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I can’t live without you- episode 1

b.k.mahaBy 24 Comments3 Mins Read

How are you all…. I know I am taking long break…. I am really sry for that… please forgive me… this is new ff about Gaurika…. I think to post “After marriage life is colorful” today only but at time of writing my mind get a new idea about Omri… if you liked it I will continue… please give your valuable comments…. Let’s get into the story…. Happy reading….

In this story Om knows everything about Gauri (like what really happened in bareilly)…. After knowing the past of Gauri he feels guilty for hurting her…. Now he believes his Gauri whole heartedly like how he believes Chulbul… and most important think is Om loves her but didn’t express his feelings to Gauri… he gets fear to say about his love to his lady love…. Because if she takes this love as sympathy then she didn’t accept it that’s why till now he didn’t say about his love to Gauri…. But our Gauri didn’t understand her love towards Om…. Because she things this is just an respect towards Om for saving her… in this ff she is the best fashion designer in Mumbai and also she can speak English fluently… she works at Om’s company in chief designer… in their office no one is known about Gauri is wife of Omkara… she does all the works perfectly like a good bahu and good sister and good wife and good designer also….

In fine morning,

Gauri comes with coffee mug in her hand and goes to their room…. There Om is in deepest sleep…. She goes near him and calls Omkaraji….. he didn’t wake up so she placed the coffee mug on side table and says, Omkaraji it’s getting late please wakeup… today you have a meeting…
Omkara in sleep please two minutes Gauri…. Gauri tries to leave but topple over but before she could falls on the floor one strong hand holds her and pulls towards him… yes it’s our Om… they have an eye lock… now Gauri is top of the Om… he holds her by placing his hands on waist… her hairs dances in the air… its touched her checks… for taking it Om moves his hand to remove the hair which is disturbing their eye lock….

And Om says caringly how many times I will say to you to take care of you… always thinking about others when you will think about yourself… if I didn’t hold you then what will be happened… he continuously scolding her with caringly but our Gauri lost in him…. Their sweet romance is disturbed by one sweet little girl voice…. She comes running by calling chachi…. Because of this voice they moves apart… that girl comes near Gauri and says chachi see again he starts to fight with me… Gauri kneels down below to reach their heights… one little boy says no chachi she only shouts at me for taking this toll…. Again they start their arguments… Gauri says oh stop it guys… they silently watched her and Om also…

I will stop here guys… after knowing your response I will start to write… if you didn’t like it, you can make me to know this then I will stop writing… and one more thing is for kindly request please don’t use harsh words… and I will post “love makes life beautiful” is tomorrow… my mind is not working that’s why… don’t worry I will post it tmr definitely… till then bye this is from your maha…. If any mistake is there please forgive me….

By,
B.K.Maha…

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24 Comments

  1. Nudia on

    i like it, no fighting between them, no arguments, i am waiting for something like this in the show.

  2. Palak on

    It was very good . Please write more bcs I like it “After marriage life is colorful” You are a great imagination keep going.

  4. Sakash. on

    Superb.Appreciate ur naya soch.One thing if u don’t mind,ur mind is working tremendously.That’s why u give a best FF.
    “One thing,Whatever ur problem i don’t know but i pray God to give u a solution”.
    No need to stop for others.Just heart out.
    One succesful Proverb :
    “Defeat the defeat before defeat defeats u”
    U can call me Akash,Friend&Brother ur wish.
    “Whatever u feel reply me if i hurt u sorry,if i give u support reply me”.
    Bye maha,take care dear get well soon.

    • b.k.maha on

      Thank u so much Akash bro…. Keep reading… I don’t have any problem bro…. My health is not allowing me to write…. Two days before only my leg cured fully…. After that I have a viral fever…. This only bro my biggest problem…. Tq for ur caring… And your solicitousness towards me…. Tq so much bro… I will call u as AK bro if you don’t mind… Because I am BK so u are AK…. If u didn’t liked it then I will not call u like this… You give me a support only don’t think its hurt me… And keep support me like this AK bro…

    • Sakash. on

      Hi Maha.Love u Get well soon dear.
      Thanks for ur reply.I liked my new name.No need to thank me.I think u r my sister like & I support u.No sorry No thanks between us.Be happy.
      Get well soon???

  7. sanyukta on

    Superb dear.I loved it.
    Plz continue . Eagerly waiting 4next part.
    Finally,everything is clear between them.
    Shivika’s childrens were nice 2.

  8. Dili on

    This is awesome. Not like other ones this is without misunderstanding, fighting, leaving or crying. It is just with a hesitant. Loved reading…… Please do continue.

  10. UF on

    AWESOME AMAZING BEAUTIFULL COOL CUTE NICE SUPERB???

    Maha meri ek request hai kya aap iss ff main RUMYA,SHIVIKA scenes bhi add karengi.i miss RUMYA so much so that why iam ask please???.agar aapko interst hai tho.waise mujhe aapki saari FF storys bahuth pasand hai it’s really AMAZING work jab main ye ff padne se pehle dekha kiska hai ye ff.jab aapka naam dekha tho bahuth excite hua.OMRI is really a SWEET BEAUTIFULL CUTE COUPLE.aur unki tho show pe MU abi thak clear nahi hua.jaise story aapki ff pe hain waise main show main bhi dekhna chaatha hu.i hope jaldhi mile.

    Waiting for next update and next post your another ff “after marrige life is color full”.next part.

    ALL THE BEST GUD LUCK

    Mera ek request hai.kya aap RUMYA based ek ff story banayegi.agar aapko interst Hai tho banayiye.nahi tho it’s okay☺

    Aapko RUDRA BAHVYA JODI PASAND HAI YA RUDRA SOUMYA JODI?

    • b.k.maha on

      Thank u so much UF….. Keep reading…. Sure dr how can I resist my Fed’s request…. And don’t request dr just order me…. I will add sivika and rumiya science don’t worry….
      I will write based Rumya based story dr…. Don’t worry… I am so happy dr… I will do it for you dr…

    • Verna on

      And one more thing Maha.. u got ur FF montage from Our DBO page right? I know because this edit was done and posted by me.. and that have my sign too.. and I’m soo happy to see my creations in ur montage 🙂 🙂 🙂

    • b.k.maha on

      Thank u Sri…. Keep reading dr… Yes its from our page only,,, I am happy dr… You guessed it also….