Hi… guys…It’s Fidato…With another dream scenes… thank you so much…I’m so happy to see the comments…I’m really glad to know that I can entertain you well… sorry for keep you waiting.. actually…I’m taking time to ma thought process..into words…Sorry.. I will try max to upload faster… thank you all once again for the support and comments… keep supporting and do comment… also guys I never thought it will go this much…But your comments made me write more.. thank you for being with me.. please note I’m dropping 2 from ff name…
Dream scenes of Kriyam part 19
Scene 1
Sayyam went out to call Yuvani… she is taking a sip of hot tea.. Sayyam runs to her.. making her spill the tea.. Yuvani turns to him angry..
Yuvani : ouch..yeh kya kiya…??
Sayyam : oh…sorry sorry sorry…… Krishna is awake..Mein doctor ko bulatha Hum..Tum uski pass jao..
Yuvani : really…
Sayyam : haan…Ab jao…
Both headed to their respective directions..
Krishna slowly opens her eyes…She can hear equipments running sounds..She looked around…Tries to move a little..stretched her legs.. pointing her fingers.. she just want to keep hair strands falls on her face tucked back on her ear..But stops seeing iv cannula on her hands.. she huffed.. then she saw a hand did what she wanted to do.. she smiled and whispers ‘Sayyam’ …
Yuvani : oho.. Krishna… It’s me…
Krishna looked at Yuvani..with wide eyes.. then all memories of Sayyam’s harsh words gushed into her mind..Making her cough… Yuvani concerned..
Yuvani : Krishna…Calm down… everything alright.. Please don’t take stress…
Krishna nods and smiles faintly… she searched for Sayyam… Yuvani understood..Her..
Yuvani : Sayyam doctor ko bulane gaya hai… wo saari raat tumhari pass hi tha..
Krishna frowns in disbelief.. thought to herself… such mein..Wo raat bhar meri saath tha.. nahi aisa nahi ho saktha.. Yuvani meri man behalane keliye..Kah rahi hogi.. after all whatever he blurted out..never..
Doctor came to check her… Sayyam didn’t come inside… Yuvani look back..Eyed him to come in..But he smiles and gently close his eyes..giving her Mein yahi teek hai.. expression…
Doctor : now you are alright…But don’t take any stress…Or tension.. your body is still weak..OK..
Krishna : kya ghar jaa saktha hum doctor..
Doctor : haan… kyun nahi..Par do din baad..OK..
Krishna hesitantly nods…Pouts to Yuvani… Yuvani smiled at her…
Doctor went out.. Sayyam also follow him to know further details…
Yuvani get some black coffee for Krishna..
Krishna gulped all… at once..
Krishna : ithni…Tasty coffee..Mein zindagi mein nahi piya..
Yuvani laughed… she saw outside the room..eyed her to come out..
Yuvani : Krishna tum rest karo.. I will just come..
Yuvani came out..Looks at Sayyam in confusion… Sayyam sighs and smiled…
Sayyam : how is Krishna…?
Yuvani : go and ask yourself.. mein kya tum donom ki messenger hai..
Sayyam : oh..Calm down.. it’s for her own good.. I’m not going to meet her.. phir se no shoot up ho gaya..Tho.
Yuvani raised her eyebrows…
Yuvani : wow… my idea worked out so perfectly…
Sayyam : what…??
Yuvani : haan.. It’s was also my plan.. she winks at him.. Sayyam comes to her..Hold her hands in his
Sayyam : thank you Yuvani…For making me realize Krishna’s importance in my life..
Yuvani : oho…Don’t become filmy.. anything for you bro…
Yuvani pull him to hug… Sayyam also reciprocate…
Sayyam : ahem…
Yuvani : (cuts him) I know I will look after her.. ok..
Sayyam smiles in relief…
Like this two days gone without Kriyam meeting..When Sayyam came Krishna was sleeping or in washroom.. finally she got discharged… Sayyam was so happy…
Krishna thinks to herself..He never come to meet me in these days… is he hating me so much…tears falls down unknowingly…Sayyam about to enter Krishna’s room..But his phone rings… he took the call.. after the call..He felt sad.. he saw Yuvani coming..
Yuvani : what happened…? Why you look so sad..??
Sayyam : I’m sorry… Yuvani.. I can’t come with Krishna..Some problem with ma clients
I needed to go… what Krishna will think.. about…me..
Yuvani : it’s ok.. I will tell her…You go..
Krishna was all set to go back BM..
Nurse came to her..To remove the cannula..
Krishna broadly smiled at her..
Yuvani : Ab Chalo Krishna…
Krishna : Sayyam nahi aaya..
Yuvani : he will come…Kuch zaroori man tha..
Krishna thoughts I know Yuvani…jhoot bold rahi ho tum…
Yuvani : don’t believe me..Ask the nurse..
Nurse : haan..Apka husband yahi par tha.. in fact that day when you are in critical..He was here..holding your hands whole night…
Krishna smiled..I know Yuvani..tumne use se bhi.. Jhoot bulwathi hai… great… I know he won’t come..In fact he didn’t want to see me..At all..
Everyone back to BM… Krishna feels happy.. she came into their room… she felt strange… she looked around… All those memories came to her mind…Their nok-jhok,chasing each other,falls and accidental kiss all…Then his harsh words in hospital.. those words ringing again..She squeezed her eyes and shut her ears with hands…
Sayyam just enter..To see Krishna shut her ears..He concerned…
Sayyam : Krishna…You ok…?
Krishna opens her eyes wide… composed herself…turns..
Sayyam : are you ok..
Krishna thinks yeh..Ithne calm Kaise ho saktha hai.. hmm.. mujhe bhi inka sympathy nahi chahiye…
Krishna clear her throat….
Sayyam looks at her puzzled..Why she is making so build up…
Krishna : Sayyam I want to talk…
Sayyam : ya..Sure..
Krishna : Sayyam…Yeh..hamari… rishtey…
Sayyam : oh.. Please…Come to the point..
Krishna felt like to slap him right on his face…
Krishna : hamari yeh rishtey..majboori mein huyi hai..
Sayyam felt a piercing pain…After hearing ‘majboori’ from Krishna…she continues..
Krishna : tumhe tumhari majboori thi..It mujhe…
She paused…and looked at him..
Krishna : mujhe tumne majboor kiya… yeh shaadi hum donom keliye ek majboori tha…
Sayyam : (looks down) yeh..Sub baathein hum baad mein kar sakthe hai na..
Krishna : nahi…Aaj mujhe Mat ruko Sayyam..Mat ruko..
Sayyam was flabbergasted to see Krishna in new avatar..Bold..Confident..
Krishna : yeh majboor rishtey ko masbooth banane keliye mein ne bohut koshish ki hai…Par Ab mein dhak chuki hum Sayyam… Tumhara peeche peeche… bagthe huye…
Sayyam listening to her silently…
Krishna : mein ne.. Tumhara feelings ke khadar kiye bina..iss rishtey mein tumhe bhaand kar rakha tha.. you were ryt Sayyam…I was selfish…I wanted this unwanted relationship to continue…My mistake…
Sayyam nods his head…to stop her..aisa nahi hai..But she didn’t…
Krishna : it’s my mistake..I never asked you…What you feeling about this relation…Are you happy with this relation.. so I assumed that you were also…Wanted to continue.. but thanks to you for making me realise the truth…
Sayyam was speechless…He don’t know what to do… how to convince her..That he didn’t mean… it was his mistake..Knowing half truth…He blames her.. he understood what she going to ask for…
Krishna : we need to take a decision that beneficial for both of us.. mein ne tumhe iss majboor rishtey se aazaad karna chahthi hum Sayyam… you will be free…from this benaam rishtey..An unwanted relationship…You are…Free..
She laughed in pain…Her eyes get wet…She turns to hide it…
Krishna : please get the documents ready.. asap…I’m ready now…
She wipes her tears..and make a fake smiling face.. turns to go..
She stumbles while walking towards the door… Sayyam..about to catch her…but she stops him.. made up herself..
Krishna : (stern voice) Ab mujhe akele chalna seekhna hai na..
She looks at Sayyam…then headed out.. Sayyam felt her look like he becoming ashes…in the fire in her eyes…..
Precap :
Yuvani : what…??? Are you crazy Krishna…?
Krishna shocked to hear all the Truth… Later Sayyam give the documents to Krishna.. to sign..
I’m so sorry…I think I messed up all… I was mood out…While writing… this part… but also don’t want you all keep waiting for long…So… Sorry..Please do forgive me….. feel free to express… Love you all…
15 Comments
Woow, the intricate details about the emotions gave the story a realistic touch. I loved the way Yuvani is playing cupid. All writings were exquisite and bewitching. I loved the part where Saiyyam says thank u to Yuvani..and Saiyyam’s condition was disconsolate but it created a sumptuous effect on the story…each an every segment was prepossessing and loved the sibling bond.. Maybe a confession of love is in probable in the future. I just want to say u have amazing writing adroitness.. U have multitudinous dexterity.. In endearment with ut writing..loved it and eagerly in anticipation of the next part..keep going.
Oh…My… God…. Such a lovely comment Annie…Feel like I’m honoured…By your words…. Thank you so much… I took so much time to understand what exactly u r saying… Rich in vocabulary… Thank you again…. You are appreciating me too much… Anyway love you Annie..
really wanted the siblings bond happen in ssel..But they didn’t….
I thought I suck in vocabulary ?..but thanks for all the appreciation.. I feel really honoured by being appreciated by such a talented person like u and of course u deserve all eulogize becoz of ur momentous writing.. I love ue beautiful work..
Awesome
Thank you Akshaya…
Awesome waiting for next part
Thank you sinni…
Nice episode. Update soon plz
this was awsome….poor kriyam…both are in tough situation…but this saiyyam is such a fool…this much happenend and still trying to manitain a distance from her…anyways…loved this part…update the next asap….
Thank you Diya…. Will try… Sayyam is new to all happening in his life… He don’t know how to handle this all…Ryt..?
Hi fidato….. nice update. Saiyyam and yuvani bond as usual superb. Krishna expressions were soooooo good. Feeling very bad for saiyyam. As usual u nailed it. Loved ur writing. Update ASAP
Thank you Yura….So happy you like it….
Fantastic episode I’m literally speechless ? so touched with how u have described their feelings such emotional dialogues loved it all the u killed t?I’m so eagerly waiting for the precap
Thank you Maria… Glad you like it dear…
Awesome!!fidato never thought of Krishna being stern and bold…keep writing Dr and update Asap ?