(DEDICATING DIS CHAPTER TO AYESHA51…hey dear..finally u register…m really happy…u cmntd on each n evry chappy of mine..n waited too..n for dis..u cmnt n cmnt to remind me of posting..
Also dedicating to whom who waited n asked me to post..dat is SHAMMU…RAMYA…RICHA DI…PRIYA NOT MIA??..N ETC..WHO WAITED SILENTLY TOOO)…
(WARNING- ITS 1 AM HERE..N I M CRAZY RIGHT NOW…I MEAN IN FULL ON MASTI MOOD..SO IF I DISTURB U IN BTWN…DEN BEAR WID ME..I CANT HELP..!!!!⚠⚠)
CHAPTER#5-THE PUNISHMENT…
“What”all d trio that is sidhant mom..dad n sis shout in unison..
“U dont have maid….??..”sandhya his mother asked…while both look down…
“N may i know where dey r….which were hired…???”his mother again asked with anger enrolled in her emotion…her hands on her hip….n face turning red..
“He fired…!”jasmin mutterred slowly..very slowly dat hardly it reached der years…she was scared of d outcome of dis thing…
“N may i know d reason MR.GUPTA…”his mother roared…anger took over her…no1 could b saved now…n sidhant knew dis..as wen his mother is highly angry she use MR. N MS. Thing..n she did..so he chose to be quiet….
Ofcourse she can…she know dat how hard is doing all the works of house ourself…n in der famiky no1 do…maid do these…first- he broke d tradition of der family… Second-she treat jasmin as her own daughter…..den how can she let her daughter do all dis house hold stuff from washing dishes to washing clothes to cleaning house…whooe house..which was not less dan a kings palave…HOW CAN SHE…???
JASMIN IS HER OWN DAUGHTER….!!!!!
No…wait..not only sandhya…but her husband n amira tooo was angry…
Ofcourse dey could..jasmin was his daughter(his fathers) n her bestie….n sister in 1…
Amira loved her to d core…how cam she digest dat…
TRIO’S face was red….
Oh..wait..not with blushing n stuff…but bcoz of ANGER..!!
“I hate u bhai…how can u..?? Huh…i just hate uuuuuu..!!!”amira spoke angrily
“U shameless creature…u spoilt brat….i knew dat u r one…but u could stoop so low..? I couldnt think…u made ur own wife as a maid…for this u married her…where is ur culture sidhant…u werent the same before that……”her father stopped at’that’…sidhant eyes widened in shock…he looked down again…
All burst on him again..
Jasmin could do nothing but try to stop…which she finally did…..
Sidhant look at her with’thank god’ face..wen dey stopped…
“U should get punishment for dis…n u will..!”his mother declare…while he look at dem helplessly…
“Yeah..!! Great..!! U both give him…i’ll go wid jas di…n show her her gifts..lets go di”
Amira took jasmin away from dem before she could say anything…
Before vanishing from d view..jasmin turned to get a view of her hubby who was looking at he helplessly…she js look at him n turned n went away….
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Till d evening amira dint let her move..but finally she escape….
Checking her room..she dint find HIM….
She move downstairs to cook smthng for dinner…wen she saw d most horrible thing she dreamt…
Er….even i m stuttering……
How could i explain uh all….ohk wait..
Lets turn d camera to dat side…
Urghh..!!! Trust me u all cant digest…but if u want read further…
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Sidhant…..
Sidhant……..
Sidhant is standing….
Hahah…i know dats not a big deal…he stand daily..but continue readin na..!
He…h..he is standing in d kitchen…
Ohkay…he daily do dat tooo…
But..
But..
But…
He is wearing an aperon…n…n…???…..???…COOKING…
No wait..lemme find sm better word…MESSING UP D KITCHEN…
yeah..! Great aamu..
(okay..i know i m irritating uh…but it was fun..n now it ended…continue…dis wont happen again…promise…pinky promise…okay..i know u arent interested in all dis bak bak..den y r u reading move na??????)
Sidhant was sitting on d kitchen platform…cutting onion…his eyes red of crying..? bcoz of oni uncle(i call onion dat????)
Next to him was sm flour..half wrapped i dough…n half mess…
The stove was on…with a pan in which sm oil n burnt veggies wer der..
The sink was full of dishes n alll…
“Ooo…”jasmin open her mouth to shout’oh my god..’
But she couldnt complete…before she could…sidhant pulled her n pinned her to d fridge….
His one hand on her mouth..n other around her waist…jas hands lands on his chest..sending shivers down his spine…
He stopped at his word..n move forward…
Jas look at his desiredfull…face….
How she wanted his lips on hers…from dis whole month….n may be dat moment had came…AGAIN..
She parted her lips..while he move closer…forgetting his look..which was like..
Cheeks n hands dipped in flour…n carrot in his pocket……he LOOKED CUTE….jas thought…
(PYAAR ME DEWAANI..MASTAANI???…BUT let me tell u he actually looked cute……Sorry to disturb again…i had warned u befor only…)
He moved to her lips…n traced his upon her..his eyes hold love..a bit though..but it was….but…
But..
But..
The next moment…his eys hold anger……
A strange one…jas could not sketch wat was dat…
As d next moment..he hold her face tightly…n grabbed her lips on his….he bite n chewed it badly…again…devil sidhant waa back she thought..n now anything could happen to her..she hold her clothes tightly..remembering dat her inlaws r present..she couldnt bear dat much insult if dey see…..
Sidhant was not in mood to leave…so she pushed demself behind d fridge so dat if no1 could see..
“Si..si..sid..sidhant” she said crying…trying to free her lips…his teeth had hold it tightly…
She tried to push him..but nothing worked..he got more intense..
Finally,giving up..she stand there itself doing nothing but bearing….
Her hands was around his back…digging her nails in it…!!..
Her nails scratch his flesh..only wen he realized..n immidiately leave her…
Her eyes dint met hers…he looked down…lowering his gaze…his hand stiffenend……
He back away n went again where he was…he got hold of d knife…n hold it from d sharp part..tightly…
Blood dripped down from his hands..
Jas looked at der when she made herself presentable..
Coming out of d recent shock…she made her way to him n stopped him…
She took away d knife…n put it aside…
N put turmeric on his hands..to stop d blood…n den wrapped her dupataa der only after tearing it…
He again resumes…wen she shown her hands..✋(stop type)..
N pointt him to sit on d chair beside…
He was still in his trauma set down..while jasmin made d dinner…n put evrythng right….
Sidhant was looking evrywhere but SHE..!??..
Her gaze was always lowered…trying to figure dis out was totallly out of control…for jas..
She asked her manytyms while doing her work..i mean while cooking she tried to talk..but he was like a statue…sitting on d chair..looking downstair….
Finally fed up of her question..he stoood n went away….
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CLIFFHANGER…!!!?..
Hehe…*evil laugh*…think..think..
Welll how was it…
Hope u liked it…?
N yaa guys..i know i m LATE..but sorry…i couldnt write bfore..n coz of lacking of tym..i m wriing at dis odd tym..
U know its 2:30…i m sleepy….
I had stoppes writing..buy after reading @aysha51’s cmnt..i melted n give up my sleep..
Just for u all…dat i m making u wait..
So pls support..
N u know guys i read my previous works cmnt..dat is of os’s ff’s..n conclude dat many of my readers arent cmntng..why.???
Is it bad..?
FATIMA DI..?? SHALINI DI..??? VASU DI..?? WHERE R U GUYS…??
Well answer me n thanq..dat…i m getting cmnts though..
U know wat i m happy about…
I HAD THOUGHT…AFTER I LEFT N DEN CM BACK..I WILL NOT GET D SUPPORT I GOT BFORE..N DAT WAS D REASON I WAS SAD WHILE LEAVING…
BUT U KNOW..I HAD GOT SOO MUCH OF FANS…MANY SILENT READERS R SHOWING UP…MANY R SENDING ME PM’S ABOUT MY FF..MANY (SILENT READERS) R MSGING ME ON MY INSTA ACC…
THAT MEANS ALOT GUYS…..
????L O V E U A L L S O M U C H????…
N YAA THOSE WHO HAV NOT FOLLOWED MY INSTA ACC…DO FOLLOW..COZ PROMO IS CMING UP…
USRNAME-supergirl_aamu
Dm me dat who u r…coz i dont accpt strangers…n mostly i dont accept boys at all…so if u have send me request msg me…
N yaa those who arent on insta…dont worry guys…i will post here too…but as d pics are not allowed…u will get written only..sorry for dat..
But i will try finding a way out of dat too…as d pics add more spice to d promo?…
N last but not least…
•WHT IS D REASON BEHIND SIDHANT’S BEHAVIOUR..??
•WHAT IS HIS PAST…??
•WHAT HIS FATHER WAS SAYING..BUT STOPPED..??
•WILL JASMIN EVR KNOW.??
•WILL SHE CAN SOLVE….???
STAY TUNED FOR MORE…
PRECAP CHAHIYE…?
WELL D PREVIOUS PRECAP IS SM GLIMPSE OF PROMI..IF U REMEMBER DAN GOOD…OTHERWISE D WHOLE PROMO IS CMING UL…..
N YAA TAKE D PRECAP:…
PRECAP- JASMIN BEHIND SIDHANT FOR HIS BEHAVIOUR…ADAMANT JASMIN+SECRETIVE SIDHANT=SCARED JASMIN+DEVIL SIDHANT…(= SIGN MEANS AFTER D SITUATION TAKE PLACE..)…
HEHE…CNFUSED HO..??
DEN LET IT BE..
COZ U ALL WILL MORE AFTER READING D PROMO…BUG NEVER MIND..
BAHBYE..
N YA..ITS NIGHTS 2:45 NOW…N WIFI IS OFFF…SO M POSTING TOMORROW MORNING..U WILL GET THIS BY AFTERNOON..SO DONT TELL ME DAT U SAID U WROTE AT NIGHT..N POST IT IN AFTER NOON….
SO BAHBYR..N YA I WILL TRY TO POST SOOONN…CANT PROMISE WEN..BUT soon…
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30 Comments
Hey awesome …
Loved it…
Suspense suspense…
Well post soon…
Love u
Hey aamu it was just awesome dear
And u asked me to translate the meaning of my post na I have translated that I have sent dear but sry I couldn’t reply u on that day plzzzzzzzzzzz don’t mind
Loads of love
Hi aamu ,I am a silent reader….???episode was awesome ,fabulous ,mindblowing?
Pata h me bauat wait kar rahi thi tumhare iss ff ka ???
Yrr jaldi post karna bas thoda sa jaldi????
U r amazing writer ???
Luv u bauat saraaaaa
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Bbye
Heyyy aamu…..
Pehle to badaaaaa walaaaaa sorryyyyyyy….
Kaan pakad k srryyyyy….
I m sorry i dint commented previously……
Uske bhi 3 reasons hai…
First i went to ur jiju’s house for a week soo i was off from tu…..though i read all ffs later…
Secondly ye results wali things me buzy ho gai thi….although i passed my 12th with 85%?????
Thirdly ramzaan started to uski preparations pehle se karni hoti hai so mumma ko help karna tha…
So in all i was really buzy…but i promise next episodes se i wud surely comment….pakka promise…
Well the epi was funny cum emotional cum hilarious…haha..
I just loved the way u showed everyones’s expressions….
And m now more eager to know about kunj’s past and his reason for his devil behaviour….
Post veryyyyyyy sooonnnnn pleaseeee…
Lovedd the epi…..???????????????????????????
Once again sorry….maaf kardia ho to please reply kar diyo janeman…
Byeeeeee
Love youuuuu????????????????????
Oh god…!! Kitni baar sorry bologe di..!!
Chilll..!!
Well dekho tumhari cmnt abhi dekhi n abhi hi reply kiya mene..although mumma bula rahe hai..
N i can truly understand di..
First reason…hoye…hoye…say my salamm to my jiju?…
Second reason..congo di..!! U know i paas with 89% in 10…!!! So di party chahiye…wen r u..??
Third reason u r right..mumma ki help me b tym chala jaata hai..i can understand..n ramzan preparations is no less…..so i can truly understand…
Maafi accepted..hehe????
Well thanq so much u know tumlog se taarif to an mumma se daat khane waali hu me…
Raat ko 3 baje soyi…likh kar..to abhi dophr me so gayi me..
Abhi abhi uthi hu..bahbye..mumma ki daat khaani hi hogi…? muje kaam diya tha wo bhul kar so gayi thi me…
Well ok
.ok..
Much bakbak..i should take a leave now..
Bahbye..
N how’s ur ramzan going..??
Love u di
Hmmm mumma se daat khali?????
W salaam…i ll surely tell him???
Hmm party to tabhi milegi jab aap hume milogi….vese surat se bilimora itna bhi dur nahi hai…..aa jao…..iftaari k liye hi sahi….aa jao…i ll giv u a big party…
Well tum episode likhne k liye 3 baje tak jag rahi thi and me tumhare jiju se baat kr rai thi isliye 3 baje tak nahi soyi…..bohot neend aati hai din me yaar…
Hmm aur ramzaan bohot achha chal raha hai….tumhara kaisa chal raha hai????
And haan thank you for accepting my maafi???????…
Cya….love uh?????
And haan congratulations for ur result…..m very happy for u…☺☺
Nahi khaayi..kyuki mummaaa namaz me the..me chupke se jaa kar karliya…
Yahoooo..!!.
N meri ramzan b ekdm fyn jaa ri hai….
N surat se bilimora door nahi hai..but itna pass b nahi hai di…
N mere papa…ramzan me iftari k liye frnd k yaha paas me nahi jaane dete waha tak kaha aaungi..
Hamare ghar ka rule hai…khaana khaane sab saath me bethenge…
N ramzan me to wo to hi nahi skte…haa..!! Aise tuttta hai ye rule bohot baar..but chodo na..!!
Ap meri side se khalo..
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Haa di..neend khalaas hi nai hoti but kya kare uthna padta hai..roz raat ko ff likhna padta hai…roz sehri k baad soti hu me..?..
Well..dua me yaad rakhna warna…kattttiii…!!!
Love uuu?
Nice and suspenseful episode
Thank God meri maa tune post kiya.. I was so desperate to read it. I was about to send you PM but then thought just to check it once..and to my surprise it was posted. Happy ..super happy after reading it. How can you write so well? Love you loads and thanks for considering me..?
Nahi nahi di me aapki ma kaise ho sakti hu..??..
N u know me aapko msg karne hi waali thi…but bhul gayi…
Thank u sooo much di…it means alot…
Lovee uu..
N u waited so bop na to tha hi
nice epi
post soon
Awesome aamu
Yaar itni raat tak jaag ke likhi hai
Mere liye love you
It’s so cute awesome
But Precap kuch samaj nahi aa raha can’t wait
Post soon
Love you keep smiling
Finally comment box khul Gaya mera u know I read this episode at 6 only but mera comment box aa hi nahi raha tha so isliye late hogayi yaar ..m.
Well I missed it sooooooooooooooo much
Now coming back to the episode …..
Ye acha nahi tha haan time sahi suna ye bikul acha nai tha …..
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Par KAMAL tha DHAMAKA tha yaar hayeeeeeee yaar loveddddddd it sooooooooooooooo much to the moon n back mera bechara sidhant hahahhaaha …
Sabne milke waattttt lagayi uski hàhahah …
Chalo kisi se toh Darta hai woh. ????????????????????……..
Hahah love the episode soooo much too cute sidmin hayeee undono k peeche to mein pagal hi Hu …
Well next episode b jaldi see post karne Ka try Karna ….
Will be waiting for the next one …
Love u sooooooooooooooo much tujh see b zyada samjhiiiii …
And precap is shocking ?????..
Waiting for more shocks ….
Ba byeeee ????….
Bhtt bak bak Karli ??????…
Love u byeeee
Mera cmnt box khula tha but aalsi mood b on tha..isliye..rwply nai diya..
Well thank u sooo much shammu..
N sidhant ki wattt nahi lagi ab tak beta..ab lagegi..
Punishment di thi..but cmnplt ni kari….
So..
Well chalo me to chali warna sab bol dungi??..
N wait kar rahi thi shock k liye…mil gaya..kal waale promo se?..??
Amazing , marvellous what not !!! Jabardast and pataka episode??Just on point ???Ufff Sidmin !! Main pagal naa ho jaaun ?????…..post next soon ?????
Amazing awesome fabulous
ohh god ammiee…….♥
srsly♥ BLAST d punishments were BLASTS……….♥
loed it sooooooo mch srsly eager tto know d rsns……♥
loved it sooooo sooooo mch…..♥
touching n amazing speechless cute and emotional…….♥
eager eager eager to knw why Manohar said dat n watt not…….♥
n sdn kunj’s anger wala devilish kiss……
srsly cant wait……..
lods of love……….♥
post nxt soon………♥
n a request jaan if psbl den do give a recap b4 episode…….. 🙂
love u……….♥
oh yeah followed u on insta request snt…….
MY USER ID : cupcakemuffin8
lods of love dear……..♥
Hey aamu
seriously kya likha tune…sry yaar for the late cmt…net atak atak ke chal raha hae isss liye…..sry….
regarding the epI it was a blast…
saach may bomb futah sid ke life may jese ki tune…punishment god….uffff tune toh na saachi….messing up kitchen..great aamu…LOL???…kya
baat hae trio’s red face blushing wala nai anger se…..wah wah wah…tu bhi na….aur pir se suspense…suspense queen…..hmmm…..manohar ne aisa kyu kaha…..kya hae sid ka past…jaldi post kariyo can’t wait….plzzzzzzzzz…plz ….post assp…precap was too too too confusing….kuch samjh may he nai ahya jas plus secretive sid…kyaaa hae yeh…..post asap coz I can’t wait…..plzzz
Awesome episod
Thanxxx…
Amazing episode
Hehehe on and off sid
Make sid suffer more
ur making me hell confused
By precap
Waiting for the next update
Do continue
Hey sohi..
Well first m really sorry..
U cmntd on 2-3 chappy dat u r late n sorry…i couldnt reply u dat tym..
I was going to n den…
Urgh..!! Leave dat..
Thank u soooo much for cmntng..
Welll sid will suffer…don wrry..
But not much huh..
N confuse to sab hi hai re..!! Precep padh kar dont wrry u will get d promo soooon
Hi partner, I’m back AFTER A LONG TIME ???????????? yaar I didn’t know ki sab mujhe itna miss kar rahe the I mean abhi baby ka ff padha usne bhi yahi kaha nd now you seriously yaar word nahi hai mere paas express karne ke liye ki kitni special feel kar rahi hun ????????????????????
Pata hai itne din main TU se gayab thi but jis din main TU open karti thi tumhara ff milta tha nd main use padhti bhi thi nd sach mein yaar kya likha hai matlab phad dala hai SID ko kya bana diya??????????????? main hamesha yahi sochti thi ki by chance agar sidmin ne ise padh liya toh unka kya reaction hoga ???????????????? sachhi yaar you are great writers.
About today’s episode it was awesome mind blowing fabulous superb episode as always nd funny too ????????? bechare sid ko kya punishment diya hai ?????????? sach mein khurpat ki dukan ho.well loved it so much. Post next asap
Achha ab bye jyada bak bak kar liya ???????????
Love you lots ??????????????????????
Hey partner..
U know mene tumharu cmnt dekhi to mere face par 440 volt ki smile aayi..
Pata hai i missed ur cmnts soo much..n aaj aapne puri kasar puri kardi..with ur baddddddiiii waali cmnt…
Thank u sooo much shalu di…
N sidmin read karenge..????..nahi karenge…wo kabhi TU opn hi nahi karenge….
N agar kar b liya to muje maarne aayenge aise ghatia ff k liye????….
Welll thank u soo much…n funny to banana padta gai..watna sab dukhi dukhi cmnt dete hai…like”heart touching aamu….hate sid..how can he do dis..???” like dis types…so
Dekha isme sid kaa torture funnineesss ki wajah se chup gaya
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Well mene b kuch kam nahi kiya bak bak..love u toooo alottt…
Truck bhar ke pyaaar bhej rahi hu…sambhal kr rakhna??????????
Aaaaaaaaaaaammuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
meri twinuuuuuuuuu…!?!!!!!!!! U nailed it meri jaaaaaaaann….
That was so amazing….. i was so engrossed in it ke mumma bukaye jaa rahi thi and i didn’t listen kr fir daant khaani padi…!!!! ????
Well koi na…! Kya punishment… dhamakedaar… bomb fod diya tune.. kal me ne foda or fir tu ne… ???????????? waisy maza aagaya…! Epi was a dhamaka…! I loved each nd every bit of it…!
what’s the reason for sid’s silence.. can’t wait more….????
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Itna koi amazing update deta hai kya..?? Ke insaan ko mumma se dant pade..?????? just kidding…
What’s his past… i can’t wait for next,… itna suspense…! Plsss jaldi post ker… twin…?
I m waiting desperately…
LOVE YOU LOADS TWIN…???❤❤❤❤????❤❤
Hey aamu frst ramazan mubarak…. Scndly thnk god u posted i was waiting for it only…. It was amazingggg…. Wanna read nxt asap…. Why kunj us doing all this…. Want to know…. Luv u …. Plzzzzz post nxt asap….
Aamu i am comenting first time in anyone post
I was silent reader of all ff on TU
But today i am comenting first time in any ff & its ur ff
All ff writers r awesome writers
Love all of u u all r doing great job
Ur ff is superb
I am huge fan of ur writing
This epi and all previous epis was amazing
Today i am so hapyy that i am comenting in ff of most famous & superb writer of TU
Plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz aamu if u can post next soon
I want to read next soon
I’ll be very glad if u post nxt for me
My lgy ga ka mera coment waste nhi hua
Plzzz plzzz mery first ever coment ka liye hi nxt jldi post kr do
Luv u all ff writers
Keep posting ur ffs
Loads of luv from taani
AAMU di
I’ll only say
that I’m overwhelmed
by the love I get from
thanks a lot for
giving me such importance
I’m so happy today
sorry for commenting
late coz of studies
and about the episode
it was
marvellous
amazing
fabulous
outstanding
superb
incredible
splendid
too much good
mind blowing
amazing
outstanding
I’M SPEECHLESS
TO APPRECIATE THE WRITING
as well as DUMBSTRUCK
please post soon
as I’m HELL DESPERATE TO read the next episode as soon as possible
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
waiting to know about sidhant’s past
loads of love ♡♡♡
LOVE YOU A LOT ♡
byeee