I am Astha Reddy,dedicating this one shot to all the Ishqbaaz lovers(I am using NKK here coz. I don’t want you all to miss this one shot)
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“What the wuck!!”- Shivaay Singh Oberoi put brakes on his car,” A statue in the middle of highway”.
“The man is mad”- The statue commented ,” here I am trying to commit suicide”.
Shivaay moved near the statue.,” this seems so..alive..more perfect then Omkara can make from mud”.
“Why the hell did you stop your car”- The statue show its face..no angry face to him,” I was trying to commit suicide”.
“Why are you trying to commit suicide??”- SSO took interest in a deal that promised no profit to him at all,” Which hospital are you from??’…
” Your name please??”- She asked..
” Shivaay …”- He answered with pride.
” Haan..Toh Billuji”- The girl smiled and fleet her hair in the mild air..breeze..,” I am twenty five years old..”.
” Haan toh!!”- It is normal for a business man like Shivaay to guess age of a person looking at their face,” Ek minute..mera naam mat bigado”.
“Here I am trying to explain my situation to you and aap ko aapni naam ki padi hai”- The girl kept hands on hip to show her annoyance,” I was achha khasa trying to commit suicide and you Bhagad Billa.. ergh!!”.
“Bass karo meri maa”- Shivaay requested,” Tell me further”.
“Arre Haan..I was saying..I am twenty five..But I am still unable to find my love”- the girl make a pout,” like the famous story of love in the show ISHQBAAZ”.
” what is this Ishqbaaz now??”- Shivaay asked being curious,” Stop this yaar..suicide is not a solution”..
” This is not fair..You don’t know what ishqbaaz is!!”- The girl glared him.
” I asked you another question too”- Shivaay too glared his kanji green eyes at the girl..,” just give me tge address of your hospital”.
“Khanna find soon..”- Shivaay used his smart phone in a smart way,” a girl had escaped from some mental hospital and is in OM with me”.
” Come with me..we will try to find a solution for this”- Shivaay held her hand to drag with him,” you mad girl!!”..
” I am not mad..”- She protested,” I am crazy for Ishqbaaz..”.
” I want a love story like the story of Ishqbaaz for me”- She screamed ,” Where are you taking me ??”
“To hell”- Shivaay shouted,” to kill you nothing else..”.
” That is very good nature of you..”- she thanked him,” please make sure to kill me in a way that will pain less..”.
Shivaay wanted to bang his head somewhere but banged his hands on steering wheel…to drove back to the city of Mumbai..,” hell to his client meeting outside Mumbai”.
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OmRu looked horrified at the sight of their Billu Brother dragging a girl..
” A girl with Shivaay!!”- Omkara dropped his painting brush..
” O..Not a girl..a beautiful girl”- Rudra cupped his mouth.
” Billu…”- Dadi closed her mouth using both her hands.
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” No wonder bhaiyya”- Rudra
kept forefinger on his head for logic sign,” Ishqbaaz..seriously”.
” I knew from last three days”- Omkara tucked his long hair behind his ear,” she came to a medical shop when I was in a near by shop to buy some colour and asked for a poison to eat that have a taste of aloo puri to die for”…
“One day she was asked for my mobile when I was returning from college”- Priyanka came suddenly to the living room,’ that girl searched for one easy way to commit suicide in my mobile!!”..
” She is indeed one mentally imbalanced girl, ran away from some mental asylum”- Shivaay turned to find the girl missing,” I have asked Khanna to find details”..
“This is very interesting Dadi”- OmRu hugged,”wah wah..kya acting karte hain hum sab”.
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” You here!!”- Shivaay find his crazy mental girl inside his room,” Go out from here”.
She remained unmoved. He prepared his black coffee..
” Arre wah!!”- The girl came near him,” Kaali coffee”.
” Try it”- He made her take a sip and she spit on him..on his white shirt.
” This seems fimiliar to me..this Kaali coffee..spit on white Shirt”- she tried to remember,” I remember it now. This happened in Ishqbaaz”.
“Oh!!”- Shivaay said.
“I am going to pool side”- she left him alone in her crazy thought.
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“Booom..”- Shivaay threw her in to the pool,” Splashh…”.
“Kya khidkitod kaam kiya aapne”- she clapped her hands,” this is what I wanted in my life”.
” Splash..”- A glass of water is thrown on his face..her hand hold the empty glass,” Mazaa aagaya..”.
” You …”- Shivaay twisted her arm from behind her back tightly,” what the hell was that??”.
” Hell no…”- She shudder under his hold then squirmed a little,” that was heaven for me”.
He left her hand and went away from her..
” Mich michi”- She calm a bit ,her breath back to normal,” oh no.. he had spread a lot of raita in my heart”..
” I thought I will die after drinking that horrible kaali chai if your but”- she cried, disappointed with the turns of events,” But here I am alive..stuck with a Billu”..
” At least for God sake tell me the reason of this your suicide “- Shivaay stole a glance at her face that held numerous secret for him.
” I told you earlier too”- She sat on ground, the dress she wore now borrowing from Priyanka after falling in the pool is a tight to her shape..body,” I wanted a love story like Ishqbaaz for me…but my family arranged my marriage with an Oberoi boy”.
” Bhaiyya..”- Rudra barged in his room,” time for Obro moment, come down”.
” Oh..it is like we three brothers makes some dishes and dances around “- Rudra informed the girl,” stress booster for us”..
” I love it..”- She smiled, her eyes twinkled..,” can I see it live from far”.
” come come..”- Rudra left in a hurry for Obro moment.
” This is too..”- she put hand on head,” so match match to Ishqbaaz and her life since meeting the stranger on Highway”.
“what the wuck!!”- Shivaay smiled sarcastically,” you all knew she is Annika and were faking”.
“Very funny!!”- Om pat his shoulder,” you never saw the girl you love and going to marry”.
“And she never saw me and was going to suicide for me”- Shivaay cursed,” damn that Ishqbaaz”.
“Sh…”- Rudra signaled,” Annika bhabhi is sitting outside ,watching us”.
“Poor girl”- Shivaay opened his mobile and typed “Ishqbaaz”.. read the result,” this is unbelievable!!”…
“I fulfilled her wish of a love story like Ishqbaaz”- Shivaay ran to window side, near the girl,” Annika.. you should go home now”.
“You know my name??”- Annika hugged him out of happiness,” wow!!”
“I am Shivaay”- he introduced himself,” Shivaay Singh Oberoi”..
“Oberoi..”- Annika widened her eyes, the name.. her arranged marriage with him, suicide drama,” NO….”.
” Yes…”- Shivaay mocked her,” only yes for the marriage now”.
” You Billu”- She accused.
” Paanika”-He retorted back.
– Bhagad Billa ..
– Jhansi ki Raani
– Tadibaaz
– Ishqbaaz..
“Strange stranger”- They both shouted for each other..,” strange stranger..”.
“Beginning of the journey of new Ishqbaaz”- Dadi covered her ear to save from their shout ..noise..
” Dil hua Ishqbaaz”- OmRu sang….
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Wow !! Di amazing . So cute dI .
Totally different concept .
I loved it . ????❤
Surbhi.. thanks yaar .
Awesome one di. Loved it and Anika’s way to suicide were really nice. Searching in the mobile, asking for poison in aloo puri flavor, everything was amazing.
And the concept a darling?
Jerry…Thanks yaar. Suicide karne chali thi Annika and bechara Shivaay ka murder confirm hua!!
Awesome….fabulous loved it ????
Thanks Niriha..
???That was hilarious…..and it was awesome….what a concept once again….these days u r writing stories which connect reel n real….and all of them are turning our to be wow……??
Nita… the thing you are thinking as reel is real and real are reel. then real are fiction and fiction are imagination.. then imagination are turning out to be real.. now nothing is real or reel..
Thanks for your patience dear..lol
Amazing…
Thanks Ankita dear.
Aaasta…Aastha…aastha. how can u get such crazzzzzy ideas dear . Now i am really desperate to borrow a few from u…hahaha.
The story…???=cuteness+crazziness+sweetness of shivay and his panika.(his stranger bridegroom )
Ummah…beautiful os dear.
Navya.. Navya… Navya.. it was their journey from strange stranger to fantastic fiance.. Here I am sending you few kilo of craziness… adjust with it.. ha ha ha..
This is super awesome…finally i am posting my comment on your writings and i am sorry for not doing so earlier as i got tied up with other schedules…..
I was laughing all the way and my daughter and husband were like i have gone mad….still can’t control my laugh specially Anika’s way of asking poison in aloo poori flavour…ha ha ha ha……
keep going dear….all the best and i am eagerly waiting for the next work of yours to be posted
Haarika…lots of love to your little devil and big devil bhaiyya ( of course mine not yours bhaiyya remember haan wink wink) too( if you not mind ha ha). Wow!! you too have a daughter. in the list of liji, Anu, Archu and Chavi great yaar. They both must have felt like two mad met in TU ( you and I) after watching your laugh.. keep laughing always…
Aaasthaaaa…..
U r really a fabulous writer…
These khidkitod ideas are just ammazing,,,,
U nailed it again…..
Ammazinggg update….
Loved it.
Kanfi.. thanks yaar. Cheppda dp.. save water(wink wink..).
Woww Astha di…u story always had a different concept…loved it..
Zaveesha.. how was your exam dear?? Fantastic right!!
Thanks ( aww.. blushing)..
Yess di..it was good…some paper went good nd some awesome…finally relaxed…,??
Nd now I have a vacation for two months…,??
Lovely ashu dii…. Dil hua ishqbaaz…
Lots of love and care dii……
Nikku..love you too. Dil hai Ishqbaaz.
How do you get such crazy+amazing ideas… Astha Di, you really have a great imagination ?In the beginning I really thought that Anika might have run away from a mental asylum but then I remembered SHE IS ANIKA and such things are totally normal, especially when you are the one writing it ?? Shivaay fell in love with her, without even seeing her photo waah-waah kya baat, Kaash asli Shivay bhi aesa hi hota…. Chalo koi nahi, if not in IB, we are able to get such khidkitod stories from you and also getting relief from that Pinky-Ponky drama… I will be waiting for another khidkitod story like this ??
Tanz.. koi baat nahi iss Sweet Singh Oberoi se adjust karlo yaar. Uss Pinky ko bhool jao. Concentrate on Shivika.. only Shivika.
WOW!! I thought its kinda sady story but the theme is just outta words!!! kya khidkitod OS Likhi hai aapney! par kuch scenes mujhe samajh mein nahi aaye…..Shivaay? uski crush????! Annika?? yeh sab mujhe samajh nahi aaye….and Om’s commment ki “u never saw the girl u love and were going to marry??” khair…..loved this one shot Aastha dii…?☺️?
Akshaya.. this one shot is not related to the original story of ishqbaaz. Its just my imagination where family member arranged for a marriage of Shivaay with Annika and he agreed with out seeing her photo as fell in love with her name. just my crazy and wild imagination. hope now you get it. Thanks yaar..
ooooo, abb samajh aaya! waise ur imaginations are worth it!!
Am I love with your writing di……just awesome….superb as always. .
Thanks Arthi dear.
Amazing os
Thanks yaar Alekhika.
Super Hillarious… poison in aaloo poori flavour loL! loved it to the core… post ur other ff soon…
Thanks Anu.
Asthaaaaaa?superbbb Crazy?concept and I have a doubt –>shivaay-haan toh Billuji—>kya connection? I don’t understand even in serial plz explain, first I think billu is his nick name kept by dadi but how annika came to know abt it ???plz explain karo yaar and explain kanji too???
Nila… looking at his kanji billi like eyes, it didn’t take much time for Annika to keep a nick name for him ie. Billu. Dadi too kept the name “Billu” for his kanji green eyes. just coincident here.
Hope you got it now.
Ya astha I got it????thank u
It’s beautiful Astha di
Thanks Arfa dear.
Superb. Loved it. ?
Thanks dwet.
i want to hug u akka. u r crazy. enga irunthu itha concept edukaringanu therila but superb
Hug me then..I hope its not your plan to chock me(kidding) to death ha ha ha…hug you too.
???That was hilariously awesome. Loved it
Thanks friend .
Hey dear my friends call me Asmi…
Kidkithod os…astha meri jaan..?
Really I gav a kidkithod smile after read ur
Suicide OS…crazy..?????creativity dear…keep on…writing yaar..
My jansi ki rani..know me well yaar …if I laughed r smiled seeing my mob she say maa ur ishqbaaz friends makes u smile.. Ah…she dont know to say DAT we r pkj’s know…?????dat much all we pkj’s got crazy …lols
Finally I got ur os page yaar …????after struggling with my network since it shows error n I couldnt explore it..thank god…now I’m happy na…
Chavi.. I am super happy that I managed to make you laugh yaar.
wow!! she know me..she know about us and pkj. That is aww..yaar. Loads of love to them. Take care , Love you… keep smiling .
Love u too dear??☺☺☺…
Iam read again & still laugh .Astha di.to Billu neck mai ganti badgayie& baazbi gayea hai..
Billu ke gaale mein ghanti baandh diya Annika ne..true yaar.. Billu ko ishq hua, Billu ka dil dhadka, Billubka saasein tezz hue, Billu..Billu..Billu..Billu ka shaadi bhi hoga lol.
Amazingg..Astha I am glad I didnt missed itt
Hey, I am commenting for first tym on your work..But truly I loved ittt!
Wow! ypur ideas are truely crazy and greattt
Neha..Thanks yaar. I am happy , I met you here.
Your dp, my friends sent me the same image with a slight change written “Keep calm and Love Capricorn”..
Oh, great even I am a Capricorn. When is your bday then?