hey guys i am mayank a huge fan of naagin and beyhadh my first fanfiction is called naagina. IT is based on a tale of love hatred revenge jealousy and dark secrets.It consists of 30 episodes
EPISODE 1
In a secluded forest a man wallking near by hears sounds from an old shiv temple when he reaches the shiv temple he sees a group of 8 members killing a couple of naag and naagin he recognizes a man from the group as akhilesh raheja the owner of the panchner haveli and he lives with a joint family. The man gets scared and starts running and hearing his sound the killers group also starts to catch him and then…………
AFTER 24 YRS
One of the richest families in mumbai the Rahejas are introduced they consist of 3 brothers their wives and their 5 children
Akhilesh Raheja he is successful business man and he has a wife called yamini he has a son Rithik he is charming he makes every girl fall for him.
Ankush Raheja is a co partner in akhilesh business he also has a wife called shalini he has a son [rinku] and a daughter [winnie]
Ankit Raheja is also a part of their business he has a wife poonam he has 2 daughters called sonia and ridha
The whole family are traveling to the panchner haveli they all have jokes and they are a happy family.They all are going to give yamini a surprise as today is her birthday the whole journey they kept her eyes covered.
When they reach there they open her eyes and she is shocked to see the haveli she smiles fakely and when they go inside the youngsters begin to explore the haveli and then yamini drags her husband inside and closes the door and questions him
YAMINI: why did u bring the whole family here
AKHILESH: they wanted to see the haveli
YAMINI: what if the secrets come out
AKHILESH: dont u dare talk about it again
yaminis eyes turn red in anger the scene ends
IN the same old shiv temple where the naag naagin get killed a sapera plays been and calls the nearby snakes many snakes come towards him among them is a dangerous snake shesha she shows herself to the sapera and he smiles seeing her
it ends
please dont forget to give reviews it will be my motivation
2 Comments
Wooow mayank a good one
Nice imagination
Do tell me when u are going to post the next episode update of urs
So though we have the season 2 ending it will be exciting to read ur super fan fiction
Keep on posting we are eager to read it
I hope others too notice ur update n enjoy it
NB- If somehow u haven’t updated for long don’t feel that u can’t continue
Write whenever u have time
Good luck bro
Nice yr carry on?