Hii!!! Peeps it’s dhar back with another one, actually this idea popped up in my head last night and i thought to pen it down before u all. I hope that you all will like this .
Plsss do ignore the grammatical errors and typos.
Let’s rock
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Om has not accepted gauri, shivaay is still angry at anika and rudra has not gone to meerut he’s here and sumo is also here but they have some misunderstandings between them. Ranveer genuinely loves prinku.
So after the obros kicked ranveer out of the mansion, prinku rushed to her room . Ranveer sneaked into her room to confront her but at that moment to take care of prinku her three dhmakedaar bhabhis came to her . Shivomru were also there but they Decided to stay at the door and listen to their convo . They also stopped tejvi and shanky to go inside to confront her.
Prinku was sitting on the bed , she had covered her face in her palms .
Anika : prinkuu , u should understand na , they r ur brothers , how will they feel when they saw their sister marrying a person who has already betrayed her once .
Gauri : haa prinku , u should give them a chance to explain their point of view. U should know their side of the story no.
Soumya : prinku , u should give them a chance to clear all ur misunderstandings out .
Anriya : did u imagine what would be the state of both ur dads haa , bade Papa is so stressed out about ur marriage. Chote papa has not taken his medicines worrying for u , ur brothers are sooo tensed about u .
They all finished lecturing her and then prinku started her explanation.
Everyone were there near her , listening to her , but our prinku didn’t know that all r listening to she thought that it’s only her bhabhis.
PRINKU : Anika bhabhi u r telling ME to think about MY brothers , and understand their pain that i am marrying a man who has cheated me once , then u should also think about ur brother , he’s a kid , have u ever thought what all he’s going through when he witnessed his sister being married forcefully to a man who doesn’t love her , Bhaiya toh broke ur heart so many times then also u r with him no . Why r u there with him u should also go , as per my brothers thinking shivaay Bhaiya is also not good for u , my ranveer has betrayed me just once and that too because he was blackmailed by that fake mother of him , but Bhaiya has crumpled ur emotions ur feelings so many times .
Outside the room shivaay was feeling sooo disgusted about himself that he could face himself, he was ashamed to face himself , cause he thought as a brother for his sister , he did not remember that anika is also somebody’s sister , he cannot do this with her , he has no right .
Pirnku continued: gauri bhabhi , u r telling me to listen to their povs , that i should understand their side of the story, but has ever om Bhaiya tried to know ur side of the story, he concluded a bad pov , by what he saw , i know everything bhabhi , i know everything about Kali thakur, do u think i didn’t notice the chain marks on ur arms , legs and belly , did u think that u will go out in the balcony and apply medicines on ur back where that Kali has hurt u and i wont notice . I thought o Bhaiya will try to find out but he won’t even listen to u .U know what ranveer always gives me a chance to speak myself and keep my pov in front of him .
Now it was oms turn to feel damn guilty because he wouldn’t trust himself on any decisions but he would always trust his siblings for his betterment. He decided to check her wounds cause this tym he wanted to know about his wife .
Prinku: and soumya u ask me to give a chance to them to clear their misunderstandings, has rudra Bhaiya ever given u a chance . Ranveer always tries to clear the misunderstandings between us .
This single question form his little sister’s mouth made rudra gasp in guilt .
Prinku : u all the me to look at chote papa , who always runs away from his responsibilities , and due to which choti mom always keeps money as a priority. They don’t value their relationship at least my ranveer values our relationship. And finally my dad , u know what every girl wants her husband to be like her dad , but I’m the only girl who wouldn’t want this , my ranveer doesn’t try to kill me , my dad tried to kill my mother. Did he forget that my mom is also someone’s daughter. Bhabhi u know when my mom and dad fought hard neglecting their children , shivaay Bhaiya took care of om Bhaiya and rudra Bhaiya , they used to spend tym together , they used to do masti in the kitchen to forget their misery . They thought that I’m very small to understand my parents fighting. They thought that i had been asleep all the while when my parents were fighting. But this was not the case , i remember each and every fight of theirs , it still gives me shivers. U know i had learned all their mottos, their lines like one for all and all for one and many more but they never called me . At first i was jealous but then it started to hurt and finally its become shivomru, fromthe beginning it was SHIVOMRU JUST SHIVOMRU , u know priyanka doesn’t suit in shivomru. Her voice was quivering with pain , that tone of their sisters pain gave them shivers through out their body .
” Bhabhi when my mom and dad used to fight no at that i always hoped that my shivaay Bhaiya would come and give me a tight hug and console me ,or om Bhaiya would come and tell me his painful shayaris which i would never understand or at least rudra Bhaiya will cheer my mood up by his silly talks and jokes or the three of them come to me and cheer my mood up but nobody came . I always looked at the door expecting someone . U want to meet my brothers who share my sorrows come i will show u . All were confused her bhabhis inside and her rest of the family outside the room. She went and took three teddy bears in her hand and came back .
Prinku: see them , i made all three of them , i didn’t buy them but i made them when i was in 4th std , they look a little shaggy but they r theeeee bestest, she smiled whole heartedly with tears in her eyes. Meet shivaay Bhaiya , she pointed out to a bear which had a little serious look . He’s om Bhaiya , she showed a bear which had long hairs. And that is rudra Bhaiya , she pointed out a cute chubby looking , innocent bear .
” They r my bhaiyas not the ones who r outside , bhabhi these bears take care of me , they listen to my complaints, they give me tight hug when I’m in a problem to console me . I can talk to them whenever i want , i can share my problems with them . Every girl dreams that her Prince charming should be like her dad or her brothers but i hope that he should be never like my family’s men cause they don’t understand the pov of a woman , why should a woman always compromise, dad always blames mom for not taking care of us properly but are we not his children too , he has the same amount of responsibility as much as mom .
The family was completely bowled over because what ever she said was correct.
Each and every member of the family was thinking about something in his or her mind .
From the next day small changes were seen among the behaviour of the oberoi males , they accepted ranveer . They started spends more time with each other.
The environment of oberoi mansion change slowly and gradually. It took them some time but they did it ………
After all it’s not about how big is the house but it’s all about how happy the home is …….
I hope you like this , plzzz do comment positive or negative, all chamelis and tomatoes r welcr with open heart.
With love ,
Dhar ?
50 Comments
Nice one di
Thanx pooma and so sorry for the late reply
Amazingggggg fabbbbbbbb
It’s the best os I have ever read
Loved it soooooooooo much
Thank u very much sairan dii
Hey Dhar.
This is so amazing. I am completely baffled by this piece of writing.
You are absolutely correct, everytime it had been only shivomru. You concluded every point really well.
Damn amazing. Do come up with more like this. This priyanka, I love her, wish Ranveer would be bold in the show too.
Speechless❤❤
I too hope this happens cause every time shivomru r portrayed, they should give the same amount of screen space to prinku also or they shouldn’t have included her , thankuu thankuu for ur comment Jerry , I love ur writings… so sorry for the late reply
Super awesome Dhar….now it’s my time to speak about you…you know what i want to say so many things but i am going speechless…taking a deep breath…yes…this OS is just awesome …up to the mark what we all expect the CV’s to think about…Fabulous explanation by Prinku who is always sidelined…i know in a single episode it’s not possible to focus on everyone but still…and the way you explained is just marvelous…i can’t get enough to praise for writing such a beautiful piece of work…and i expect you to continue giving us such awesome shots every now and then…kudos dear and keep going….you too are the best
Thanku soo much dii , big compliment coming from u , I will surely try to give more of my writings, the CV’s are spoiling the whole concept of the show , fan fictions are far more better than what they are trying to show in the show and I’m really sorry for the late reply
deep & awesome
Thanx aashi and sorry for the late reply
Wow it was awesome yaar…. I was emotional in prinku statement…. It really touched my heart….. I wish u to write another ff…
Thanks sagithya , I’m glad that u like it , sorry for the late reply
Dhar…it was really fabulous….
I also felt bad for prinku….
There is just shivomru,,no prinku.
HER POV is also correct n i just hope ranveer wont break her trust in serial…I really loved it…
Gd night
Thanku soo much kanfi, I also hope that it happens in da real show , and soo sorry for the late reply
Heart touching…… Luv it 2 d core…
Thank u so much banita, sorry for the late reply
this is awsm……………………….
Thanku so much nithu n sorry for the late reply
it was just beyond words..
Really felt bad for prinku..
Thank u very much ahaana , sorry for the late reply
Wonderful dear.
Thanx dear gayathri , sorry for the late reply
No chameli nd tomatoes….
Just appreciation frm my side….
It was fabulous..each nd every word of prinku was just mind blowing.. …her pain was clearly shown in ur ff…keep it up dear…
Thank you soo much shreyanvi , and so sorry for the late reply
Awesom…..
Thanks suman
GREAT AMAZING FANTASTIC EXCELLENT MIND BLOWING AWESOME SUPERB?????????
Oh my Mata so many mind blogging words , thank u soo much UF
Marvelous….just loved it to the core….i too have 2 brothers (cousins) and when they don’t include me in their matters talks games even if I’m standing right in front of them it feels very bad….so I can understand the pain of priyanka….
Thank u aashi , I know I also have such experiences sometimes, but we should also make them understand that we r also existing and they should trust us to give wise advices
WOW!! pRIYANKA KO TOH SIRF USKE BHAI IGNORE KARTE HAI…NERE TOH UNCOUNTABLE NO. of cousins hain…phir bhi koi mere paas nahi aata…pata hai what’s the problem? my age it is…I’m younger than all of them or elder than all of them….aur agar mai unke paas gayi toh mom stops me saying that woh tumse bade hai, if ull go what will others think, ki see this girl she’s so small and is mingling with elders…and u know what hurts the most? ki mera ek cousin hai…he’s also of my age, infact woh toh mujhse ek saal chota hai par everyone welcomes him warmly amongst them…why? cz he’s a boy..a male….tab log kuch nahi kehte..kuch nahi…her pain is valid and i know how it feels to get ignored by urbrothers ya sisters…
BTW sorry for my bakwaas and the way u wrote is AWESOME….pehle maine socha ki najane kaisa boring ff hai..phir maine aapka naam dekha and tried it…and lucky me that i tried it….
It’s not all bakwaas dear the Indian society will always blame a girl , they will always stop the girls , they will tell the girls to be decent but they won’t teach their boys to behave properly . I hope that ur parents understand ur pov and u can always go to the elders gang cause theyr ur cousins no , so after u slowly start to mingle with them they will automatically accept u in their grp
Awesome…fabulous
Thank u soo much niriha
Awesome…..
Thank u soo much san
Fabulous
Thank u very much alekhika and sorry for the late reply
It’s awesome…..I nice idea of Prinku making everyone realise….I myself had thought of this idea many times….
Prinku whose track has always been sidelined n she alone brought everyone’s train on line……
Like I have always said, Its in Oberoi blood to insult your wives. Your are not an Oberoi if u treat your wife well….
One more point which most of the fans don’t like that it’s always ShivOmRu…three brothers and the always forget that the have a sister as well….
Really an awesome os….
I m glad that connected to it , I also think that the oberoi men can’t be happy if they don’t insult their wives
Dhar dear..?????everyline and word priyanka spoke out is damn true..i liked it soo much.
Thanks navz and so sorry for the late reply
Hey dhar!!!! I’m first time commenting on ur work as I couldn’t stop myself… … This os is something which we all want to happen in the serial and u completely nailed it….. Each n every line of prinku was so true…. The way u explained her emotions is just awesome…… . Loved it soo much!!!!!!! !! Amazing job dear ”’!!!??????????
I’m glad that u liked my work , and thank u for commenting
It is nice one dear… Fabulous
Thank you nikita
It was fantastic dr….I literally had tears in my eyes…..but this was absolutely true dr….even in real ib they do so…….just loved ur writing dr….
Shivomru…perfect title
Fantastic update
This was so good, I love the positive Prinku wished this happened in IB