Hey! I’m back finally after long wait with an adventurous episode! Do read and comment! Jai siya ram..
Disclaimer:-This story has nothing to do with reality, it’s written just for fun and I’ve no intention to insult any of the characters of Ramayana..
Here we go..
The episode starts with Mandavi roaming in the corridor of the beautiful palace of Ayodhya, the sound of her anklets being the only sound in the silent atmosphere of the palace and anxiety visible on her grief stricken face. She is worried about her beloved Bharat and the sad state of the palace. Her thoughts are interrupted by the crying noise coming from Shatrughan’s room. She enters the room, to see Shrutkirti crying. Shrutkirti is sitting on the floor, her royal robes spread over the ground and tears spread over her face. Mandavi is well aware of her thoughts. It has been 11 years and 8 months since Ram-Sita and Lakshman-Urmila left the palace, and since then no one has felt happiness in the palace. The luxuries of the palace feel no one less than a prison.
“Kirti,” Mandvi caresses her head sitting besides her and Shrutkirti hugs her.
“Jiji, when will these fourteen years end? They seem like 14 centuries, they’re not ending at all.”
“I know Kirti, but they shall end soon. See, almost 12 years are complete and the remaining 2 will also end soon. Then, only happiness would fill every corner of Ayodhya.”
“I can’t wait anymore. Every day and night I see Swami crying, his heart blaming himself for jijashree’s state.”
“I understand Kirti, but you know we’ve to stay strong, for our husbands and mothers, and for our sisters who’ll return soon.”
“I can’t bear this any long jiji. I feel that life is just taking tests and nothing else, I fail in every test. Sita Jiji told us to take care of everyone in the palace, to keep them happy, but I failed to bring even a small smile on their face. They unwillingly eat food, but that food isn’t the thing that’ll eradicate their hunger. The only thing which can quench their thirst is the end of these fourteen years with the arrival of the king and queen of Ayodhya. I feel like I’ve failed to-”
“Kirti my dear,” Mandvi says hugging her,”You’ve grown so much all of a sudden? You’ve not failed Kirti, you’ve fulfilled jiji’s expectations. And, if you started crying like this,it’ll hurt Shatrughan more. And me also.”
“Ok jiji I won’t cry. I will be strong for everyone.”
“Why are you crying Kirti?” They’re interrupted by Shatrughan’s voice who is worried seeing tears in Kirti’s eyes.
“N-Nothing Shatrughan, sh-she was missing..”
“Ram-lakshman bhaiyya and Sita-Urmila Bhabhi?”
“No, not at all. She wa-was missing our childhood in Mithila. It was fun!” Mandvi finishes her sentence quickly.
“Are you sure Bhabhi?” Shatrughan asks tensed. Kirti wipes her tears and nods. “Jiji is right,” she says so that Shatrughan doesn’t get tensed.
Mandvi takes him to a corner. “And you’re doubting your Bhabhi?” Mandvi asks with fake anger tone.
“No not at all Bhabhi, just like that. I’ve never seen her cry like this.”
“But she has seen you cry like this,” Mandvi says concerned about Shrutkirti. “And that obviously hurts her. She feels that she’s unable to make you happy.” She walks out of the room saying so.
Shatrughan turns to Kirti who has regained her composure and smile.
“Kirti,” he makes her sit on the bed with a smile. “Thank you.”
“Thanks? But why so swami?”
“For coming in my life and making me feel lucky to have you.”
“But-”
“No Kirti, let me speak today. I know I have hurt-”
“Shhhhh,” Shrutkirti places her finger on Shatrughan’s lips. “No Swami, you’ve not hurt me at all. You’ve made me live throughout these tough years. I love you Swami, I love you!” She keeps her head on his chest and he hugs her back. “I love you too!”
Mandvi looks at them from the window and smiles.
In the forest of Panchvati
Urmila is walking, rather making rounds from one tree to another, thinking something. Sita is looking at her, trying to figure out what has happened to her. Finally she breaks the silence.
“Stop it Mila,”she says. “Don’t make rounds like this. Walk in a straight line and then you’ll come back after circling round the three lokas.”
“Jiji, I’m trying to think something, please don’t taunt me,” Urmila replies and starts strolling again.
On the other side of the hut, Lakshman is walking in the same way, murmuring to himself. Ram keeps the arrows he’s making down and holds Lakshman’s hand. “What happened Lakshman? Why’re you tensed?”
“There’s nothing wrong,bhaiyya. I’m okay.” Tired of walking, Lakshman goes and sits on one side of a large rock. Urmila also sits on the same rock, without noticing Lakshman.
“What happened to both of them?” Sita asks to Ram.
“Even I don’t know Siya, both of them are behaving like this since morning.”
Sita suddenly recalls something. “Raghunandan! Remember?”
“What Siya?”
“Raghunandan! 12 years will be completed soon.”
“Of exile? Yes I know but how can it be the reason of Lakshman and Urmila’s behaviour?”
“No Arya, not of exile, of our marriage.”
“Is it so?” Ram says in usual manner, without any excitement, confusing Sita.
“Raghunandan, we are going to complete 12 years of our married life and you are saying it so normally? Isn’t it great?”
“I don’t find any special thing about it. We complete one year of our married life every year.”
“It is special, we not only complete one year of our married life, we will complete one year of our exile, we will also complete one year of togetherness.”
“So?”
“So, it’ll be twelve years since we know each other, twelve years since we dedicated our lives to each other, we have faced many challenges in this journey, but always completed them with each other’s company.”
“And?”
“And the completion of these twelve years will signify that we’ll complete all the difficulties of our life till we are together.”
“Oh Sitae,” Ram smiles and holds her hands. “I feel so happy to complete these years with your company, with the half of my soul.”
“Then why were you calling it an ordinary thing?”
“Just because I wanted to see it through your eyes. And I feel blissed to live these 12 years with you.”
Urmila thinks,”What should I do to make this year special for Sumitranandan?”
Lakshman thinks,”Wait a second, why should I plan anything? This time she should do this.”
Urmila thinks,”You’re thinking the wrong thing Urmi, he can’t plan anything properly, remember what happened last time? He mistakenly left that beautiful blue lotus he brought for me outside, and at night a squirrel came and ate it up.”
Lakshman thinks,”Leave it Lakshman, do it yourself, she won’t do anything, and if she does, she’ll create a mess, last time she spilled the soup all over and burnt her hand.”
“But Urmila, don’t blame Sumitranandan,” thinks Urmila. “He must have forgotten to keep the lotuses in safe place. Not his fault, and you also had spilled the soup and created a mess.”
Urmila decides to collect Lakshman’s favourite berries from the deep forest and ingredients to make soup and moves to the forest. Lakshman moves towards the river to collect lotuses, unaware that a big danger is going to befall on them on their special day.
Sita looks at Ram and thinks,”I know Raghunandan that you are smiling just to make me happy, and you’re shattered from inside thinking about Ayodhya. We’ve never celebrated our anniversary with much pomp because we very well know that Bharat Mandvi and Shatrughan Shrutkirti must also have not celebrated it, but I promise you that I will try my best to make your heart happy this time.”
Light years far away, on the planet of aliens
Boota Zora notices movement in Manthra’s hand. Alien doctor tells him that Manthra will gain consciousness soon. The aliens grin evilly. Biota Zora sees the photos of Ram Sita Lakshman and Urmila on a television like screen and laughs. “Soon I’ll take my revenge.”
Teaser for upcoming episodes:- Manthra gains consciousness and laughs. Lakshman falls in swampy puddle in an attempt to collect lotus. Sita lights fire to cook food but fire takes form of volcano. A lady asks soldiers to let her go out but soldiers refuse. She elongates her nails and kills the soldiers. Urmila lost her way in the forest and faints.
And I promise that the next update wont be delayed at al! Thanks for reading? Do leave a comment and thank you all who have supported me! I hope you liked it.. Jai siya ram
22 Comments
“I can’t wait anymore. Every day and night I see Swami crying, his heart blaming himself for jijashree’s state.”
Oh dear god…it was heart wrecking….luved it a lot….shruti n mandavi….
Then anniversary thing was anazing as well…..
N precap…my goodness…waiting eagerly….
Update asap…don’t go this time….
Love
Arna
Aww dearie thank you so so much for such a sweet comment..pakka will update soon without vanishing.. Love you ? jai shri Siya ram
Hehe….yeah…don’t vanish….waiting…luv u too ???
Superb update soon
Thanks alot bhaiyya ? jai siya ram
suberb episode vanshu… loved every bit of it..AAH!! the precap
Thank you very much dear..n don’t worry about Precap, we all know its going to be happy ending at least ??????????
after so many days i got to read all the episodes . all were wonderful dear . todays episode was really emotional and nice . loved this epi and love u loads dear . how r u dear ?
So here you are ? who vanishes lyk this? You know I missed you so much? Where were you ? And How are you? How are studies going? How….
Ok ok first answer these questions ??? then I’ll ask more ? I’m fine didu..??? love you too ? ? thank you so much for your sweet sweet comment ?? Jai Shri Siya Ram and don’t get gayab afain
i am fine dear, awww…i wont vanish here after , i vanished because of my studies only , so much to study and yes my studies r going good , i have gone to my tenth standard , and u have gone to ur 9th right ? and have u seen , there r rumours that saurabh raj jain who played krishna will play the role of lord shiva , i dont know if its true . dekho meine sare questions ki answer de di ?
If you vanished again I’ll send alien and manthra to your house to capture you ?.. Hmm but shri ram will rescue you then.. Will have to think some other punishment..
Yep.. Got it!! If you vanish again I’ll always talk to you in alien language.
Krndi karni Kiyo parakrab martil lifap tesher?
omg dont send manthra and pls dont talk in alien language because only the one who writes on aliens( which is u )can understand this language ??????? . pls translate this to me my sweet sis ?
HEY EVERYONE!! DON’T IGNORE THIS.
? WE ALL HAD STARTED OUR JOURNEY FROM SKR WRITTEN EPISODE UPDATE PAGE.. That used to b real fun. After seeing the epi on TV, going daily to the pg and commenting had become a real pleasure ?? express ing our views on the episodes, and those discussions gave us a chance to learn more. That lil thing is something we all miss, and I know ff can’t give that slight feeling of fun (esp. If its written by such delayed writer lyk me ?).. THOUGH SKR HAS ENDED IT LEFT US WITH SUCH MEMORIES WE WONT FORGET EVER, AND MOREOVER, IT GAVE US SO MANY FRIENDS AND SIBLINGS ?..
There are two more mythology (history) shows to start now, one is KrishnaLeela on &tv which will cum Monday to Friday, and second is MahaKali-anth hi aarambh hai on colours, which will b a biweekly show, mostly Saturday and Sunday.. And there will be written updates also. So… I.mi was thinking how would it be if we all also start contention ng hi
HEY EVERYONE!! DON’T IGNORE THIS.
? WE ALL HAD STARTED OUR JOURNEY FROM SKR WRITTEN EPISODE UPDATE PAGE.. That used to b real fun. After seeing the epi on TV, going daily to the pg and commenting had become a real pleasure ?? express ing our views on the episodes, and those discussions gave us a chance to learn more. That lil thing is something we all miss, and I know ff can’t give that slight feeling of fun (esp. If its written by such delayed writer lyk me ?).. THOUGH SKR HAS ENDED IT LEFT US WITH SUCH MEMORIES WE WONT FORGET EVER, AND MOREOVER, IT GAVE US SO MANY FRIENDS AND SIBLINGS ?..
There are two more mythology (history) shows to start now, one is KrishnaLeela on &tv which will cum Monday to Friday, and second is MahaKali-anth hi aarambh hai on colours, which will b a biweekly show, mostly Saturday and Sunday.. And there will be written updates also. So… I.mi was thinking how would it be if we all also comment there lyk v used to do in skr pg… Plzzzz tell me ur opinions on this plz reply.. Sorry if I bored you..
Have a nice day ? ? Jai shri Siya Ram ?
u r absolutely right dear , skr gave us such wonderful memories and siblings ? , i still remember all those beautiful moments where we used to share our thoughts . actually i dont know if i will be able to watch krishnaleela but i am definitely going to watch mahakali , so will comment there . lets hope to find many others of skr family there
??????? that’s gr8 di! M sure mahakali is going to be watched by many members of skr family and we’ll get those beautiful memories again????????? miss that so much..
Di, m nt sure if I can watch any other serial coz wid so much arguments, m watching cn… Now another serial, den father will go mad… Sry di☹☹
Hehe that’s ok dear ? but at least maybe you can read updates and comment, or we can have a talk there? Btw your dp is just ?????
Di, point is dat m having tough tym reading nd commenting d ffs nd cn epi… I was even reading naagin 2, but dat also b4 1 month was completed itself I stopped… I will try my best 2 comment di
Asum epi di… Luv shatkeerthi conversation nd d way mandavi xplains it 2 shatrugan nd keerthi… I completely forgot abt manthra nd m sure dat d reason y u mad a 12 years leap… Can’t wait 2 c d reaction of lakshmila after cing d gifts which dey wud present 2 each other… But di, precap mast hai… Can’t wait 2 read abt it… All bits nd pieces will form a story… Waiting for d next epi…
Jai Siya Ram
Thank you so so much sissy I was waiting for your comment only.. Yep there should b sum masala so I thought to make leap, with a manthra and alien filled anniversary ?? just pray that their gifts don’t get spoiled again ??? will update soon dearie ? have a nice day ?
Jai shri Siya Ram?
Waiting for d next epi eagerly di… Hav a gud day???