rolling down her cheeks…
That tears were telling a lot…..her pain, how much she is hurt and how deep her hurt is.She didn’t care for her wound on leg….but she cried and cried for the hurt in her pure heart
She screamsAnika’s “why you did this?…why you left me?….why you made me feel lonely?…why?why?….WWhhyy?……”
She cries hard while screaming her heart off…her eyes suddenly caught on an album on the table. She stares it for a long time…Then she slowly starts moving near it wiping her tears
She takes the album and stares at it…….She slowly sits on the ground with the album on hand…..She opens the book slowly…and starts seeing the pictures…It was a wedding album….
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Anika POV
I am Anika Malhotra…daughter of Vivek Malhotra and Sakshi Malhotra, sister of Gauri Malhotra…
everyone in home calls me as anu and my sis as chuttkii
everyone in the home says I am the light of this home…but they are the reason where I am and they made me shine
and also…my…my…my love…
Yes my love…my husband…..my Shivaay…my Shivaay Singh Oberoi…my billu Ji
I fall in love with him…
I am mad for him….
my heart beats gets faster when with him…
I get fully mad when I see him…
Now I am seeing my wedding pics in the album…There are no words in me to describe the feelings when I was marrying..marrying my love shivaay…
But…..It has been 3 months he left … He left me on the day after my and his marriage …..
He promised me he will come back….but he never returned in these days……
Everyone says he will never come back…But it’s not true….My Shivaay…… my love, my husband, my soul…… will come back…
I told all of them that he will come he is alive but no one listens to me??. I know until my heart beats are going on he is alive because he is my soulmate, my love but no one understands me…
Maa(Pinky- shivaay’s mother) also removed me from the house because she considers me the reason of shivaay being dead. I tried to explain her that he is not dead he is alive but she didn’t listen to me.
And now because all the people considers me as a widow …no one is ready to marry my little chuttki … Because they say that after one day of my marriage my husband died so what if same happened with their son…. But they are not understanding shivaay is not dead and this will not happen with their son…..they consider me as a bad luck ……and they say my sister can also be a bad luck…but it’s not like that…there is nothing like that…but no one is ready to believe me…
My shivaay …..the MAJOR SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI…of the Indian army….who left me and family….due to a mission a day after our marriage didn’t come back yet…that doesn’t mean he will never come back…..He will come back…And I will wait for him….
ANIKA POV ENDS
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She cryingly stares at their wedding album…..
On Some other place…..
A group of 12 Indian army officers were shown captured by terrorist….
The main member of terrorist…shouts to take away all the valuables from the officers….
The terrorist starts taking the valuables forcefully from the officers……but the one officer slap the terrorist on the face when the terrorist was trying to take away his wedding ring…..he was ready to give anything…but except his wedding ring….
The terrorist’s being angry starts beating him…..with heavy hard sticks……He shouts and takes the pain on him in each beat..but didn’t give the ring to them….
The terrorist leaves shouting at him after beating him lot of times…..the wounded officer sees the ring in his hand….and stares at the name “Anika” on it….he smiles seeing her name
he says ” I know you will be waiting…I will come to Anika…I will surely come to you….”
One of the army men says: “Our family and the whole India will be thinking we are no more…its nearly 3 months we are captured here by these people….”
Another army men; “yea …you are right…everyone will be thinking we died…would have surely done our last rituals….By the way, Shivaay sir….your love is great…you didn’t give your wedding ring even after they harm you so unbearably..and it’s so sad you have got away from ur wife just a day after ur marriage….by the way…. your body is soo weak now sir….”
Shivaay smiles at them….
Shivaay; ” I will bear anything for my Anika….I will never give this wedding ring to anyone……It contains love of Anika……Don’t know about others….but my Anika will never believe that I am no more…she will never agree with anyone who says this…..She will be waiting for me every moment….she will thinking about me every moment….”
Army men; but will we be able to escape from these people…
Shivaay; we will…we will go back to our loved ones…we will…we should have faith…..
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At Anika’s room…
Anika is crying hardly….hugging her love’s photo….her shiva ay’s photo….
Anika(to herself);; ” Why am I crying…I should not cry…I am the wife of a soldier…I should be strong…I should have the courage to face anything in my life….I will be strong…I will for my shivaay..I will wait for my shivaay….I won’t fall weak by anyone’s words….”
Anika touches shivaay’s photo…and kisses it…
Anika; “Marrying you was my best choice…you are my best choice shivaay’s and always will be…..You are my love, my protector, my hero, and no matter the distance, I will always wait for you…..”
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A few days later;;
Anika is in a market ……
A man stares at Anika and says “hey Anika….why you did that…why you make a son away from family…you are a black dot for everyone….you killed your husband…you are unlucky…because of you, the family lost their son……don’t know when the family decided to make you marry you to their son….oh it was love marriage…you and shivaay was in love naa…”
another man; “ya ya Sureshji…you are right ….they were in love…and it was a love marriage…don’t know what this girl did to make him fall …cheap girl…..by the way Suresh..she has a sister…. she will be also like this girl….She will be also unlucky like her didi………”
Anika shouts; ” Shut upppp…..I will bear anything… but don’t dare to say anything about my sister…..my sister is not unlucky……you guys will never see a girl like her in this world…she is soo good…..she is not unlucky…….don’t you hear it…….”
Saying this she angrily leaves the market….
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On another day
In a party…..
A man; Hey..Mr .Vivek Malhotra, how are you?
Vivek (Anika’s father); I am good Mr. ashik khan
Ashik; it’s glad to hear…but I think you are sad too….right?
Vivek; sad…? for what?
Ashik; For having an unlucky daughter like Anika….and because of her the younger daughter Gauri’s marriage is not happening naa….You should throw that girl out Vivek….that will give you piece….if an unlucky girl goes away from you and your family then…you will be in peace yaar…
Vivek(angrily shouts); How dare you ashik…how dare you call my daughter Anika….unlucky……She is not unlucky……Did you forget she was the one who made our company at this position……every called her as our lucky daughter that time…now when her husband go away from her just a day after her marriage you call her unlucky…..yes we also believe shivaay’s alive and will return back..because our daughter’s love is true….don’t you get it…Sakshi(Anika’s mother)…… let’s leave from here…it’s better we don’t waste our time between these people…”
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One day in morning
Anika is walking through the streets ……
Suddenly and Accidently clashes with a lady…
And the lady is none other than Shivaay’s mother, Pinky….
Pinky looks at Anika…
Pinky; unlucky…..Oh my god….my today is gone….because of seeing this girl in morning itself……
Anika sadly looks at pinky and says ” it’s nothing like that maa”
Pinky; “maa…i am not your maa…do not call me like that…you are a murder….you killed my son….”
Anika; what are you saying?
Pinky; truth…I am saying truth….on a day after your marriage itself…you made my son away from this world…
Anika; it’s nothing like that maa ji…. shivaay is alive…he will come back….
Pinky; I don’t want to waste my time on you…move my way, cheap girl…
Anika sadly looks at her..starts walking…but a man suddenly comes in front of her….
The man stares at her with bad intentions…Anika angrily looks at him and says “move my way”
Man; Ohh babydoll…you looks beautiful……you will be feeling lonely as your husband is not with you….heyy I fill that place..I will not make you lonely….come let’s enjoy…
Saying he touches Anika’s shoulder…….
Anika angrily moves his hand away…slaps him and says “how dare you talk to me like that”
Man; did u slap me…see now I will make your life hell…I will make the day like you will never forget…
By saying he pushes her towards him…and starts misbehaving…
Anika; leave me…leave my hand….
Man; you are gonna remember this day always….come with me…
By saying he drags Anika….. But someone comes in front of him….Anika smiles seeing him…..her happiness was in clouds….. because her shivaay has come back….her love ..her husband..is back…
Pinky who was seeing everything…..gets shocked to see shivaay…..she remembers how Anika pleaded her that shivaay is alive and will come back…how she pleaded her not to throw her out of the house…how Anika never agree with anyone that she is a widow…..she remembers each and every incident….Tears rolls down her eyes….
Shivaay(to the man) ; you said right? she is gonna remember this day always…because today she is soo happy…as her waiting for her husband gets to an end….her husband is back today…
Anika removes her hand from the man…and runs to shivaay and hugs him so tightly…..and says “my shivaay is back..my shivaay is back…”
Shivaay; yes Anika…your shivaay is back for you…because of your love….
Shivaay looks at the man angrily…..he moves Anika towards his back..and goes and fights with the man…he beats the man badly shouting “will you hurt my Anika…”
The man somehow escapes from shivaay’s hand and runs away………..Anika controls Shivaayand hugs him…
Pinky feeling guilty goes home back..she recalls how she mistreated Anika and how she always insulted Anika and all…
Shivaay And Anika walk home joining their hands together…
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At Oberoi mansion…
Shivaay and Anika enters…
everyone was waiting for them..hearing the news from tv…..
everyone welcomes them happily….
Anika suddenly notices pinky sitting silently cryingly…
Anika moves towards her…and holds her hands… and says “maa…why are you crying…see your son is back..I told you naa…your son will come back to you…see your shivaay is back…”
Pinky hugs Anika and says ” I am sorry…you always keep telling shivaay will be back…and I never believed you…and always insulted you and called you unlucky..I am sorry…I am really really sorry…”
Anika; ” it’s ok maa…its ok…now it’s time for happiness…ur son is back maa…”
Pinky nods…and hugs shivaay happily…
Everyone hugs each other due to happiness….
Shivaay hold Anika’s hand…. and smiles at her
Anika smiles at him and asks “you will never make me feel lonely again naa..”
Shivaay; never…
They happily hug eachother…and lived happily ever after…
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“When you love someone so deeply that you can’t let go, the world has a way of bringing you back together…”
“The true soldier fights not because he hates what is in front of him, but because he loves what is behind him.”
“Waiting is a sign of true love and patience. Anyone can say “I love you”, but not everyone can wait and prove it’s true”
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Thanks for reading…..
Credits too; Sarika and Radha
35 Comments
Superb
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That was so emotional. Loved it.
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FANTASTICK
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nice
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That was a really beautiful and heart-touching story. Loved it.
Keep writing….
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Woww..it was very heart touching…
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This was a great concept , loved it .
I thought you will show Gauri’s marriage ending too. But its okay this would be every soldiers story and keep it as a dedication for them 🙂
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Speechless just speechless, ??
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It is a very emotional one and also u touched many of the loopholes in our society. U also showed the bravery of soldiers and the courage of their wives who have the power and strength to let go of their love, soul and world for their country and never blame the countries rivalry for the death of their husbands. U also touched the topic of woman empowerment. If by chance anything happens to a newly married man, the fault and blame is put on the wife. When rarely anyone sees the pain of separation in her eyes or understand the situation of her emotional side. Showing Anika still believing in her love and not changing her stance just for society u have shown how strong women can be. Showing shivaay face all those hardships and still not giving upon his love, u showed that men are no less, they too are fighters. Showing the power of women, strength of woman, courage of men, belief of two lovers, low mentality of society, strength of love and belief has made my heart bounce and throb with content, pure content. This deserves a standing aviation!!!
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wow, fabulous…its really heart touching….
likes the quotes at last, nice concept, keep up the good work…
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Fantabulous
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speechless
its heart touching
wonderful concept
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Dear, it was sooooo emotional. Made me cry..??????? great concept…it is a heart wrenching os…
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I can’t say that I cried but this story moved my heart really close to heart I can’t say anymore but if u write any ff or os just inform me I will read for sure
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currently not writing anything…
when i write…i will surely info u