Okay guys thanks a lot for ur comments and I’m grateful to those who have supporting me throughout the whole journey of Bandhan ….And as I said earlier also this ff is very close to my heart even after being my second work ….And now I have decided to end this within maybe 2-3 parts….I know I’ve been telling since long but now I seriously feel that I can’t continue further….. Well the main reason is I can’t give u regular updates which saddens me and the next is I have come back to the place where I had started from….Even sfter finishing 50 parts of the story I’m unable to entertain u people ….
I have failed to make place in this writing world ….So its better to stop writing and be happy as a reader ….And I didn;t want to disappoint u so will surely finish this ff and about A Hero’s love story I don’t think I will be able to continue…. Really sorry….. And I would not ask anyone to comment because I know some might get angry on me for this ….. I really had a good time writing this ff and glad that I could make so many friends here….
I think I spoke too much….. I never intended to hurt anyone and sorry if I have ever hurt anyone….
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Swara:Am I really …..not….ur sister …Bhaiyu?????
Arnav and all others were shocked hearing this……
Arnav:(immediately broke the hug and looked at her with a shocked face)What?????
Swara:I know I’m not ur real sister and just a responsibility which maa-papa had given u …..
Arnav:(double shocked)Princess…what is this non-sense????Who told u all this????? Do u even know what ur speaking????
Sanskar:Heartbeat…. What rubbish are u talking??????
Swara:(crying and starts moving backwards)U all r liars… The people whom I trusted the most have lied to me….They his such big thing from me…..
Arnav:(while moving towards her)Bacchha….Listen ur mistaken……
Swara:(keeps moving towards the gate backwards)Bhaiyu u and Sanskar made me marry forcefully and then made me guilty….U both cheated me….. U don’t love me….. (keeps blaberring)No one loves me…. I have no one with me….
Arnav/Sanskar:(shocked and guilty)Doll/Heartbeat…..
Sanskar:(in painful voice and moves to her)Listen jaan we can explain….. plz calm down….
Swara:(souts)No I don’t want any explanation……
I’ve heard all ur talks with maasi… U didn’t see me but I followed u that night and I heard everything….. U all have lied to me….
Saying this she turns to the gate and starts running while Sanskar gets shocked seeing this shouts her name which brings back a numb Arnav back to his senses and on seeing Swara running like this all follow her while trying to stop her….
Arnav:Doll…plzzzz stop…..Listen ur mistaken …..Plz once listen to ur Bhaiyu…..
Sanskar:Heartbeat plzzzz…..stop running ….Ur highly mistaken….
Khushi:Swaru….just listen once….
While all three were following Swara ,who was just running aimlessly on the road ,they see a truck which was coming from the opposite direction and their feet get rooted to their places…
Soon Sanskar runs in that direction to save her calling her name but she was just running….The truck driver was continuously shouting and horning but Swara was senseless…. Sanarshi saw the truck go through Swara and the world stopped for them….
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Arnav:(on top of his voice)Gudiya………….
Sanskar:(shouts)Swara………………..
Khushi:(shouts)Swaru…………………
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Ap and Dp who were coming behind them were also shocked to see the scene and even they froze on their spots…..
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Soon the truck passed and then what they saw made them stunned…
Swara was lying unconsicious on the other side of the road with a person beside her lying there…
All rushed there and found Ansh(Swara’s cousin..hope u remember)was lying beside Swara and he had got hurt …..
Ansh:(pats Swara’s cheeks)Shona….(sees Arnav)Bhai….whats all this????
Arnav:(numb and sits beside Swara and calls her slowly)Doll…. Princess… Get up na….
Sanskar:(sees a cut on her forehead because her head was hit to a stone)Jaan…..(keeps his hand on her head)
Khushi:Arnav….we need to take her to hospital…….(but sees no movement in Arnav and shakes him by shoulder)Arnav…..
Suddenly Arnav also gets unconsicious beside Swara making everyone present there shocked and more shattered….
Khushi:(shocked and continuously crying)Arnav…… Arnav….
Ansh:(worried seeing both of them)Sanskar…..We need to take them to hospital….
Sanskar:(out of senses but seeing Swarn composes himself)Ye….e…a…..ah…..
Soon all took Swarn to the hospital and Sanshi were shattered seeing their partners in such a condition while Ansh was trying to control everyone……
Everyone reached the hospital and both were taken for examination…..Doctors came out after sometime and all rushed to them ….
Sanskar:Doctor….how are they?????Everything is fine na????
Doctor:Well Mr.Rajput is just unconsicious ……He is shocked …. And so got unconsicious….
Sanskar:And Swara…..
Doctor:Well she has hurt her head and we need to keep her under observation ,then only we can tell u something….. She is going through a mental trauma and seems like she not responding to our treatment…. We’ll let u know very soon…….
Doctors leave while everyne is shattered and worried……
The screen spilts on the faces of Swarn lying in different rooms unconsicious…….
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Thank u guys for bearing me for so long……Just two more parts….. Take care and no personal grudges and always keep smiling and tc …..Love u all…..
23 Comments
Owwsmm
Awesome but its too short!! No worries post next part soon
U just can’t do this kiddos……Wat happened suddenly……. Take your time and write my dear…… U r best…..
Please don’t underestimate your self…… Its a humble request.
Loved it so so much
Hey….its awesome dear…. U r wonderfull as a ryter…..i lov ur stry very much….plz dont end this plz……u just hve to make this little more long…..i lyk d way sanskar lov swara….i lyk the way arnav lovs his sis….i feel very happy when i see them pampering swara….. Abt comment many are silent readers lyk me….. Plz frgiv us fr not commenting but plz dont end…v’ll vait fr ur updates plz….v dont hve any prblm in late update
Sry fr long coment but plz try to not end thiss ff….plz plz plz pleeeeeeeeeez ….love u tk cre….. Be happpy always n make us happpy vd ur ff….
awesome..plz dont stop it plz..tc..
Awesome praju…Coming to end this ff it is ur wish but pls don’t stop writing..u r very good writer and we all will miss ur stories…
nice
Awesome dr..
Next one soon….
Awesome..
Yaar it’s not we are not giving comments ur posting in night time so we usually study the next day so it will be like it’s next day why to comment that it’s. Ur ff is awesome frm frst episode I am reading this ff too good Dr a simple with cute magical love among all.so dnt underestimate ur self
nice…….
Nice
nice dear…if u end this..come back with other ffs
Awesome
Hey pls don’t end it so soon we will miss u bcz u r a nice writer ok let it be ur this part was awesome
nyc
as usual awsm sissy.. Finally I’m back and look what I got is a bad news.. I’m not saying much but only one thing .. Plzzz don’t stop writing and w’ll always support you
Awesome…… Loved it
Plz didi ban mat karea yeh ff mujhe bohot zada pas and he. Yeh ff na meri favourite he. Tume nai pata hai mena yeh ffs ok kitne bad pad Chukchi hi maine
Zasa Bhi didi exams bohot hai forget about exams silent readers bohot hai trust me. Try making it longer and don’t stop. Bohot interesting hai me soch rhi hu ki arnav such mai swara ka bhai nai he ya team misunderstanding hai OMG BOHOT SUSPENCE HAI IT IS KILLING ME
Didi Pirse kae rhi ho try making it longer
omg 🙁 is she not his sis really… please update soon