Hello everyone!! I am mira again!! I hope you all missed me!! This one is especially for ema…sister this fan fiction is just for you since you requested me to write one without wasting time I will write the intro!! If many people like it then I will continue!! But I may not be able to post everyday but I will try to…so let’s start and hope you all enjoy it!!! It’s called DIL KA RISHTA DIL HE JAANE…
CHARACTERS:
KARAN JOTWANI AS SAIYYAM YUVRAJ BIRLA: son of yuvraj birla, arrogant because of his past but later turns sweet, very handsome and has a popping jawline, works in a music company with mittal’s and birla’s
SRISHTI JAIN AS KRISHNA SAIYYAM BIRLA/KRISHIKA MATHUR: sweet, aspires to be an singer, daughter of krishna mathur and sister of khush
HARSHAD CHOPRA AS REHYAN SHARMA: (will be later revealed)
RAKSHANDA KHAN AS GANGA RAI: (will be later revealed)
SAHIL MEHTA AS YUVRAJ BIRLA: father of saiyyam birla, friends with raj mittal, lives in the same house as the Mittal’s
RAJSHRI RANI PANDEY AS SUHANI YUVRAJ BIRLA: mother of saiyyam, doesn’t live with them anymore (revealed later), she is “badi ma” or “godmother” of krishna (srishti jain)
KRISHNA MATHUR: father of krishna and khush, loves her a lot, let’s her do anything she wishes, runs a school called angel’s academy
SUDHA SHIVPURI: bua of krishna and khush
SANAYA IRANI AS RIYA MATHUR/RIYA MITTAL: bhabhi of krishna, wife of khush
VIVIAN DSENA AS KHUSH MATHUR: husband of riya, brother of krishna
BARUN SOBTI AS ARJUN MITTAL: best friend of saiyyam, son of raj mittal, lives with birla’s because his dad and saiyyam’s dad are friends
RAJ MITTAL: father of Arjun, lives with yuvraj and all
MANJU MITTAL: wife of raj mittal and mother of Arjun
ERICA FERNANDES AS SHANAYA MITTAL: sister of Arjun, lives with birla’s
OKAY SO THOSE ARE THE CHARACTERS AND YES IT IS SOLELY ON KRIYYAM BUT OTHERS WILL BE PRESENT HERE AND THERE….LET’S START THE INTRO
Scene opens where the camera zooms in to a building and it says in the front of the building “Delhi Jail.” The screen moves inside the jail and it shows an cell in which an person’s back is facing the camera….the policeman comes outside the cell and says “tumse milne ganga rai aayi hai” (ganga rai has come to meet you) the person who’s back was facing the camera says “mujhe nahi milna koi ganga rai ko” (I don’t want to meet any ganga rai) policeman looks at ganga rai and she gestures through her eyes to leave…she will handle him…he moves out and she moves inside the cell…policeman stops and says ganga ji woh aapko marega toh? (What if he hits you?) She says Maine kaha na let us be…policeman nods and says okay…
She goes and gets a chair for herself…she says pani? The man still facing the other side says no….she says okay how about food? He says no I said na I don’t want to eat anything….she says please a little…the man gets mad and throws the plate in anger and says “maine kaha na I don’t want anything” policeman comes and says aye aise baat karte hai ganga ji se? (Is this how you speak to Ganga rai?) she says sir please let us be…I’ll handle him….policeman nods and goes back…ganga rai says look I am trying to help you get an bail but you…you keep making it harder for police to leave you…he says I don’t want a bail…I will stay here….ganga rai says I want to share your story with the world…please let me help you…I know you are not at fault…I can see it in you….the man says if you know I didn’t do anything, then why doesn’t she believe me? Ganga rai thought to herself who is this she he keeps talking about…for the last 2 years I have been coming here, but all he ever says is she? Who is this girl? I am sure that this girl has to do with his case….i need to extract more information about this girl so I can bail him….i need to stop him from getting hanged….
She comes out her thoughts and says I understand but I am trying to help you….you know for the last 2 years I have been coming here to bail you but you’re so stubborn….why don’t you want to get bailed? Why? And who is the girl you keep speaking of? She asks him all these questions but he says no word…he becomes silent….ganga rai says look I have only 5 more minutes…please if you tell me then I can help you…I want to know your story….i want to share it with the whole world….whenever I ask you about the girl you say nothing….please say something….please…..the man gets flashes of all his moments with the girl before the last 2 years about the girl and all their moments together….he slowly starts opening his mouth….he says she…she i..is….k…INTERUPTTED….policeman comes and says ma’am visiting time is over…she says hold on….yes say it who?
Saiyyam! Who is the girl? Policeman says ganga ji please it’s over….he will never say it and stop wasting your time and leave….she gets up to go but stops and says saiyyam I’ll be back tomorrow and I hope you tell me about the girl….she leaves and saiyyam is finally shown….his eyes are swollen red….it seems like he has been starving for 2 years with no food and no water…he is there physically but innerly he is somewhere else….he mutters very softly that maybe only he can hear and says “krishna”
SCREEN FREEZES ON SAIYYAM’S SWOLLEN FACE AND OTHER SCREEN SHOWS AN WOMEN IN AN DARK PINK WITH GREEN BORDER SARI…HER HAIR IS CURLED FROM THE BACK…HER HANDS HAVE MODERN JEWELRY…..
SO THIS IS MY INTRO!!! PLEASE COMMENT BELOW AND LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK?
20 Comments
I am soo glad u are back Mira.. I also loved ur Mohabbat ki dastan ff.. And ur intro is fabulous… My vote is surely to continue this one..can’t wait for the next part.. Eagerly waiting..
Thank you!!
Nice intro… Waiting for the next episode… Keep writing
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woww…a really nyc n interesting plot…eagerly waiting for nxt…
The starting is like Kitani Mohabbat Hai season 1… Is ur ff based on that plot like how many write on film stories??
Anyways.. All the best for future updates.. Waiting to read them eagerly.. 🙂
Yes nupurjha this is going to be based on kitani mohabbat hai plot but my ideas will be added. It won’t exactly be like the serial.
Thank you!!
Ahhh mira?Yew are finally back??And the intro was awesome?I personally love barun?Thanks for his character in this ff✌
Aww thank you so much!!!?
Wow. Eagerly waiting for next .
Thank you!!
Nyc start
Plz continue ?
Thank you!!?
It was a splendid intro ???i have ever seen and love it thank u very much for writing this ff for me and please do continue everyday and i this ff is differnt from other ff and i even cant imagin what going to happen … in rest of the story and love u alotttt ??????❤❤❤?? ???
Thank you so much ema!!! There’s so much to come haha??????
Welcome back Mira?..Thank u for coming up with a new story..Rocked the intro⚡..can’t wait to read the next epi as this looks interesting…
Thank you so much!!?
Nice start. Can’t wait for next one.
Thank you!!