CHAPTER#6-STUBBORNNESS PAID..
At d dining table…
Evry1 sat down to have it..wen sidhant was about to sit..
“Y r u sitting..?”his mum asked him..
“Ofc to have dinner…!!”he said n was about to sit again..
“Serve us first…!!!”listening dis his eyes widened…before he could open his mouth…
“Jasmin did all d house work whole month cant u do dis just for sm tym…tilll…u find servants…”
“Hmm” He jz said dat..as his mood was already off…something was haunting him…but wat…?? Jas thought..but his face was blank ….she couldnt make out ANYTHNG….
AFTER SERVING HE also sat n eat with dem….
Wen evry1 left after d dinner..jasmin helped him…clean d table..she took d dishes to d basin n was aboutto wash it..
“U don need to..i will do it..!” He said n snatch it away from her..n start to wash it…..
Jasmin sense smthng AGAIN…but wat..?
“Sidhant..??”she started ….gathering courage…
He dint pay attention…
“Sidhant…u can share with me..wat is bothering u sooo much..??”
“Nothing..!!”.
“Lier..lier..pants on fire..!!”she said to lighten his mood…
“Dat was lame..?”
“I know…but u r lieing…tell na..!!”.
“I said NOTHING..!”he said gritthing his teeth…trying to control…
“Again LIE…plsss…tell wat is bothering u..!”sidhant was done with d dishes…he move out of d kitchen..
N went to d hall n sat der doing work in his laptop…
Jasmin went behind him…she asked him again n again…but d adamant sidhant was not ready..
After half hour..being frustrated..he left d house….
Jasmin..having no option went to her room…sadly..
“Wat should i do…he is surely hiding smthng….his devilishness disappeared..but sm tyms it cm back…adi is right….smthng is der..which made him force….but its somethng BIG….n i need to fnd out…but HOW…..
His devil avtar is also gone..
May be dat would help..coz dat is link with all dis….from his personality..i dont think he is a play boy..smthng is der…which forced him…but how can i find dat….?..
First i have to get him in devil avtar..? But…..oh yeah..idea..”she thought n went….
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Sidhant went to his car..n drove to a house…
He went in d house…as he had already another key..he entere n sat on d sofa..
“Kaha ho tum…(where r u..??)”sidhant shouted as a room door open…revealing …
Revealing….
Revealing…
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END…!!.
SORRY??..
OK..OK END NAHI KARTE WARNA MERE UPAR TOMATOES..JUTE CHAPPAL SAB AAYEGA..BUT U KNOW ME THAK GAYI HU..
SO *BREAK TIME*
WELL MISSED IT..??
I MISSED IT SOOO MUV..
THOSE OLD DAYS..??..
WEN I WRITE A BIT..N D BREAK IN BTWN WAS..?….
SO SOCHA AAJ YAAD DILAADU ..AAPKO APNI PURANI AAMU KI..
COZ SAB MUJSE BOHOT FORMALITY SE BAAT KARNE LAGE HAI??..
ME KOI TCHR HU,..?
BOSS U..?
EK NANHI SI MUNNI SI..PYAARI SI WRITER HU….!!☺☺..
JISKO LAWAARE bohot pasand hai..but TU ppl boring ho gaye hai…
Akdu..!!?
Always prfessional baatein..come’on..
V r frnds….!!.
So talk like dat….
Formality ki zarurat nahi okay..?.
Kuch hi hai jo mujse achche se baat karte hh..
Dat is…
Shammmu..
Purvi..
Priya
Baby…
Adya(karti thi…i m misssing hr)
N many more log..
Jo muje abhi yaad nahi..neeni aarahi hai na..dats y..!!
ALL TU PPLS R CHANGED?…except few..sab only ff ki hi baatein karte hai..?…
Are..kabhi masti dhamaal b karo..
Waise u would b thinking muj par ye bhoot kyu sawaar hai…
Wo actuallly…mene aaj apne purane ff ki cmnts read ki na…i miss dat baatein…wodout topic..cracking jokes n all..
So alll of u aaj kaa break ummeed hai kuch sudhar karega…
Nahi kara to…next me b break milega????…
So b aware..
Ta..ta…
Read karo..who is dat..!!
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The door flew open..revealing a girl…in a shorts…wearing a sleevless top…
She came out of f room..her hairs messy…her eyes moist…her face red..she smile at him..n clung on him..while he,,,,….
….
…
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Few hours later(hehe..*evil laugh..* again cliff hanger)
Sidhant entered his house…having a smile…his tie loose..hair messy…n satisfied smile on his lips…
He entered his rooom to get a biggest shock..
Haa wahi “lage 440 volt chunese tere..??”
But a bit differnt…yaha…dekhne se hi laggaya..chune ki zaruraat nahi padi..
His sweet smile turned into a sad face..
His fist tightened..
He closed his eyes controlling his anger/or himself..!!.
Y should i tell?..?
Read below..
There sits..jasmin in a short 2 piece night dress…which he had bought her(remember..??nahi to yaad karo?)
Jasmin was wearing a small one…it was a black color..HIS FAVOURITE…
She comes closer..n close his mouth??
Sidhant looks away..n run his hands in his messy hair….
Jasmin wrap her hand around his neck…
Her red velvet lipstick hipnotised him to kiss her wildly..but he controlles..n tried to leave her…but…
But….
Butt…
Wat..? Y r u seeing me..!!?? Read further na??…
But d step jasmin took made him…
“Haaaaye me maare jawaan..?
Nai nai..not dis…!!.
“YAhooo…chahe muje koi junglee kahe..??””
No ye b nai..but yeah..if he could dance..he would like dat onlg??
Coz JASMIN KISSED HIM??? …
Haa dats not a big deal..but FOR D FIRST TYM SHE KISSED…??…
IT WAS LIKE A HEAVEN FOR HIM…
Though he dint respond in shock…
Her lips met his…the sweet taste..
He wanna grab it wildly n kiss..but he couldnt wen jas lips left his sooon..
He lost his control..n was about to kiss her again..but she put her finger…
“Sidhant..wat is bothering u..? U can tell me..? U can share with me..!! Plsss..? Tell wat had happened…i will never hesitate n will stop u having me??????”she said having tears..
Sidhant eyes became red…wen he came to know..she jz kissed for d truth…
He pushed her on d bed..n came kn top of her..
“Wannna know…?? U wanna know…..?”he said n bite her collarbone badly..whike sje just silently wiped her tears..as today her in laws were der..she couldnt shout…
“U just kissed me for knowing..?”
He said..while he teared her clotbes…she was naked before him AGAIN…
“Si..sid…ouchhhh..” before she could cmplt…he pulled her hairs..n kissed her badly…bitting it…
Whil she just cried silently..
“Wat u think…?? U will not let me kiss till i tell u..??”
He said while her teared his shirt angrily…his anger rose high n high..
He again jumped on her..
“Sidhant gupta gets wat he wants..!! UNDERSTAND..??”
HE SAID WHILE He bite her cleavage…she just tried to stop him…holding his hairs..
But dint say word..pressing her lips with her teeth..so dat she would not shout in pain..
Sidhant hated…no answer thing..
He again shouted
“UNDERSTAND..?? I will get u wenever i want..? I dont need ur permission…?..i don need a permission to kiss u..!!”.
N he kissed her again wildly..
“I dont need a permission to bite u…!!”
N he bite her again..
“I dont need a permission to enter in u..!”
N he unzipped her jeans..
Her eyes widened..n she put her hands on her womenhood..n closed her eyes..
“Pls no…no plsssss..it hurts..!!”
But sidhant couldnt be controlled..d next moment..he was alll naked on her…
Trying to remove her hands he tried to enter in her..to satisfy his ego..
“Pls..CALM DOWN…DONT HURT FOR GOD SAKE….I M A HUMAN…A GIRL….DAUGHTER OF SOME1…U CANT DO DIS..EVEN U R MY HUSBAND..WITHOUT MY PERMISSION” jasmin lshouted..wen he almost shoo her hand n was about to enter in her…but he stopped…he stand up in a jerk..
His eyes again lowered….
Jasmin got another shock…dis was d wprds she always say wen he do dis..but today..as he remember sm1 telling him..he stood up..n went to bathroom..while jasmin having no courage beeing physically harmed again..slept only after wrappinh herself in d duvet…oh wait..she dint sleep she just think once again about all d happening….
Her plan failed…n again she was hurt..physically..
Sidhant cm out of d washrooom wearind boxers n t-shirt..
Hey..dont look at me..he wear boxers only while sleeping..
He came n slept beside her facing his back towards her…only aftrr giving her a guilty face..which was new to her..comparing d situation….
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FINALLY ENDED..
I KNw M LATE..SORRY FOR DAT..but mood swings…but hey..dis was a bomb right..?
N ohhhh wait…mood swings is normal wala..dont think too much dirty heads..m just 15 ??…
Well how was it..
Who is dat girl..?
Wat us his past..??
R dey interrelated..??
Well guess…
N yeah hope d precap got cleared…
Stubborn jasmin+adamant sudhant who don wan her know = victim jas n devil sidhant….
Clear.???
Well here is d link to promo.n yeah u will not b able to see d pics..as i had make d acc private again..sorry..if u want tell me i will do it..
http://www.tellyupdates.com/became-life-sidmin-ff-promo1/
Precap chahiye..??
Le lo…tum bhi kya yaad rakhoge?
Precap-revealation of d girl….whole revealation why sidhant went der….!!
Hahaah…excited na..!!.
So cmnt karo..kz its decreasing again…?…
Well break waali siksha yaad rakhna…n cmnt usi k hisaab se karna…
Oh wait..agar aap us reason se nnt nahi karenge to KATTTTIIII…
NEXT CHAPTER 2 WEEK BAAD..?
Waise b cmnts kam hi hai…
Hate u all for dis.but pyaar b to karti hu..so balanced..byeee…
(Sorry for today nautanki…i m in crazy mood)
Sending hate n love both..???
Aapki pyaari si choti si…maasum si sister..
-Aamu…naam to suna hi hoga?
45 Comments
Superb episode aamu I don’t have words to describe really too good ? I loved it yaar post soon
Thank u kiya…
It means alot..?
hawwwwwwww………..
aammiieee jaan aaj toh naa mera munh khula ka khula rhe gya…….. :O
srsly kya klya nahi bola aapne babes……♥
ohhhhh my my srsly I missed u aloottttt dear…….♥
those breaks uhhhhh though they irritated me becoz bhott gandii walii jagah par aaj chodaa tune mujhe darling………♥
hhahahaa but srsly I miss ur breaks I miss u I miss myslf……hahha don’t even remember kaisiiieee cmnts kiye hain mene hahahaa……..♥
n merko agle mein bhi break chaiye haan….
or the koi mujhe jangli kahe YAHOOOO…….hahhahaaha………..
I was laughing n m sill laughing like insame lunatics hahahhaaa…….
ohhhhhhhh god someone really need to hold me odr wise I ll surely fall………
hahha whole episode yrrr emotional tha tab bhii hasna pad rha hai……..ruk hi nahi rhi……♥
srsly luvd it like anything woowwaaaa……..♥
emotional……sentimenatal ho gayi hun mein yaar jaanu……….♥ first say OK JAANU ♥
den I will talk to u……♥ hahaha okay aagayi kya teri funny and stupid wali baby aapii vapas……..♥
really am like in shock still yaar ki tujhe hua kya yeh…..♥
kisne kaat liya I mean d episode shitt man I was no no m still in shock d lust ohhh god n did suspense……..♥ killing me like anything yaar………♥
loved it………♥♥♥♥
terko naa mein chodungi nahi jaldii post nahi kiya toh or merko suspense mein marne ka iraada nahi naa toh jaldi post krna 😉 dhamkii de rhi hun 🙂 haha
love u alooootttttttttttt……..♥♥
thanks for it aaj srsly bhott time baad…….bas kya kahun……♥
Ye hui na mere dammmu aapi waali baat..
Aaj kuch laga ki aap ho..
Warna …only ff ki taarif ?..
Hehe pehli writer hu jo apne ff ki taarif par aisa muh banarahi hu…bt me hu hi unique…nai..??
Muje aaaj bohot mazaa aaya…i stepped in Aamu’s shoes again…yahooo..
N next me b break to milega hi dont worry..janeman..
N kaha maar du tumhe..aaplo kuch hi ho jo chapad chapad me company dete ho…aap mar gayi to mera kya hoga..nai nai..me post kardungi jldi dont worry…
Well thank u soooo soooo much ???? for ur pyaare pyaare..mithe mithe words…
Now i should take a leave..
Ta.ta…n next epi 2 week me ni ,1 me ho jaayega…chalo death glare mat do 3 din..???
3 din me pkkka kar dungi?
Love u to d mooon n back..n again moon n again back…n again n again..dat means..till infinity???????
Hahaha aamiiee…????
High God jaan I am like haan Madan bhi mat jai.. . Or srsly aap pheli maharani Hain jo nana karo ho agreed me liye haye babajii..????? meri n.a. sachi mein tu samaj nhi aatii meri babes Tu Bilkul unique hai schii mein…love u???????
Intense one and felt bad for jas as how he treat her especially in physical toucher wish soon mystery will solve can’t wait for next part do post soon.
Thanx arti di..
N don worry i will post sooon
Awwwwwwwwww ye sidhant nah ???????????if he would have been infront of me nah then I would have slapped him repeatedly wo b n number of times I mean seriously yar how can he even do that ??????……
Par story hai zyada dil pe nahi Lena chahiye ??????????….
Well episode was just marvellous u nailed it yaar seriously loved it too much can’t even define and describe …
Yaar who is this mystery from now and what’s this loose tie messy hairs I will kill him for sure agar Jasmin Jo cheat kiya to ab samjh aaraha hai leave or love …
Let’s see what will.jasmin do well kitne Di k Baad aamu style wapas aaya break wali bak bak loved it …
And congratulations Tu bhaiya me episode jaldi post Kiya…
Well ba byeeee
Love u sooo much ??????
Oyeee…!! Dare u slap my sidhant..?..
Par ye kartut k liye tu ek maar sakti hai..
Or haa..dil.par nahi lete pagli?..
Well tu hi samajja iska matlab…
Mesay hairs.
Loose tie…
Sweet smile..
Satusfied face..
Ye sab kis or ishara karta hai.????…
Ab agat aisa kuch ho to dil par mat lena…sidhant to hai hi play boy..
But uski PROMISE..??
TOD DI ISNE,..???
???..
Hehe…janne k liye dekhte raho became his lie..week me pure EK baar..??
Well dont worry just chill warna presssure high ho jayega..?
Haa TU dada..soye nahi the…aaram kar rahe the..
Love u tooooo????
N tuje to pata hai me kitni busy hu…ye weeek possibl ni ho payega but sunday tk pkka kardungi..
Love u again..dher saara??
amuu darling yaar,…
amazingg fabulous fantastic….
loved it…
but felt bad for twinj…
who is that girl..
wat is his past…
post soon..
wanna know…
love u
Thanx presha..
N who is dat girl wala question mera tha??…!!
Tum hi answer de do….agar..nahi aata..
To dekhte raho aamu k saatg became his life… WEEK ME PURE EK BAAR ?????…
Love u tooo baby…
Awesome dear..Was waiting for your ff. Thanks For sending the message. Aur kya yaar tum na mujhe suspense se hi maar dalogi..Post soon..Can’t wait to know the past
Thanx di…
Are yaar sab marne ki baat kyu karte ho….dammu b yahi kar rahi hai..upar..?..
Tumlog mar jaooge to mera ff read kon karega???…(hahah selfish?)..
Well don worry..
Read karte raho AAMU K SAATG BECAME HIS LIFE..WEEK ME PURE EK BAAR?..
N PAST..IS PAST…LET IT REMAIN IN PAST ONLY..LEAVE D PAST..SAY BYE..BYE TO PAST..N WELCM D FUTURE???..
Hahah..sorry di..i m.mentally mad now..
So i m like dat only..
Ta..ta
Love u?
Hey aamu dear episode was just awesome
Plzzz post soon
Thanx nisha di…
I will try to post sooon
Oh god aamu
Tuna bahat bolti hae…stupid…phel khud bolti hae no formalities aur last may woh sry kaha se ahya…jara batayenge…bosss??????..bosss toh nai hae par teacher jarur hae???….cracking jokes??…jokes abhi toh yaad nai ah rahe par jab yaad ahyenge tab jarur karungi…??? stupid baatein meri side may rakhte hae…par saachi yaar I reallu misss oir old TEI TU n especially aadya jaldi wapas ahungi kaha tha abhi tak nai ahyi…Let’s just hope ki thinking combo works….okkkk chal tere epi ke bare may baat karte hae….it was a blast….seriously sid ne aisa kyu kiya…I really was so angry….but pir bhi I can’t hate him…kya karu he is so hot handsome….aur mujhe pata hae tu samalegi sab…leave or love huh…aabhi thodi confusion sulaj gayi par aabhi bhi puri tarah samajh nai ahya…kaun ho sakti hae woh…chalo chod may apne dimag pay pressure nai dalti ti tu hae na hae ki nai…aur tomatoes chapal toh dene ka maan nai….hah but I wanna give u a big wali kisss for writing this?????????….yeh le parcel kar rahi hu…woh bhi truck barke…mil jaye toh batana….post asap………..post asap
Oye sorry tere jaisi kamini k liye ni tha..
Wo to mere jaise maasum..n pyaare bachchi k liye tha..
Mere jaisa b koi read karta hoga na..! Dats y???
Well thank u for taarif…m.reallly glad u like my bakbak..
Or aage b jelne k liye ready ho..
Thats great?
Well…
Sid ne aisa kyu kiya …..
Ye mera question tha???????..
N wo ladki kon hai..??
Huh…
Ye b pata chal jaayega nect epi me..
Sidhant ne kya ghul khilaaye waha wo b…
His messy hairs..
Loose tie
Ka raaz khukne wala hai..stay tuned??????
Love u janeman…?..
N truck ko mera address pata hai..??
May kamini…tu bhi kaam nai…tu maasoom sachI…thik hae tu maasoom par tujhse bhi maasoom may nai hu…may toh kamini hu na???…
Tujhe jelne ki jarurat he nai balki tujhe mujhe jelna parega…tayaar hae na…
May toh tayaar hu??..
Tu saachi bomb fodne wali hae…
Post asap yaar..raha nai jah rahs…
Truck ko rasta pata hoga na…tune he toh kaha tu maasoom hae toh sabse maasoom ladki ke ghar jayega woh truck matlab tere ghar…
Post asap…
Aur gah woh ladki kaun thi tere question tha par mujhe bhi pata nai na iss liye tere question aab maine chura liya…????
Bomb to futega jaaneman..or zor kaa..?…
Tum log muje par barsoge..?…
Peheli hai..suljhao khud se?..
N me maasum si bachchine..bohot kaminiyon ko jhela hai..tuje b jhel lumgi..no worry??
Or haa trjck pohonch gaya..apna rasta dhund kar…
Aakhir mere jaisi maasum.yahi milegi na?
Baap re ammu jaan ( hope you don’t mind me calling you that??) kitna bolte I mean likhte ho tum !!????best example of express train!!??but it’s good to talk and interact??…aag laga di ?…..woh chipkali kaun hai ?? Jaldi post karna agla episode kyunki itna pyaar tumko , karte hain hum , kya jaan loge hamari sanam???iss devil ko toh main khudd chankat (slap) laga doon ??.. Accha chalte hoon…dil meiñ yaad rakhna…?byeee???
Haaye…EXPRESS TRAIN..!!
WOW..thank u sooo much for dis name..
N u can call me ammu jaann..i will love dis..
Haha..chipkali..????..nice name..
N u r too funny..
Bilkul mere jaisi..chalo siksha dena kaam aaya??
Achchae b chalti hu…dilme yaad rakhna
Heyyy aamu…
My bakbak queen….wah kya epi tha….
Justt lovedd it to coree..
Sidhantt..bohot gussa aaying uspe.???????…soo bad….
Bechari twinkle…..felt soo bad for her??
And sach batau to i missed ur breaks soo much..especially ur chatter..hehe…felt soo good reading it..
Abb please please post next one soon…nahi kiya to katti…??
Post soon…
Love uh❤
Haww…aap mera ff padhtighi pehle..?
Haaye muje pata hi nahi..
Well m glad mere breaks ko mias kiya….ab se roz dungi.
????…bohot irritate karungi??
Waise b raat ko likhti hu..thodi crazy mood me hi hoti hu..??
N glad u liked it..
N sidhant ko meri taraf ae ek thappad maarna..but furst read nwct chappy?..
N katti..?
Choti si baat k liye katti..???
Huh…
Kardungi post..!!
Aap bhi kya yaad rakhoge??
Well thank u soo muv for jheling my bakbak..
Love u tooo??
kua main bhi tujhse katti hu
tu ne kitne din baad post kiya
I hate u
but I love you more♡
and the episode was
marvellous
amazing
fabulous
outstanding
fantastic
superb
aww too much good
awesome
mind blowing
splendid
incredible
and soooooo much.? good
like it
no no no
a big wala sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
I just loved it ♡♡♡♡
plz jaldi post kar
2 weeks tak intezar nahi hota
itna late vi koi hota hain
jaldi nahi post karegi
to baat nahi karungi
ok meri jaaaan
meri vanilla
my sweetuuuuu
loads of love ♡♡♡
love u more to the infinity
till death will love u♡♡♡♡
love u my sis ♡♡♡
wese tu kaha rehti hain?
tell me ok
byeee sis
love u ♡♡♡
with lots of love,
urs Ayesha
Hawww…!!????..
5-5 din baad to kya poat kiya sab katti hone lag gaye?
Well thank i soo much ayshu for ur sweet sweeet cmnt..
Or ek minute correction pls..
M not vanilla…
Haa ghori hu..but i love choco flavour more..so pls…
Call me choco???????…
Haha..
Lol..just joking..call me watever u want..
N me kaha rwhti hu..?
EARTH PR????????….
ACHCHA EARTH ME INDIA ME REHTI HU..
N india me surat, gujarat me…bad..!!.k abhi bhi surat ka area n house number bataoo..??
Tu bhi bata hide kaha rwhti hai..?
Love u tooo sweetie..???????
ok my choco
I also live in earth not in Mars
and only in India
and india there is a state named
West Bengal
where there is an evergreen city
named Chittaranjan where CLW
is located
I live there only
in my evergreen city
full of oxygen
feeling fresh! !!!!!!!
by the u have to post my sis
2 weeks tak intezar nahi kar sakti
tune agar karwaya to katti katti
aur katti
samjhi
ab mujhe gussa mat dilana ok
darling my sweetie
my hot chocolate
ok baby feeling sleepy
so bye bye
love you to the infinity
till death will love u♡♡♡♡
muahhhh ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡
once again
my rosogolla
its a bengali sweet
don’t know if you know
what’s it
but its much sweet just like u
to haan
agar post nahi kiya
aur intezar karwaya
to teri khayyar nahi
Ohh to aap west bengal ki item hai(hehe??)
Well i know rosogulla..v call it..rasgulla..?..
N i love it..
2 din pehle hi khaaye hai..
N howww sweeet of u babydoll..m rosogulla..??!
Thank u..
N agar tu makhan laga rahi hai…to sorry..i will post on friday or saturday only..before dat not posssible?
N dare u katti with me..2 week baad post karungi?
kyaaaaa
hawwww tu to gayi
main na teri gala hi daba dungi
agar jaldi post nahi kiya
aur makkhan aur wo bhi main
wo chis to mere dictionary me
hi nahi he
huhhhh!!!!!!!!!
ok tu Friday ya Saturday ko
post kar
par agar usse jyada late hui to
tu to gayi
matlab main tera gala daba dungi
nahi to
tera khun chus lungi
aur haan me west bengal se hi hun
adeeba bhi hain
wo to mere kitne paas rehti hain
mujh se 72 km dur
he he
amar shona
taratari post korbi
nato mere felbo
bujhliiiiii
pata hain tumhe sayad samajh
bhi nahi aa raha hain
par mujhe thora bengali likhne
ka shoukh hua
and u know
I also write poems and stories
both in bengali and English
more in bengali
kya karu matribhasa hain na
to emotions bengali me jyada
aate hain
aur agar tu bhul ke bhi
late hui
to tera kya hasra hoga ye to
bhagwan hi jane
aur main whole life ke
liye katti ho jaungi
ye koi request nahi
dhamki hain darling
ache se apne writer wale dimaag me ghusa le
sweetie
my hot chocolate
my muffin
my cup cake
love you to the infinity multipliedby cube of infinity to the power cube of infinity
muahhhh ♡♡♡♡
love u till death ♡♡♡♡
byeee darling
Yrrr it was awesome…
Tu b padti hai..?
Wah..!..
K sirf aaj pada..?
Reply zarur dna..
Wrll thank u
Yrr sorry yrr mera phone toot gya tha and meri tabyat bhi kharab thi isiliye mein comment Nhi kar Pai bit haa pakkaa I will comment on all your posts ….
Aesa hosakta h aamu koi post dalle and anshu naa padhe
Excellent episode
Waiting for past to reveal
Do continue
Thanx maha..
Will.post by friday saturday
awsm marvelous epi
Thanxxx
Aaaaaaaamuuuu jaaaaan…! Twin sista..!!!!
Yarrrr what was that matlab…!!!! Seriously….??? ??????? ur bak bak tho..??? well, to be homest i literally loved ur chappad chappad….!!! Sahi keh rahi hai tu..! The old TU.. ?? well…., ye sidhant na…?? kuch kerwa ke rahy ga…, mujhe murderer bana chah rahi hai tu mere sidhant ko aesa bana ke….!!!! Me kya bolun…! Itna awesome koi kese likh sakta hai…! I legit loved it…!! ❤❤ ye kya mystery hai…..????? Wo girl kon hai….??? Ye chipkali…?? loose tie messy hairs…, matlab kya chal raha hai…?? Mujhe bhi kuch kuch samajh aaaraha hai… leave or love.., thoda thoda samajh aaraha hai…!!! Maybe i m wrong…!!! But ab wo tujhpe depend kerta hai… ?? jaldi post ker dena.. warna me such mein aake gala daba dungi……!!!! But ek min.. me kyun gala dabaungi apni twin ka…, nhi nhi yarrr…!!! Bss u have to post ….!!! Or 2 weeks wait na karana meri jaaaaan ??? mujhse wait nhi hoga iss ke liye…!? ?? plss…??????
Plsss reveal this mystery soon….!!!!!!!!!?????
Nd wait wait wait wait wait…. ek cheez toh bhooool gaayii!!!!!!
K
I
S
S
Matlab.. seriously she kissed him… for the first time…???????❤❤❤ but his devilness….?? I can’t wait yarrrr….
Post soooooooooooooooonnn…!!! ????????????
LOVE YOU LOADS TWINUUU….!! ❤❤❤???♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥❤❤❤❤❤
Haww…thank u…
Muje shock laga ki sab ko mera bak bak pasand aaya..
MOGAMBO KHUSH HUA???…
Idliye ab mogambo jldi post karne ka try karega..i mean aamu jldi karegi?
N tu itni samajdaar to hai hi..
Loose tie..
Messy hair..
Satisfied face…?..
Matlab kis or ishara karta hai..samajja..
Agr nahi fir bhi padi..to just wait..
Kardungi..pura sidhant kaa wo ghar jaane ka revealation hai usme..?
Well haa..” k I S S”
Kisss kiya..
??..
Haaye jas ne kiss kiya..chalo koi no…
Hot scene coming more..?…
Aisa expwct mat karna kyuki ab fresh fresh tears cming?
Well bahbye..
Love u
Aamu u girl koi aise suspense mai chodta hai kya
I’m Angry on u
Per I just can’t wait to know what was his past n about that girl
I’m dying to know
Aur I think u have became so naughty haaa
N I missed this type of writing
Kitne dino ke baad dekh rahi hu
N it was fun to read like this
Well plsss post soon
Sachi can’t wait
Ab isme meri koi galti mahi hai
U have stopped at complete suspense
Love you keep smiling
Haha…me to bachpan se hi naughty hu..tumne abhi notice kiya???..
Well thank u soo much ramya..
Evry1 liked dis type of funny one..so i wll surely write like dis now..
I missed it too
N no wrry post kardungi friday saturday tk..
??
Love uh
Good
Thank u
u
Amazing