Don’t stay away it kills me -12
Hi dear friends..,am super late I know..,am so chorry everyone..!!ok let’s enter into the plot..!!
Happy reading friends..!!
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Sanskar lifts swara in his arms and called doctor to come immediately..!!
Ragini goes to swara and holds her hand..!!sanskar turned and found Ragini holding swara’s hand..,immediately he pushed her away saying “stay away from my swara ..,Ragini..!!”
“Sanskar please..!!”Ragini pleads..
Sanskar (sobbing):you and laksh together ruined everything Ragini..!!see my swara’s condition..!!just for talking against you..,your husband revealed everything to swara and made her sick again..!!u will regret for this..!!if anything happens to my swara..,then u both are finished..(gritted his teeth)
Ragini:not like that sanskar..!!!you know about laksh better than me!!
Sanskar:now only am getting everyone’s motive..!!i don’t want to talk anything to you..,just leave from here..!!
“sanskar please try to understand him..!!”said Ragini..!!
“leave from here Ragini..!!”sanskar closed his eyes tightly controlling his anger..!!
Ragini:please let me see her only once..!!
“you won’t go easily na..”sanskar grabbed her shoulders and pushed her on the floor!!
Laksh came to rescue and helps her to stood up and makes her stand..!!
“how dare you..!!”laksh clutched sanskar’s collars and shooks him..!!
Sanskar(pushed away laksh’s hands):just for making your wife fall down on floor..,you are getting this much anger na..!did you think about my swara..!!i thought my bhaai will stand by my side and help me but you both showed your real faces ..!!i won’t leave you Ragini..,you will regret for your husband’s deeds..!!
“sanskar..”laksh slapped him..!!
Ragini was shocked and she immediately rushed to sanlak and sanky in a full rage holds laksh’s neck and laksh was doing the same on sanskar..!!
“laksh..please stop this..!!”Ragini tried to split them but failed..!!she entered in between them and pulled laksh and without knowing herself her hands hit laksh’s cheeks..!!
Laksh stands shockingly holding his cheeks..!!she didn’t do with intentions but she wasn’t left with any other options too.!!
“What’s happening here…!!”swara’s voice brings them back to normal..!!
Sanskar (rushed to swara):tum teek hona..!!
“haan sanskar..,am alright”swara convinced him..!!
“swara..you ok na..!!”Ragini shed tears and folded her palms and apologized her..!!
Swara hugged her and caresses her hair saying”am ok Ragini..,don’t worry..!!”
She then moved to laksh..!!
Laksh feels guilty and says”swara..,am sorry..!!”
Swara:thanks laksh and am really sorry for all the things..!!if you weren’t then i can’t even imagine..(to sanskar)you shouldn’t behave like this with your brother sanskar..,laksh did nothing wrong.he was right..,it’s my life na..,i have rights to know whatever happened to me and Ragini..,you too don’t hurt him for my cause.
“thanks swara..,atleast you understands me..!!I don’t want to hurt you swara..,but I really wants you to know what’s happening around you and moreover I love my wife that’s why i can’t act like that..!!”said laksh..!!
Swara nods..!!
Doctor comes and says that swara’s health is getting better and he suggested some medicines and left from mm..!!
Sanskar holds swara’s hand..”thank you sanskar..”said swara by looking into his eyes.”you no need to thank me sweetheart..,”he said wiping his tears.”i am not that much weak..,you should have told me earlier na..i hurted you unknowingly..,am sorry for that sanskar..!!”.
“no swara..i was hurt but still i want to see my naughty girl back..!!”he caresses her hair..!!
Swara:you need to talk to Laksh,sanskar..!!
“what..!!”sanskar amazes..
Swara:because of him only i came to know about our marriage and your love for me..!!you should thank him and solve the issues between you two..!!you will na..!!
Sanskar nods his head positively and caresses her cheeks..!!
There in raglak room..,laksh was searching some clothes in his wardrobe and messed it..!!Ragini comes and takes the clothes from his hand but laksh didn’t gave up and showed his palm against her..!!
“laksh..!!”Ragini uttered but laksh leaves to get freshen up..!!
Ragini waited for laksh to come out..!!she was biting her nails in nervousness.
“I know laksh.,I always hurted you but I didn’t do that intentionally.!!”she was lack of words..,her breath caught in her lungs and she cleared her throat to talk to him..!!
He got ready in his formals and was arranging the files..Ragini brings his laptop and gives to him..,he kept it on the bed and packed other important documents in his bag..,she then bring his watch..,he walks past her and took another watch from his wardrobe and took his wallet..!!
Ragini got saddened by his ignorance which was like a hell to her..!!
“everything seems so perfect few hours before..!!but his ignorance I can’t able to afford it.I don’t want to hide my mistakes..,yes I was wrong.,I need punishment but not your ignorance laksh..!!please am sorry..!!”Ragini says under her breath gazing him painfully..!!
Laksh (in mind):am sorry Ragini..!!i doesn’t mean to hurt you but instead am hurting myself..!!ignoring you wasn’t that much easy for me Ragu..,i was standing on the fire whenever am trying to avoid you..!!but i need some more time to move on..!!yes today was my best day and worst one too..!!i wasn’t sad for getting slap from you..,i wasn’t able to digest the fact that you are not at all taking my side instead you always sees others happiness forgetting about me..!!this does not mean that you hate me..,noone in this would love me like you do..!!you are my precious part of my life..!!but still there needs a distance between us just to make you realise the fact that I got hurt..!!i really got hurt this time Ragini ..,and am really sorry for hurting you..!!(he closed his eyes and made the tear drop to escape )
Laksh descended the stairs..,Ragini comes with his breakfast and placed it before him..!!
He didn’t touched it instead he drank juice and was about to leave..!!
Ragini holds his wrist and goes infront of him holding her ears with a cute pout..!!
He pushed away her hands slowly and leaves without raising even a single word..!!
Ragini stares him painfully and her eyes turned moist..!!she wipes her eyes and goes to kitchen..!!
“Your breakfast..!!”Ragini knocked the door of swasan room..!!
Swara(smiling):aao Ragini..!!
Ragini goes near her and placed the food on the table.”am sorry Ragini..!!because of me you guys experienced so much pain..!!am sorry”swara sobs.
Ragini (hugged her):swara..!!you need not to be sorry..!!please don’t stress.
“Swaragini..!!”bg plays..
They gets parted and sanskar comes near swara to feed her food.she sighs something to sanskar..,he nods and uttered”Ragini..!!”
Ragini:swara..,I have some works in kitchen.!!you guys carry on..!!
“sorry won’t heal the pain you gone through..,but I don’t have any other word..!!am sorry Ragini..,I have hurted you the most and because of me ..,you and laksh fought..!!am really sorry Ragini.!!”sanskar foldshis hand and apologized her.!!
“nahi sanskar..!!that’s ok..!!you take care of swara..!i need to go now..”Ragini leaves immediately holding her mouth..!!
Ragini wasn’t able to control her emotions..!he said so easily but the pain she have gone through which laksh alone knows..!!
“laksh..!!am sorry..”Ragini cries her heart out..!!
“tu aata hai seene mein..
Jab jab saasein bharti hoon..”
“am sorry Ragu..!!”laksh slammed his hand on the table..!
He wasn’t able to digest the fact that he has hurted Ragini..,but still he was feeling sad but wasn’t angry on her…!!
“jis din tujhko na dekhun pagal pagal phirti hoon..!!
kaun tujhe yoon pyaar karega jaise main karti hoon.!!”
Ragini lost in laksh’s thought and unknowingly she touched the handle of the vessel on the gas stove and got burnt..!!
She winced in pain..!!suddenly laksh drags her towards the sink and washed her hand with water and blows air on her finger..!!
“is it hurting more..!!”laksh muttered staring into her eyes..!!
She nods in no and smiles lovingly.!!she wipes her tears and lifts her head upwards and was shocked..!!laksh was no where and she was standing numb..!!
“Chadariya jheeni re jheeni Chadariya jheeni re jheeni..!!
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni ..!!”
Laksh felt something in his hand and winces in pain..!!
“Ragu..!!”he immediately leaves from the office..!!
To be continued •••
Precap:
RagSan dying to get forgiveness from laksh..!!
Will laksh accept them easily or he will make them to suffer..!!
And do tell me about this chappy..i took almost a week to update this ff bcz of lack of ideas..!!if u have any thing to say..,do suggest me..!!
Take care dears
~Darshu
Oops I forgot to ask you guys…do you like cricket and if so tell me whom do you like the most??
Mine was Dhoni always????
And de Villiers outside our team
77 Comments
I loved it…but I need ragu to get forgvnes frm laksh soon…but for sanskar make a little bit slow..☺?
Thnks a lot akshi dear ? and yes sure laksh will forgive Ragu soon and I will consider abt ur suggestions reltd to sanky??
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Nice
Thnks a lot dear aleeza ? glad that you liked it..!!
Awesome dear friend and in cricket mine is Dhoni and Suresh Raina
Tq so much dear friend..?am glad that you liked it
Evn Raina was also one of my favourites..!!
This was really awesome but please update it soon you are asking us to tell idea but you forget one thingthing??? you two sis are idea queens i have hope on you…..you always rockzzzz please don’t end it soon and update it soonsoon. i know it is hard but please!!!!!! I thought that you will post bon teju birthday but its ok take care☺☺☺☺☺☺
Aww puni sissy thnks a lot for the compliment from my side and frm my sister’s side too…
Am supr hpy that u liked it…
Yaah dear I thought to update it on teju’s b’day bt got hurt at my right elbow..that’s why I can’t mke it hpn..!!sry dear and tc too..!!
that was a superb episode dear….laksh is himself in pain in showing ignorance to ragini…..the end part was emotional….next part soon……and my favourite cricketer is tendulkar…and will always be…but Dhoni is my second favourite
Thnks a lot Jaya dear ? am hpy that you liked it..!!
Will post soon dear..
Yup v both lie Dhoni..same pinch???
Tc dear.!!
Simply superb di…post nxt soon
Thnks a lot soumya dear ? glad that you liked it..!!
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
Thnks a lot Arjuna dear ? glad that you liked it..!!
Awesome dear
Thnks a lot sherin dear ? glad that you liked it..!!
It was really nt raginis mistake yaar..poor ragu .she is pregnant rite? Feelng bad fr everyone…
Thnks a lot sree dear ? glad that you liked it..!!
And I agree with you..!!everything will get sorted soon..tc dear..
superb dear…feeling bad for raglak.
Thnks a lot dear ? glad that you liked it..!!
Awesome, feeling bad for ragini
Thnks a lot dear ? glad that you liked it..!!
Did u updated the next part of ur OS??if not updte soon..am waiting for it..!!
Superb dear lovely???? but please laksh should forgive ragini but he should not forgive sanskaar that easily please dear and show some romantic moments between raglak please post next part soon
Thnks a lot dear ? glad that you liked it..!!
Will consider ur suggestions..tc dear..!!
Amazing but sanskar is too bad keep going
Thnks a lot dear ? glad that you liked it..!!
Amazing
Thnks a lot dear ? glad that you liked it..!!
Superb….
Laksh should forgive Ragini soon but Sanskar should not be forgiven easily…
Feeling bad for Raglak…
Thnks a lot teito ? am glad that you liked it..
Sure..,will consider your suggestions and tc..!;
Mindblowingg update yaar…superb superb superbbb chappy????? loved it to d core .???hope everything gets well soon …waitng eagerly for nxt part..keep rockng n stay blessed sweety??
Thnx a ton for giving such an interestng story????
N yap i love cricket…
Mine fav. Is Dhoni virat n Yuvraj??
Oyiee sissy..it’s so nice to see you bck…!!
Thnks a lot sweetie and am super hpy that u cmntd..!!
Yaah dear everything will get sorted..
Tc dear..!!
And yup v have common taste..!!teju andDhoni fans..!!
Heheheh yeah sissy??? m also very happy to dat atleast today I could able to comment…it really feels annoying wen i can’t able to visit TU N read ffs…arggghh!!Bt wt to d some or d other way I got engaged wid clg n other stuffs…still wl try tocomment regular sweety???
Oh gawd so many loop holes in my comment hehe? …*m also very happy dat atleast…
*Bt wht to do some…
*Wl try to comment regularly sweety?
Yeah dear..!!i can understand..
Keep smiling da..!!tke cre..????
Amazing
Thnks a lot dear megha ? glad that you liked it..!!
awesome episode darshu di
loved it soo much
my poor raglak it is so difficult for them
i so so love shona for what she did today
but sanky really had crossed his limits
so do make him suffer didu pls
but dont make my ragu suffer okay
waiting for the next part
take care
keep smiling and writing
lots of love
bye bye
Aww my dear iqu..!!u r right dear and u knw abt ur didu..
I won’t mke Ragu suffer mre but some cutie mmnts will be seen n future…!!
And wil consider ur suggestions sweetie..!!
Take care da..!!
And u didn’t say me abt ur fav’s in cricket..do cmnt abt tht..
Love u doll..!!
nice
Thnks a lot dear avika ? glad that you liked it..!!
Awesome
Thnks a lot dear aamy ? glad that you liked it..!!
Oossmm
Oossmmm is less word to describe ur update… Its super duper mind blowing heart touching moment…… Somewgere m angry vd laksh sanskar nd ragu… Bt all persons have their some reasons so moo bash words against thm….
Aww..Thnks a lot dear akankshanna ? glad that you liked it..!!
Oops am really sorry for mking u hte them..!!
S dear..,I liked your last sentence..!!
Tke cre dear..!!
Awesome update
Thnks a lot dear anju ? glad that you liked it..!!
Akka lot of kisses and hugs for this awesome Chappy loved it ??
Thnks a lot da sweetie ? when you gonna post ur ff’s ..do post soon I am waiting..!!
Just awesome
Thnks a lot dear? glad that you liked it..!!
U r awesome darshu
Thnks a lot dear appuuuuu ? glad that you liked it..!!
Outstanding episode dear ???? feeling bad for Raglak ?? please give more punishment to sanskar I hate him??? and make Laksh forgive Ragini. Eagerly waiting for knowing how Ragini earn Laksh’s forgiveness. Please post next part ASAP ????????
Aww ammu sissy thnks a lot dear..
Will punish him hard and don’t worry laksh will forgive our Ragu soon..
Tc dear and will post soon..!!
Awesome and I love Ajinkya rahana
Thnks a lot dear Vennila ? wow rahane is an awesome player??..
Awesome part
Thnks a lot pearly ? glad that you liked it..!!
Awesome part and my favorite cricketer is always Mahi (Dhoni)
Thnks a lot dear jiyani?
Evn my fav is always mahi??
Glad that you liked it..!!
Amazing part nd can’t wait for next
Thnks a lot dear malu ? glad that you liked it..!!