I’m new here, as some of you know me
My name is Zoya manzer, I am 13 years old
Studying in class 8
Solutions, enough of my bak bak
Let’so start with a smile
I have taken this story from Internet
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It’s evening 5’0 clock,I was standing on bridge waiting for my friend who planned for movie
It was a very lovely yet pleasant climate.I was roaming around on the bridge thinking about my friend if he is coming or not.Suddenly a girl crossed my sight.she was beautiful yet simple girl.
She stand a few metres away from me looking at the water below the bridge.I thought she was waiting for some one
My heart beat raised and heart said to me”GO AND TALK TO HER”can I?
No I cannot…it again says”Nothing will happen if you will talk to her…don’t miss the chance”
I went towards her
I:Hi,myself kunj sarna
She:Hello
I:what is your name
She:twinkle taneja
I:(thought:wow!twinkle,nice name.kunj sarna weds twinkle taneja)(is ne to abhi se shaadi ke bare me socha lia???)
I:If you don’the mind tell me what are you waiting for?
She:what? (She widened her eyes)
S:I am waiting for my father
I:oh
I:can I say you something?
S:what?
I:your voice is so sweet and your face…and
S:and
I:nothing
I silently followed her
S:what?
I:can we have a cup of coffee
S:no
I:tea
S:no
I:at least pani puri
S:you are too crazy
I:please,please…..
S:OK
I:thank you….
(When I was walking beside her for the first time my heart beat raised and said to me that she is the one you are looking for)
I: can I say you something
S:what?
I:nothing
I:what’s your father?
S:doctor
I:(thank God, not a police)
S:you want to say something
I:ya..I..I
S:ha you
S:what?are you joking?
(I picked her hand and start running away from the bridge as a great killer wave struck the bridge and the people ,shops ,vehicles started to drown into water)
S:thank you
(Ambulance started coming for the rescue of people)
I:hey you stay here I am going for the rescue. ..
S: i will also come…
I:let’S go
I and she was helping some people
When a huge truck hit her
I rush towards her and took her in my lap
Tears were coming like stream from my eyes
I:twin…twin… open your eyes
S:kunj,you said you want to say something ,please say it now
I:I love you twinkle
S:I love you too kunj
And,she closed her eyes
34 Comments
Hey zoya ur first attempt was cute and sweet… Luvd it…. Plzzzz post something more keep posting sweet and cute stories like this…. Luv u…. Byeee…. Tc
Thank you
Nice and welcome to tu sad that it seen twinkle will die ??? their confession was unexpected but love it.
Thank you
Hey emotional nd sweet story…
Loved it…
Wlcm in TEI TU …
Do write more stories…
Love u…
Thank you for welcoming
? very thrilling os
But amazing one
Keep writing
Thank you
Awesome epi but emotional
Thank you
Its great dear…
Bt I m kinda confused. ..
Its an ff or os..
This was an os
nice n emtional
Thank you
Emotional
Thank you
Hey zoya even i am in 8th can we be friends
Ya,why not
Hey zoya even i am in 8th can we be friends nd d epi was very cute loved it yaar
Thank you
Post soon
Hey zoya
Firstly welcome to TEI TU family..one of the craziest family…yaha sab log crazy hae n that countse as well…welcome….
Regarding the os ohhhh god it was tooooo cute n sweet…aww loved it…go n talk his heart said…that line was really so sweet…although it had a sad ending…it was so cutr…keep writing…
Thank you
Thank you for welcoming
Good one zoya
Thank you
Hey zoya..! Welcome to TEI TU…!!!
Yournfirat attempt was amazing..,
I mean i just loved that..!
U knw i love emppotional stories nd tragic endings..! So that was really fabulous..
I loved it..!
Their confession was really unexpected…!
I didn’t expected that she would die..!
Sad that she died..!
Post more of ur writings…!
Thank you
Post your ff a devil……..
Awesome one zoya
Pehle milan mai hi shadi and propose bhi kar diya
N even accident bhi
Omg ek hi din mai itni Sari
Awesome
Thank you
Hey Zoya!
I guess You know Me? as I know u! ?? Anyways this was just so unexpected! Seriously the ending, I never thought the ending would be like that! Ur first attempt was too good! All the best for ur further stories! Keep Writing!
With Love,
Urs Tamanna
Ya,di I know you ,thank you for your precious comment
I will try to start an ff
nice and too emotional……♥
srsly loved it…….♥
lods of love…………..♥♥♥♥
Thank you