Hello this is VHM back with an FF on IB…I will deal with all the three pairs of IB ….please ignore the grammatical and spelling mistakes….
Om ‘’Shivaay tell quickly whose call it was’’
Shivaay ‘’It’s Bade papa’s call’’
OmRu ‘’What? What did he say?’’
Shivaay ‘’come fast …ask Khanna to reach Godown near Goodluck chawl with Police’’
Om ‘’Called Khanna and asked him to do as Shivaay did’’
They all got into car and Rudra was driving………
Om ‘’Shivaay what did Mr.Tej say’’
Shivaay ‘’Om …Kamini has taken Mahi and my papa in the godown’’
Om ‘’Chote papa also? But how come he has come into picture?’’
Shivaay ‘’we will know everything after we meet bade papa…he is waiting outside godown and keeping an eye on Kamini and Ranveer’’
Rudra ‘’Ranveer is with Kamini…that means …Shivaay bhayya your guess was right …all this is the plan of them’’
Om ‘’yes..and this time we will make sure they are behind the bars’’
Shivaay ‘’only after knowing the truth…I hope Mahi does his best to get the truth out’’
They finally reached Godown …Tej was waiting there……..
Shivaay ‘’Mr.Tej …you here and what’s all this?’’
Tej ‘’sshhhhh……take this and keep listening……..’’ he handed out bluetooths to all of them …….
—————-INSIDE THE GODOWN
Mahi ‘’Maa …why have you brought me here? And why have you tied me?’’
Shakthi ‘’yes Kamini …why did you call me and why did you tie me?’’
Kamini ‘’Shakthi what did you think I didn’t see you outside Ohri’s keeping an eye on us……do you think you are smart…you cannot estimate the intelligence of me………’’
Shakthi ‘’ohh so you saw me?’’
Kamini ‘’yes…I saw you and now I will get what I want from you…..’’ she signalled Ranveer
Ranveer bought papers
Kamini ‘’Come on both of you sign and then I will leave you from here’’
Mahi ‘’maa…what’s all this…these paper’s …why are you doing this? ‘’
Kamini ‘’enough of your drama … I know you were with Anika and Shivaay all this year…and I also know how you became such a big man’’
Mahi ‘’so what’s the problem now? What are those papers?’’
Kamini ‘’are you really a business man…you are asking as if you don’t know? Okk fine you want to listen from me then listen…these are property papers and I want you to sign on these papers, so that I become the owner of all your properties…..’’
Mahi ‘’maa…but why all this…….Shivaay and I both are your sons …so our property is anyways yours…you can stay with us and enjoy your rest of life…I already said that…then why do you want to transfer the properties on your name’’
Kamini was laughing evilly and so was Ranveer…Shakthi and Mahi were looking confused
Shakthi ‘’what Mahi is saying is right … why are you laughing? Mahi and Shivaay are your sons …so logically you can enjoy rest of your life…I am sure if Mahi says Shivaay will give you the same respect as he had given all these years to pinky’’
Listening to Pinky’s name Kamini got angered….
Kamini ‘’don’t take that Pinky’s name infront of me…you know what…she …she is the reason for my this state…….and Shivaay and Mahi will give me same respect as they give it to Pinky…my foot….they can never give me if they know the truth……..’’
Shakthi ‘’what truth?’’
Kamini ‘’not so easily…first sign the papers and don’t waste time….’’
She asked Ranveer to open the knots of Shakthi and Mahi so that they can sign on the papers….
They both signed the papers and Kamini was tying back Mahi while ranveer was tying Shakthi…..
Shakthi at once crossed his legs between Ranveer’s legs and Ranveer tripped but balanced himself……Shakthi threw away the rope and got up…….he hit Ranveer hard and as soon as he fell down he grabbed the Gun from Ranveer and shot it on his leg ….Ranveer screamed in pain …while Kamini was looking horrified at sudden turn of events…he winked at Mahi and pointed Gun towards Mahi……….
Kamini ‘’wait…what are you doing? Why did you shoot Ranveer ? don’t think I am going to leave you so soon….’’ she was about to call someone…
Shakthi ‘’you forgot Kamini I am a sports person and adventurist during college days…so I know how to escape and save myself…..i just shot Ranveer on his legs and if you don’t give those papers back I am going to kill your son Mahi’’
Kamini ‘’Fine …then go ahead and kill Mahi…I don’t care……’’
Shakti and Mahi were shocked ……….
Shakthi ‘’How bad mother are you….you don’t care for your son too….’’
Kamini ‘’ohh shut up Shakthi…Neither Mahi nor Shivaay are my sons…they are your sons …your’s and your dear wife Pinky’s sons’’
Shakthi ‘’what?’’
Kamini ‘’shocked ? yes but this is the truth’’
Shakthi ‘’I don’t believe this’’
Kamini ‘’if you don’t believe ….ask your sister Roop……’’
Skahthi ‘’what has she to do with all this?’’
Kamini ‘’what she has to do….’’ She smiled and continued ‘’she has done everything ……’’
Shakthi ‘’I still don’t believe you…because you are cheater ………’’
Kamini ‘’enough …I will let you know the truth today ‘’
Kamini started spilling the truth to Shakti while Mahi was listening in the room and Om, Tej, Shivaay, Rudra were listening from outside
(FLASHBACK IS THE NARRATION OF KAMINI TO SHAKTI)
——————-FLASHBACK STARTS
After our college …I was trying to earn my living as my state was getting worse with no money …….during college days we were boy friend and girl friend and I got addicted to comforts being with you and imagined my entire life with you …and thought you would marry me………but you married Pinky………I was angered and wanted to seek revenge for leaving and marrying her..…but Oberois were so rich and were amid so much security that reaching you directly was impossible…I was waiting for an opportunity to seek revenge……..i was keeping an eye on you though ……
Pinky on the other hand was unable to bear child given to her medical conditions and was under immense pressure of giving heir to Oberois……. her chances of bearing child were becoming less ….i knew Doctors had said that her chances of becoming a mother was almost getting to zero…. before 34 years , it was the time when differences started to crop between your family and Roop …….
Roop was planning to destroy your family……..i understood Roop’s intention , so I met Roop then and spoke to her about my revenge……she said she will think of a way to help me …so as to complete my revenge and her revenge too…
Roop made a plan ……she wanted to trap you in an extra marital affair relation and wanted to insult you in front of your family members , so that you will be out of OM…….you were going on a tour for some business for a week and that was the best time for her to implement her plan…… Roop followed you…she made me meet you while you were in your business trip ……she sent me in your room in pretext of taking some help and you allowed me……I took you out of the room while talking with you and Roop entered the room and mixed sedatives in water and left from there….as she left we both came in ……I was just waiting for you to drink the water ……you drank it and fell asleep……..next morning when you woke you saw me beside you as if we have had physical relation…….you still did not get moved and left from there angrily…….Roop informed Tej that you slept with me …Tej remained mum……..
I thought my plan failed…………so did Roop…..but when you and we returned back, we got to know Pinky was pregnant…that’s when Roop made her next move………we waited for 9 months till the delivery of Pinky……..finally one fine day pinky was in pains…it was as if God was helping us….your mother was on a pilgrimage, Tej and Jhanvi were on a business trip…..so Roop came in pretext of helping you…you didn’t know what to do and took her help………when Pinky was still in labour , ……Roop in pretext of talking with midwife about Pinky, bribed the midwife in hospital to ask you to get some injection which is not available easily in hospital premises, stating Pinky’s situation…the midwife did what Roop asked her to do……you agreed and left from there leaving Roop alone in the hospital…..…it was then Pinky delivered twins baby boy’s …Roop took away both the twins and replaced with a dead baby girl who was born to someone unknown in the hospital.…….Pinky was still unconscious……
Roop handed over the twins to me and asked me to sleep in the nearby room as if I delivered the babies and not be seen by you………Roop came back and stood outside the labour room…..you too arrived ………….
The midwife came to you from the labour room, and said Pinky gave birth to a dead baby girl………you were shocked as you knew Pinky can never become a mother again…..and you were worried about Pinky’s health and state of mind………
——————–FLASHBACK ENDS
Kamini continued ‘’then you very well knew what happened’’
Shakthi ‘’ yeah I remember…….’’
Mahi was shocked while Kamini was sheepishly smiling…….Shivaay, Om, Rudra, Tej were even more shocked ………when Shakti continued
(FLASHBACK NARRATION AS CONVERSATION OF SHAKTI AND KAMINI)
Shakti ‘’After knowing about dead baby girl….i asked Roop to leave from there as I wanted some time alone for myself..…Roop left…….I was walking in thoughts in the hospital to inform my family members about Pinky’s delivery..…that’s when I heard cries of babies and turned to see …I saw you asleep with twins beside you ……..i took one of the twins and kept beside Pinky…….’’
Kamini ‘’yes…you did that…….unfortunately while doing that a daima saw you………so You gave money to that daima to keep her mouth shut……’’
Shivaay who was listening all this got numb…he remembered the daima video and how he believed it to be Om …he realised that daima was referring to him , and that too daima was mistaken…..
Shivaay came out of thoughts when Kamini spoke
Kamini ‘’YOU WERE ACTUALLY GIVING YOUR AND PINKY’S OWN SON TO PINKY that is SHIVAAY AND PINKY’S OTHER SON REMAINED WITH ME that is MAHI………later you came back to me and asked me where is the child’s father…I acted and cried that you were his father ……as the child was the result of our physical relationship during your business trip…….you still didn’t believe and left from there…..
Roop never came back to me again, as it was decided between us that we will not meet after that and I can do whatever I want to do with the children of your’s and Pinky’s.…..but I met her once and asked her about the midwife who helped her…she smiled and said that she killed that midwife and warned me not to meet her again in my life….i obliged and never met her……..I thought to raise the kid against you all and when he grows up …bring him back to oberoi mansion and ….make him claim his rights as your Son…….. and I as wife of you and as mother of your son born out of our FAKE EXTRA MARITAL AFFAIR.…….’’
Shakti ‘’Now I understand why you didn’t even think once before shooting Shivaay last year……I always used to think how can you kill your own son……..’’
Kamini ‘’Yes, I never cared about Mahi or Shivaay whether they are alive or dead ‘’
Mahi, Shivaay, Tej, Om , Rudra and Shakthi were shocked……………
Kamini smiled ‘’So Shakthi ….now you can very well kill your own blood, MAHI …I don’t mind…all these years I have just insulted Mahi as Nazayaz only to bring out my anguish on you and Pinky…..i wanted to Kill Shivaay to take revenge then……but Anika took the bullet……
one year before when Anika did DNA tests of Mahi and Shivaay they matched …infact they were bound to match…no one even thought of getting DNA test of Pinky and Mahi/Shivaay to be done……..without thinking anything your brother TEJ SINGH OBEROI kicked Shivaay out ….he was also not at fault…Tej would have remembered Roop calling and informing about our affair and he thus did believe that…….
and my revenge of getting insulted during Ranveer and Priyanka’s marriage got settled…..Pinky ne tho apne pairon mein khud hi khuladi maar lii and your relation now is known to me……I just needed money now as my revenge is over……..so I am leaving now….go hell with anything and everything as I got what I want ..’’ Kamini moved taking papers…….
ShivOmRu entered the godown as soon as Kamini completed speaking the truth and trying to leave………
Kamini and Ranveer were shocked………OmRu ran towards Ranveer and held him before he can slip away……..
Tej entered with Police…………..
Kamini was looking confused as how could they come to know about all this………
Mahi smiled and went near Kamini who was by then held by lady police officers……….he snatched the papers from her and tore them infront of her………..
Mahi ‘’Thank you KAMINI……..I thought to give you respect even after what all you did with me all these years….…but you don’t deserve any respect…you brought me up for your revenge and you didn’t think even once about my safety when I was at gun point…all you needed was money……so now earn your money by working in jail……..i never expected you will fall so low to seek revenge …..for you only revenge , greed mean everything…relations, affections, happiness are terms not found in your dictionary………….just leave and I will ensure you to be not at peace……….’’
Shivaay came near Ranveer and slapped him hard for hurting his bade papa and his loyal employee Khanna and there by trapping Mahi which resulted in shock to Anika……….
Shivaay ‘’Ranveer I thought you would have changed but few people can never change……. with your stupid action you have put my wives life in risk and for that I will never leave you…I will kill you…………’’
Mahi stopped Shivaay……….
Police took them away………
Shivaay hugged Mahi…’’you are safe Mahi…you are safe………come we must rush to Anika first’’
Mahi ‘’what happened to Anika? Is she fine?’’
Shivaay nodded No and cried …….Mahi was confused, so were Tej and Shakthi………..
Tej came near Shivaay and held him
Shivaay hugged his bade papa and cried……….he cried helplessly……….Tej reciprocated his hug….
Om had tears of happiness in his eyes…and so was Rudra’s state……
Tej ‘’ Shivaay …what happened to Anika …tell me …’’
Shivaay ‘’bade papa…….can I call you now bade papa’’ he looked at him teary eyed…….
Tej ‘’off course …….you were always my son and you will always be my son……we will talk about this later but first let me know about Anika’’ he spoke looking at Om……
Om smiled looking at Tej , wiping his tears, Tej had a bigger smile….
Rudra explained everything……….and Tej , Mahi and Shakti were stunned……….
Tej ‘’this is all my mistake…….come first let’s go to hospital……..’’
Tej ‘’Shakthi inform our family members and bring them to hospital …fast ……..’’
Shakthi and Khanna left towards OM while Tej, ShivOmRuHi left towards hospital………….
Precap : union of Oberois
So this was the twenty fourth part …please let me know how you felt after reading this…any comments good or bad are welcome…I will try to respond as soon as possible…….
97 Comments
Super akka really loved it.. pls……….fast ga upload cheyava next epi…????
Thank you so much chelli……next episode inka rayaledhu…precap rasi vadilesa….ippudu modalu pedathanu
Awesome……
Waiting…….for next part
Thank you so much for posting your opinion Bhuvana…thanks a lot…next part i will upload once i complete writing
VHM di…..
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Thank you so much Aashiya…will post once i complete writing…sorry had exam today so couldn’t write the next episode…but i will upload one episode everyday….
Finally truth is exposed….phew….it was amazing???
Thank you so much Honey ….hope you liked it….and hope it made sense too ….
Amazing episode diii…..its just fabulous….i m ur big big biggggg fan….keep writing…nd post nxt part soon…..
Awee thank you so much Shreyanvi…am not a celebrity dear …so i am your dii and your are my sissy ….yeah will upload next part once i am done writing……
Sorry di, I can’t able to comment on last page because of some busy schedule but i read it. It was an awesome part and I just loved it. By the way, coming to this part it was just amazing and I am eagerly waiting for next the union of oberois.
Thank you so much Bavatharini Babu….no worries dear it happens …work comes first so i am glad you set your priorities correct….next part after i complete writing…i will upload
Awesome…..
Thank you so much San
Superb update
Thank you so much fffan1234…thanks a lot
Waiting eagerly for next part. Please update today if possible…
Will try to complete the episode today itself and if it happen i will post next shot today itself
Awesome update. I just loved it. pls post next part soon. I m waiting eagerly for it.
Hey Lincy Arnav…after a very long time…glad to see you back…thank you for your super awesome opinion…will upload next shot as early as possible
G!!!! Superb……Can’t able to wait for next part
G !!!! Thank you …..will update as soon as i complete writing the episode
Well written mistry
Thank you so much R ..i am glad you liked the mystery
Kya kya twist lati ho tum yarr…sarlak homes ki mystery bhi fiki padjayegi…. nice…just out of words.
Ha ha ha …Thank you so much Arpita…aise twist nahi laayi tho mera FF padne layak bhi nahi rahega….kya karoon….
Awsome episode…totally fantastic..You nailed it Harika di….I am one of your biggest fan…..pls update next Epi asap….I’m just in love with your writing style ….lots of love…keep writing
Thank you so much Ahanna….you guys are making me celebrity in TU page but i prefer being your dii-siisy relation than celebrity-fan relation….lots of love to you too….thank you dear…my writing is making you happy is a big compliment for me
Awesome. Loved it. ?
Thank you so much dwet…thanks a lot
This was really really very nice epi.. I feel as if im reading a serial update everytym.. I repeat.. Ur story wud make a super duper serial plot.. Really brought tears to eyes in dat can i call u badepapa line!! Amazing dii!!
Thank you so much Sam for your confidence on me…i am glad you liked the Ff and the episode…awee so sorry dear but …i thought practically when i wrote the scene as in oprevious episode Tej demands Shivaay to call him Tej not bade papa
In love with your writing .Thank you for this ff .plz post next one asap
Thank you so much Kripa…am gald you are liking this FF……next episode as soon as i complete writing i will upload it
Awwww….. It was awesome fantastic… Ur great dear….. I am ur die heart fan….. Excited for the next one….. Tq for posting it soon ….. soon Post the next one also……
Thank you so much Sagithya…ohh no …you are my friend and i am your friend…no fandom dear, as i am not a celeb…friendship is much precious to me and i am glad you are liking the plot and FF
Jabardast another episode aaj hi post kare please please
Thank you so much Astha….aaj post karne ki porri koshish karoongi par vaada nahi kar sakthi
Wow super but dont show anika got conscious fast let shivaay suffer a little pls
Hey Tashpre…thank you so much..Shivaay will repent but there is a major twist in the tale which i didn’t put in Precap so …i hope you will enjoy when you read the next shot…
Awesome…finally truth exposed loved it to the core di???? fabulous part eagerly waiting for next part di update soon
Thank you so much Niriha…haaaaaaaan finally truth exposed……thanks you so much once again dear…will post once i complete writing
Woww…finally mystery and truth revealed… so happy to know that shivaay and maahi are Shanky’s sons..i want something like this to happen in real IB…as usual awesome and mind blowing episode…eagerly waiting for union of oberois nd some happy moments…
I’m also loving the Mahasangam of IB and DBO…
Nd thanks for ur and everyone’s wishes..my today’s exam went too good…
I’m so happy nd blessed to be here on TU…
Hii dear I’m so glad to know.. You are also from varanasi… Chalo koi to mila mujhe…..
Thank you so much Zaveesha ….i donno about real IB what’s in the CV’s brain…but this plot seemed to fit and satisfy all loose ends CV’s left in real IB…i have changed 6-7 plots and finalised this before uploading…too much of a work…
yeah next episode some happy and emotional moments…that’s a great news exams went well is something to celebrate and hope you had a super awesome celebration yesterday…
Thank you for the wishes dear…take care and loads of luck to you too
You are fantabulous as always….vhm…. wow tej was not plotting anything.instead he helped om and shivay. Your detailing of the scenes are really good…… I literally see the whole scenario in front of eyes. Everything becomes normal one by one… Waiting for the reunion of shivika and oberois
Hey Katz…thank you so much dear…yeah Tej was not plotting …why and all will reveal soon…not more suspense remained……awee so sweet of you to imagine the scenes while reading…yeah everything will become normal eventually …..next episode you will get answers to your expectations….thanks again dear
This is so so so very good….I love your ff’s a lot di!!!! So good…I love you for giving such an awesome story!!
Thank you so much Anu…….i love you too for reading all the episodes patiently and then giving me much required motivation ….loads of luck dear
awesome part waiting for the next one…hope anika is fine
keep up the good work
Thank you so much Nitestar….You have to wait to know Anika will be fine or not…surprise in next episode for all the readers…..thank you for the wishes
I loved every bit of the ff it’s the best ff ever eagerly waiting for the next part…
Thank you so much Bhanusree….thanks a lot…next episode very soon
Happy afternoon didi.
For me this is 3rd most awaited part n HAPPY EMOTIONAL PART DI!!
You don’t know di, how much u make me happy! After one and half day I m smiling di(except yesterday night one hour mahasangam epi)!! If I m imagine these scenes….I can’t say how I m feeling. U r just nailed it!
Yes di, you fulfilled my wish… But in ur style! I m literaly jumping di…. So Tej is good person…..but still there is something missing!
Tej n Shivaay union is emotional!! Om n Tej’s expression….uff!
Shakthi, how did he comes in this matter? This is also Tej’s plan? Eagerly waiting for next part di.
Once again thank u sooooooooo much di for make me smile!! Lots n lots love for u di. Take care n bye…… Have a nice day di!!
Good evening Gayathri,
Awee so sweet of you dear..thank you so much…
Are you allright? why weren;t you smiling for one and half day ? that’s not good…whatever is the circumstance smile gives you strength and i am saying this with a bit of experience……
Your telepathy was bang on…something is missing …yes, that something will be availble in upcoming episodes….
All your answers will be answered in next two episodes….
You should smile and i am happy reading this FF you smiled…keep smiling dear…lots of luck and best wishes from my end always with you…….have a nice day
Hii dii…. This is awesome update…. After reading your this update.. I am falling more into love with your writing skills…
I am quite good dii.. And varanasi weather temperature is also reaching to his peak…..
And about mahasangam episodes… I am feeling like it is trying to cover the loopholes…. It is good but I am not satisfied with the ib dbo integration..
What is your opinion on this???
Thank you so much Nikita… i am not getting any words to thank you dear…
Good to know you are doing fine…surprisingly this time temperatures have soared up in Europe too…we ussually get Summer in July-August …this time it started in May..
Mahasangam first episode was not upto mark…it was like second half i was watching only DBo…yesterday’s episode was okay …hope we get more and more in the upcoming episodes…
I have stopped expecting from CV’s of IB …so without any expectation i watch and so i feel normal ……..
Superb epi…. ??
Thank you so much Rasika
outstanding all i can say
Thank you so much Pritika…thanks a lot……